well poems are a part of at arnt they? ^^ so if this dosent get baned...... u can post poems u wright here that are bout tfm

1.) Please use decent spelling and grammar. My fingers are itching to fix them. I can barely read your OP.

2.) Add more information. Let them know it has to be TFM-related or it has to go to Non-TFM Artwork. So sentinels don't need extra work.

3.) Honestly, that title. . . Is misleading.

Poems are art but not everyone likes poems. Some people try to avoid poems and literature. Making a thread for poetry won't get (that) popular.

Banned means banished. You will only be banned on the forums if you have been muted repeatedly and the sentinels think you really deserve it. The word you are looking for is 'locked'.

Please check with a sentinel before making threads like these? While it is okay to make these, it needs more information.

a haiku by soakitup

i am the shaman
i do not want to save you
no cheeses for you

heres a pome


I see the mice running by..
But why should i care for i do not need the cheese.
Im free to fly and free to die....
Please dont call me mean if i harm you..
But this sham is bored and whants to kill you...


by me

Cuitdashie a dit :

heres a pome


I see the mice running by..
But why should i care for i do not need the cheese.
Im free to fly and free to die....
Please dont call me mean if i harm you..
But this sham is bored and whants to kill you...


by me

i like it
another haiku by soakitup

i am at the hole
uh-oh why don't i have cheese
looks like i forgot

...a short poem by me called "I am iced"

I let it fall

I let my soulmate fall

Into the depths of the abyss

I steeled my heart

Of solemn understanding

That he was noob

Now I regret

Hell froze over

When I realised

He was pretending

Now as ice freezed my cold heart

I regret

The casing of ice forever surrounding

A stunned me

I was iced

Poem by me:

I was in bootcamp,
now I remember,
the mice they were pro,
but I was alas, a little mouse
They teased me and teased me
the next day, whilst munching on a cracker,
I cannoned them to space in survivor.
From then on they never offended
In fear of my mighty magic
I know they are too scared
to challenge me
thee mouse who knocked them
down below...
where the millions of bubbles flow.

By me:

I look up in the sky
I see a cannon
I run as fast as I can
I just can't
I'm stuck on a chocolate ground
I go and go and go
But I don't make it.
The cannon hits me
In the butt
I try to dodge it
But I fail......

I know its dumb. I made each line as I went through it.

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I know this one is off-topic, but I wrote this poem about friends myself.

Friends we are
Friends we'll be
Friends we will
Forever be

Friends are there
Almost everywhere
They are there with us
At school, home, and the school bus

Friends who laugh
Friends who cry
Friends who don't have to try
To be friends

Satash a dit :

1.) Please use decent spelling and grammar. My fingers are itching to fix them. I can barely read your OP.

2.) Add more information. Let them know it has to be TFM-related or it has to go to Non-TFM Artwork. So sentinels don't need extra work.

3.) Honestly, that title. . . Is misleading.

Poems are art but not everyone likes poems. Some people try to avoid poems and literature. Making a thread for poetry won't get (that) popular.

Banned means banished. You will only be banned on the forums if you have been muted repeatedly and the sentinels think you really deserve it. The word you are looking for is 'locked'.

Please check with a sentinel before making threads like these? While it is okay to make these, it needs more information.

Ah, I feel the same way.

how is the title misleading? oh and

I hate you, shaman
i hate you so
spiriting that noob
yet leaving me stranded
you gallop to the hole
so gallantlly
I glare at you
with beastly red eyes
you try to ice me but I dodge your cursor
Goodbye, shaman
no time left

The majority of these are survivor based i think o-o

Lol...

Maps appear everywhere,
Shamans fail or at least some.
Maps troll but don't care
and the most is why do the Cannons hit me?!
In survivor the cannons go all about *spawn*
portals,What else can be harder?
To many kinds Which two should i do!?

One by one the cheese is taken
One by one the mice run by
All leaving one little mouse behind
One by one they disappear
Soon I am left alone
How did I get here?
I am just the humble noob,
Once again forgotten~


e__e I know it isn't good.. but dun judge man.. dun judge..

Running around seeing mice with many hats
Running around seeing mice turning into strange bats
Running from shamans like there's nothing to fear
Running from shrieks and screams that I always hear
Running away far and near
Running away without a second guess
Falling off the edge without even realizing this mess...

Bubbles, Bubbles, Pop, Pop, Pop!

Meh. It's not that good :L Lol

Ok...do you mind if I give some critique? I'm not really good at this but...if you think I'm stupid or an idiot please throw all your insults at me I understand...
(Not going to post it till people agree/disagree)

Galbelmz a dit :

Ok...do you mind if I give some critique? I'm not really good at this but...if you think I'm stupid or an idiot please throw all your insults at me I understand...
(Not going to post it till people agree/disagree)

I seen you give critiques but uh, maybe you should ask the other people before you critique?

Ok, yeah sure! ^^ I think if others want too, they can comment at the end of their post?

Hmm.. well I guess I wouldn't mind some critique, if it wasn't too harsh