fanfic cause I have a story I worked on but my comic has about zero hope

so yeah

I'll try not to put texting and middle school in here


He tapped his pencil once, then twice more. Anything to keep the boredom a few inches away from him. If only he could summon his handheld game but ...no, the others had forbidden it. Ugh. Why do they have to be so boring? It's not like they were going to find a way of getting out of this mess that hadn't already been thought of and actually worked. He stared around the vast, blank, plain room, staring at his fellow sisters and brother, his tedious expression so clearly mirrored on their faces.

"Stop tapping your pencil or I'll stick it in your ear," called Light from across the room. He sighed and stopped. As if his pencil tapping was louder than Earth's rumbling snoring.

And then he realized it. He couldn't believe it, the answer was so obvious! He could not wait to gloat to the others that he, Storm, the one who was often beaten down for being so stupid, would be the one who came up with the plan that saved the Goddess! He took a deep breath before telling everyone his idea.

yeah that's "chapter" one

could you give a quick summary because i'm confused

was he at school or what

Satash a dit :

could you give a quick summary because i'm confused

so

he's in this huge room

and they're trying to think of a plan to find the "Goddess"

and we don't know what happened to her

yet

and so he came up with a great idea or something

Sourisplum a dit :

so

he's in this huge room

and they're trying to think of a plan to find the "Goddess"

and we don't know what happened to her

yet

and so he came up with a great idea or something

maybe put that in the op?

Sourisplum a dit :

so

he's in this huge room

and they're trying to think of a plan to find the "Goddess"

and we don't know what happened to her

yet

and so he came up with a great idea or something

Yesyes plz put it in the op :D (also make flashbacks....or... whatever that will make me understand... because we dont know what the story is in your mind that much at all....)

Imaewsome a dit :

maybe put that in the op?

umm srsly that's like exactly what I wrote

Sourisplum a dit :

umm srsly that's like exactly what I wrote

i don't understand

and you didn't have it clear

Imaewsome a dit :

i don't understand

and you didn't have it clear

it's very clear though. . .

Imaewsome a dit :

i don't understand

and you didn't have it clear

lmao rly?
the last paragraph pretty much summed it all up

Imaewsome a dit :

i don't understand

and you didn't have it clear

how old are you and what level books do you read

you know what fanfic is actually better than comic because I can update so much more often

Sourisplum a dit :

how old are you and what level books do you read

you know what finfic is actually better than comic because I can update so much more often

ugh just forget it ok?

w00t I'm in class with nothing to do

I present "chapter" two!

"I'VE GOT IT!" he yelled in his loudest possible voice.

"Ugh, why do you have to yell all the time?" replied an annoyed Light. He ignored her and just went on.

"Well, we all know the Goddess isn't up here, right?"

"duh"

"Then obviously She's somewhere down on the mainworld, right?"

"duh"

"Then we should go down and search for her! If the Goddess was kidnapped, then we'd be the only ones who could go get her back!"

A huge sigh came from the rest of the room. "That would have been a great idea, Storm (especially for you)," said Flame to him, rolling her eyes.

"IF we hadn't thought of it a week ago!" finished Water. The rest of the room nodded in agreement, except for Earth, who's snoring still rumbled in the background.

"Then why didn't we do it?" asked Storm, with a puzzled look on his face.

"UGGGGHHHHH" groaned the others, again. "YOU were the one who voted NO! You know voting has to be unanimous!"

Storm gulped. He remebered that day he'd been playing on his Gameboy and wasn't paying attention to anything else except for his Pokemon. "Well," he gave a nervous laugh, "I vote yes for it now. Now the votes are unanimous. That works, right?"

A look of murderous hate was on almost every face in the room.

Very descriptive story, excellent job. c:

Is this even TFM related?