~Milky Way Wishes~


PROLOUGE


A gleaming, light lavender mouse with a glowing yellow star pin dashed on the trail of fading stardust, through the vast, inky black place known as space. Bright yellow and lavender stars dotted the black skies, varying sized planets seen at a distance. The mouse was Celestian, and was ordered and forced to bring stellar energy to the large kingdom where earth mice resided, Transtopia. This kingdom was in total ruling by Tigrounette, founder of this once small town, and Co-Founders, Melibellule and Sydoline. This place, Transtopia, was rather safe. Alas, life in the surrounding universe for Celestian Mice wasn't as protected. Rulers of Celestion were alternate, Celestian copies of the rulers of Transtopia, having the same thoughts and ideals as their similar, neighboring rulers. Although, a tear in time itself has caused Celestion rulers to turn against Transtopia, each kingdom planning attacks and even plans to send sneaking assassins to kill off the oppisite rulers of each kingdom were in place. It was wreaking havoc on the whole universe due to these 2 kingdoms being the largest, most profitable, and most suceeding landmarks in the universe itself. Who would win this virtually everlasting feud?

☆ = If this begins the chapter, it's from Transtopia's view.

★ = If this begins the chapter, it's from Celestion's view.

.... Cool.. I think it should go from Celestion to Transtopia (ex)
Chap.1-2:Celestion
Chap.3-4:Transtopia
Or vice versa. But it's pretty good.

☆ Chapter 1:


It was a day like no other. It was cool and collected today, making residents surprised. There was no conflict today? Is it finally over? Mice in Transtopia were bellowing with happiness, shops selling their wares, mice playing and chilling out in local parks, and a celebratory cheese eating contest being held. Tigrounette was calling for some big carnival starting in the late afternoon, in honor of this so called accomplishment. Everything was happy-go-lucky, until the sky went pitch-black. A speeding ball of light slammed into the ground, an echo sounding through the kingdom. Everything was silent for a moment. "ROAAAAAWWRRRRRRR!" a loud roar echoed behind the metoeor crash, as a dragon-like creature leaped out. It was shrouded in shadow, and began to stomp and slash through buildings and homes. Who was this? Mice fled, and some stood, paralyzed in terror. Who or what is this thing?

Amazing.. O.O

.O. DONT STOP BELIEVING~ that this is gonna contin~ueee <3 keep up the great work!~ I love how you ended up with ~a cliff-hanger~ I LUV IT

You've improved so much.