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Erika (Kayleekitti)
Random mice

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It was a normal day, I was playing on my computer, and stumboled upon a website, Transformice! I clicked on the website, and it said "NickName" I entered my nickname, AKA what everybody calls me, Kayleekitti. And the password I normally use. Then pressed the sign up button.

Ya know what I noticed? I was a mouse. A small brown mouse, smaller than a thumbtack. Then I noticed a mouse, 10 times the size of my character, wearing a graduation hat? "Man, mice must be more educated than I thought." I thought, then got the cheese and brought it back to the hole. "Psh, this is easy!" I shouted.

But however, when I got teleported to room 1, I noticed it was more advanced. I saw a mouse, with a feather sticking out of her head? She had some fancy tatoos and a weird tail item that looked like a marbel. I thought it was because they were the king/queen of Transformice. But... After every level, the Shaman changed? I then saw a Shaman with THREE feathers sticking out of her head, and spawned a lot of boards, without even taking an effort to build! "HACKER!" I slammed in the chat. "Shut the fuck up!" A mouse responded to me. "This Shaman does not hack! She's on hardmode, and she has created her own totem!" I was really confused about these big words, so I responded, "DUDE! GO EASY ON ME! I STARTED ONLY TODAY!" They then responded, "Okay, just read the help button, and learn your shitty facts before you comment on other people." Then he moved on. "Gosh.. such a jerk.." I muttered.

I then got invited to a tribe. Due to my curiousity, I wanted to know what a tribe was, so I clicked "Accept." Then I was officially in tribe Midnight Shadows. I got a nice rank up to Cooker. I wondered what a tribe house was, so I went into the tribe house.
(Chapter 1 is not done!)
Anyone like the story so far? I'm adding more to it! I'm not going to leave this story.

I like it so far!
And poor you, lol

aren't you a little young to be writing swears into your stories
also i think i mentioned before, to you, that each different character's dialogue is a new line.
so for example:

"HACKER!" I slammed in the chat.
"Shut the fuck up!" A mouse responded to me. "This Shaman does not hack! She's on hardmode, and she has created her own totem!"
I was really confused about these big words, so I responded, "DUDE! GO EASY ON ME! I STARTED ONLY TODAY!"
They then responded, "Okay, just read the help button, and learn your shitty facts before you comment on other people." Then he moved on.
"Gosh.. such a jerk.." I muttered.

aha this reminds me of when i joined
i thought totems were hacks

nice fanfic, i think i'll read on

Haruhitastic a dit :

aren't you a little young to be writing swears into your stories
also i think i mentioned before, to you, that each different character's dialogue is a new line.
so for example:

"HACKER!" I slammed in the chat.
"Shut the fuck up!" A mouse responded to me. "This Shaman does not hack! She's on hardmode, and she has created her own totem!"
I was really confused about these big words, so I responded, "DUDE! GO EASY ON ME! I STARTED ONLY TODAY!"
They then responded, "Okay, just read the help button, and learn your shitty facts before you comment on other people." Then he moved on.
"Gosh.. such a jerk.." I muttered.

Kinda..
But erm.. It's actually kinda what happened. owo'

Kayleekitti a dit :

Kinda..
But erm.. It's actually kinda what happened. owo'

Ahahaha. Wow o_o

Anyways. That sounds ALOTTTT like me >_>

(( but I cursed when I was 3 muhahahaha.... I dont know nice story. i like the chap so far. ))