| [FanFic] Friends Forever |
| « Citoyen » 1377305160000
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| First, I would like to say is if your in this story, I picked you randomly :3 Characters: Juliasaysmoo (Julia) Isobelsixsix ( as Isobel) Graciekinz ( Gracie ) Gracie: "Julia! Stop messing up my bed!" Oh, you're reading this story. Well hello, I am Gracie, Julia's older sister. Julia always likes acting like shes swimming. She just loves to act younger. "No! I can do this all I want." Julia stuck her tongue out at me. I glared at her but kept playing Cheese Run on my CheesePhone 5. Then my phone rang. "Hey Gracie, It's isobel, are you coming to my party tonight?" Isobel asked. "Suuuuure. My mom's coming an hour before that so I'll be there." I suddenly closed my phone without telling her. I wanted to go play a prank on my sister _________________ WATCH OUT FOR CHAPTER 2. ^-^ |
| « Citoyen » 1377306360000
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| This story is making me seem like a slob.. |
| « Citoyen » 1377306480000
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Nekoava a dit : I didn't know Bunny would make the story though.. |
| « Citoyen » 1377306480000
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Juliasaysmoo a dit : Exactly. You probably should've asked Julia and everyone else before making this story. But otherwise, I'll be sure to read chapter 2. |
| « Citoyen » 1377306480000
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Juliasaysmoo a dit : |
| « Censeur » 1377308880000
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| if youre gonna make a story please follow basic writing rules which include a line break with every different character speaking also adding people in without permission is highly rude and disrespectful |
| « Citoyen » 1377309420000
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| I dont understand y u have to make one just cuz others are edit: and u hv spelling and grammer errors but u didnt ask for critiques so i wont tell u wut they r |
| « Citoyen » 1377311340000
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| WOT I AM IN STORY |
| « Citoyen » 1377423720000
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| i would change the characters...and make julia less mean... a dit : .. |