It was a dark and stormy night...Everyone was in their cozy tribe houses and the people with no tribes were invited to stay in random tribe houses..All except one..And that mouses name was amelia. Amelia moon michelo.The michelo family was famous.But amelia...No one knew her because her parents thought she was useless but she wasnt..But her brother?..oh yes he cared for Amelia.But one day he moved out and Amelias small bedroom was turned into a storage place.And now she slept in the garden.A group of bugs took care of her. Today Amelias brother visited the house.It was night time..Everything went like a normal stormy night when suddenly..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" BAM bam...Amelia was killed by a lightning bolt! "AMELIA! AMEL- NOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Amelias brother saw the dead body.The bugs were already preparing a coffin for her.Amelias brother dug a hole for the coffin and broke of two sticks from the fence and got a nail,hammer and a pen from inside. He wrote with the pen A MEL iA.in the morning His parents found him infront of amelias grave crying..
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hey i know i know that looks like a long proluge but oh well..it explains how the ghost girl became a ghost.

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character form:
Name:
Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned):
what chapter do u want to be in?:
Personality:
Importaince 1-9 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelo family):
Mouse look:

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characters that are in the story:

Amelia
Iwuvcheesed
Dakota
Bethdacat
Lazaris
Lilylifelike
selena

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IMPORTAINT NOTES!

people who say their name is too short to have a nickname or that sorta stuff wont be included so their form can be moderated by a sent or something

10 importaince is no longer available and the forms with 10 impotaince that arent on the character list can be moderated after a week

Very nice story.
My only critique is to not keep everything on the same line.

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Amelia's brother saw the deady body, the bugs weere already preparing a coffin for her.
Amelia's brother dug a hole for the cofine and broke of two sticks from the fence and got a nail.

character form:

Name: Iwuvcheesed
Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned): Amanda
what chapter do u want to be in?: uhm uhm 2
Personality: A sensitive girl who spends time on the internet too much. She's a real rebel and loves sports (even thoguh she has astmha)
Importaince 1-10 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelio family): 8

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

Very nice story.
My only critique is to not keep everything on the same line.

character form:

Name: Iwuvcheesed
Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned): Iwuv
what chapter do u want to be in?: uhm uhm 2
Personality: A sensitive girl who spends time on the internet too much.
Importaince 1-10 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelio family): 8

uuuh...fix ur nickname?

Luvdisstorykkkk

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Name: Dakota Bree Dylon.

Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned): Cody (Meh RL nickname)

what chapter do u want to be in?: I don't care...

Personality: Dakota's more likely a rebel in everyone's opinion, but in her opinion she's just being herself. Dakota will stand up to anyone, however she's often optiministic and forgets safety. But she never gets hurt. Think Dakota's only a rebel? Well, you're wrong. She's taken gymoustics (Gymnastics XD) for seven years now! But still, she loves skateboarding and won't travel any other way than skateboard.

Importaince 1-10 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelio family): 9 (I wanna be Amelia's brother's bff O3O)

Mouse look: I'll get it a second.

agh i think i better do an edit so i can accturly u know...put the mouse looks in the OP cuz.....i cant really do pics on here...

oh didnt see
fixed

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

oh didnt see
fixed

Here are my main REFs: Click
It has all my holiday REFs too, so if its like a holiday in the fanfiction you can use those.

And for the ones that have all the different furs and hairs, just say I dye my fur and hair alot.

hmm....first chapter will be set on halloween.
AKA night of Amelia to the michelio family

character form:
Name: Bethdacat
Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned): Serena
what chapter do u want to be in?: 1st one :3
Personality: Kind, strong, nice, brave and all of that nice stuff (can she be amelia's friend?)
Importaince 1-10 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelo family): it doesn't matter
Mouse look: (later?)

e:

bump! a few more characters and ill start

Name: Sirusthemice / Lazaris
Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned): ///nothing
what chapter do u want to be in?: Doesen't matter too much.
Personality: Quiet,faschinated by nautic things (loves sailing and owns a sail boat),rude if you are rude and nice if you are nice.
Importaince 1-10 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelo family): eh...7
Mouse look:

What's up with the nickname rule?

Sourisplum a dit :

What's up with the nickname rule?

cuz bratz..

Name: Lilylifelike
Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned): Lilly
what chapter do u want to be in?:1,2 plz???
Personality:abit random scared alot and playfull really stressfull abit of a naughty girl
Importaince 1-10 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelo family): 10
Mouse look: kan u pick?

ok ill start writing my story.

It was halloween. LilyLifelike was trick or treating with her friend Lazaris. Lilylifelike was wearing a fancy black cat costume while lazaris was wearing a simple wich costume. "So thats the story of why my family respects Halloween starting from around...5 years ago! I cant belive I even had a girl cousin!" Lilly just finished telling the legend of the ghost girl. "They say whoever messes with her grave dissapears suddenly the next day! Some even say they get killed!" She said."wow..I wonder what Tig thinks about this!" said Lazaris. "Eh..He's probably the one who made Amelia only visable on halloween.."Lily said. The girls went back to Lazaris's house and ate some of the candy.

woh already in ch 1
this story is starting out really cute?

may i please give some critiques

New speaker new line, don't keep everything on the same line.

Wingcestor a dit :

ok ill start writing my story.

It was halloween. LilyLifelike was trick or treating with her friend Lazaris, Lilylifelike was wearing a fancy black cat costume while lazaris was wearing a simple wich costume.
"So thats the story of why my family respects Halloween starting from around...5 years ago! I cant believe I even had a girl cousin!" Lilly just finished telling the legend of the ghost girl.
"They say whoever messes with her grave dissapears suddenly the next day! Some even say they get killed!" She said.
"wow..I wonder what Tig thinks about this!" said Lazaris. "Eh..He's probably the one who made Amelia only visable on halloween,"Lily said.
The girls went back to Lazaris's house and ate some of the candy.

Corrections are white
Fixed the lines, use captial letters on I.

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

may i please give some critiques

New speaker new line, don't keep everything on the same line.

Corrections are white
Fixed the lines, use captial letters on I.

-sort of predicted that-
congratz u got the critique job!

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

may i please give some critiques

New speaker new line, don't keep everything on the same line.

Corrections are white
Fixed the lines, use captial letters on I.

spotted,wich is supposed to be spelled witch. <w>

Name: Selena
Nickname(cant be ur charries name shorterned): Selly
what chapter do u want to be in?: all plz?
Personality: funny tells good storys tough and is really funny
Importaince 1-10 (if its 10 ur automativcly in the mechelo family): 10
Mouse look: dressed as a Black kitten wearing glittery stuff