it should be somekind of riddle or something idk

I I DUNNO :/ how about a treasure map or something idk lol
pageget

yea like in 39 clues ^^

a riddle to saving the cheese world from evil Cats?

Kattiej a dit :

I I DUNNO :/ how about a treasure map or something idk lol
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maybe.. thats what I was thinking

Graciekinz a dit :

it should be somekind of riddle or something idk

Mk

Skellies a dit :

a riddle to saving the cheese world from evil Cats?

That came out of nowhere, but i could add that somewhere in the story

[url=]Chapter 10[/url]
Kittywing's POV

"I think it says 'To find the golden paintbrush, you must get through me first." What the heck does that even mean?!? Golden paintbrush? Get through who?? I didn't sign up for this!" Cute said confused

"Well let's just keep walking. Maybe something that makes sense will happen."

So we keep walking until we found a riddle or something to get through. Nothing.

"This isn't possible Kitty! What are we going to do?!?"
"I don't know! I'll just call Vivihi."


Vivihi's POV

Where's Kitty and Cute?!? I thought they were suppose to be back a LONG time ago. I should ask my mom, maybe she'll know.

"MOM! Do you know where Kitty and Cute is?!?"
"No darling! They're probably just eating at a fast food place or something."

Fast food?! Without me? UGH! They know that I love fast food! Especially that place called Cheese King!

RING!!! RING!!! That was the phone. I went over and picked it up.

"Hello? Who is this??"
"YES!! IT'S ME KITTY YOUR SISTER!"
"I know... I'm not two. Anyways, where are you? And what fast food place are you eating at? Hopefully Cheese King!"
"I'm not eating at any fast food restraunt you dummy!"
"No one calls Vivihi a dummy! Well if your not at Cheese King, where are you then?"
"I-I don't know! I was in Mouser Land then I went through a portal or something, now Cute and I are stuck! That's why I called! Get mom and the phone!"

When I yelled for my mom there was no response! That's odd. Just a few minutes ago she was in the kitchen! So I walked in the kitchen and saw a note it said
"I'm sorry honey, but I have to go on another mission. I need to fight the evil Cats. I may or may not come back. Your father will be back tomorrow morning.

~Mom"


Well that's sad! Does she not know how dangerous these cats are??? UGH!

"Uhm Vivihi? Are ya still there?" Kitty said interrupting my mad/sad moment.

I forgot about her in such short time.

"Oh, I'm still here! But I have bad news..."
"What? I can handle it! I hope..."
"Okay.. mom has left to fight evil cats! She said she may or may not come back! But dad will be back tomorrow morning."
"OH MY GOSH! DOES MOM EVEN KNOW WHAT SHE'S DOING?!? I GOTTA GET OUTTA HERE!"

I could hear Cute in the background panicing too. I quickly hung up and went upstairs into my room grabbed my IPod and my jacket, went back downstairs and walked to the door quickly. When i got downstairs I went on my cheese bike and started going to the Mall as fast as I could go.

Micefamilies a dit :

[url=]Chapter 10[/url]
Kittywing's POV

"I think it says 'To find the golden paintbrush, you must get through me first." What the heck does that even mean?!? Golden paintbrush? Get through who?? I didn't sign up for this!" Cute said confused

"Well let's just keep walking. Maybe something that makes sense will happen."

So we keep walking until we found a riddle or something to get through. Nothing.

"This isn't possible Kitty! What are we going to do?!?"
"I don't know! I'll just call Vivihi."


Vivihi's POV

Where's Kitty and Cute?!? I thought they were suppose to be back a LONG time ago. I should ask my mom, maybe she'll know.

"MOM! Do you know where Kitty and Cute is?!?"
"No darling! They're probably just eating at a fast food place or something."

Fast food?! Without me? UGH! They know that I love fast food! Especially that place called Cheese King!

RING!!! RING!!! That was the phone. I went over and picked it up.

"Hello? Who is this??"
"YES!! IT'S ME KITTY YOUR SISTER!"
"I know... I'm not two. Anyways, where are you? And what fast food place are you eating at? Hopefully Cheese King!"
"I'm not eating at any fast food restraunt you dummy!"
"No one calls Vivihi a dummy! Well if your not at Cheese King, where are you then?"
"I-I don't know! I was in Mouser Land then I went through a portal or something, now Cute and I are stuck! That's why I called! Get mom and the phone!"

When I yelled for my mom there was no response! That's odd. Just a few minutes ago she was in the kitchen! So I walked in the kitchen and saw a note it said
"I'm sorry honey, but I have to go on another mission. I need to fight the evil Cats. I may or may not come back. Your father will be back tomorrow morning.

~Mom"


Well that's sad! Does she not know how dangerous these cats are??? UGH!

"Uhm Vivihi? Are ya still there?" Kitty said interrupting my mad/sad moment.

I forgot about her in such short time.

"Oh, I'm still here! But I have bad news..."
"What? I can handle it! I hope..."
"Okay.. mom has left to fight evil cats! She said she may or may not come back! But dad will be back tomorrow morning."
"OH MY GOSH! DOES MOM EVEN KNOW WHAT SHE'S DOING?!? I GOTTA GET OUTTA HERE!"

I could hear Cute in the background panicing too. I quickly hung up and went upstairs into my room grabbed my IPod and my jacket, went back downstairs and walked to the door quickly. When i got downstairs I went on my cheese bike and started going to the Mall as fast as I could go.

Great chapter! :D

I'm all alone, Oh wells

[url=]Chapter 11[/url]
Vivihi's POV

When I finally got to the Mall doors, they were locked (obviously)! Now how was I going to get in? I looked all around the building until I finally found a window to jump in. My cheese phone rang once I got in.

"Hello? Who is this?"
"It's Kitty! Have you got in Mice Mall yet?"
"Yep! I just got in, and it is REALLY dark! How am I suppose to find you?"
"Well first find Mouser Land then in the store is a portal somewhere."
"Are you kidding me Kitty? There is so such thing as portals! Never have and never will be!"
"Whatever! Just go and find the stinkin portal now!"
"Okay, Okay sheesh!"

So I started looking for Mouser Land.

Cute's POV
I hope we're almost outta here because we've been here for.. 20 minutes!


"Kitty! Did you find any hints yet?"
"No, not yet. And stop asking! You should be helping to!"
"Well sorry! I'm just really scared."
"I am to, but you don't see me being a lazy mouse!"
"You take that back!"
"No! Until you help I'm not taken that back!"
"Well I guess I'm not helping then! I don't care if I'm a lazy mouse anyways!"
"UGH! Seriously you have to help! We're not going to get out qicker unless you help!
"Fine. I'll help you" Cute mumbled.

Still going to continue even if you all died

[url=]Chapter12[/url]
Cute's POV

Ugh! It's been 1 hour and we still haven't found anything! Either that or we're not looking good enough.

"Ring Ring!" Kitty's phone went.

She picked it up and Vivihi called. I couldn't hear what was going on because I was listening to music. (HEY! It's never the wrong time to listen to music!) After she was done talking to Vivihi I askd what they were talking about.


"Vivihi found Mouser Land but not the portal yet." Kitty said to me.
"She better hurry up! I'm itching to get outta here. LITTERALLY!"
"Well let's just stay here until she comes."
"I'm hungry though!" I complained
"Me to... I hope she brought some cheese with her because she didn't, and I know your to dumb to bring anything!"
"Ya know Kitty, you've gotten alot more rude to me!"
"I'm sorry, it's just that we've been here for HOURS and there's nothing to help us."
"What should we do to get time passin?" I asked
"Maybe we should draw! I have some paper and pencil in my purse." Kitty suggested
"Great idea!"

So we started drawing some random stuff. Meanwhile...

Vivihi's POV

I finally found the portal now I can go in! Here I go!
_____________________________________

WHOA! Now that was a wild ride. Time to get a searchin, but fisrt I'm going to text Kitty.

Kitty! I found the portal! I just got out.
Finally you came! Did you bring water?
No.
Did you bring any cheese?
No.
Did you bring anything helpful?!?
I brought um... gum. :D
YOU KNOW I'M ALLERGIC TO GUM! CUTE CAN'T HAVE GUM EITHER!
Rude much?


Kitty stopped texting after that. So I started walking to find Kitty and Cute.

Bump Sorry for triple post. :/ I will write another chapter when someone comments because I don't want 4 posts by me in a row O-o (not forcing you to post x3)

POSTING

Why is everyone making fanfics now... My dear god. o_o

I started on the 15th of August
edit:You've just never noticed it >:)

[url=]Chapter 13[/url]
Vivihi's POV

Oh I see Kitty and Cute! They certainly look hungry and tired if I say so myself!

"Finally you came Vivihi! Now help us get outta here!"Cute complained
"Okay okay hold on" I said

I started looking around for clues. I found nothing so I keep walking a head until I noticed a button on a wall! I didn't click it because who, knows what could happen!? So I yelled for Kitty and Cute.

"YO! KITTY, CUTE COME OVER HERE! I found a button!" I yelled
"We're comin Vivi!"

I could see them walking towards me. I was just looking at them until they came.

"Okay, so what's up with the button and what does it do?" Kitty asked
"That's why I wanted you to come over here! So you could figure it out what the button does! I mean you guys are older than me!" I protested

Then there was an awkward silence. Cute finally stopped it after 6 LONG minutes.

"So what are we waiting for? PUSH THE DANG BUTTON!" Cute yelled
"But what if something bad happens?!?" Kitty and I both asked.
"Trust me! It probably won't." Cute said
"We'll we're not doing it and neither are you!" Kitty said
"Fine!"Cute mumbled.

Then Kitty put her back to the wall. We heard a "Ca-click". And then a loud sound went off.

"OH MY GOSH WHAT THE FUDGE DID YOU DO KITTY?" I yelled at her
"I don't know! I must of pushed the button with my back!" She replied
"NOW WE'RE GOING TO DIE! WHAT A SAD SAD WORLD." Cute moaned

Then the noise stopped.

t-triple post!

Writiting a small chapter for all you silent readers :)

[url=]Chapter 14[/url]
Vivihi's POV

That's werid the noise stopped. I said to myself.

"Well that was werid.."Cute said
"It was indeed. What do you think happened?" Kitty asked
"I-I don't know! Let's keep walking though."I suggested

So we started walking.

Then there was something so BEAUTIFUL ahead of us. We just glared and glared at it. I wonder why it was there though.

"Oh my gawd.." Kitty said
"Holy- Fudge" Cute said
"What da Flip" I said

We walked to it. It was under a glass case so no one cold steal it. Under it there was some words that said
"Golden Cheese Paintbrush"

There wasn't alot of definition to it. But from the look of Kitty she wanted to open it BADD!

"UGH! I want to open it so so so bad!" She whined
"Well don't do it!" Cute said
"Why not?!? It's the Cheese Paintbrush! Do you not know the back story to it?" Kitty said

Cute and I both looked at each other then Kitty.

"What do you mean Kitty..?" We both asked

Micefamilies a dit :

t-triple post!

Writiting a small chapter for all you silent readers :)

[url=]Chapter 14[/url]
Vivihi's POV

That's werid the noise stopped. I said to myself.

"Well that was werid.."Cute said
"It was indeed. What do you think happened?" Kitty asked
"I-I don't know! Let's keep walking though."I suggested

So we started walking.

Then there was something so BEAUTIFUL ahead of us. We just glared and glared at it. I wonder why it was there though.

"Oh my gawd.." Kitty said
"Holy- Fudge" Cute said
"What da Flip" I said

We walked to it. It was under a glass case so no one cold steal it. Under it there was some words that said
"Golden Cheese Paintbrush"

There wasn't alot of definition to it. But from the look of Kitty she wanted to open it BADD!

"UGH! I want to open it so so so bad!" She whined
"Well don't do it!" Cute said
"Why not?!? It's the Cheese Paintbrush! Do you not know the back story to it?" Kitty said

Cute and I both looked at each other then Kitty.

"What do you mean Kitty..?" We both asked

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[url=]Chapter 15[/url]
Vivihi's POV

"Well, long long ago.. there was this evil scientist named Tigrounette. He was the best Artist of Transformice.... until he disappeared one day. He always had a talent in art, before he disappeared he made this cave thing and put the Golden Cheese Paintbrush in a glass case. Hoping no one would find it." kitty explained
"What the heck..." Cute said
"Pretty cool right?" Kitty said as she smiled
"WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL US ABOUT THAT BEFORE YOU IDIOT!" Cute yelled
"Sorry! I just remembered! But legend has that it can make you draw better. That's why I want to open it!"

I honestly thought my sister was lying! I mean there's no Tigrounette! And there is absolutely NO such thing as a Golden Cheese Paintbrush that can make you draw like a pro! Why does my sister always tell lies? This is just NOT cool!

"Kitty... listen up. I need to tell you something VERY important." I said
"Okay... what is it Vivi?"
"THERE IS NO ONE NAMED TIGROUNETTE AND THERE IS NO SUCH THING HAS A PAINTBRUSH THAT CAN MAKE YA DRAW BETTER!" I yelled in her face
"Well that's a little rude. But it IS true! If you and Cute don't believe me, then FINE! Just walk away!"

So me and cute started walking back from where we came. I could kinda here Kitty crying lightly. Hoping we wouldn't hear her. I don't know if I should give her some love or just ignore her. Then again she WAS lying.

this is an amazing story *-*

Flutterbest a dit :

write more already X_X_X_X_X_X_X_XX_X_XX_XX_X_X_X_XX_X_X

heh i already did

Bengalstar a dit :

this is an amazing story *-*

tank wou

great story *-*-**-*