~Elky's Journey

PROLOGUE~
The mouse blinked her eyes in the blinding sunlight. She struggled up and looked at her surroundings. It was an empty map with a Halloween background and stone flooring. There was one mouse other than her in the room; a black mouse. For some reason, he didn't have a username. "Who are y-y-you?" Elkstar stuttered. The dark rodent smiled deviously. "I am nobody," he said. "Then how are you in the game? And, and why are you here?" Elky asked. The other mouse glitched strangely. He was suddenly rising in the air in the middle of the map. Actually, the map had a strange name. Deadelk.
"I am here," he announced. "I am here for my revenge!"

(I'll add to it tomorrow)

Thanks for reading. c:

Yeah..so uh you should seperate your dialogue into lines
For example:

''Hi Elkstar!'' Vivihi said.
''Hey, Vivihi! How are you?'' Elkstar replied.
''Good, what about you?'' Vivihi answered.

Nice story though