[Fanfiction] The World Of Mice |
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The World Of Mice -banner needed if you want to make one :) I'm new to the forums but I love writing so I decided to create a fanfic. Introducting "The World of Mice" Prologue- Anabell used to love waking up every morning, waking up to the sound of birds chirping, and the smell of cheese. Mhmm the smell of fresh cheese in the morning just made her want to jump with joy, but recently things have been different. Cheese was scarce and everyone, even young mice have been forced to work long dangerous hours to gather cheese for everyone. Young mice just like Anabell have to face lava, evil shamans, and awful mice. Will they make it? Will Anabell make it? More coming soon- CN Flag-Character applications BR Flag-Story Critiques appreciated To be a character fill out the following -not all will be accepted- Transformice Name: Character Name: Age: Gender: (Character) Personality: Anabell: ![]() Theodore Age: 13 Gender: male Personality: Theodore has always been the runt, he's short, small and lovable. He may come off sweet and harmless, but let me tell you he's actually evil. When he doesn't get what he wants he is very fiesty, so watch out! Extra: He hits people with his paper fan ![]() Chapter 1: It was a typical day and Anabell was a hard time trying to get to the cheese. There was lava and ice in her way. How could the grounds be completely opposite but still be right next to each other? Anabell thought. Deep Breaths Suddenly she heard a shriek, what was that horrid noise? It seemed like it was coming from... the cheese? What, that has to be impossible! And yet every single mouse turned around and sure enough, they saw him, the trouble maker him, the one they call Theodore. Theodore was behind the cheese, screaming his head off! Wait, what was he holding in his hand? Curiosity took the best of her, Anabell ran over to see. After jumping over an anvil and sliding across some ice, she finally reached Theodore. Turns out he was holding a fan. Then there was a blur as Theodore hit Anabell's snout with the fan and disappeared. |
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Transformice Name: Squeakishly Character Name: Theodore Age: 13 Gender: male (Character) Personality: Theodore has always been the runt, he's short, small and lovable. He may come off sweet and harmless, but let me tell you he's actually evil. When he doesn't get what he wants he is very fiesty, so watch out! Extra: He hits people with his paper fan Picture: ![]() (Welcome to the forums by the way) |
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Thanks for applying to be a character. I hope you enjoyed the prologue edit: I accepted Squeakishly's character, though he may be a bit different then you said discribed him. Hope you don't mind |
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Nice story |
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[Modéré par Vulli, raison : off-topic] |
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Messeessem a dit : Good luck! :3 |
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I'm so sad this didn't get more replies, my friend worked hard on it.. |
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Transformice Name: comunitie Character Name: alice Age: 14 Gender: female (Character) Personality: she owns a tribe that has mice from all of the comunities! what do you expect? she is basicaly the most kindest mouse in transformice.but when it comes to fighting, keep. the. chairs. away! seriously she loves chairs and she likes reading newsletters.cookies? keep them away or give her one otherwise she will go crazy extra: she was never seen without wearing atleast one bow or ribbon |
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This sounds cool, Mind if I join it? a dit : |
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Comunitie a dit : Please make a picture for the character! |
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[url=]Chapter 1:[/url] It was a typical day and Anabell was a hard time trying to get to the cheese. There was lava and ice in her way. How could the grounds be completely opposite but still be right next to each other? Anabell thought. Deep Breaths Suddenly she heard a shriek, what was that horrid noise? It seemed like it was coming from... the cheese? What, that has to be impossible! And yet every single mouse turned around and sure enough, they saw him, the trouble maker him, the one they call Theodore. Theodore was behind the cheese, screaming his head off! Wait, what was he holding in his hand? Curiosity took the best of her, Anabell ran over to see. After jumping over an anvil and sliding across some ice, she finally reached Theodore. Turns out he was holding a fan. Then there was a blur as Theodore hit Anabell's snout with the fan and disappeared. Please critique and I added it to the OP~ |
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Good job! I like the Theodore character Squeak created |