101th post *-*
which means pagegettt, lovely fanfic though :3

Thanks qties ;DD

I seriously have no idea how long the story will be...

derp
I may have this locked because I don't feel in the mood of writing alot owo

anyways

[url=]Chapter 16[/url]
Kitty's POV

Ugh! I'm so mad at Vivihi and Cute. How could they not believe me? Yeah I've made some stupid stuff up before.. but this one is actually true! Well whatever, I'm going to see what the Paintbrush does!
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As I walked over and slowly lifted the glass case up, I couldn't belivee it! Even with my own eyes! I picked the Paint brush up and walked over to a wall and started drawing. And oh my gosh! I was drawing like my cousin, Linkette! Okay well not exactly, but almost. Finall I'll get to beat Ruby! And Cute.. hehe. Time to brag in Vivi's and Cute's face!


"HEY VIVIHI AND CUTE CMON OVER HERE!" I yelled

For a second, there was no response, but I heard some pawsteps coming closer and closer.

"You're just going to waste our time Kitty!" Cute said
"Agreed!" Vivihi replied
"Well get aload of this!" I kind of bragged

Until Vivihi interuppted me.

"HOLY CRAP! DID LINKETTE DRAW THAT!?!" She screamed
"No no no, I did! Well... the Golden Cheese paintbrush did." I exclamied showing her the paintbrush.

By the look of Cute's face, she seemed pretty impressed!

"POINT KITTY!" I said in my head

"So.. Are we going to find away outta here or what?' Cute questioned trying to change the subject.
"Well duuh! We've been in here for about a half hour!" Vivihi whined
"Uhm excuse me? YOU'VE been here for a half hour! Kitty and I have been here for about 5 stinkin hours!!" Cute groaned.
"Just stop it! We're going to find a way out! We won't if you two keep complaining!" I said

[url=]Chapter 17[/url]
Kitty's POV

I hope we get out of here soon! Because If we don't this will be BADD!

"Hey guys I know how we can get outta here!" Vivihi said.

Or maybe not bad after all! Cute and I went to Vivihi and glared at her.

"So how are we going to get out?" Cute asked
"Well I think it's obvious." Vivihi said

Then Cute and I looked at the ladder and th hole up leading to something. We slapped our paw to our hand.

"I NEVER KNEW THAT WAS THERE!" Cuted shouted.
"Well what are you all waiting for? LET'S GET OUTTA HERE" Vivihi said
"WAIT!" I yelled quickly

Vivihi and Cute looked at me strangely.

"What..? Don't you wanna get outt here?" They both asked
"Yeah, it's just that, I'm taking the paintbrush with me!"
"NO NO NO NO! You are not taking that Kitty!" Cute said
"Well too bad! Now let's go!"

Then we went up the ladder.
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After we got up I had no idea where we were! Well that didn't matter, because I found a door! I raced too it, but it was LOCKED! So were the windows! Now how are we going to get home?!?

4 posts in a row w00t
actually im just posting so someone can post so i dont have to post 5 times in a row owo

nice story man

ermm

[url=]Chapter 18[/url]
Cute's POV

Oh my gosh! We're trapped in a mall! WE'RE TRAPPED! This is the worst mall expeirence EVER!

"How are we going to get out?" Vivihi asked
"I-I don't know! I just wanna get out of here fast!" I said quickly
"Don't be such a scardy pants Cute. Nothing bad will happen to us! It's not like anyone else is in here with us." Kitty added

Then we heard some ghost noises! Oh, chedder whiskers this is bad!!

"OMG OMG! WHAT WAS THAT?" I said freaking out
"It was NOTHING!" Vivihi said
"IT WAS SOMETHING! DID YOU NOT HEAR IT?" I screamed

Vivihi then started laughing for some odd reason!

"I made the noises you dummy!" She giggled

Kitty started laughing too.

"IT'S NOT FUNNY! WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE!" I said angrily

They both stopped laughing because they knew I was NOT joking.

"We know.. we're going to get out of here. Vivihi, do you remember what window you got in?" Kitty asked.
"Yes! Follow me!" She said as she started walking.

almost 20 chapters
cool
next chapter coming soon

lonely bump ._.
Meh.
I'm goiing to have this locked

Micefamilies a dit :

lonely bump ._.
Meh.
I'm goiing to have this locked

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(

too late
yes i know