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[Fanfic] When the Cheese Goes Scarce by Cuteprettypi
Cuteprettypi
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Prologue
It was a cold morning in the land of Transformice. In a great palace there was the almighty Goddess Shaman, with her powers weakening by the second. Today, she had arranged a meeting for all the spiritual chiefs to come to discuss the lack of cheese.
“We are here to discuss how to get more cheese, as it is very scarce.” She said with a sad expression.
“Ooh!! Ooh! Can we all fight to the death for cheese?” A mouse asked, sitting in the corner. Some of the mice giggled.
“This is a serious problem. I do not want anyone to get killed.” She said with a stern expression. Her beautiful hair was turning gray and the feathers on her wings were falling slowly, one by one.
“Can’t you just use your magical powers to conjure up some cheese?” An angry mouse in the front said.
“Yeah! I bet she just takes all the cheese for herself!” Another mouse said. Within a minute, the whole place turned into a riot.
“Please, calm down!” She shouted, her face beaded with sweat as if though she had ran a marathon. The mice paused and looked at her.
“Why should we listen to you?” A scowling mouse asked.
“Maybe because she could help us.” A gentle voice said from the crowd. Within a minute, the poor mouse was kicked to the back of the room. The goddess shaman sighed.
“The meeting has come to an end and I want you to think about your actions.” The great goddess said and she teleported out of the room.
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WOAH nice plot love to hear more
Wolfe
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Nice story :D cant wait for more of them
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Great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Can't wait for the next part!! :D
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I love this story i cant wait for the next chapter! ^^
Cuteprettypi
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Chapter 1:
A small light yellow mouse with light pink and purple hair sighed as she rested on her couch in her tribe house. She was starving but the refrigerator had nothing but moldy orange juice.
The door of her tribe house suddenly opened and her leader, Foxykat, stepped in.
"Bad news, everyone. COME TO A TRIBE MEETING AT 7:00"
Foxykat
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Very nice Cute i love the fanfic so far ^0^ Keep it up! :) ~Foxykat~
Cuteprettypi
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Chapter 2:
Later, at 7:00, the meeting was held downstairs and all the important members of the tribe were asked to come. Among the people who came were, Tahalechef, a mysterious mouse, Foxykat, Seannacool, Cocoacaramel and more.
Cuteprettypi sighed as she walked to the meeting room. Meetings were the most boring thing in the world. The meeting started as soon as everymouse was seated.
"Now, my fellow tribe mates," Foxykat began. "I have called this meeting to discuss the lack of cheese...." Cuteprettypi sighed as she slowly drifted off to sleep. She couldn't really blame herself because meetings were VERY boring.
"Wake up! We're making a very important decision!" Foxykat cried as she dumped a bucked of ice cold water onto Cuteprettypi.
"What was that for?" Cute complained. She could hear snickers around the room.
"Well, we're making an important decision," Foxykat said. "And that is to turn to violence to get our precious cheese or try to find it on our own. The pros and the vampire mice are very violent and are trying to destroy the noob tribes in order to hunt for cheese, and they would kill us all with no mercy."
"I choose violence." Tahalechef said.
"Me too!" Another mouse said. Soon, everyone was voting to be more violent.
Cute shrugged. "Well, if everyone is choosing to be violent, then I guess I shall too."
Soon, it was decided. Their tribe, Risingclan would be a more violent clan.
Foxykat
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Nice Chapter!
JUST AWESOME
Nekoava
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Cuteprettypi a dit :
Chapter 2:
Later, at 7:00, the meeting was held downstairs and all the important members of the tribe were asked to come. Among the people who came were, Tahalechef, a mysterious mouse, Foxykat, Seannacool, Cocoacaramel and more.
Cuteprettypi sighed as she walked to the meeting room. Meetings were the most boring thing in the world. The meeting started as soon as everymouse was seated.
"Now, my fellow tribe mates," Foxykat began. "I have called this meeting to discuss the lack of cheese...." Cuteprettypi sighed as she slowly drifted off to sleep. She couldn't really blame herself because meetings were VERY boring.
"Wake up! We're making a very important decision!" Foxykat cried as she dumped a bucked of ice cold water onto Cuteprettypi.
"What was that for?" Cute complained. She could hear snickers around the room.
"Well, we're making an important decision," Foxykat said. "And that is to turn to violence to get our precious cheese or try to find it on our own. The pros and the vampire mice are very violent and are trying to destroy the noob tribes in order to hunt for cheese, and they would kill us all with no mercy."
"I choose violence." Tahalechef said.
"Me too!" Another mouse said. Soon, everyone was voting to be more violent.
Cute shrugged. "Well, if everyone is choosing to be violent, then I guess I shall too."
Soon, it was decided. Their tribe, Risingclan would be a more violent clan.

LOL did you copy my idea of changing the color of when someone speaks?

Anyway, great story Pi-qt.
Foxykat
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Please write more O_O
Nekoava
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Foxykat a dit :
Please write more O_O

^^
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Add me in the story
Kura too please
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