Title: Adding Fire with Fire

Written by: Appleloom

Characters:

Adovia
Deonza
Anyia
Christina
Brooklyn
and etc. (Some few chapters)

Chapter 1: Growing Pains
I got out of bed wondering if the new transfer to another school would be great. It was 7:00 AM. And I couldn't wait for my new school, Cheesy High. Though it was a funny name my Mom said it was a great school for training to get cheese. The fact that my old school wasn't bad at all. I still don't know why I had to transfer to a new schoo. I was perfectly fine there. I stopped thinking and got dressed. The school bus was noisy of course. I standed on the bus no one offered to sit with them. When I got there I had no idea where to go. I went in circles until I found a name called Mrs. Howard. Everything just got worse. I found my ''used-to-be'' friend Christina. She was a hard challenge in Racing, but had no chance for my Bootcamp skills. We were bestfriends once, I don't know what happened then and so. She rolled her eyes at me and walked away. She used to be a ordinary girl, shy and cute. Now shes the new covergirl with make up and hair. I tend to ignore her everytime. I met my new teacher and some people. Atleast, the whole class room knew me and wanted to be my friend. Atleast everyone but Deonza. She was really on shush mode ever since I came in the room. I only wondered why. If she had a dislike about me or she was just shy. She had black hair with two pony tails. This is only the beginning I thought.

Chapter 2: Clear The Room For Brooklyn!

It was Gym time we all got dressed in are shorts, today we were practicing Vanilla maps. The fact Vanilla maps hated me and I hated them. Everytime I always end up the last one in the hole. We were in the gym. While getting ready to try the Vanilla maps. Here comes the one and only popular girl Brooklyn Lawrence! With sparkle shorts and tank top, acting like she was in the red carpet. Then came Anyia "wanna-be-popular" following in her footsteps. Mrs. Howard screaming at them THERE LATE!!! Blowing the whistle in there faces. I tried to act like a teacher pet so she wouldn't do that to me. We all got soulmates. Anyia and Brooklyn were soulmates (of course). Noone wanted to be my soulmate. Deonza and me were then soulmates. Mrs. Howard was the shaman. Then all we heard was READY SET GO! Mrs. Howard blew the whistle

Chapter 3:
A New Friend Bloom
As the other soul mates wall jumped, Me and Deonza just standed there, Looking at the huge wall. Before we had to think it about climbing Mrs. Howard cannoned us to the wall. We tried to have a grip on the wall. I suddenly got my grip but Deonza didn't. Deonza was pulling me down, I didn't dare to wall jump I was to busy panicking. I felt like giving up and falling. I was starting to lose my grip. Before I could fall Mrs Howard put a portal to pull me up. She blew the whistle, all the mice had went in the hole but us. I was about to cry. Mrs Howard said "Work on your soul mate vanilla maps a little bit longer." I nodded and went to change. After we got dressed Deonza apoligized about it. I said it was ok. Deonza invited me to sit next her on the after noon bus. It was better than no seats at all. At the end of the day we became friends and Christina's anger grew quickly.


Chapter 4: I'm gonna Die!


I got on the school bus and sat next to Deonza. Today in school we were practicing Survivor. The game that you get seriously ingured if you get hit by a cannon. It was Christina's turn to be Shaman today. She kept on giving me the evil eye. I knew this would be bad. Deonza and me talked about the ingurys. You couldn't go to for WEEKS we were really scared. There was no backing out now. In the gym locker room we tried hiding it. Never worked Mrs. Howard pushed us to the Survivor Maps. She said READY SET GO! Christina fired the cannons quickly and one by one mice got knocked down. Mrs. Howard started counting the injured mice "1...3...6....8....10". I got scared because Deonza and me were the only ones. This was one of Christina's plan wipe out all the other mice and deal we us. I don't know why survivor was created. Who ever created it is CRAY CRAY! The cannons lagged and there was 2 cannons coming at once. I jump but Deonza didn't make it. She got injured every where. Mrs. Howard blew the whistle. Christina was smiling and doing her happy dance. Christina is selfish anyway. At lunch Christina started to hang out with me. I just walked away from her. Really Christina? JELLY MUCH? On the After Noon Bus she sitted next to me. I just standed at the window while she was blabbing her mouth. The fact that I really missed Deonza she had to recover for 2 weeks!


Hope you liked! More coming Soon

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Noobforevah a dit :

Bahahaha cool :D

Ty XD

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Haruhitastic a dit :

are you seeking crits on this or would you rather none

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Going to read *-*
(pss title looks exiting )

I really liked the title name *-*

Bengalstar a dit :

I really liked the title name *-*

Yeah, same thing. I love this story. *x*

Chapter 3:
A New Friend Bloom
As the other soul mates wall jumped, Me and Deonza just standed there, Looking at the huge wall. Before we had to think it about climbing Mrs. Howard cannoned us to the wall. We tried to have a grip on the wall. I suddenly got my grip but Deonza didn't. Deonza was pulling me down, I didn't dare to wall jump I was to busy panicking. I felt like giving up and falling. I was starting to lose my grip. Before I could fall Mrs Howard put a portal to pull me up. She blew the whistle, all the mice had went in the hole but us. I was about to cry. Mrs Howard said "Work on your soul mate vanilla maps a little bit longer." I nodded and went to change. After we got dressed Deonza apoligized about it. I said it was ok. Deonza invited me to sit next her on the after noon bus. It was better than no seats at all. At the end of the day we became friends and Christina's anger grew quickly.

I'll make another chapter tomorrow :/

Chapter 4: I'm gonna Die!


I got on the school bus and sat next to Deonza. Today in school we were practicing Survivor. The game that you get seriously ingured if you get hit by a cannon. It was Christina's turn to be Shaman today. She kept on giving me the evil eye. I knew this would be bad. Deonza and me talked about the ingurys. You couldn't go to for WEEKS we were really scared. There was no backing out now. In the gym locker room we tried hiding it. Never worked Mrs. Howard pushed us to the Survivor Maps. She said READY SET GO! Christina fired the cannons quickly and one by one mice got knocked down. Mrs. Howard started counting the injured mice "1...3...6....8....10". I got scared because Deonza and me were the only ones. This was one of Christina's plan wipe out all the other mice and deal we us. I don't know why survivor was created. Who ever created it is CRAY CRAY! The cannons lagged and there was 2 cannons coming at once. I jump but Deonza didn't make it. She got injured every where. Mrs. Howard blew the whistle. Christina was smiling and doing her happy dance. Christina is selfish anyway. At lunch Christina started to hang out with me. I just walked away from her. Really Christina? JELLY MUCH? On the After Noon Bus she sitted next to me. I just standed at the window while she was blabbing her mouth. The fact that I really missed Deonza she had to recover for 2 weeks!

so you never said whether youre asking for crits or not but please don't put smiley faces in your writing unless your writing features an online chat
just
sayin

Haruhitastic a dit :

so you never said whether youre asking for crits or not but please don't put smiley faces in your writing unless your writing features an online chat
just
sayin

Sorry I forgot I'm not asking for crits :P

I'M TOO LAZY TO READ IT ;-; I read who were the characters tho... XD

Magicmillie a dit :

I'M TOO LAZY TO READ IT ;-; I read who were the characters tho... XD

Me too xD