Characters :
Uber
Cameron

About : A guy named cameron discovers that the game Isn't just for collecting cheese .
About Uber : He is now a coward , he doesn't have a SHAME at all !
About Cameron : COWARD .

Prolouge :
I was bored collecting cheese as the mouse one by one
dissapearing , only 5 mice being left behind . . . .
I saw some guy Eavesdroppin' on these 3 guys so I joined .

Mice 1 : Hey , Hey did you hear ?
Mice 2 : about what ?
Mice 3 : Oh I know about the other rooms right ?
Mice 1 : yeah where you shoot cannons , hide and more right !?
Mice 2 : Ehh ? rooms like that existed

It was then , I found my first adventure !

Chapter 1 : Forteresse , Here we go !!

Unknown Mouse : Wooaah there was rooms like that ? Hey , hey , you heard that right
*he excitedly asked me*
Me : Yeah , and they even said we can play as a human too !!
Unknown mouse : I know ! , Let's go to those rooms together !! , what's your name !?
Me : Me ,. . ? ehh ? I'm Cameron !
Uber : And I'm Uber !
Me : Do you know how to get to those rooms ?
Uber : I don't know
Me : -_- how are we supposed to get there then ?
Uber : Let's ask someone , * Oiii !!! can you tell us where we can play as a human
and have guns killing the other teams?*
Me : He - Hey ! why are you asking them so suddenly
Uber : I thought you wanted to go to !! ;D
Me : yeahh
Mice 1 : the room is called forteresse .
Uber : Thanks !

______

We hurriedly oppened the chat and typed /room forteresse
and this bus came ( loading angel screen *LOL)

and we got there , to forteresse , we were confused , we didn't know what to do !!
we were just standing there in a big shock !! and then uber fired so suddenly

I said : Hey what are you doing !?!?!
Uber : They're firing at us
Me : where!?!?!
Uber: over there!
I walked straight to the land where uber pointed and I saw this !!



Chapter 1 END

Chapter 2 : The war has ended .
Huh !?! What's going on , I said .
Why are they firing at us !?!?!?

Uber : That's how we play this game , win as a team !

Me : ok . .. . .

I fired at the enemies as fast as I can and killed 2 enemies .
Even though I killed them they kept coming back !!
I didn't mind it at all I just fired all the bullets I can !!
and then I noticed , There was also a Timer !!
so I started thinking , If that Timer Times up .. . maybe a new round will start ?
and I waited and hid .
A new round really did Start !!

But it was different . . .
I died . . .
and I didn't respawn
Uber was pretty good at it
and there were flags were Uber would stay at it . .

So when the new round started
I found out that E will let you use you're class's skill !!
Mine was explosive . . but it was different .. It doesn't kill !
but instead , it just blows up the land , it doesn't kill !!

ans there was this 1 Round when I became an Escort
I didn't know what an Escort is supposed to do . .
all I knew was Uber was following me wherever I go !
and I died .. . . All of my teammates were

Team Mates : WHAT DID YOU DO !?!?!?!

A new round started
and I accidentally pressed spaced . .
and these green things popped up ! and i kept pressing space
and they keep popping up
so I thougt maybe they can use for defencee !!
I used it for defence.

After 7 rounds . . . The other players dissapeared . .
only the 2 of us were left ..
We thought the war ended . .
so we decided to go home .

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I type /room forterrese
And apeard to be mices there so i ask "Whuts going on" they said " Its a shooting game!

Xxuberjawsxx a dit :

I type /room forterrese
And apeard to be mices there so i ask "Whuts going on" they said " Its a shooting game!

ur such a rush omg think furst

Rebornaddict a dit :

ur such a rush omg think furst

They scream it in the tribe chat!

:l If you accept critiques, I don't think you should do that much of detail. Expecially if the proulouge is super short.

Rebornaddict a dit :

Prolouges are short ._.

Ok, good point but what I meant when "not that much detail", I meant like...

Eh nvm.

Nekoava a dit :

:l If you accept critiques, I don't think you should do that much of detail. Expecially if the proulouge is super short.

Prolouges are short ._.

well if this were a manga / anime

it's not short you know .
well yeah it shots cause right now it's just a Text .
dun worry dear .

Not this short.

To be technical, this isn't even proper fanfiction. It's a script.

Haruhitastic a dit :

Not this short.

To be technical, this isn't even proper fanfiction. It's a script.

srry it's my first fan fic with uber . . . .
srry if it's wrong :D

Rebornaddict a dit :

srry it's my first fan fic with uber . . . .
srry if it's wrong :D

Yepp ^^ ;;

No offense but it's so hard to follow. You guys should consider getting a couple chapters done rather than throwing it together and winging it after posting.

Haruhitastic a dit :

No offense but it's so hard to follow. You guys should consider getting a couple chapters done rather than throwing it together and winging it after posting.

Ok !

Bump ;;