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Immagetcheez « Citoyen » 1404398040000
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Hullo butts http://i.imgur.com/wykyREz.png Thank you in advance! I know the back is super curly but it's supposed to be that way |
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Immagetcheez a dit : What type of animal is it? The head (mostly the snout) looks kind of big for such a teeny body Kind of like a bigcat's muzzle on a housecat's body look. |
Sadlelight « Citoyen » 1404398880000
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thanks rose and susan ^^ Immagetcheez a dit : i cannot really tell what animal it is, it may be your style of drawing but the ears are very rounded for a dog or a cat ^^ |
Immagetcheez « Citoyen » 1404399120000
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Thank you that's all I need! I actually never intend for those ugly designs/teeth to be in there for I'll correct things, delete those, and try again :} |
Sadlelight « Citoyen » 1404400440000
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^^ These are my two originally named wolf brothers Yin and Yang. Yang has a scar on his eye and i need help how to draw one D: |
Mistalee « Citoyen » 1404650040000
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Sadlelight a dit : well, the scar's color should be a bit less colorful (if it's an old one) and it looks weird to me, when the whole image is done with pixels, but Yin's eye is partly done with a regular brush. And i also did this thing, which will hopefully help you a bit: Oh and, could i get some critique on this? Harsh is okay. Dernière modification le 1404656580000 |
Chawee « Citoyen » 1404657840000
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hii mista you should post these at your dA too :D but it's a very nice drawing, i like the color scheme and the anatomy's good too, i saw only a few things i would change, like the front legs. they're maybe a little too long for a mouse. head's anatomy resembles too much like a dog's for my taste too. nothing much to say anymore, the pose is good, and i also like the shading and fur >v< Dernière modification le 1404658140000 |
Rubywas « Citoyen » 1404679860000
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@Mista I don't know if it's intentional, but it seems like the anatomy of the head, ears, and paws is very similar to a fox. I suggest studying mouse anatomy if you're looking to make it a bit more realistic. |
Mistalee « Citoyen » 1404681780000
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Yes, i've noticed that, guess it's because i've been drawing canines since i was 12. But thanks for the critique, both of you. Dernière modification le 1404681900000 |
Sadlelight « Citoyen » 1404687960000
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Mistalee a dit : erm thanks but i cant draw like that on the computer. only on paper. and my camera sucks balls. |
Lionzue « Citoyen » 1404700680000
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Never got any critique...? Lionzue a dit : |
Conwolf « Citoyen » 1404701700000
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i'd like a bit help on canine ANATOMY ONLY ;n; not too harsh but eh. i know it's a reference sheet, but still. Dernière modification le 1404701760000 |
Fierying « Censeur » 1404702540000
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Mistalee a dit : Pretty good already, however if you are planning to draw it mouse-like in future, try making the ears smaller, reference of mice did show how small they are, and somewhere earlier in the pages someone have posted his studies on mouse ears, really nice c:. Also her neck (?) is too broad, either that is too long. I.. don't really know how to explain this one, probably i will redline your picture :I. Mice have that huge hump when they are 'side standing' or lying down, like they have this oval shape body o/ Also, your lighting and shading of the character is fine, but the very bright highlight which bothers me, light bounces i know that but highlights should not just pop up randomly unless you intent to. Highlights normally follows the direction of the light, sos putting it against it makes me rather confused :O. Lastly, just a nitpick but the shape of the bow somehow disturb me, and also i think putting an articifal shadow below it might look better ^^".... i am sorry ono. ---- Redline~ ---------------------------------------------------------- Conwolf a dit : canine anatomy... 1stly, study the shapes of a canine, i id some explains of it before, just taking various pictures of the species and getting the shape, then trying out different poses, once you got the hang of it, then try redrawing the canine again ouo (or simply googling dog anatomy and just see how the exterior kinda works) What i can say now is that your canine's neck is too long and thin, looking at the references, canine heads dont go up, they go forward. Also canine ears dont face side ways, they face to the front o/ Your canine cannot really balance if its backleg is placed too much at the front. It is showing us that it is leaning backwards there ouo. other than that for canine anatomy, the goat horns are not even ouo, do the base shape of it before you start adding circles, it helps! --- redlinee the green lines represent how much your canine is stable to stand up right like that, from the lines it shows is leaning back for the dark red, it was my redline canine, which have a stable base to stand up right Dernière modification le 1404704100000 |
Tadame « Citoyen » 1404706800000
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RE: Lionzue's sketech Nice free-style sketech. It looks like a cheerful cat (?). Work on the basic outline of the animal you intend to draw before adding your own ideas e.g., expression, fur, and clothes. Dernière modification le 1404706860000 |
Mistalee « Citoyen » 1404770700000
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Sadlelight a dit : i when i drew the pic that was supposed to help you, i didn't mean that you should draw on SAI. Just wanted to help you understand the head anatomy a bit better. Oh and thanks for the critique, Fierying. |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1404781080000
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I am asking for criteque in two drawings Space Sunset |
Conwolf « Citoyen » 1404781740000
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Fierying a dit : ;D thank you a ton! I haven't really gotten the hang of canines at all... Btw, the horns were uneven intentionally. It's the character's design ^^ |
Chawee « Citoyen » 1404833280000
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griffincraft a dit : i'll critique the second one, and you didn't tell what kind of critique you want so i'll try not to bee too harsh >w< the first thing i noticed is that the sky's color doesn't seem right to me. usually if it's sunset, the whole sky isn't the same color. the sun is also too dark, and there's not enough shading in the image to be a sunset. the fox's anatomy is still pretty good. the only big thing i found about it, is that the head's anatomy looks like a cat's to me. .some things i would fix: (i got a bit lazy at making the sky, so the colors aren't that much better) but i hope this helped you! and could i get critique on this one? i uploaded it here a while ago, so you have propably seen it already. signature says 'koiipy' because i uploaded it on my tumblr blog too. and harsh citique is okay too. Dernière modification le 1404834480000 |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1404837240000
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^ Alright, thanks Although I cant make the same ocean and sunset, what I have doesn't allow me to do that same paint-look ;A; Lol when I try to make a fox it looks like a cat. When I try a cat it looks like a fox... >.< I tried to make the same as I saw in a sunset picture, the sun was red-ish and the sky faded from yellow to orange to red The darker orange is supposed to be clouds, but I didnt know how to make proper clouds >.< So I just made blotches and blurred them ._. And I was trying to make the fox to look towards the sun setting, not straight forward :P I had problems making it more noticable that it was looking towards the sun Thanks anyways xD E: Can someone criteque Space now? xD :3 Dernière modification le 1404850440000 |
Haruhitastic « Censeur » 1404841440000
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Is that supposed to be a mouse or a cat, first and foremost? (Regarding "Space") |