well then wut do you want us to say? this is good and so is this and blah blah blah...
EDIT: PAGEPGET

Bakachoy a dit :

fixed up some of the grammar and spelling errors. x.x
i wasn't sure about some of it, so i didn't revise those parts.
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lovely story and plot. hoping to see more :J

Thanks!

Kattiej a dit :

well then wut do you want us to say? this is good and so is this and blah blah blah...

Uhm just don't fix stuff because I'll go back and edit.

Nice story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter

omg this is a really good story *-* very veery intresting

This story is sooo good :D I can't wait for mooaaarrr

[url=]Chapter 4[/url]
Cutemckitten's POV

Ew! Sloppy Joe's! LITERALLY! There's a guy named Joe and he looks sloppy! I'm just going to skip lunch..

"Cute! Come over here!" Kitty said.
"Okay!" I said as I was walking to where she was.

When I got to the table my eyes went on a guy. He looked cute! I hope he doesn't have a girlfriend though..

"Meet my boyfriend, Zack!" Ruby said
"Hi Zack. Nice to meet you!" I said calmly.
"Hi uhm.."
"Cute."
"Oh. hi Cute!"

I smiled at him. Too bad he has a girlfriend though. But the good news was Zack, Kitty and I ended up having an awesome conversation! Ruby got so mad that she got up and left! After lunch was over he said "Well I'll see you later Kitty."Then he walks to art class with me. Speaking of art, I'm glad that I got second place of the Art Show. I was sure I wouldn't win though. Anyways I never knew Zack was in the same art class with me! I can't believe it! While the teacher was talking we wrote notes to each other. He's behind me a little ways. We said this in our notes:

"Hi Zack! :D"
"Hi Cute. Do you enjoy art class?"
"Yes I do. Do you?"
"Kinda. I can't draw very well."
"Oh. Well maybe you can come over sometime and I'll help you draw"
"No way. Ruby would get mad at me!"
"Okay. :/ Well let's go back and focus on the teacher."

I was pretty disappointed when he said he didn't like art. For the rest of art class we just paid attention to the teacher. But when the bell rang school was over! I went to my locker and grabbed my backpack. Then I went to Vivihi (because our lockers are only 6 away from each other) and asked if I could come over. She said Yes. We went to find Kitty and walk to their house.

Awesome yes maorrr please MAOOORRRR

LOL i'm the mean one xD

Vivihi a dit :

Awesome yes maorrr please MAOOORRRR

Later. :D

Xxxrubyxxx a dit :

LOL i'm the mean one xD

Lol sorry about that. xD

Micefamilies a dit :

Later. :D


Lol sorry about that. xD

its fine x)

WHERE'S CHAPTER 5!? D;;

can i be in the story/ btw i love this

Peashaman a dit :

can i be in the story/ btw i love this

I saw dat Peashaman. x3

HELL YEA IM AWESOME >:D

Nekoava a dit :

I saw dat Peashaman. x3

you saw nothing

Skellies a dit :

you saw nothing

Oh yus i di-id.

Nekoava a dit :

Oh yus i di-id.

oh no you di'nt

Peashaman a dit :

can i be in the story/ btw i love this

maybe you can be Zack

Skellies a dit :

oh no you di'nt

Oh no you di-n't just say I di-n't see it.

Micefamilies a dit :

maybe you can be Zack

zack is a boy!!!! ;; i think..