Katsatuma a dit :

Okay thanks you! ^^ I still need one more character bu I'll add you two to the OP.
First chapter..

1.It was early in the morning and I was busy playing in room “lol”. There were only 12 mice in the room, just enough for firsts. Just before I was about to get my 10th first a mouse trolled me and cannoned me off the map. He did the same with everyone else.
“TROLL!” a mouse shouted.
“./ban lolcheese” someone else shouted.
Soon everyone was doing this and he was votebanned from our room.
“lol he was like the star queen” someone laughed.
“IKR” another mouse replied.
I’d never heard of this star queen and I asked them “Who’s the star queen?” Not that anyone helped me.
“NOOOB!”
“lol nooooob”
“ur so dumb”
Eventually, someone helped me. She was called “Laviana” and had over 10,000 firsts. This helpful mouse told me where to go.
“Go to the forums. There will be something about her there.”
I smiled and replied “Thanks, lav”.
“Call me Lola. Lav makes me sound like a toilet.”
I giggled and left the room to go to the forums, where someone helped me try to find the story. Once he’d helped me I sat down and read it, while chewing my cheese.
“Long ago, around 3000 years ago to be precise, there was a (mouse) queen who ruled all of Tranformice. However, she treated everyone and everything very cruelly. Mice where whipped and then put in dungeons. Houses were destroyed by her cats, Scavenge and Savage. Tribe houses where used as prisons. Any cheese which anyone had was confiscated for the queen’s personal benefit. Rooms were knocked down and some mice were forced to play bootcamp endlessly. Children had it slightly better, having to play rough survivor with the queen’s guards as shamans or as an alternative, being slaves to the queen herself.”
“This carried on for hundreds of years until finally 3 mice were strong enough to stand up to her. Their names were Dusk, Dawn and Spark. Together they joined their power and banished the queen to the stars forever, thus she was named “Star Queen”. The three mice that banished her though disappeared soon after they destroyed the queen and restored Transformice to how it was previously. No one knows where they are, who they were exactly or why they disappeared.”
Once I’d finished reading I looked at the comments which people left. They were all “THAT IS SSOOOOO UNTRUE” and “WHO WOULD BELIEVE THIS CRAP” and mainly stuff like that. I put away the comments then looked at who wrote the story. It said “Spark".

Micefamilies a dit :

Are you making it as if your playing transformice on the computer and not actually being in the POV of the mouse?

Because it seems quite confusing to me.

Kattiej a dit :

Is the narrator/speaker a mouse or a human?