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[Fanfiction] Rising of Kyrulites
Noobforevah
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Hello!
I recommend reading the chars. As it will help give you an understanding of some of the characters, and plus, my grammar stinks and I mess up quite often. So for that reason, I will allow critiques! If you have some possible suggestions, feel free to tell me.

The Genre is well... Sort of Humor I suppose.

Rising of Kyrulites is sort of about how Lurin gives mice that could possibly handle the power bestowed onto them by birth. They are called KYRULITES, they're the ones who try and stop the Hybrids from taking over. The Main HYBRID is called Edric, or known as, 'The Master'. Edric has already captured/found some of the Kyrulites, and will soon try and take over the world.

On with the information!


http://i.imgur.com/9mdonP9.png
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Chapter - Prologue - Click the last flag!
Chapter - One - The Blackout Click the last flag!
Chapter - Two - Stalking? Wait what no way! Page 9, 6th post.
Chapter - Three - Thou shall pay—With organs! Page 14, 15th post.
Chapter - Four - Fragile Emotions. Page 16, 10th post.
Chapter - Five - Livin the life of pranks~ Page 17, 11th post.
Chapter - Six - Escape thy punishments!- Page 20, 13th post.
Chapter - Seven - Strange presences and pain.- Pg 28, 4th post.
Chapter - Eight - Memories- Page 32, 17th post.
Chapter - Nine - Silent Prank vs Medieval Bag.- Page 40, 8th post.
Chapter - Ten - Pickefart and Historical Lectures.- Page 45, 14th post.
Chapter - Eleven - No teaser.

Or you can click this for all the chapters in one.
Click this for the drabbles!
Hope it's not bad to fit characters into a paste, I had no more space.


Flag - One - Terrible information
Flag - Two - Character Slots.
Flag - Three - Prologue and Chapter one
Fanarts Page 1, 13th post

List of Characters I currently plan to introduce.
(( NOT IN ANY ORDER ))

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Leila -- Next Chap
Ishayuki
Orran -- Next Chap
Lillith
Heaven
Snowy
Nwonknu -- Next Chap
Athena -- Next Chap


Character Status: (CLOSED)

((Ahem, you can make up an element if there isn't one you like. But if I don't like your element or there's not a possible way to use it in my fanfic, I have to ask you to edit your form. Maximum of how many characters you can make so far is 4!))

Purple is taken.
Cyan is available.
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[Current Slots]

Good:. (Goodies)
((The ones devoted into saving the world. They're the ones who try to stop the Darkies.))

Aqua - Imaewsome/Acqua 14 1/2
Life - Iwuvcheesed/Hope 10 1/2
Wind - Flutterbest/Aella 12 1/2
Flame - Beautyiscool/Bea 16
Thunder - Wingcestor/Everlight 17
Telekinesis - Cuitdashie/Lillith 21
Spiritual - Littlechedda/Kokoro 15
Clairvoyance - Kawaiiciel/Serge 15
Snow - Beautyiscool/Yukiko 14
Light - Cuitdashie/Heaven 19
Gravity - Cuitdashie/Snowy 10

Neutral:. (Undecided)
((The ones who are in the middle, they're evil, and they're good. Or they just dont know what to decide))

Shadow - Squeakishly/Cielia[Ciel] 14
Puppeteer - Noobforevah/ Kirin 17
Seamstress - (MadeupOC)/ Nuilin 15 1/2
Medic - (MadeupOC)/Ishayuki 21
Invisibility - Sirusthemice / Schyeld 19
Robotic - Fallingspear/Nwonknu[Woe-kunu] 10
Creation - Littlechedda/Mizuki 15

Evil:. (Darkies)

Magnetism - Flutterbest/Leila 17
Fallen Angel - Sirusthemice/Vincenta 19
Shapeshifter - Beautyiscool/Ronin 19
Absorber - Iwuvcheesed/Orran 18
Psychotic/Psychic - Cookiekingss/#13579 [HADES] 16
Teleporter - Iwuvcheesed/Ol' Edwin 82
Medaci - Sirusthemice/Seth 22(?)
Enchanter - Cookiekingss/Ares 18
Blood User - Squeakishly/Theodore[Ted] 18
Melt - Susanlwu/Mari 16
Earth - Cookiekingss/Athena 18
Gas - (MadeupOC)/Mazogasu 14

Unknowns/Optionals:.
((These are the ones where you can choose to fit in..))
Oh No! No more slots! Maybe you should wait? ;)

(There's alot heh)

Form]:.

Name:
Personality:
Age:
Element/Power:
Extra:
Side:
Appearance:


(If needed. Add the gender into Extra if you cannot identify the mouse)
,.;''-Prologue-'';.,
[url=]The Rising of Kyrulites[/url]

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On the day we had thought to be the end, we had managed to locate where the hybrid’s hideout as well. We were ready to strike at the creator’s command, but they had figured out our plan and ambushed us before we even attacked. There was no hope left to escape this chaotic madness, not even the creators could manage to say the words ‘retreat’ nor escape their devious traps of pain. As there wasn’t any hope, an idea had struck through my circuits, but what if it wouldn’t work? I had started to regret thinking, because a hybrid had almost spotted me, I had may as well for it might be our only hope of our generation. As in a few years, several mice will rise up against those who’ve fallen into darkness to be controlled by the sickening hybrids. Those who can handle the ancient power will gain far greater power than the hybrids, but if they cannot accept the responsibility of good, they will fall into the evil part of their minds. I shall call them the Kyrulites, for I will choose those to obtain the ancient power. For I am the all powerful and knowing, yet weaker than the creators, LURIN. An experiment made by the creators to permanently erase the hybrids existence in this world, merely a tool, no less, no greater.

INFO:
Kyrulites- Mice infused with ancient power at birth (the ancient power is from LURIN)
Hybrids- A fancier way of saying hackers, well probably worse than hackers, considering their even deadlier.
The Creators- The ones who created the world. (pretty sure I don't need to name them)
LURIN- A tool, more like a ban-hammer, but actually is an experiment to use the -ban-hammer- for war ever since the hybrids emerged from the darkness.

,.;''-Chapter 1-'';.,
[url=]The Blackout[/url]


KIRIN'S POV

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I sighed, it was just a normal, yet ordinary day. No one had came to buy any of my puppets, just the dolls Nuilin had 'created', but none of them figure out what we really can do.. It's best to leave it like that. As I hear the door creak open, I turn my head slowly to the door and greet the person, well more of a person in a hood. Though, I have my suspicions on this one.. This one also seems very familiar... As if I had met that mouse before. Nuilin ran up to the counter and asked,
"H-Hello! What could we do for you?" Ah, how adorable Nuilin is. The hooded person chuckled, I'll assume it's a man due to the voice, yeah, but where have I heard this voice before?
"Well, for one Kirin, you can come return to the dark side!" The man reveals a silver remote control under his hood. "What are you talking about sir?" Just incase, Nuilin readies her powers behind her back. Once the man had pressed the button with a 'Clicky-poo', I had blacked out. What is going on? Is Nuilin okay? One thing's for sure, this isn't good. At all means, I hope Nuilin is okay..

NUILIN'S POV

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As the hooded man pressed the button, Kirin suddenly had went limp just for a few seconds. This was cue for me to take action. I began to move my paw, when suddenly- Kirin grabbed my paw abruptly.
"K-Kirin what are you do-" Kirin had increased her grip on my paw.
"Shut up." After Kirin had said that, I had suddenly gotten slammed into the wall of the shop, almost as fast as lightning. I began to slowly get back up, though shocked.
"K-Kirin what's gotten into you?" Confused, the hooded man chuckled again.
"Now you see the true nature of Kirin yes? This is what your friend is really like." After those words, it was as if a lightning had struck me, and left me there to become paralyzed, but I know Kirin wouldn't really hurt me on purpose. So that means... This man is lying! I raised my paw and tried to use my powers, but it wouldn't work. Kirin used this as an advantage and started strangling me.
"You see now Nuilin? This is the Kirin you know. Now then.. It's time to take Kirin back to the darkness." As I tried to talk, I couldn't speak. It only came out as a mutter.
"You can release her now Kirin. She won't be a threat to us any longer.. Now that I've seen how weak she is *chuckles*" As if she understood, Kirin releases me, then I drop to the floor with a thump. Kirin and the hooded man walks out the door, but then after that, everything had suddenly went black. A dark, deep abyss, but Kirin, please, I hope you'll treat me the same way you use to before you turned into... a monster.

LURIN'S POV

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Hmm.. I sense a disturbance in the North. This could prove to become bad, I might as well check it out. Though, where in the North could two Kyrulites get into danger? You would think that they could defeat off the Hybrid.. Unless.. No that’s impossible. It’s not as if HE could find out where one of the Kyrulites is at already. I better get going, as I ready the launching system, I prepare to take off into the skies. Hmm, a quick check of my main systems couldn’t hurt. Launch System- Check. Rockets- Check. Guns- Check. Circuitry- All fine. Preparing for takeoff, in 3, 2, 1. Launch. As I soar into the sky, I could clearly see the sun, if I was a normal mouse, I probably would’ve been blinded, I guess that’s a good thing for being a robot. Now then, where are my two little Kyrulites?

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Name: everlight

Personality: brave, that person who looks like (s)he is always bored,fast,clever,

Looks: she looks like she is always bored, she mainly wears black white and purple,hur fur is the yellowish colour AND DONT FORGET THE EARMUFFS

Age: 17 (its her birthday when she first appears)

Element: thunder
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Name: Hope
Personality: That one who is mostly quiet, but has a crazy mind, a goody-goody most of the time, but has a hard time trying to not to be angry and slap people to death. Is a pretty decent foreger/adventurer for her age.
Looks: Something a little like this.

http://i.imgur.com/50es1P7.png
Age: Either 10 or 11.
Element: Life
haha i love young characters

awesome story so far ^3^

just gonna point out new speaker new line
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my character is really old..0.0

im thinking everlight could have a tragic past like...her 1 year old sister died when she was 2
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Wingcestor a dit :
my character is really old..0.0

im thinking everlight could have a tragic past like...her 1 year old sister died when she was 2

wINGCESTOR NO DONT DO THAT
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oh my gofd this sounds amazing.
/skips over to the dark side cause yes/

Name: Vincenta
Personality: Calm,uses words like 'thee' and 'thou' alot,sadist and is not to be messed with when she's in her fighting/vengeful spirits.OH YEAH BEST PRESONALITY TRAIT: sassy.
Looks:
http://i.imgur.com/J9N3Asu.png
Age: 19
Element: Fallen Angel (if that's where you put it.)
ps ruby eyes
O and a little fun fact about her 'cause yes: she often twirls a strand of her hair around her paw eheh

http://imgur.com/J9N3Asu (link so you can put it in i guess.)
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Name: #13579 but nicknamed Hades.
Personality: CANNIBALLISTIC PHYSCO. Never takes his paper bag off, even if he perfers a stronger one, he won't risk it, name is unknown as well // sometimes called Hades, meaning the invisible.
Looks:

http://i.imgur.com/fokOt6K.png
Age: 16
Element: Psychotic/Psychic

OMG YES I NEED.
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Cookiekingss a dit :
Name: #13579 but nicknamed Hades.
Personality: CANNIBALLISTIC PHYSCO. Never takes his paper bag off, even if he perfers a stronger one, he won't risk it, name is unknown as well // sometimes called Hades, meaning the invisible.
Looks:

Age: 16
Element: Psychotic/Psychic

OMG YES I NEED.

more people to the dark side.
yes.
just.
y e s.
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Cookiekingss a dit :
Name: #13579

that name is just
j-ju- ju ju
just
beautiful
also i see you did a keyboard slap
Cookiekingss
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Sirusthemice a dit :
more people to the dark side.
yes.
just.
y e s.

Iwuvcheesed a dit :
that name is just
j-ju- ju ju
just
beautiful
also i see you did a keyboard slap

HO HO HO HO HO HO HO
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When I was around the age of 6, I had accidently got into a quarrel with a fish, it ended up giving me permanent scars on my back and some on my legs, which causes me to wear a light blue jacket and jeans all the time.

but mice don't wear clothes????
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Satash a dit :
When I was around the age of 6, I had accidently got into a quarrel with a fish, it ended up giving me permanent scars on my back and some on my legs, which causes me to wear a light blue jacket and jeans all the time.

but mice don't wear clothes????

look deep into the world of anthros
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Satash a dit :
When I was around the age of 6, I had accidently got into a quarrel with a fish, it ended up giving me permanent scars on my back and some on my legs, which causes me to wear a light blue jacket and jeans all the time.

but mice don't wear clothes????

Cookiekingss a dit :
look deep into the world of anthros

it confused me a bit aswell but i assume they're anthros????
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.: PAGE 1 13TH POST :.

The following flags are:

Introduction:.

Pageget Counter:.

Random Pairings:.

Fanart:.
Pageget Counter~
Squeakishly - 2
Sirusthemice - 10
Iwuvcheesed - 10
Wingcestor - 2
Beautyiscool - 9
Noobforevah - 8
Cookiekingss - 5
Littlechedda - 1
Fallingspear - 1

Total: 49!
Lead: Iwuvcheesed/Sirusthemice

.: Random Pairings :.

Edric x Vincenta By Sirusthemice

Hope x Ever By Iwuvcheesed

Orran x Hope By Iwuvcheesed

Hope x Everlight By Sirusthemice
.: Fanart :.

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- By Sirusthemice 'Vincenta Anthro'

- By Sirusthemice.

- By Sirusthemice 'Hades without paper bag'

- By Squeakishly 'Hope'

- By Squeakishly 'Ciel'

- By Noobforevah 'Mad-Scientist; Edric'

- By Sirusthemice 'Mad-Scientist; Edric'

- By Sirusthemice 'Vincenta's Powers'

- By Sirusthemice 'Maid Edric'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'Maid Edric'

- By Noobforevah 'Bunny Edric'

- By Sirusthemice

- By Sirusthemice 'Greek Hope'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'Hope'

- By Sirusthemice 'Here is a Heart (Vincenta)'

- By Sirusthemice 'I used to be an adventurer like you.. (Ares)'

- By Sirusthemice 'Vincent'

- By Beautyiscool 'I don't have any organs. (Hades)'

- By Sirusthemice 'I will smack you with my fan! (Theodore)'

[url=http://imgur.com/KiDSrnD,9mDhYWi,ly2W2hm#1]-[/url] By Iwuvcheesed 'Psychic Hades'

- By Noobforevah 'Hello I'm Theodore'

- By Noobforevah 'Organs? (Hades)'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'What's really under his bag (Hades)'

- By Sirusthemice 'Second to None (Vincenta)'

- By Iwuvcheesed

- By Sirusthemice 'Dark Red looks good on everything (Leila)'

- By Sirusthemice 'GET AWAY FROM ME (Theo)'

- By Sirusthemice 'WHACK THEIR INSIDES WITH A CHAINSAW (Insane Hope?)'

- By Sirusthemice 'promise you'll get along now,guys! (Ronin/Edric)'

- By Sirusthemice 'WOE CANOE (Nwonknu)'

- By Noobforevah 'Hades' Long hair.'

- By Noobforevah 'Possible Theodore Eyes'

- By Sirusthemice 'Alternate Vincenta (Anthro)'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'You spin me right round (Hades)'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'Short story twist (Orran)'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'Under his bag. (Hades)'

- By Noobforevah 'Ronin, I HATE you. (Edric)'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'RapBattle (vincentavshades)'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'Youn' Edwin'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'The TERRIBLE Truth (Edwin/Edric)'

- By Noobforevah 'Youn' Edwin'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'Kid Hades'

- By Iwuvcheesed 'Half Naked (Hades)'

- By Noobforevah 'Atleast try it... (Edric/Ronin)'

- By Noobforevah 'Maid Edric'

- By Sirusthemice 'Maid Edric'

- By Flutterbest 'Edric'

- By Sirusthemice Vincenta V.S. Heaven

- By Sirusthemice Orran V.S. Athena

- By Sirusthemice Hades, Ares, Athena, Seth (Greekstuff)


Sirusthemice
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Noobforevah a dit :
ahahahaha. so sorry ;_;, but this person decided too. oh well. anyways... yes anthro-ish. woopie.
(DONT BLAME ME)
well then. if you excuse me... (makes short stories for your characters, and other things. wow I'm lazy.)

omfg yis anthros (anthro-ish whatevs) i've got the perf things for vincenta hAHha oh god me and my head.
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cool look and i dont know why im so absessed with earmuffs

everlight: NO NO ANYTHING BUT THE EARMUFFS DON TUCH THEEEM
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Wingcestor a dit :
cool look and i dont know why im so absessed with earmuffs

everlight: NO NO ANYTHING BUT THE EARMUFFS DON TUCH THEEEM

LMAO. I can see that as a future problem in the story hue. c:

vvv so kool c: (( LOL, okay, well I have to see how that fits into- nevermind I found an idea. derp :P ))
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Noobforevah a dit :
ahahahaha. so sorry ;_;, but this person decided too. oh well. anyways... yes anthro-ish. woopie.
(DONT BLAME ME)
well then. if you excuse me... (makes short stories for your characters, and other things. wow I'm lazy.)

vv LOL. yes. anyways.. ;_; I still needa think of ideas. atleast I have personalities. makes things so god damn easier.

http://imgur.com/pQD1HrB
her anthro hn.modify it to your likes to fit in into the condition haha
((wings arent optional))
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Sirusthemice a dit :
oh my gofd this sounds amazing.
/skips over to the dark side cause yes/

Name: Vincenta
Personality: Calm,uses words like 'thee' and 'thou' alot,sadist and is not to be messed with when she's in her fighting/vengeful spirits.OH YEAH BEST PRESONALITY TRAIT: sassy.
Looks:
Age: 19
Element: Fallen Angel (if that's where you put it.)
ps ruby eyes
O and a little fun fact about her 'cause yes: she often twirls a strand of her hair around her paw eheh

http://imgur.com/J9N3Asu (link so you can put it in i guess.)

OH MY GOODNESS That looks like my mouse in games o.o I'll show you ref o.o
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Squeakishly a dit :
OH MY GOODNESS That looks like my mouse in games o.o I'll show you ref o.o

YEAH I KINDA THOUGHT ABOUT THAT IV'E SEEN YOU IN-GAME.
but unh i couldn't pick anything better for a fallen angel???????
and that helmet is just cool--
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