This is a fanfic about cheesefarming in Transformice. This is my first fanfic, so please don't hate. ^^'

Characters:


(Main Character)
Swirl



She has a bad temper when she gets annoyed it can equal into some hateful comments.

Name: Axel Noble
Personality: He's a pro, and uhm he's nice but quiet lots of people are scared of him.



Name: Kageni Rion
Gender: Female
Personality: Sadistic, loves to torture others with any objects, most of her objects are usually torturing tools. During the past she had many encounters with bullies, until she was fed up with the bullying and started doing random things, such as staring at the shadows a lot. For this reason others fear her.



Chapter 1 :

Man, I've had trouble getting cheese these days. I need 7,000 cheese. WHY NOT MAKE IT LOWER?! Admins thirsty for fraises. I'm not buying them. I better make the buy of my first fur quick because I hate doing cheesefarming.
Meanwhile in Room 1..
Tig: "New fur coming out!"
Mice: "WOOO ADMIN IS HERE! TIIIG!"
I join the room.
I see Tig is there wearing a new fur.
Swirl : "Oh great, a new fur? There's so many choices. I don't know how much it costs, either. Well. I have to decide which fur to buy tomorrow. It's either the less expensive, middle expensive, or high expensive furs I'm getting."
The next day..
Swirl : I'd get that fox fur. It looks good on me. This boring old white color is getting on my nerves.
I go cheesefarming with some mice. Until a pro beats me to the hole. And my timing is RIGHT next to his. His is 23.56 and mine is 23.57.
Swirl : "Goddamnit! I was SURE I would get that first!"
Aztec : "Nah. OF COURSE you're too noob to get one. I have 7576 firsts. You only have 179."
Swirl : "How dare you! I could beat you at a vanilla map!"
Aztec : Lets see then..


Chapter 2 :

Continuing from Chapter 1.
Vanilla map loads..
Aztec : "Ready?
Swirl : "Set."
Aztec : "GO!"
Both me and Aztec race for the cheese. We cross some builds the map was made itself, and I have got the cheese. Aztec is behind. I try to go faster by jumping, but that goddamn update has stopped us from doing that. I used fps60, so I'm faster than him.
I was nearly to the hole when the shaman TROLLED me and put a Companian Box on me. Then he just cannoned me away in the off-screen. I fell to my death.
Aztec has made it to the hole, and he started snickering.
Other mice have started snickering too. At ME.
I felt so embarrassed, that I could just-
Swirl : "YOU !@#$! LETS DO THAT AGAIN, I DON'T LIKE A !@#$ LIKE YOU! LETS SETTLE THIS WITH A !@#$ REDO.."
Aztec : "Settle down, woman."
Kageni Rion has been shaman next round. She tortured Aztec this time, spawning her totem and trapping him in a box made of boards with balloons in it. Off he left away.
I started laughing, but finished soon enough when I got a first.
The pro mice started shouting "HACK! HACK!!!!" Then the newbie mice started shouting "Pro! Pro!"
I felt much better from being mad. Well, I've made it to 1,000 cheese. It was enough to make me feel MORE excited.
I'd challenge Kageni Rion this time for a race.
To be continued.

Yeah I really liked it one thing though 23.56 would mean you got the first.... not them. sorry.
BUT ANYWAYS! Is there a character form I could fill out?

Swirlfire a dit :

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This. is. pretty cool c:

Squeakishly a dit :

Yeah I really liked it one thing though 23.56 would mean you got the first.... not them. sorry.
BUT ANYWAYS! Is there a character form I coulf fill out?

pretty much this....
e: hhue you noticed the misspell

Squeakishly a dit :

Yeah I really liked it one thing though 23.56 would mean you got the first.... not them. sorry.
BUT ANYWAYS! Is there a character form I could fill out?

Sure. ^^

You only need the name of your character, picture, and personality.

Name: Axel Noble
Personality: He's a pro, and uhm he's nice but quiet lots of people are scared of him. He's sarcastic and loyal. I dunno. (This is not based off me cx)
Image:

Name: Kageni Rion
Gender: Female
Personality: Sadistic, loves to torture others with any objects, most of her objects are usually torturing tools. During the past she had many encounters with bullies, until she was fed up with the bullying and started doing random things, such as staring at the shadows a lot. For this reason others fear her. (okay personality seems wierd but who cares?)


huehuehue forgot to do this yesterday.

Characters added!

One of your characters will make a appearance in this chapter.

Chapter 2 :

Continuing from Chapter 1.
Vanilla map loads..
Aztec : "Ready?
Swirl : "Set."
Aztec : "GO!"
Both me and Aztec race for the cheese. We cross some builds the map was made itself, and I have got the cheese. Aztec is behind. I try to go faster by jumping, but that goddamn update has stopped us from doing that. I used fps60, so I'm faster than him.
I was nearly to the hole when the shaman TROLLED me and put a Companian Box on me. Then he just cannoned me away in the off-screen. I fell to my death.
Aztec has made it to the hole, and he started snickering.
Other mice have started snickering too. At ME.
I felt so embarrassed, that I could just-
Swirl : "YOU !@#$! LETS DO THAT AGAIN, I DON'T LIKE A !@#$ LIKE YOU! LETS SETTLE THIS WITH A !@#$ REDO.."
Aztec : "Settle down, woman."
Kageni Rion has been shaman next round. She tortured Aztec this time, spawning her totem and trapping him in a box made of boards with balloons in it. Off he left away.
I started laughing, but finished soon enough when I got a first.
The pro mice started shouting "HACK! HACK!!!!" Then the newbie mice started shouting "Pro! Pro!"
I felt much better from being mad. Well, I've made it to 1,000 cheese. It was enough to make me feel MORE excited.
I'd challenge Kageni Rion this time for a race.
To be continued.