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[Fanfiction] The World Of Mice
Catmarbles
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The World Of Mice
-banner needed if you want to make one :)

I'm new to the forums but I love writing so I decided to create a fanfic.

Introducting "The World of Mice"
Prologue-
Anabell used to love waking up every morning, waking up to the sound of birds chirping, and the smell of cheese. Mhmm the smell of fresh cheese in the morning just made her want to jump with joy, but recently things have been different. Cheese was scarce and everyone, even young mice have been forced to work long dangerous hours to gather cheese for everyone. Young mice just like Anabell have to face lava, evil shamans, and awful mice.
Will they make it? Will Anabell make it?

More coming soon-
CN Flag-Character applications
BR Flag-Story
Critiques appreciated
To be a character fill out the following
-not all will be accepted-
Transformice Name:
Character Name:
Age:
Gender:
(Character) Personality:

Anabell:

http://i.imgur.com/LELFJ5P.png
Theodore
Age: 13
Gender: male
Personality: Theodore has always been the runt, he's short, small and lovable. He may come off sweet and harmless, but let me tell you he's actually evil. When he doesn't get what he wants he is very fiesty, so watch out!
Extra: He hits people with his paper fan

http://i.imgur.com/FgA1ZMY.png
Chapter 1:
It was a typical day and Anabell was a hard time trying to get to the cheese.
There was lava and ice in her way. How could the grounds be completely opposite but still be right next to each other? Anabell thought.
Deep Breaths
Suddenly she heard a shriek, what was that horrid noise? It seemed like it was coming from... the cheese? What, that has to be impossible! And yet every single mouse turned around and sure enough, they saw him, the trouble maker him, the one they call Theodore. Theodore was behind the cheese, screaming his head off! Wait, what was he holding in his hand? Curiosity took the best of her, Anabell ran over to see. After jumping over an anvil and sliding across some ice, she finally reached Theodore. Turns out he was holding a fan. Then there was a blur as Theodore hit Anabell's snout with the fan and disappeared.
Squeakishly
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Transformice Name: Squeakishly
Character Name: Theodore
Age: 13
Gender: male
(Character) Personality: Theodore has always been the runt, he's short, small and lovable. He may come off sweet and harmless, but let me tell you he's actually evil. When he doesn't get what he wants he is very fiesty, so watch out!
Extra: He hits people with his paper fan
Picture:
http://i.imgur.com/FgA1ZMY.png
(Welcome to the forums by the way)
Catmarbles
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Thanks for applying to be a character. I hope you enjoyed the prologue
edit: I accepted Squeakishly's character, though he may be a bit different then you said discribed him. Hope you don't mind
Kattiej
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Nice story
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[Modéré par Vulli, raison : off-topic]
Linhta
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Messeessem a dit :
:3
I made 10,000 threads of fan fiction.In fact,I guess I'll make one now!

Good luck! :3
Kattiej
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I'm so sad this didn't get more replies, my friend worked hard on it..
Comunitie
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Transformice Name: comunitie
Character Name: alice
Age: 14
Gender: female
(Character) Personality: she owns a tribe that has mice from all of the comunities! what do you expect? she is basicaly the most kindest mouse in transformice.but when it comes to fighting, keep. the. chairs. away! seriously she loves chairs and she likes reading newsletters.cookies? keep them away or give her one otherwise she will go crazy

extra: she was never seen without wearing atleast one bow or ribbon
Iwuvcheesed
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This sounds cool, Mind if I join it?
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Transformice Name: Iwuvcheesed
Character Name: Mabel
Age: 12
Gender: Female
(Character) Personality: Mabel acts very childish and friendly, but is very sensitive and even the slightest insult can make her cry a river, but she is still restless and seriously hyper.
Just don't annoy her or take her sweets, or you will be in a world of pain when she beats the snot out of you.
Extra: Has a strage addicion to sweet smelling or tasting foods.

Picture
Catmarbles
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Comunitie a dit :
Transformice Name: comunitie
Character Name: alice
Age: 14
Gender: female
(Character) Personality: she owns a tribe that has mice from all of the comunities! what do you expect? she is basicaly the most kindest mouse in transformice.but when it comes to fighting, keep. the. chairs. away! seriously she loves chairs and she likes reading newsletters.cookies? keep them away or give her one otherwise she will go crazy

extra: she was never seen without wearing atleast one bow or ribbon

Please make a picture for the character!
Catmarbles
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[url=]Chapter 1:[/url]
It was a typical day and Anabell was a hard time trying to get to the cheese.
There was lava and ice in her way. How could the grounds be completely opposite but still be right next to each other? Anabell thought.
Deep Breaths
Suddenly she heard a shriek, what was that horrid noise? It seemed like it was coming from... the cheese? What, that has to be impossible! And yet every single mouse turned around and sure enough, they saw him, the trouble maker him, the one they call Theodore. Theodore was behind the cheese, screaming his head off! Wait, what was he holding in his hand? Curiosity took the best of her, Anabell ran over to see. After jumping over an anvil and sliding across some ice, she finally reached Theodore. Turns out he was holding a fan. Then there was a blur as Theodore hit Anabell's snout with the fan and disappeared.

Please critique and I added it to the OP~
Kattiej
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Good job!
I like the Theodore character Squeak created
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