~Bob the Mouse~

-Author's Note
This is not a copy of Bob the builder.Press on the flags for short chapters of Bob the Mouse!

This is Bob Mouse.
Likes:Baloney and cheese sandwhiches
Dislikes:Boring Homework

~Intro
This is Bob,the most weirdest mouse ever.Whether or not he's at home,school,town,garbage can,and anywhere else.He's always a nice fun for kids.Kids would enjoy this and adults too.This is dedicated to my 6 year old little brother.
Bob's little brother,Herny and Bob's best friend,Mary,is always by his side.Be by Bob's side,be his friend and fantastic reader friend.Always will love reader's critics and comments,Messeessem.

~Bob the Mouse~
Chapter 1:Meet Bob and His Friends
Bob was at home that one day.Bob's father was cheese hunting with the rest of the tribe.Bob's mother was taking care of Henry and Bob.
"Can I go to Mary's house?"asked Bob.Mary was Bob's best friend ever since Mary beat him up with a cheese hamburger.
"Sure cheeseheart,come back in time for lunch!"said Mama.
"Watch out for Shamans' cannons,they're so reckless nowadays!"screamed Mama.
"Ok!"said Bob.Bob walked down the street.He looked both ways for any cannons coming to squash him unexpectly.He got to Mary's beautiful,white house.He rang the doorbell and Mary's mother awnsered.
"Mary's watching Cheeseman."she said.Bob raced to the TV and watched with Mary.Brittney came over and gave him a naughty good kick.
"Owie!"screamed Bob.
"Bad!"Said Mary.Brittney did the raspberries to Bob and stomped away.Bob and Mary decided to go the playground to play.Their friend,Jacob was there with his older sister,Mouserina.They were running around the swings while they played tag.Bob fell down because Mary accidently kicked him while she was on the mousey bars.Bob had to go to the hospital.Mama was sad and she screamed as she found out her poor Bobby broked his precious,yet hard paws.
At night,something weird happened.Really weird!!!

This is not really fanart :/

Kaitlynkaz a dit :
This is not really fanart :/

It is a fanfiction, which is allowed in the fanart subforums.

Anyways, since you allow critiques
You do understand there is a space between a comma, period, question mark etc. and the next word.

ex.
Wrong:
Bob was at home that one day.Bob's father was cheese hunting with the rest of the tribe.

Right:
Bob was at home that one day. Bob's father was cheese hunting with the rest of the tribe.

Just a question here, but you have many fanfics going on.
Are you ever going to update them, or just keep making new ones?

Susanlwu a dit :
It is a fanfiction, which is allowed in the fanart subforums.

Anyways, since you allow critiques
You do understand there is a space between a comma, period, question mark etc. and the next word.

ex.
Wrong:
Bob was at home that one day.Bob's father was cheese hunting with the rest of the tribe.

Right:
Bob was at home that one day. Bob's father was cheese hunting with the rest of the tribe.

Just a question here, but you have many fanfics going on.
Are you ever going to update them, or just keep making new ones?

You notice,didn't chu?
Anyway I was planning to locked them all except this.

Susanlwu a dit :
It is a fanfiction, which is allowed in the fanart subforums.

Anyways, since you allow critiques
You do understand there is a space between a comma, period, question mark etc. and the next word.

ex.
Wrong:
Bob was at home that one day.Bob's father was cheese hunting with the rest of the tribe.

Right:
Bob was at home that one day. Bob's father was cheese hunting with the rest of the tribe.

Just a question here, but you have many fanfics going on.
Are you ever going to update them, or just keep making new ones?

Oh Thx Susan , I didnt know :P

Kaitlynkaz a dit :
Oh Thx Susan , I didnt know :P

:P ok?
Anyway I always loose intrest in one day so I'm weird like that..

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