Forest of Despair |
Panadesoim « Citoyen » 1411370220000
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Intr-o zii de toamnă, un explorator s-a gândit să se ducă în pădure, pentru că o legendă mai veche spune că acolo este "Mărul de Aur" care se găseşte în inima pădurii. Legenda mai spune că Mărul de Aur e păzit de Troli! Exploratorul i-a luat pe profesor şi pe ghid şi s-a urcat în maşină unde îi aştepta şoferul. Au plecat la drum. Au mers până când s-a făcut noapte. Erau la 2933 km de pădure. Ei s-au oprit şi au făcut focul. S-au gândit să se culce acolo, dar exploratorul le-a zis că animalele sălbatice i-ar putea mânca. Norc că profesorul a avut o idee : să îşi facă propriul lor cort cu materiale din natură. Pentru că nu aveau altă soluţie, restul echipei a fost de acord. Au mers să strângă lemne. După strângerea lemnelor, ei au luat frunze şi răşină pentru a acoperii "cortul". În sfârşit şi-au luat sacul de dormit şi s-au culcat. A trecut repede noaptea, pentru că au dormit doar patru ore. Imediat ce a crăpat cerul (s-a făcut dimineaţă), au mers dim nou la drum pregătiţi de ori ce. Au mers zile şi nopţi până când au ajuns la pensiunea "Groapa". Acolo s-au culcat o noapte, iar apoi au plecat iar la drum. În sfârşit au ajuns în pădure. Legenda nu spunea unde e ascuns mai exact mărul. Profesorul şi-a amintit că era în inima pădurii. Nu ştiau care e "inima pădurii", pentru că pădurea era imensă. Au început să meargă cât mai adânc în pădure până când maşina lor nu mai avea benzină. S-au gândit că sunt pierduţi . Nu după mult timp, au dat de un urs. Echipajul s-a aruncat la pământ, ţinându-şi respiraţia. După ce ursul plecă, ei au mers pe jos şi mai adânc în pădure! S-au rătăcit pentru că pădurea era imensă. Au găsit în sfârşit mărul de aur. Profesorul a vrut să îl încerce. Legenda a fost falsă, deci nu era nici un trol. Profeosrul a luat o înghiţitură din măr şi A explodat! Va urma!!! VA URMA! In a fall, an Explorer was thought to go into the Woods, because an older legend says that there is "Golden Apple" that is found in the heart of the forest. The legend says that the Golden Apple is guarded by Trolls! The Explorer took the teacher and guide, and got into the car where you expect the driver. They left the road. They walked until she made the night. There were 2933 km from the forest. They stopped and they did fire. Were thought to lie there, but the Explorer said that wild animals could eat. Gambling that the Professor had an idea: to make their own tent with materials of nature. Because they had no other solution, the rest of the team agreed. They went to collect firewood. After gathering wood, they took leaves and resin to cover the "tent". Finally they took the sleeping bag and got hooked. The night passed quickly, because they slept only four hours. As soon as the sky cracked (the morning), went back to the way you prepare the dim times why. They went days and nights until they arrived at the "Pit". There they slept one night, and then they left and the road. Finally ended up in the Woods. The legend does not say where he hid the IE Apple. The teacher recalled that it was in the heart of the forest. I don't know that it's "the heart of the forest", because the forest was immense. Started to go as deep into the Woods until their car had gasoline. Were thought to be lost. Not long after, given by a bear. The crew was thrown to the ground, holding the breath. After the bear went away, they walk away and deeper in the Woods! They lost because the forest was immense. Have finally found the Golden Apples. The teacher wanted to try. The legend was false, so there was no procedure. Profeosrul took a SIP of Apple and exploded! Will follow it! WILL FOLLOW! Translated by Panadesoim! Original topic made by Panadesoim ! |
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Sabusha « Citoyen » 1411459620000
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Hello, I have a few things to point out. First of all, you do not need to post the RO version of the story. We're in the EN part of the site so EN is definitely all you need. Secondly, I put your story into google translate and what I got was almost identical to your EN translation except for a few word changes. It is very difficult to understand the story if it's not properly translated. And last of all, you put this in the wrong subforum. If you ever wish to post off topic fiction, you're free to do it in the Off topic Arts subforum. If you really want to post this story in the EN forums, I suggest you get someone to help you with the translation. Otherwise, I am worried that EN is not the place for you. Thank you! |