Rate The Short Story Above You 1-10 |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1402446840000
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Title explains it all! Rate the short story above you, from -10 to +10! Example: M1- I met a man named ham. M2- -9/10. I once was alone in a ravine, vines hanging from the stony walls [...] M3- 8/10 I think you get the idea Mouse below me starts o3o |
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[Modéré par Icewolfbob, raison : Moved] |
Lilytenten « Citoyen » 1402447080000
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Griffincraft a dit : Only mods can do that, so u have to wait till a mod passes by. |
Velocemus « Citoyen » 1402453200000
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Lilytenten a dit : 9/10 - They lived happily ever after. Separately. #sixwordstory |
Annefromva « Citoyen » 1402454100000
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Velocemus a dit : 10/10 - Velocemus makes great stories. |
Velocemus « Citoyen » 1402455000000
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Annefromva a dit : tbh it was similar to the title of some book i saw today but it wasnt quite six words |
Themousenn « Citoyen » 1402457580000
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Griffincraft a dit : Just report your OP and ask for a sentinel to move it |
Zakryah « Censeur » 1402461420000
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Annefromva a dit : no/10 -- Maggie was cranky today, throwing a fuss as I strapped her into her car seat. "I don't wanna go, daddy!" She exclaimed, pouting up at me, her beautiful blue eyes looking into mine. I wasn't in the mood for this today. I was already late to work. I had forgotten to let my phone charge last night and it was running on only 30%. I spilled my coffee as I tried to brush my teeth. It was 8:24am and I already had a fucking headache. "Too bad." He grunted, slamming the car door and walking around to the front. Climbing in I glanced up at the rearview mirror to see Maggie still pouting at me, her arms now crossed. She had two different pairs of shoes on. She was already three goddamn years old, when the hell had time flown by like that? I shook the thoughts out of my head as I turned the car on, my thoughts being consumed by Maggie's CD. That should get her to stop pouting. In a few minutes she'll be singing along, enhancing my headache. I really needed a coffee. I hit traffic in no time, making me grip the steering wheel until my knuckles turned white. I glanced at the clock. 8:31am. I was a half hour late. My boss was going to kill me. Maggie continued to sing long to "Under The Sea" in the back. The urge to punch the radio until it turned off was strong, but I tried to ignore it. It was better that than her asking me why the sky was blue, why water was wet, or some shit like that. Like I knew, I wasn't a scientist or anything. It was 8:46am when my phone rang. Maggie was on another Disney song, I couldn't keep track from what it was from. I glanced at the screen and cursed. My boss. I turned the radio down as I pressed the phone to my ear. "Daniel! Where the hell are you? You're almost an hour late!" My boss bellowed in my ear. I felt the corners of my mouth twitch into a scowl. "I know sir, I just need to drop my daughter off at daycare and I'll--" "Daniel you do realize this is completely unacceptable, right? I understand you have a daughter and all but you should have dealt with this all beforehand. I can't sit here waiting around forever, you know. There are plenty of other people willing to work much harder for this position. Why not make your wife do it?" I let my boss go on. He didn't like me, didn't like that I couldn't work overtime because I had to pick up Maggie from daycare every day. Harriet worked all day as a waitress and then as a bartender at night, and was only home to sleep. It sucked, but we had to pay the bills. "I mean really, you're the man in the relationship, she really should be pulling her weight!" He always needed to voice his opinion. Best just let him talk it out. Maggie was not putting up another fuss in the back because the music was almost inaudible. "Daddy!" She gasped, shaking her chair. "Daddy lookit! Dere's a guy dressed as a cow!" She pointed towards the window and grinned, looking out at at the poor soul whose job it was to be dressed as a fucking cow, dancing around and trying to attract customers. I ignored her and contineud to drive, my phone pressed up against my ear. My boss continued his rant as my daughter continued to point things out excitedly, exclaiming she had learned certain things in Day-Care. My boss was going about how I'd have to be written up. Shouldn't he have been working instead of yelling at me for ten minutes? I just wanted to get to work and have him shut up. A beep from my phone distracted me. I had 20% left. Goddamnit. It wouldn't last 'til the end of the day. "Daddy!" Maggie exclaimed for the hundreth time. "Daddy you misseded it!" "An hour late, this isn't going to look good. Wasting my time like thi--" "Daddy is 'dat w--" "--s if I should sit around and wa--" "Dadd--" "--an really, what do yo--" "Daddy!!" "--m not YOU'RE em--" "DADDY!!" I sneered as I whipped around to face her, "SHUT. UP!" I shouted at her. There was a screech of tires. Pain surrounded me. My daughter screamed. Everything was loud. My head pounded. I didn't hear my daughter though. For once Maggie was quiet. Then I didn't hear anything. |
Janeswdd « Citoyen » 1402462440000
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10/10 I ate green eggs and ham and then i vommitted. |
Zakryah « Censeur » 1402462800000
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8/10 cuz you misspelled vomited -- Her husband came home early and I was shoved into the closet. It's been 20 minutes and I'm anxiously waiting for him to leave so I can get out of here. I thought I was pressed against the wall but someone's breathing into my ear and I've been too scared to turn around and check to see what I'm pressed against. She had mentioned it was a walk in closet. I'm only two feet from the door. |
Lolokizka « Consul » 1402465020000
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9/10 Nice story but not really intresting for me. I was in the forest. I saw a girl with a whine. She killed me. THE END |
Gengar « Citoyen » 1402465140000
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5/10 Once, there was a shaman on Transformice. Every shaman turn he had, he cannoned everyone. One day, someone told the shaman "UR THE MEANEST SHAMAN EVER!!!1! >:(" This made the shaman feel bad. So he stopped cannoning everyone. The end. |
Lolokizka « Consul » 1402466760000
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5/10 Nyan cat was singing. Hatsune Miku told her/him to shut up. Which meant Hatsune had to shut up. THE END |
Zakryah « Censeur » 1402469760000
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0/10 take ur memes and anime outta here -- The gravel beneath his feet was rough, making walking a painful task, but he ignored it, continuing on his path. His shoes were broken and gone, now only an old pair of socks protected his feet. Remy was out there somewhere, lost and scared, and he had all their supplies. Food, blanket, weapons, everything. Logan just had Sarah's stupid old bear. He had to be around here. They had ran in different directions when the men had shown up with guns drawn. Most of them went after Remy, a few after Logan. He had hid under a shrub and they ran past. That was a half hour ago and he didn't hear anything or see anyway. He sidestepped a few decaying corpses on the road that told him the men had gone down this way. He was surrounded by buildings, though, abandoned and dusty since the start of this whole thing. Remy could have hid out in any of these. Logan rounded a corner, keeping an eye out for any movement when he stopped in his tracks. He spotted the shockingly white hair of his brother a good fifty feet away, a starkng contrast to the dystopian world around them. The red stood out bright in his brother's hair. Bile rose in Logan's throat and he vomitted against the side of the building, tears burning his eyes. He dropped Sarah's bear and punched the wall. Then again, and again, and again, until the pain had numbed his arm and blood stained the building. Then he walked the other way, keeping his head down and his arm at his side. He couldn't even cry anymore. He ran out of tears a long time ago. |
Lolokizka « Consul » 1402470120000
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Please read the title. SHORT STORY. Anyways 3/10 Once upon a time there was a cat named Mitsy. She was happy. But then she died. THE END |
Unicorm « Citoyen » 1402473420000
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three sentences do not make a short story especially if it's a fanfiction ffs 0/10 - Impromptu Short-Short Story [not recommended for young kids] by Unicorm "He's been poking at it with the spear for a while now." Marty whispered. "Let him have his fun; the bitch deserves it." Eva replied, crossing her arms. "But the woman's been hanging there for days, don't you think she's probably dead by now?" Marty asked, gazing at the woman's cadaver tied to the ceiling, ignoring the pungent scent of rot and blood. "She probably is but it's more fun this way. She should've known pregnancy isn't allowed around here." Eva answered, picking up a stone and throwing it at the woman's dangling womb causing it to rip open and fall off. Suddenly, the prince turned around and stormed up the stairs to where his two guards were stationed. "Which one of you two fuckers stoned my bitch? Ha?" he roared, pointing his blood-painted spear at Marty's and Eva's necks. "Answer me!" Eva pointed at Marty. "T'was him, my lord." she replied. "Please forgive him. He's been feeling unwell." Before Marty could retort, the prince drove his spear through Marty's neck, leaving him to choke on his blood and tossing him down the stairs afterwards, leaving a trail of blood on each step. "What was that you said again?" the prince asked Eva, grinning as he pointed the spear at Eva's neck. "Say it again." "It was nothing, my lord. Please continue." Eva replied, forcefully swallowing her saliva, sweat pouring into her eyes, struggling to keep them open. The prince licked his lips and gripped his spear. "Alright." he said, before suddenly driving his spear up Eva's neck and tossing her down the stairs to die. "I've continued." he continued. After ripping his two guards open with his spear, the prince left his bedroom covered in blood and whispered to the nearest maid. "Go find me new parents." |
Zakryah « Censeur » 1402475340000
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Lolokizka a dit : You clearly do no know what a short story is. |
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Zakryah a dit : 6/10 -It has no meaning. One day, 'Ane' was riding her magical unicorn in the sky. Suddenly, a hunter shot the unicorn. The unicorn died, and fell with Ane. They both died. |
Pinkpowers « Citoyen » 1403113980000
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10/10 SO SAD ;-: THERE WAS A PERSON NAMED BOB. BOB ATE A POISONESS TACO AND DIED. THE END. |
Matchbox20 « Citoyen » 1471932120000
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7/10 tom was a shy boy, living in the countryside. he found a girl that he liked. they talked for a while, and he grew a small liking for her. when she was in the middle of the road, tom noticed a car coming. He ran in and pushed the girl to the side of the street, taking his life for her. |