Atelier 801
Transformice 
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 - - Introduction: This story is about a mouse named Mask and her journey through the streets of London, accompanied only by her wits, skills, and friends. They meet terrifying surprises on the way - loony drunkards, angry bakery owners, and the world’s most top secret organization fall in to their paths… all because of a stone. [Please note I’ve been working on this for a while, I think it’s ready to see some light. I’m not trying to join that “writing” fad that’s going on now. For all those hard working writer, good job! It’s awesome to see some fanfiction. I wrote this a few months ago and forgot about it, ahhh...] Characters: A character request list WILL be added – please note that you must be approved before I fit you in. Sorry to be so selective! :X Some good tips (if you reeeeally want to be in the story) • I should know you quite well; I want to fit your REAL personality into this! ^^ • You should pick interesting names (not too long) • Your mouse shouldn’t be too mainstream. Do not do the usual headphones, hair bow, and rainbowdash hair, PLEASE. If I do approve you, your costume may be tweaked a bit. If you want me to create it based on your personality, I will! I'm sorry to be so picky. I've done chapters 1-3, but I need to fit in some of you guys. I kinda want the mice to be a certain way ;_; Chapters: Chapters will be added at the FR flag. I’ll be drawing some scenes too, so keep a look out! Thanks for coming to this thread, please enjoy ^_^  Mask: Our main character. She is persistant, stubborn. Plays with paints and ruins her friend's clothes a lot. Eats a lot of marshmellows.  Oliver: Mask's best friend. Obsesses about celery. Is very loyal. Never rude. Kind to everyone, even his foes. May have a little thing for Mask, who know? ;) - - Intro Chapter: Mask’s heart pounded. Good lord, did she always have to steal from the Baker? It wasn’t much, she assured herself. After all, the Baker’s daughter, Maggie, loved Mask. If she wasn’t at school, Mask would have been given the fattest, roundest Chorley cake in the shoppe. Her mouth watered, and she sighed heavily as she screeched around a corner. The bland bagels she’d managed to nick were too heavy for running. She could hear the Baker shouting and ranting. Finally, she saw the small crack under the local book store’s back entrance gate. Behind there lay a garden untouched for years. She flung her loot into the crack and dashes belly first under the gate, running through grass until she got to a hole in the ground. The Baker swore, shot a hateful look at the hole, and returned to his Bakery. “Glad that’s over, then?” laughed a voice. Turning around, Mask saw her best friend Oliver. “It wasn’t THAT hard…” she boasted. Oliver always criticized her on going to the Bakery. The mice had plenty of places to forage. She slipped down the weed root, her preferred way of getting down to the city. The other tunnels were too long. Her and Oliver arrived at the Carting Stop, where items hoarded for the city mice would be sorted. Mask push the bagels in to the cart and smiled at the Carter. He sent the bagels down the rails to a long tunnel, where they’d appear at the end to be sorted. The friends came through to the large archway of pillars and rocks. On the very top was the name of their home. “Transformice City”. The city wasn’t any special mice hole; it was a network of food hoarding, homes, rivers, lighting and work. It was a delicate system, but the payoff was great. Each mouse worked hard to keep it running. Lights hung up high on the roof of the city. Rivers flowed quaintly among the canals. Pillars rose high keeping the above ground up. Food, stored in a huge crate, was filled with the best sustinance in London, stolen from gardens, shoppes, and baskets. It was the most beautiful sight ever seen. This was all going to change. _Shit cheesy story ahead_ |
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 Your story seems very appealing. Feel free to remove things such as the pirate eyepatch and the tie. Just asking, is cake mainstream? I'm not sure about my personality, but i'm quite naive and often telled off by others when i do wrong. Edit: Oh right, a name. I think i will go with Flipom. |
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| ok i decided to try and join < A >;;  you can remove the tail bow if you feel like it i just needed something more fabric-ey she's a listener,but also the storyteller.she likes talking but dislikes stupid questions.she might brag without knowing it and sometimes her ego can be a little bit big but she apologizes (if somebody tells her).maybe a bit dull,but fun to be around when it's a topic she knows and can participate in.she also gets annoyed and worried by little things.oh yeah she's also quite selfless at some point and gets attached to people easily (that was my real personality,or that's how i think i am atleast v u v;;;) oh yeah name's Maren a dit : |
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| Hey umm I know I don't know you very well and uhm... Just wondering I'll just leave this here. I wont feel bad if you don't put me in! c:  This is Axel Noble he is pretty sarcastic and quiet, he's not shy but quiet. He's fun to be around but he may come off kind of mean. He will never be seperated from his hat, and hates when people even touch it. Yeah. You don't have to put me in but I would love to be in it c: Change whatever you want on him but please not the hat cx Thanks for even reading this if you did :3 Yeah you don't know me but I would love to get to know you c: |
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