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[FanFic]Jack and Beth, the powerful two
Bethdacat
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Welcome, everyone, to the fan-fiction of Jaackster and me, Bethdacat, as we set off in our adventures. The story? Lua has came and Me and Jaackster are set off on an adventure with a bunch of other Lua members, including the admins, meaning Jack and Me, of course noted in the title, we're the powerful two! c:
EN=The Introduction
FR=The Prolouge
ES=The Chapter Section
RU=The Characters
TR=The FanArt made by other users
We hope you have a good time reading the story <3
Jack struggled in bed as my alarm clock rang. His shaman feather laid alongside his stand, with his other Lua minigame collections. "Welp, time to make some more Lua work." He struggled to wake up as he smelled a bright cheese pie Shamousey had baked. I woke up by Jack waking up, noticing my alarm clock was strangely beeping. I pressed the snooze button on the clock, then woke up with Jack. We both eventually saw that there was no cheese pie on the table, like Shamousey usually baked. There was a note on the fridge, which Jack had spotted. 'Dear Jack and Beth, I have left to go on an adventure. You two can stay here and finish the lua work I have left on Jack's stand. That is why I turned on your alarm clocks. -Shamousey' We both stared at each other. "How about we join Shamousey?" Jack suggested. "It's dangerous, but yeah..." I replied. We bropawwed each other and set out looking for Shamousey.
No chapters yet. Come back another time!
Bethdacat (me!)
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Adventurous, but shy sometimes, can be random so much.
Age: (story) 17
Friends: Jaackster, Shamousey, and others
Enemies: Dark Mice

Jack
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Powerful, and random, funny and adventurous. His extra feathers show that he is more powerful than other shamans.
Age: (story) 20
Friends: Bethdacat, Shamousey, and others
Enemies: Dark Mice, people who hate lua
more soon!
No fanart yet :c Check back another time! <3
Skinnyfatlegend
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(o.o you weren't kidding)

I'm hooked, can't wait for the other chapters!
Haruhitastic
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friendly reminder that whenever a new character speaks you put it on the next line otherwise your text is a giant blob

"How about we join Shamousey?" Jack suggested.
"It's dangerous, but yeah..." I replied. We bropawwed each other and set out looking for Shamousey.
Bethdacat
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Haruhitastic a dit :
friendly reminder that whenever a new character speaks you put it on the next line otherwise your text is a giant blob

Pls no I write my ways
Haruhitastic
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It's completely improper but whatever floats your boat.
Kattiej
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Bethdacat a dit :
Pls no I write my ways

ignorant...
atleast the story isn't bad
Sirusthemice
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i like this
i skimmed through your past fanfics and well
still got a slightly uncomfortable feeling about the characters tho but fanfic seems p good

sorry if i sound rude
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