[Transformice Story] Szigetszentmiklós trouble by Roughcin |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1528047720000
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*This is my first fanfiction on the english forum.* Hi guys, Roughcin is here. I decided to create my own fanfiction, named Szigetszentmiklós trouble. One girl. A lot of rivals for her, and her friends in her school. Szigetszentmiklós is the edge of corruption. Can Annie stop this town catastrophe? This is Szigetszentmiklós trouble. Annie Alida Stevere Gender: Female Age: 12-13 Personality: She is creative, clever, funny, and loves when playing her Xbox 360 and her PC. Birth: 2005/10/24 Backstory: She lost her younger grandpa in 2013 and she is depressed when she think of him. In her school in the lower section she been abused a lot. When Szigetszentmiklós has been corrupted by her rival, Szabolcs Bud, Annie decided to defeat him. Annie's theme (Punnany Massif - Partizán(Punnany Massif - Partisan)) Laura Lily Stevere Gender: Female Age: 9-10 Personality: She try to control Annie sometimes and funny. Birth: 2008/07/24 Backstory: She is Annie's little sister. She's in the corruption and decided to defeat Szabolcs, too. Laura's theme (JJD- Adventure) Panna Blacksmith Gender: Female Age: 10-11 Personality: Funny, modest Birth: 2007/06/? Backstory: She is came from the Steve Kardos Primary School, and come into the Stevere sister's school. She is Laura Stevere's BFF. Flower Viosz Gender: Female Age: 12-13 Personality: Creative, clever and serious. Birth: ??? Backstory: Flower is come from the town named Tököl. She's one of Annie's friends and allies. She's as clever as Peter Ambrus. Peter Ambrus Gender: Male Age. 12-13 Personality: Very clever and kind-hearted. Birth: ??? Backstory: Peter is of one of Annie's allies. Peter is the cleverest student in Annie's class. Just as Annie, he decided to defeat Szabolcs. Kinga Gender: Female Age: 7-8 Personality: Unknown Birth: ??? Backstory: Unknown Regina Gender: Female Age: Same as Kinga Personality: Big-mouthed Birth: ??? Backstory: Unknown Susan Tálas Gender: Female Age: 43 Personality: Kind-hearted, helpful Birth: 1974/12/10 Backstory: She is Annie's and Laura's mother. Zsolt Stevere Gender: Male Age: 50 Personality: Angry, kind-hearted and strict Birth: 1968/07/27 Backstory: He's Annie's and Laura's father. Bastlase a dit : Eniko Pergel Gender: Female Age: 13-14 Personality: Very Shy Birth: 2004 Oct Backstory: She's one of Annie's allies. She always speaks quietly. The worst moment in her life: In her first home, her family's TV exploded, and that's the answer why so much shy. More characters coming soon ;) Szabolcs Bud Gender: Male Age: 14-15 Personality: Black-hearted, evil Birth: ??? Backstory: He's Annie'a arch-enemy, who make Szigetszentmiklós corrupt. Annie decided to defeat him to save Szigetszentmiklós. He can turn into a monstrous monster, who is hard to defeat by Annie's hedgehogs. Szabolcs Boss theme Szabolcs's theme (Ellis - Migraine (feat. Anna Yvette)) Zoltan Baldauf Gender: Male Age: 14-15 Personality: He's crazy a lot. Birth: ??? Backstory: In the past he is Annie's friend, but he broke up with Annie. In the present, he's one of Annie's arch-rivals. Levente Capricorn Gender: Male Age: 8-9 Personality: Much crazy, because he's autism like Annie. Birth: ??? Backstory: He's is one of Annie's enemies. In Annie's lower section age, he's too idiot to Annie and Laura, and the Stevere sisters fight him. You can hardly see him now in the story. Sophie Blacksmith Gender: Female Age: 9-10 Personality: Unknown in the present, but in 2018 she was revealed as a brain ill girl by Laura. Birth: ??? Backstory: Already unknown Swiper Gender: Male Age: 3 Birth: 2015 May Died: 2018, but later a mystic hedgehog was gave life to him Height: 70 cm Weight: 5 kg Fur: Ginger with dark-ginger stripes and white-tipped tail Eye color: Greenish-yellow Backstory: Swiper is Annie's second pet. He's a ginger-striped fat cat. When Szabolcs corrupted the town, he was died of the earthquake. But later a mystic hedgehog was gave Swiper to life at Part ???. Sonic Gender: Male Birth: Unknown Height: 30 cm (Cub), 70 cm (Juvenile) 1,8 m (Young Adult) Ermm... Varies :D Weight: Varies (depends on age) Species: Hedgehog Fur: Sky Blue Eye color: Black (later green) Backstory: Sonic is a blue hedgehog was come to Annie Stevere because of the earthquake. He said only Annie can save the Szigetszentmiklós region from Szabolcs Bud, Annie's arch-ememy. Sonic come to the resistance in the end of Part 1. Sonic's theme (Halott Pénz - Ilyen egyszerű(Dead Money - So Simple)) Cub Why cause evolve: Sonic felt such pain when Szabolcs half-strangled him. Then he glowed strongly, and Szabolcs have half blinded and Sonic evolved. Juvenile Young Adult Soon! Moveset: - Sonic Fist - Homing Attack - Aurora Beam (idk :/) - Razor Spin Z-move: Sonic Overdrive (Young Adult) Shadow Gender: Male Birth: Unknown Height: Equals with Sonikku :3 Weight: -II- Species: Hedgehog Fur: Black, White, Crimson Eye color: Black (later red) Backstory: Shadow is a black hedgehog with crimson stripes and a white tuft on its body. He comes to resistance when the second earthquake happen, and his legs are really hurt when he comes. First appearence: Part 2 Shadow's theme (Desmeon - Back from the Dead) Cub Juvenile Young Adult Soon! Moveset: - Chaos Control - Chaos Spear - Homing Attack - Dark Pulse Z-move: Chaos Inferno (Young Adult) Silver Gender: Male Birth: Unknown Height: Depends on age Weight: Depends on age Species: Hedgehog Fur: Silver, White Eye color: Black (later yellow) Backstory: When the third earthquake happen, Silver was come from the underground. Jared and Lupus Malum finds him on the ground. He can do psychic powers. He's a friend of Jared. First appearance: Part 3 Silver's Theme (TheFatRat - The Calling (feat. Laura Brehm)) Cub Juvenile Soon! Young Adult Soon! Moveset: - Psychic Knife - Homing Attack - Psycho Smash - Psycho Shock Z-move: ESP Strix Soon! Venice Soon! Umbra Soon! Aaron Soon! Neon Soon! Shadic Soon! Bigi Soon! Tails Soon! Shinji Soon! Scourge Soon! Lupus Malum Bastlase a dit : Spark Gender: Female Birth: Unknown Height: 40 cm Weight: 6 kg Species: Pikachu Alliance: With Eniko Backstory: Spark is Eniko's Pikachu. She's very shy, she scared from anything, until she knows the person good or evil. She likes petting. Her signature move is Volt Tackle (always), and her Z-move is Catastropika. Moveset: - Volt Tackle - Thunder bolt - Thunder Fang - Scratch Dernière modification le 1528556220000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1528061520000
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Isn't Szigetszentmiklós a city in Hungary? Either way, am I allowed to submit a character for the story? (Though if he/she is a villain I'm not putting them as idiots. It goes against my nature, that.) |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1528101660000
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Yes, you can submit characters in the story, please show me. And yes, Szigetszentmiklós is in Hungary. Edit: I apologized the problem to trying the villains to be idiots, sorry for the grammar mistakes. ;) Dernière modification le 1528116360000 |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1528120080000
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Let's get started! :) Part 1: The beginning + The blue buddy :3 It was a sunny day in Szigetszentmiklós, but.... Why not? Annie Stevere was in her bed, and she is sleeping chilly. But Annie has heared a weird noise. - What's that stupid noise, Laura? - IDK- These 3 letters was comes out on Laura's mouth. And later, Annie's cat, Swiper, was meowed loud and horrible. - MEOOOWWWW!!!!! Annie's parents was sleeping, too. They waked up by Swiper's horrible meow. Susan asked Zsolt about this horrible meow comes from Swiper. Zsolt usually started to screaming. - Seriously, why that cat was meow loudly, when I'm going to sleep a bit?! - I don't know, Zsoltie. That was a big problem. Then, an earthquake was followed this. - Aaaaaaaahhhh!!!!-screamed Laura. - That was a big problem, I must go to the central of that thingy.-said Annie bravely. - Watch out, sis! Isn't that furry is Swiper?-asked Laura. - Ouch! That was a spiky blue cat here - but where comes that animal to my house? - Maybe the earthquake caused that spiky blue cat coming.-said Laura. - Oh no. Swiper! - Wait, Annie! Where are you going?! Annie go outside for Swiper, but she found Swiper died on the ground. - *crying* Nooooo!! I can't believe this! Swiper! Wake up! -said Annie frightened. - Annie! Wait! Huh? Why Swiper's fur is bloody? - *crying* He is died! *she's crying further* - I must tell this to mum! Mum! Mum! - What's the problem, my pretty? - asked Susan. - Swiper is died! - Oh no! Take a look at him! 1 minutes later.... - He's really died. 1 minute silent silence, please.- said Susan quietly. - What's up, you spiky blur? Why get here so quickly? The hedgehog was shows up his forehead to Annie and Laura. It was a message from an unknown person. - You must die, you foolish Annie! I'm now destructing Szigetszentmiklós- because of you! You can't stop me, you g*y! Muhahaha!!!!!! - Ohh crap, that unknown person was corrupting the city- because of me?! The hedgehog was nod his head. He was start talking Annie and Laura with his mind (because he's a baby hedgehog, and can't talk ;>). - "Not in vain to come to you, Annie Stevere. Szabolcs Bud, your past boyfriend was hunting for you. He's destructing your city, and your family and friends was in danger. You must stop him for the town people. I must come with you. Just call me Sonic. Sonic the Hedgehog." Hope you enjoyed this part. Part 2: Maybe in this week Story Q&A: Where is Szigetszentmiklós? Szigetszentmiklós is the biggest town of the Csepel Island, and the central of the Szigetszentmiklós region (in the past, it is the part of the Ráckeve region). I'm a person who lives in this town. It is mentioned in an official document in 1264 in the first time. Szigetszentmiklós is very beautiful, and this town have got 4 primary schools and 1 high school. The crest of Szigetszentmiklós. Make sure to check out this stuff. Dernière modification le 1528204320000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1528127460000
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Roughcin a dit : I'd submit them the normal wat, posting them here lol. Also, if you highlight the first chapter, then click the spoiler button (the keyhole) you can have it get put in a spoiler. |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1528219440000
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( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) okey everyone, ask about the storyline please, thanks ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Part 2: Sonic's past and one day - Okay, you're Sonic, right? - asked Annie. - Yes, you're right. - Please talk about your past, Sonic. - Ermm... I can't remember! - shouted Sonic. - Why? - asked Laura. - Now I'm thinking about this. Wait a minute. 1 minute later.... - Guys, my past is much eventful. I am lived in the underground of Szigetszentmiklós from the beginning. But I heared a kid is cursed with Trix's soul. Trix is a human who can switch its monster forms. Trix is very evil, is the first person who touched the Phantom ruby before Infinite. And he cursed Szabolcs Bud for unknown reasons. And he ruined Szigetszentmiklós, and you're the chosen one who can save the town. And he caused that earthquake that made me fly outside. So please, help me to become a mystic fighter who can help you... Someone interrupted Sonic's speech. An another earthquake. - Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!! - shouted everyone. - Go inside! - shouted Annie. Later.... - It was warm, huhhh...- said Annie. - Yes, Annie, that was warm. We almost died. - said Laura. - Hey, I see someone on the ground - said Sonic. Hey buddy, are you okay? - Don't touch me, Sonic! Or throw my Chaos Spear on you...- said a black striped hedgehog. - How do you know my name? - asked Sonic. - I remember you, you're look familiar to me. - What do you mean? - Where am I? - he asked. And who are these people? - Annie and Laura Stevere. They're my allies. - I see. Can they help me with my broken and wounded legs? - Maybe. - You can ask my mom. She's a duty nurse. - said Annie. - Really? - Yes, she can. - said Laura. - And, what's your name? - asked Annie, Laura and Sonic. - Shadow. - Oh crap, why I didn't know before? You're Shadow the Hedgehog! - shouted Sonic. - I don't remember my name, too. Thanks for finding out. Later Susan was walk into the resistance, and she sees Shadow, too. - What's happening here? - asked Susan. - We found Shadow, and he need to be healed. - Ohh, an another poor hedgehog, true? - Yes, Susan. Please do something with my legs, please. Don't touch it, it really hurts. - Okay, but guys, it's lunchtime. - Oh, I'm don't eat a long time ago. I'm really hungry. What's the lunch, Susan? - asked Sonic. - Milan macaroni. Hope you like it, you little hedgehog. - Yum! I like it! - I have a question, Sonic. How do you survive this? - asked Annie. - We're ancient creatures, Annie. We can survive anything, but we can't survive the death. - Woah, you can survive thirty years at this point? *Annie's chin down* - Yes, we can. Now, I go inside very fast. - And he run inside Annie's house. - Okay, me too - said Annie. In lunch.... - Hmm... This is very delicious. - I agree with you, Sonic. I can't taste such delicious food thirty years ago. - Go up, stairs out there! - I follow you! Please wait! - shouted Shadow. - Oh shit, what a modern room there. Ask Annie about that "modern" things. - said Sonic. I hear Annie's steps out there. - What are doing there? *whisper* I hope they don't touch my Xbox 360.... - Ermm..... Xbox 360? What's that? - It's a console. - Console? Why not you got Sega Genesis and Nintendo? - Sega doesn't produce consoles anymore, and I haven't got a Nintendo. - What do you mean with the "Xbox"? - asked Shadow. - I turn on the Xbox, if you want. - said Annie. - Okay, I want to see what that "Xbox 360" does. - said Sonic. Annie try turning on the Xbox 360, but she got a RRoD. - Oh crap, flying bad luck motherf*cker confirmed. - What do you mean, Annie? - The Xbox 360 is crashed, we call this the Red Ring of Death. - Red Ring of... What? - Dad! The Xbox is crashed! *whisper* I knew this would happens in the future..... - I'm here, my heart, what's the problem? - asked Zsolt. - Red Ring of Death. - *Zsolt's reaction* ( ͡☉ ͜ʖ ͡☉)! I must go to the service this month. - Oh, the poor Xbox! You can't play with it? - asked Sonic. - Yes, but hey, here's my tablet, and I can play with it. - Okay, let's play! - shouted the hedgehogs. 3 hours play later. - Girls! Teethbrush! - shouted Susan. - Nooooo!!! - shouted the sisters. - But you come! - an another shout from Susan. The Stevere sisters are run downwards. - Why don't come with the Stevere sisters? - asked Shadow. - You don't remember? Your teeth are always shiny. - Oh, sorry. Later.... - It's time to sleep, guys, goodnight everyone. And the resistance went to sleep. BTW This part was take to almost 3 hours when I make it ( ͡☉ ͜ʖ ͡☉) Hope you enjoyed! Part 3: BTW Maybe Tomorrow Dernière modification le 1528223940000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1528229040000
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Lol. Form Name: Jareth Age: Unknown Gender: male Personality: mysterious, no one really knows his age. He keeps it a secret, as he does with many things about his past life. Though he is kind and helpful, he hides the kindness under a harsh or moody mask of emotions, and his helpfulness is hidden in a way similar to the Seelie Court in the Shadowhunters books. He only lies to save those he cares about, and when they are in grave danger. He is stubborn, and takes a long time to anger, and he can get frustrated at some people quite fast. He is smart and cunning from his unknown years, and people can be a bit put off by how he dresses, hiding his pain underneath layers and layers of time. He is a very skilled fighter trained in many different ways of combat, and he is no stranger to danger, as he has lived through his own many times. Power (if any): longevity/ never able to stay dead for over a minute or two. (They go together as one power) Ref: Role: Allies |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1528309620000
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Part 3 is coming! :D Part 3: Jareth and Silver? + The first battle with Szabolcs The resistance wake up early, because we're thinking about a plan how to defeat Szabolcs. Take look at them :) - How we defeat Szabolcs? - asked Annie. - I have no idea, Annie - said Sonic. I know, we're the resistance, we must beat Szabolcs, blahblahblah... - Stop the blahblahblah, Sonic. Any ideas? - asked Shadow. - We need a new member to the resistance - said Laura. - That's a good idea, Laura. More ideas? - asked Annie. - I have got a Chaos Emerald, I don't know how to use, I forget it. - said Shadow. - You liar - and Sonic slapped him. - Why I got that slap? Hey! Go back! You stoopid! - shouted Shadow. Shadow heared a strange noise. He went down downstairs. - Ermm.... Where is a chaos emerald? - murmured an unknown person. But Sonic growls at him. - Why did you get here? - asked Sonic when he growls. - Please don't growl at me. I have an important thing. - What? - You didn't know that. Shut up. - Grrrrh... - What's that horrible.... Arghh! An another earthquake! - shouted Annie. Later... - What happened there? An earthquake? Nonsense. - said the unknown person. - What's your name? - asked Annie. - My name is Jared - he said. - Great to see you. - said Laura. - What the blue and black striped kitty doing there? - asked Jared. - They help to save Szigetszentmiklós. Their names are Sonic and Shadow. - Oh, what a little cuties have you got! I've got a midnight Lycanroc, I'll hope he don't died of the earthquake. I'll be back. - Okay, Jared. - Are you right, my wolfie? Where did you get that grey cub? We must show to Annie. - Owoooo!!! - barked the Lycanroc. Later the grey cub spoked. - Ah! Please don't eat me! I taste horrible! - Lycanroc, let go that grey fluffy. - Woof! Jared later was by the door. He opened the door with the grey cub on his shoulder. - Annie, Lycanroc was find something. - Let me see. But the grey cub slapped her a little. - Please let me go. - he said. - Silver! Wait! - shouted Sonic. - What? OMG, how do you know my name? - I will remember you before. - It's no use! You don't remember me. Pff... - shouted Silver. - WHY DID YOU SAY THIS?! - shouted Sonic. - Sonic, chill. - said Annie. - Silver, go back! - shouted Jared. - Nonsense! - shouted back Silver. - I will remember something - said Shadow. Silver loves cookies. - Cookies? We have chipped! Thanks, Shadow. - said Laura. - I have an easy plan. Place the cookies on the stairs. Then, Silver was come to the cookies. - said Jared. - That's a good idea. - said Annie. Jared, Laura and Annie place the cookies on the stairs. Silver was comes into the sweets, but Jared was find out something. - Look at Silver's psychic powers. They could be useful in the battle. - said Jared. Now, let's go with this new buddy. - Go here, Silvaddy! - Annie called Silver downwards. - Why call me "Silvaddy"? - asked Silver. - Just like that. - Ermm... Okay... - Let's go to the bus. I came here with this. Later... On the bus 682. - Where's Szabolcs? - asked Annie. - In your school. Warning: this is the central of the corruption. If we're came close to Szabolcs, we're gonna die here. - said Jared. - Oh no - worried Sonic. - What's the problem? - Szabolcs is very powerful, and we're weak as dew. We need to power up ourselves if we want to life. - said Sonic. - I have got a chaos emerald... although I do not know what to do with it. - said Shadow. - Damn, you got a chaos emerald! You're such f*ckin' awesome! - sweared Jared. - Are we here already? I know, that's imma fast. - said Silver. - Look at the school! - shouted Laura. - OOOOOOHH!!!!! - said Annie panicfully. - Let's go inside. I never die. - said Jared. - Why? - asked Annie. - Because I have the power to never stay dead. This is the answer. - ROARR!!!!!! - Szabolcs roared. - Oh no, Szabolcs is near - said Silver. - Shadow, please give me the chaos emerald! Hurry! - shouted Jared. - Okay, just don't lose it, it's precious - shouted Shadow. Jared was run upwards. Szabolcs was there. He's waiting for the resistance. - What are you doing here, you little idiot! This is my empire! - said Szabolcs. - Not today! - shouted Jared. Jared uses Chaos Control to stop time, because Jared very ancient and get frustrated when Szabolcs touch him. Jared was punched him, with not much success, because Szabolcs fast as lightning. - Holy sh*t, I can't believe this! Damn it! Suddenly, a psychic knife almost hit him. - Jared, I will help you. - said Silver bravely. - Watch out, Silver! - shouted Jared. Let's use an another psychic knife again! - Okay! - said Silver. The psychic knife was hitted Szabolcs successful. - Great job - Jared was praised Silver. - Sonic! How did you get there? You're in danger! - shouted Silver. - Chill out, Silver. - said Sonic. But suddenly, Szabolcs grabbed Sonic. - Ahh! - Sonic! - shouted Silver and Jared. - Ha! I'm grabbed this fool hedgehog kitty, I eat you for dinner, you blue sheep! - Arghh! Please let me go! Please don't strangle me!! - Sonic!! - shouted the resistance. Suddenly, everybody stops the shouting and looks at Sonic. - What's happening to you, Sonic? - asked Annie. - Leave Sonic alone for a while - said Jared. He's evolving. - What do you mean, Jared? - asked Laura. - Sonic is a really ancient creature, and he can evolve. - How do you know all this? - asked Shadow. - I am an ancient creature too. But I'm not a cub. - Wow - said Silver. Later, Sonic kicked Szabolcs's chin. The kick was hurts him. - Auch! You paid for this, Sonic the Hedgehog! - Szabolcs shouted back to Sonic and he fainted. Sonic run fast to the resistance. - That was cool - said Sonic very tired. - You're right? - asked Annie. - Yes, I am. Look at me. I'm not a furry anymore. - Yeah, you look like a real hedgehog - said Laura. You've been save the day. - But this is not the end. Szabolcs will be back at anytime, so really watch out for ourselves - said Jared. - Now, let's go home. I'm very tired - said Sonic. This part is the first appearence of Jared, Silver the Hedgehog, and Lupus Malum. And Sonic was "evolved" because of Szabolcs. Hope guys you enjoyed this part, this is the made of 4 hours xD Part 4: ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) this week Dernière modification le 1528390200000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1528370880000
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Lol ^-^ Jareth: *huffs* There is some spelling and grammatical errors. I'm surprised you can read that Time Lord. Me: OI! I can read it just fine! Don't be like that Jareth, or else. Jareth: *crosses arms* or else what? You'll kill me? Me: *confused* why would I kill you? I know you can't die, and I can do other things you know. You don't know what I can come up with. *evil grin* Jareth: *sighs* Fine... Though I still say that there are some grammar mistakes. Me: She already apologizes for them! If you want to have perfection, you should beta for her! *throws hands up in the air, frustrated* Jareth: *thinks about it* You know what? That may be a good idea. Hey, Roughcin! Want a beta? PM Bastlase, he'll help. On a different note, my Lycanroc's name is Lupus Malum. She's a bit... Unusual compared to others. Lupus Malum: *lopsided grin, somehow evil grin as she sneaks up behind him and dumps a bucket of water on him* Jareth: *soaked* Ack! Lupus Malum: *runs away on all four laughing maniacally* Jareth: *chases* Get back here! Both: *racing away, good-naturedly chasing the other* Dernière modification le 1528376100000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1528370880000
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Sorry for the double post... I'm going to use this for the Lycanroc form now. You gave me an idea for an OC, so ty. And I may add the other 5 Pokémon for the team, which is mainly Dark, Ghost, and Dragon. Though they also have dual typings too. Name: Lupus Malum Age: Unknown Gender: female Personality and Backstory: A trickster, and a bit eccentric. She loves to play pranks -usually on her Trainer- and shows she cares by doing a prank on someone. She's not very trusting of others, and will take a LONG time to become used to a person or being. A fierce some fighter, she uses her trickster ways to tire out the enemy then slice them open with a well placed Night Slash. These moves Night Slash and Dark Pulse were somehow learned, how, though is a mystery. Smart and cunning, she's different from other Midnight forms, using a combination of Midday and Dusk forms in her style of fighting. She's very lithe, her stats maxed out and at the highest level attained. Move set: Night Slash, Dark Pulse, Stone Edge, and Fire Fang. Alliance: With Jareth. Where ever he gives, she will. Her teammates are mainly Dark, Ghost, and Dragon Types. Ref: Dernière modification le 1528378620000 |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1528390080000
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Lupus Malum was added to Animals section. Lupus Malum :D |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1528480800000
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You get the reference? |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1528534080000
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No, I just copied and paste it within a quote, not interesting happened :) Part 4: Shadow vs Szabolcs Anna and Laura go to the mound with the resistance, Jared was moved to Jókai street with Lupus Malum. - Let's go home. It's going darker. - said Jared. - Woof? - barked Lupus Malum. - Wanna eat a treat, Lupus? - *stretches out her tongue* - Okay, catch it, my doggo. - *crunches* Jared was smiling to Lupus Malum. - Owooo!!! - howled Lupus Malum. - Please, shut up for a while. Okay? - *whining* What's happen to Annie's? - Finally, a 682 bus came here...- whispered Annie. We almost got very wet. - Yeah Annie.... OH my god! It's the goat bearded driver! - shouted Laura. - What?! I don't remember him... - said Annie. - He drive very dangerous - said Laura. - Whatever it takes, Sonic needs to be relaxed! - said Annie. - You're absolutely right, Annie. - said Sonic. - Now, let's grab the season tickets, and let's go home! - said Annie. But on the bus, Annie and Laura meet Zoltan. - Hi bitches! Good to see you, Annie! Szabolcs was corrupting Lakihegy, too! Muhahaha!! You can't stop him! - But I can stop him! Sonic, use a sonic fist! Sonic was hurted Zoltan greatly. Zoltan was shouted: - Grrhh... you pitcher llama! Don't you see what you did to me?! - You got what you deserve! Grr! - growled Sonic. - Never goodbye, Sonic. - and Zoltan leaved at the Michael Vac street. - Good job, Sonic - said Laura. - Thanks, but I'm very tired. When we come home? - asked Sonic. - Shortly. - answered Annie. 5 minutes later... - Woah, that's dark here - said Silver. In the Stevere's family house... - Good night everyone. - said Annie. - Good night! - said everyone. In the morning... - *yawns* The resistance are ready to fight Szabolcs in the second time! - said Annie. - But I still want to sleep! - said Silver. - I want to fight him! - said Shadow angrily. - Please don't sleep shortly, Jared will come with Lupus Malum - said Annie. - Hehe, Lupus Malum, the foxie guy who bite me? - asked Silver. - Yes. - said Laura. - Bring it on! - said Sonic. (yeah, typical Sonic spiel lol) Jared was arrived into the Stevere's house with Lupus Malum. - Hi, guys, bad news. Szabolcs has corrupted an another part of Szigetszentmiklós! - Zoltan was said it - said Laura. - Oh, sorry - said Jared. Are we ready for the battle? - Yes, Jared - said Annie. - Okay then, let's get the bus. Lemme go. On the good old 682 bus :) - Let's talk about the plan. Which one is brave to fight with Szabolcs? - asked Laura. - Ermm.... Me then? - asked Shadow. Jared, where's my Chaos Emerald? - Ermmm... I left it home... Sorry. - sigh Jared. - You stoopid! Yesterday I said the Chaos Emeralds are precious! - Damn it, I can't use my Chaos Spear... - murmured Shadow. - I'll be back, just wait for me in the town hall - Jared was runned home for the Chaos Emerald. - Okay - said Laura. Later... - I'm here with the Chaos Emerald, but.... the 238 bus is here! Hurry! - Gotta hurry fast, or we late the bus. - said Sonic. - Sonic, can't you shut up for a minute? - asked Jared. - Sorry... - said Sonic sadly. - Em.... Sophie! What are you doing here?! - asked Annie. - Nothing else, I'm just going to Lakihegy. - said Sophie. - You're looking suspicious - said Jared. - I don't think so - said Sophie. - You liar! - shouted Jared. - O rly?! Let's fight my Lenny face! - A Lenny face is not a pokémon, you idiot - said Laura. - Lupus Malum, use Stone Edge! - shouted Jared. - Owoo!!!! *uses Stone Edge* - You stupid! You defeated my Lenny Face! - shouted Sophie. - Hah, gay. A Lenny Face isn't a pokémon - laughed Jared. - Grhh...! - growled Sophie. - Now here's Lakihegy. An another part of Szigetszentmiklós started to corrupt. - said Jared. - My grandma is in danger, so we must stop him - said Annie. - Your grandma? Let's finally get into him! - said Silver. - Let's save her - said Sonic. - Our grandma isn't far away - said Laura. Later.... - We would be here. - said Annie. - This is a good deserted area - said Jared. - Annie, look! It's Eniko! - shouted Laura. - Oh, my good friend - said Annie. Hi, Eniko! - Oh, hello Annie. I didn't see you a long time - said Eniko quietly. - Pika? - Oh, you got a Pikachu? What's her name? - asked Annie. - Her name is Spark - said Eniko quietly. - Pikachu! - She is so cute - said Laura. - I see, you got pokémons, too. - said Eniko quietly. - These are not. They're ancient creatures - said Annie. - Their names? - asked Eniko. - Sonic, Shadow and Silver - said Laura. - Muhahaha!!!! - What's that weird noise? - asked Eniko. - That's not good, Szabolcs is here - panicked Silver. - I will fight him! - shouted Shadow. - Hello, fools. I'm here and corrupting this part of Szigetszentmiklós! Are you ready for the death?! Muhahaha! - laughed Szabolcs dramatically. - Lupus Malum, let's ready for some action. Lupus Malum, use Fire Fang! But Lupus Malum has bited Szabolcs's tail, and she struck by the electricity. - Lupus Malum, no! - shouted Jared. But Lupus Malum don't die. - Are you okay, doggo? - asked Jared. - *whining* - Please get somewhere, my buddy. - said Jared. - Shadow, if you wanted to fight him so much, lemme go. - said Annie. - Jared, take me the Chaos Emerald - said Shadow. - Say please - said Jared. - Jared, take me the Chaos Emerald, please - said Shadow second time with a please. - That's why - said Jared. - Thanks, Jared - said Shadow. I'm going to kick his butt! - Spark, please help out Shadow with a Volt Tackle! - Pika... chu!!!!! - Great job, Spark - said Eniko quietly. - Shadow, use Chaos Spear! - shouted Annie. - *uses Chaos Spear* - Arghhh, you noir kitty! Take this! Szabolcs was created an electric beam to defeat Shadow. But isn't success, Annie catched him. - Are you okay, Shadow? - asked Annie. He didn't answer, but he shined strong. - Jared, take a look at him. - said Annie. - Wut, he is evolving - said Jared funnily. Let he go. - I thought he's dead - said Silver. - Nope, Shadow is the ultimate lifeform, and he can't die, he's the same - said Sonic. When Shadow evolved, Shadow looking on Sonic dumbly. - Where am I? - asked Shadow. - In the resistance - said Sonic. - Oh, alright. I'm lost my mind for a minute... - Let's go home, guys - said Jared. - Wait, I invite Eniko to the resistance. - said Annie. - Okay - said Laura. - Eniko, do you want to join the resistance to stop Szabolcs? - asked Annie. - If it's about Szigetszentmiklós, then I'm coming with Spark - said Eniko quietly. - Yes, we're saving Szigetszentmiklós from the corruption - said Annie. - Let's go to the resistance's capital, guys! - said Laura. I took some time, but I finally made it :) Hope you enjoyed. What's new :) (warning: shadow invasion rofl) - Shadow's theme was changed from "Spitfya x Desembra - Cut the Check" to "Desmeon - Back From The Dead". - Shadow's Juvenile form was added to Shadow's profile. - Eniko Pergel's mouse was added to her profile. - Spark was added to Animals section. Dernière modification le 1528556340000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1529284620000
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Where am I? Classic regeneration/evolution mishap ^-^ Gah... Now I want to add the rest if Jareth's team on... |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1538901900000
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Please, close this thread. I have lost my inspiration of the story, and I don't wanna continue it. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1538923800000
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Oh nooo :( |
Sonikkuro « Consul » 1539705540000
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Bastlase « Sénateur » 1539708600000
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lol nice otter meme |