shading tips please >_>

Mantlestar a dit :

shading tips please >_>

That's really pretty. I'm not good with humans though, but I'll try. I won't critique you on the shading though, since Emily (Hetaliagal) is going to.

I see which style you're trying to go for with the nose, try to make it a little wider maybe. And... hmm... the face is a little round. The eyes (like pupils I mean) look pretty good but the outlining of them is off. The right eye's outlining should go under the pupil more maybe.
The right shoulder is kind of pointy, try making it more rounder like the other one.
Also Luka's hair is a little more red, I think... haha, I don't even know.
That's all only nitpicking, I really like it. Her necklace is beautiful, too.

Mantlestar a dit :

shading tips please >_>

should be some shading underneath the hair where the skin is showing, same with the arms. just don't add too much on the arms. there could also be more shading on the torso and hair, and some darker shading on the neck.

shading/lighting can be pretty complicated sometimes but manga books have stuff about shading that is very easy to learn. i would recommend getting a book so you can get everything else with it too (like anatomy, it kinda looks like you need some help with that too)

but, i do happen to like how detailed the drawing is.

Nezumini a dit :

That's really pretty. I'm not good with humans though, but I'll try. I won't critique you on the shading though, since Emily (Hetaliagal) is going to.

I see which style you're trying to go for with the nose, try to make it a little wider maybe. And... hmm... the face is a little round. The eyes (like pupils I mean) look pretty good but the outlining of them is off. The right eye's outlining should go under the pupil more maybe.
The right shoulder is kind of pointy, try making it more rounder like the other one.
Also Luka's hair is a little more red, I think... haha, I don't even know.
That's all only nitpicking, I really like it. Her necklace is beautiful, too.

Hetaliagal a dit :

should be some shading underneath the hair where the skin is showing, same with the arms. just don't add too much on the arms. there could also be more shading on the torso and hair, and some darker shading on the neck.

shading/lighting can be pretty complicated sometimes but manga books have stuff about shading that is very easy to learn. i would recommend getting a book so you can get everything else with it too (like anatomy, it kinda looks like you need some help with that too)

but, i do happen to like how detailed the drawing is.

thanks :o and i'll keep your critiques in mind

Hetaliagal a dit :

ask google, he's your friend. i don't use gimp.
i don't care if it looks like the mouse is wearing a jetpack but it's anatomy. you should really get a book or something that can help you with anatomy because it looks like you really need it.

asymmetrical means "Having no balance or symmetry." i imagine you've learned about symmetry in grade 3 or something like that.

I know about anatomy I just am not good at drawing shoulders and stuff

Peashaman a dit :

I know about anatomy I just am not good at drawing shoulders and stuff

Shoulders you say?

yes, and keep in mind that when you draw a muscular person, make the shoulders muscular, too. it just looks weird, having lanky and skimpy shoulders on a muscular person.

I reallly need help with mouse bodies.. Everyone has their own style and yea but i just get the drawing from the actual mouse.. i want my own style i just really need help with shoulders..

tips on how to make it furry like an actual mouse..?

this was a drawing for beautyiscool. i think i did horrible it looks so weird help pleaase :c

Plz critique

Lol yes, 1st non-MC art in my gallery

that's my dA-Minecraft friend in casual mode (His OC is part wolf lol)

Herobrinefan a dit :

Lol yes, 1st non-MC art in my gallery

that's my dA-Minecraft friend in casual mode (His OC is part wolf lol)

Very cute hero!
Im wondering why are the eyes diff colors?
and why does the tail have an inside bump near the end.

Lietfan a dit :

Very cute hero!
Im wondering why are the eyes diff colors?
and why does the tail have an inside bump near the end.

lol his OC has diff eye colours

oh yeah ty for pointing that bump -facedesk-

Yw....
Im wondering abotu this V


Plz critique

The ears
..going to redline it so that it will be easier for me(2nd redline!!)

Lietfan a dit :

Yw....
Im wondering abotu this V

Plz critique

1st time redlining...

@Lietfan, nice, room for more improvement \o/




\o/

Thank you hero! that helps alot.
im thinking about getting a DA so i can be more orginized

Lietfan a dit :

Thank you hero! that helps alot.
im thinking about getting a DA so i can be more orginized

lol okay npnp

Herobrinefan a dit :

1st time redlining...

@Lietfan, nice, room for more improvement \o/
\o/

Meep. The legs again . it shouldnt be like that.


.aand your redlined face is a little too big.
the head part near the ears should have fur

Shervonne a dit :

Meep. The legs again . it shouldnt be like that.

.aand your redlined face is a little too big.
the head part near the ears should have fur

hero ninjaed you.