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I'll be a character!

Preferred name:Mice
Gender:Female
Age(human):10
Character:

Personality:
Nice to everyone she meets, sometimes she'll joke about something and everyone will take it serious; which makes her upset. Although she does have lots of friends, always oping to make new friends
(EXTRA: Awkward, shy/quiet,)

Micefamilies a dit :

I'll be a character!

Preferred name:Mice
Gender:Female
Age(human):10
Character:
Personality:
Nice to everyone she meets, sometimes she'll joke about something and everyone will take it serious; which makes her upset. Although she does have lots of friends, always oping to make new friends
(EXTRA: Awkward, shy/quiet,)

Added :]

I'll try to work on the first chapter as soon as time lets me!

Name: mimo
Gender: female
Age: mouseyears!!....wat....ok ill just say 15
Character: no pic. u decide the look just dont forget the earmuffs
Personality: pretty weird and crazy but everyone accepts her. she is more of a listener.

extra: she has a collection of drawings,she owns 5 teddies,she owns a nyan cat costume she wears almost everyday

Wingcestor a dit :

Name: mimo
Gender: female
Age: mouseyears!!....wat....ok ill just say 15
Character: no pic. u decide the look just dont forget the earmuffs
Personality: pretty weird and crazy but everyone accepts her. she is more of a listener.

extra: she has a collection of drawings,she owns 5 teddies,she owns a nyan cat costume she wears almost everyday

Added!
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(I lied I don't think it's 5-6 sentences that's difficult sorry for the short chapter)

CHAPTER 1:

Pan stared around at the swarm of mice jumping to get the cheese. She just stood there, not realizing that she needed to get a move on to get the cheese too. She started to walk, and bumped into someone on the way up to the cheese.

"Watch out! You cost me my first!" The mouse yelled crossly. Pan shrunk back a bit, watching the mouse as they stomped to the hole at 5th place. She started again, up the unstable ramp to the cheese. She gathered the rest of it, and slid back down the hole in last place. The shaman, obviously annoyed by Pan's slowness, followed quickly behind her into the hole in just the nick of time.

It was the next map. Pan was determined to get a good place in this race. It looked easy enough. The cheese was on a floating island quite a few feet from where the disciples were standing. She lined up with the rest of the mice. They all looked like they were a higher rank than her, but that was okay. Ranks didn't matter to her, just as long as her ambition to make friends with at least some mouse was still clear in sight. Pan fidgeted. Everyone started to yell at the shaman for being slow. She started to yell too, but something someone said in the back of the line made her freeze.

"Why are YOU laughing? You're the shaman! Start building, noob!"

Frantically, Pan started to spawn unstable ramps and boxes everywhere, and the clock was dwindling down to thirty seconds. Just as she was about to give up and leave, embarrassed, an anonymouse pushed out of the crowd and gave her good tips. Pan got quite a good bit of disciples to go into the hole, and she managed to get into the hole right when the clock ticked 0:00.

The mouse who helped her shuffled up to her during the next map.

"My name's Mice. I'm glad I got to meet you and help you on that preceding map."

"Thank you," Pan murmured, but Mice was gone.

Very great story pang! Loveeee it(:

why is this so low down...