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[ Fanfiction ] Neon Lights ! (WARNING BRIGHT COLOURS)
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  • Chapter Purple
Lmao, i'm trying, I didn't expect this to get so popular :o
Sorry for the long wait, I'm getting so many characters :)
Honestly, I really didn't expect this much attention, I'm not used to that, so i'll use that as a excuse for being such a recluse!

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%208&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=8C00FF


Copycat burst out into a giggle. "Stop being so funny!" She smiled, a glint in her curious grey eyes. Light reflected off of them as Oko shined a brilliant blue.
"I didn't know you changed colours too, Copycat." Oko looked at her hands which her cuffed under her scarf.
"Huh? I don't.. I'm just grey-" She studied her hands, they were a very pale blue, which as first she thought it was Oko's reflecting colour until she took a closer look.
"Wh... really?" She looked up with a warm smile, realizing something, but letting the thought fade.
"I guess you're more like me now!" Oko smiled, rising from his sitting posture.
"Alright love birds sorry to break this up but Copycat's gotta come with her friends now." Wind busted into the scene, Copycat's ears lowering as her blue tint faded to a green.
"Oh, will she be back...?" Oko glanced to Wind then Copycat.
"Probably not." Wind huffed.
"Why don't your group just stay with us, huh?" Oko thought, staring at Wind.
"Sorry but I don't like people and I don't want to be around you." Wind smirked as she flipped around, snapping to get Copycat up.
"Don't mind her, she's naturally-- like that." She smiled, fending off crybaby tears as she turned around to look up to Jasper.
"I see you're leaving."
"Er, I don't want to..." She tightened her scarf. "Just my friend Wind-"
"I'll talk to her." Jasper dashed away, leaving her with a confused face, her cheeks warm with feeling.
She darted after him, grabbing his hand. "You don't need to!" She blurted, pulling him closer to her. "It's funny..." she let out a loud gasp as her grey tint grew a strong orange aura.
"Huh..?" Jasper glanced down at her, his mind full of thoughts.
Wind let out a smirk and a loud laugh. "Well, guess you two actually made it together, i'll leave you too it!"

"I wonder why she left me to stay..." Copycat sighed, Oko next to her. "Yeah, she seemed really excited to take you away, haha."
"You never know, she is a sneaky little rat.." Copycat let out a shiver as she sat down on the cold black glass floor.
"I wish we all could meet out of.. this life."
"I do too."

"Hey, do you see that group of mice over there?" a red mouse spoke, nearing behind...nothing. The other lined mouse let out a small nod.
"What should we do..." The red mouse shook their head, if they ran away, the small crystal sounds of their feet would fill the void, causing everyone to hear, and if they stayed any longer, the mice might see.
The other mouse, which was a grey, let out a sigh. "Watch."
"Watch?"
"Just... watch them...."
"Aries! We can't do that!" The red mouse let out a hissing whisper.
the grey mouse named Aries shook their head. "The void is full of caves and corners, look for shadows, maybe there is a corner near. Digi, trust me.." The grey mouse breathed a heavy exhale.
"Fine... I think I see a corner over there."


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// s l o w l y c l a p s
stop being good at writing stories sTOP

and eevee i swear if you get less attention than this imma cri
also i put form for helper for art BECAUSE I WANT TO DRAW FANART OF THIS SHIIII--
is it oke if i complete a form for another char ? ;v;

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Loudly reads it

Too good ;v;
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nepence a dit :
// s l o w l y c l a p s
stop being good at writing stories sTOP

and eevee i swear if you get less attention than this imma cri
also i put form for helper for art BECAUSE I WANT TO DRAW FANART OF THIS SHIIII--
is it oke if i complete a form for another char ? ;v;

draw art i order you to slave
anyways yes sure make another character :o


digitalpanda a dit :
Loudly reads it

Too good ;v;

ayyy thankz mate!!
loudly hugs
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I have to do fanart of this
But i'm not on my computer right now
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that sucks :(

i actually did fanart i need to add shit in, including the new characters lmao

coffs its not that im busy im just fucking lazy

E// everything done for OP, i counted, and there is 14 characters!
HOW DO I KEEP UP WITH THEM :O

E2// I had an idea, I split the groups into 3 mice. (four groups of 3 and 1 group of 2)
This way, it'll be easier to write
I have little page breaks(?) that will switch to each group.

;D

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that chapter was like all about wind omg
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windknives a dit :
that chapter was like all about wind omg

and wind was all about that chapter
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  • it's short :(
  • Chapter Magenta
Sorry it's short, but I want to post something again, and well, I need suspense for a new-and-improved chapter style, full and thick of characters! :)

http://fontmeme.com/embed.php?text=Chapter%209%20and%20a%20half&name=adrip1.ttf&size=100&style_color=C3286E


"Alright, losers... we're gonna split up, obviously there isn't anything dangerous in this stupid place." Wind let out a loud exhale after, standing on a large step in the void, her beautiful yellow shining gold against the polished black floor, as the black atmosphere glowed white latern-like blurred lights, they floated around like clouds as the group of mice listened to Wind.
"There will be 4 groups of 3." She rasped as she let out a cough.
"Hey... who're they?" Sintre nudged Brick as they both looked behind them, a grey and red mouse walking near.
"Whats with all the commotion?" The red mouse spoke up, hoisted themselves up next to Wind.
"Haha, lookie here, we got #1 of the rainbow and Copycat's sibling!" Wind let out a loud laugh as the mice sternly floated a foot away from Wind on the ledge.
Copycat flattened her ears as she stood next to Oko, holding back angry tears. "Don't listen to her, she isn't worth your time.." She whispered to her, as she let out a grin as she face him. "Okay." She held her grin, trying to ignore Wind's annoying comments.
"Anyway, Since you seem so eager to be with us, how about you have one of our team with you in a group." Wind paused. "There will be 3 groups now, and 1 pair of two mice." She smiled, eyeing out Copycat and Oko. "How about we start of with the pair. The Lovebirds? Oko and Copycat?"
"A-a..." She awkwardly looked at him, as he let out a tiny nod. "Sure, if it's okay with yo-" "Y-yea... okay!"
"Cipher, Jasper, and I?" Wind offered, looking at the two guys, Cipher knew her, and Jasper seemed fond of her too, they both nodded, floated to the led and standing next to her. "Lets break some rules, Knifu, come up here, you're with us." Wind ordered, and the quiet Knifu's orange eyes lit up as she zoomed next to Wind.
"Since thats off numbered, All the guys and girls are together... These two runts can be with Sintre and Brick."
"Our names are Digi and Aries." Digi stood up to Wind, as she and Aries walked up to Sintre and Brick.
"It's settled." Wind sighed. "Hopefully we all can appear here once we go to the actually TFM.."
Copycat gleamed up at Oko, her skin under her chipmunk fur was steaming, and she felt small compared to him, being she was a tiny chipmunk and not a large mouse like the rest of TFM was. "U-um... I guess we part of the rest..."
"Sounds good to me." Oko smiled, walking away from the crowd to a visible cave..
"Well, off with you, c'mon losers we gotta make a camp or something like that." Wind sighed, dashing from her group off of the ledge.




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nine and a HALF
DAMNNNNN WE'RE GETTING INTO THE HALVES
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aAAA
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nepence a dit :
nine and a HALF
DAMNNNNN WE'RE GETTING INTO THE HALVES

o shit
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HOLY THAT WAS SO GOOD!!
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HOLY THAT WAS SO GOOD!!

im finally starting to write (edit) good again, i thought i would be free for the summer, lmao
but i know after this change everything will be much much easier, and less compacted. I'll be comfortable to write again.

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  • Chapter Pink
oops am i writing the chapters too fast

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Note: This will be the same size as the last half... expect longer chapters in this style!

"So.. It's just a cave.." Copycat admired the sparkling gems as she traveled deeper with Oko.
"I dunno... maybe?" Oko shrugged, glancing at her then the roof as they continued. "So... about your colour thing, how's it feel? does it feel strange to switch?" He asked, flipping some of loose hair out of his seeking eye.
"I don't feel it, I feel numb, honestly.." She glanced down at her lined paw, noticing a taupe outline. "I'm a pale orange.." She smiled, like Knifu! Without Knifu, she wouldn't have met Oko.
"I see... No emotion change?"
"Sometimes I get tense... but my emotion would be different, right?"

"Knifu, where should we go?" Cipher sighed, repeating Wind.
"Maybe to the corner, there isn't much to do, and it's been the longest we've stayed... here." Knifu decided, looking at Wind. "Alright." She sighed. "C'mon losers." She directed to Jasper and Cipher, zooming off as Knifu dangled from her paw.
"Haha... very... funny." Jasper let out a serious groan and floated away as Cipher longed to be with someone besides Wind.
"C'mon slow poke!" a distant yell from Wind was heard, and Cipher shook his head as he sped up, greeting Knifu.
"I told her we shouldn't do this.. I knew you wouldn't like it... I'm sorry." She mumbled, nudging his with a loving smile to cheer him up.

"Ee! I love new people!" Ana shrieked as she spun in the air, excited to meet Lily and Lotus. "Ana..." Feather sighed, drawing on the reflective black floor, drawing over her face as it slowly disappeared.
Lily giggled. "Hi, i'm Lily, nice to meet you Ana!" She smiled, as Lotus pushed her way next to Lily. "I'm Lotus!" She smiled, linking arms with Lily.
"You guys are so peppy, I'm gonna go find a camp site for something, at least Jasper was able to do that for us!"Feather sighed, storming off as she left Lily, Lotus, and Ana puzzled, rushing after her.

"So.. I'm brick and this is Sintre." Brick smiled, introducing themselves to Aries and Digi.
"Well, I'm Digi and this Aries... Hey, wheres that other grey chic?" Did looked around as they walked away from the meeting area.
"She went with Oko, maybe we can meet up, Aries and her are the same color, is that why?" Brick answered back. "Yeah.." She sighed, looking at Aries as he distanced himself from Brick and Sintre.
"It'll be alright." Aries mumbled, as he followed along.
"Too bad, maybe we'll meet everyone once the white appears and we swoosh into the real world." Sintre shrugged, thudding on.





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GOOOD CHAPTER,GOOOOOOOOOOD
can blue sintre be more talkative pls
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im screamiNG YOU WRITE TOO GOODDD
IN 3 POSTS ITS 200 POSTS WOOOOOO
HYPEEEEEE
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bublamorce a dit :
GOOOD CHAPTER,GOOOOOOOOOOD
can blue sintre be more talkative pls

Don't worry there will be more talking one the chapters are more like this!!


nepence a dit :
im screamiNG YOU WRITE TOO GOODDD
IN 3 POSTS ITS 200 POSTS WOOOOOO
HYPEEEEEE

LOUD SCREAMING W HAT
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DROPS CAKE ON FLOOR
OH
MY
THAT WAS GREAT
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windknives a dit :
DROPS CAKE ON FLOOR
OH
MY
THAT WAS GREAT

Except them to be greater <:)
no jk they'll just be slightly better bc im horrible lmao'

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