Well hi

So

There was something like this in another forum, and it seemed fun so I made my own.
Here's how it works. There's one character, and everyone controls him. I write a passage, people respond saying what the character should do, and I pick one to four actions s/he should take. I then write the next passage according to that, and so on.

So here goes nothing...


>You wake up on a beach. No memories.

>Typical but effective.

>Nothing but a blank book, a t-shirt, cargo pants, and underwear.

>You look around, realizing that a creature is watching you from a few feet away.

>It's blue, furry, and has large green eyes. It either has a massive drooling problem or It wants to eat you.

>Deciding you have nothing to lose, you walk up to It. It circles around you affectionatly.

>You're hungry, tired, lost, and don't even know how old your are or whether you are male or female. But important things first.

>What should you call the creature?

> You name the creature Breeze.

>Having no idea where you are,You stand up,To look at your surroundings.

>The creature nudges you affectionatly.

>You begin walking around on A sandy shoreline.

>You notice something in the water,Some thing big.

>You got towards it

>It's red,With evil looking eyes.

>You begin to see your creature go after it..

>You pull the creature away from the shoreline,Looking at the large set of eyes.

>Arose from the water,A large,Shiny-Scaled seafoam green dragon.

>You hesitated,Pulling Breeze,The Creature,Away from the shore farther,Much farther.

>It put it's head closer to you...You thought it was the end. But all it did was...Stare at you.

sigh

Since I seem to have explained this wrong, I'll link you to the thread I got it from.

http://forum.spore.com/jforum/posts/list/73821.page

*I name the creature blaze

*stare at my reflection to realize im female

*i go near the creature it scampers in circles

*gather coconuts from trees

To Claggy:i did not name him breeze i named him Blaze Lol just to answer your concern :)

To Claggy:I did not say breeze i said BLAZE BLAZE NOT breeze BLAZE LIKE A FIRE! sorry to say it in caps but now your cussing for no reason

Randomyahoo a dit :

*I name the creature blaze

*stare at my reflection to realize im female

*i go near the creature it scampers in circles

*gather coconuts from trees

it's been named breeze already

>Walk around the beach and scavenge for supplies

>You train Breeze to fetch food

>Teach yourself how to make clothes out of leaves

>Make a tent out of wood and sticks and leaves

>go inside the tent
>tent breaks
>breeze fetches you a fish
>i then re attempt to make a tent out of fish

>sucsessfully makes another tent
>cooks a fish inside the tent
>breeze woofs and your confused
>looks back at the dragon

>dragon stares back
>dragon eats you
>the end.

Randomyahoo a dit :

*I name the creature blaze

*stare at my reflection to realize im female

*i go near the creature it scampers in circles

*gather coconuts from trees

To Claggy:i did not name him breeze i named him Blaze Lol just to answer your concern :)

To Claggy:I did not say breeze i said BLAZE BLAZE NOT breeze BLAZE LIKE A FIRE! sorry to say it in caps but now your cussing for no reason

What he was saying that it has already been named breeze, Breeze is it's name because it was named breeze before you named it blaze.

>The dragon spits you out, and you rub your head.

> Breeze yaps at you, frightened.

> You tell Breeze to calm down, it's okay.
> You hide behind some rocks, out of sight of the dragon.
> You're going to need to think of a plan to defeat it.

>you find a sword behind the rock, and reckon it would be useful
>you jump out, ready to fight the beast
> but the sword slips from your hand
> then breeze suddenly jumps at the dragon

>you tell breeze to stop, but its too late
>you reliased that breeze had a power to poison when he bites!
>you gave him a biscuit because you are amazed
>you go to sleep in the tent

>You wake up

>You look around and see that Breeze is gone and everything ia broken into pieces

>You shout his name a couple of times

>You run out of the shredded tent frightened

> The dragon is gone
> The island has disappeared
> You turn around only to discover that your tent has disappeared
> You are standing in an empty white space
> "cli-clack!" something drops to the ground
> There is a pencil lying at your feet
> You pick it up

> the pencil says come to middle of the island
>you find a huntress also stranded on the island
>you walk up to her and she says...

[NOW GUYS DONT MAKE HER SAY ANYTHING STUPID K?]

> "Don't fear me, I have come to help you escape. I found out you were here when you were shouting the person Breeze.

> You don't trust her, after all that's happened.

> You go up to her and nod, as in agreement.

> The very next morning before you meet with the hunteress, you start working on a obsideon knife.

> You soon see the warrior walk up to you and you scramble and stuff the knife in the bush.

> "I, am Karana. I'm a Indian that's been stranded here with my dog Rontu-aru for 15 years now." she says.

> Behind her is a dog, much looking like a wolf.

> "Don't worry, she doesn't bite." Karana smiled.

> You take out your knife and kill Rontu-aru, then Karana. You then see Aluets (Russians) coming in boats.

> You run away to the deepest point in the island.

> A cave you discovered.

> You bury yourself in the cave and discover...

> Flinching, you hear the ground beginning to crack and crumble, until it collapsed.

> You rubbed your head, realizing you were in a magnificent cave filled with glowing, aquamarine pools and large glowing stones in assorted colors, about the size of you.

> Meanwhile..

> Karana cocked her head. She knew a technique from her kin on how to convince your enemies that you were dead, Rontu-aru knew a canine way, also. She was awfully confused, but shook it off.