Skellies a dit :

zack is a boy!!!! ;; i think..

He IS a boy. xD Didn't you read CHapter 4?

Micefamilies a dit :

He IS a boy. xD Didn't you read CHapter 4?

then why do you want me to do a gender change lololol

Skellies a dit :

then why do you want me to do a gender change lololol

Oh. i forgot you were a girl. xD sorry.. Well in that case do you want to be the principal. xDDD

edityou probably feel offended now. :p

Micefamilies a dit :

Oh. i forgot you were a girl. xD sorry.. Well in that case do you want to be the principal. xDDD

edityou probably feel offended now. :p

thats ok lol, sure ill be the principal

Skellies a dit :

thats ok lol, sure ill be the principal

Ok. Want your last name to be changed?

can it be Ms. Pea

Skellies a dit :

can it be Ms. Pea

Yep! I edited it to Ms. Pea

thanks and btw, chapter 2:

Then she ran to class since everyone left. Now I can talk to Mrs. Wood alone..

Skellies a dit :

thanks and btw, chapter 2:

Then she ran to class since everyone left. Now I can talk to Mrs. Wood alone..

she said no critiques -.-

its not a critique lol just informing her she missed a spot

then wut is it

edited it in

Skellies a dit :

thanks and btw, chapter 2:

Then she ran to class since everyone left. Now I can talk to Mrs. Wood alone..

Fixed! Thanks for telling me!


[url=]Chapter 5[/url]
Cutemckitten's POV

When we finally got to Kitty and Vivihi's house. We set our bags down and went to the living room.

"I'm going to get us some [url=]cheese[/url]cake!" Kitty said as she was walking to the kitchen.
"Well congrats on getting second place Cute!" Vivihi said to me
"Thanks Vivihi! Ya know, I never knew my art was this good. I mean it's horrible in my opinion."
"Well obviously it's not horrible if Ms. Pea likes it!"
"True. Oh look! Kitty's backl!"
"Yay! Kitty, I'm going to go upstairs in my room and eat."
"Okay just DON'T make a mess!" Kitty said fiercely.
" I won't! Who do you think I am? Butterfingers? Vivihi then went upstairs


"I have a question Cute" Kitty asked
"What is it?" I replied back.
"Am I a really good artist?"
"Of Course you are! Why wouldn't you be?"

I'm confused. Why would she ask me this? I mean she's an awesome artist! She got Ms. Pea's approval.

"I don't know. I was hoping to get first place. My art is really good! Better than Ruby's! But now, I don't think it is."
"Don't say that! Your the best artist I know. And if Ms. Pea's or anyone else can't see that then they have issues."
"Thanks Cute. It's not going to help though."
"You're a special artist. Your amazing. I wish I was just like you Kitty!"
"Pshhht. Yeah right."
"It's True!"

Before Kitty could say anything her mom came home!

"MOM!!! YOU'RE BACK! Wait! Where's dad?!?"
"Oh, he had an extra task to do. But he'll be back in two days!"
"VIVIHI COME DOWN! MOM IS BACK!"

Everyone in the living room could hear Vivihi stomping downstairs fast to see her mom. When she got down she jumped into her arms.

"I've missed you so much Mom!!"
"I've missed you to Viv! Your dad has an extra task so he'll be 2 days late."
"Okay! Come up and play with me!!!"
"In a few minutes darling."
"Ok!" Then Vivihi ran up stairs.

im Enjoying this story soo much!

Froggymypet a dit :

im Enjoying this story soo much!

Thank you!!! :D

Amazin.

hii
just thought i'd say the story is coming along nicely and do you mind if i draw some of the scenes? ;u;

Thefourthone a dit :

hii
just thought i'd say the story is coming along nicely and do you mind if i draw some of the scenes? ;u;

Thanks, and sure!

[url=]Chapter 6[/url]
Vivihi's POV

I'm so glad my mom is home! The last time I saw her was on the first of July. Which is very sad! But atleast I get to be with her now. Well while I'm waiting I'm going to play Minecraft on my IPod! Oh no, Creeper alert! Wait... 10 creepers? Are you kidding me?? Better run away before they explode... BOOOM BOOM! The creepers died, whoo! Wait.. I here footsteps, probably my mom! Better turn off my ipod!

"Hi Viv!"
"Hi mom!"
"So what did you want to talk about darling?"
"You know, your missions!"
"Well first off, I got to work with Batmouse!"
"BATMOUSE?? Your kidding right? Did you tell him about me?"
"Yep! I told him that I have two daugthers named Kitty and Vivihi."
"What was his response?"
" He said "Oh, tell them I say Hi"
"That's so cool Mom! If you ever see him again, tell him I say "Hi" back!"
" I certainly will! If you don't mind I'm going to relax now Viv."
"I don't mind! Have fun!"
"Thank you." She kissed my forehead, then went to her room.


That was a nice conversation with my mom. I can't believe she got to be with Batmouse though! I'm going to go back and play on my IPod now. Ring Ring! I got a text from Cute! I wonder what it is...

Hi Vivihi! Just wanted to say that I left.

I replied back.

Aww. :( Do you think you can come over tomorrow since it's not a school day?
Yes!! BTW You're lucky your mom got to see Batmouse!
Hehe, thanks!
Well I better go now, bye!

After texting to Cute, I continued playing Minecraft.

[url=]Kitty's POV[/url]
Well the good news: My mom got to see Batmouse.
The bad news:I'm horrible at drawing!
I wish I was just like Ruby... popular, famous, and well a pro at drawing!

Yay! c: