[Fanfic] These Wings Were Made To Fly; Book 2: Vanilla Changes Everything |
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Welcome to... ![]() Book Two: Vanilla Changes Everything a dit : EN - You're At This Flag!: Menu And FanArt FR - Characters and Blacklist BR - Book 1 and Book 2 PAGEGET COUNTER Nekoava - Sirusthemice - Imaewsome - Susanlwu - Sirusthemice's Fan Made Drawings! Pageget counter: Nekoava - Iwuvcheesed - Susanlwu - Sirusthemice - EN - Menu And Fanart FR - You're At This Flag!: Characters And Blacklist BR - Book 1 and Book 2 CHARACTERS: ~Sirusthemice - Siri Castellum ~Nekoava - Dakota Nova ~Susanlwu - Susan Wu PLEASE DO NOT REQUEST TO BE A CHARACTER! Blacklist: |
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I loved the last book, can't wait for the first chapter of this one! |
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Iwuvcheesed a dit : yes this ~ and this time I will actually get a pageget |
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Iwuvcheesed a dit : Thankyou and I can't wait either xDDD Susanlwu a dit : Ty :3 LUL E~ I'm writing the first chapter *-* - I'm working while listening to this: Let It Go parody by 'Serena' |
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Chapter One: Bumping Into Rash The same solemn mouse who fell in deep sleep, finally woke up. She opened her window and felt the warm breeze. She lit her candle and opened the book called "Book 2: These Wings Were Made To Fly". The girls, Susan, Siri and Dakota were huddled close together while they were all standing on the city's sidewalk. "Where do we go now?" Susan squeaked shivering. "I guess we can go to the mall." Dakota answered. "You guys can go to the mall, i'm going to the Skating Rink." Siri said and walked away. "Hold up!" Dakota yelled and ran after Siri. Susan darted after Dakota. All three of them suddenly ended up at the City Skating Rink. There were all guys. "I'm not going on one of these!" Susan cried when she saw a skateboard. "You mean a skateboard?" Siri corrected Susan without looking at her. She was looking at the skateboards. Susan nodded. Siri suddenly jump up and landed on a skateboard. She glided down a ramp and did a flip. "Woah!" Dakota yelped. "Don't hurt yourself!" Susan squeaked almost crying. "Don't worry Susan." Siri smiled while flipping in the air again. "If you think THAT'S impressing, then check this out!" one of the skaters told Dakota and Susan. He skated up a really big ramp and then pushed off. He grabbed onto his board and flipped in the air and landed on the other side of the ramp. He then went down the ramp again this time on his back. He landed on the other side of the ramp perectly. Siri then smirked. When she was watching, one of the skaters accidently bumped into her and sent Siri going down the ramp. "What the hell, man!" Siri yelled. "Sorry!" the skater replied to Siri while squinting. Siri bumped into the skater that had showed off to Dakota and Susan. Then, Siri and the skater were going at a non-stop speed on Siri's skateboard. The skater didn't look at Siri, he just stared straight forward. Then he put his paw down when they were on the corner of the ramp and the skateboard stopped. He grabbed Siri's paw and pushed her off the skateboard sending both of them rolling down the ramp. The skateboard fell down with them. Siri rubbed her head when she fell down the ramp. "Thanks." Siri told the skater. "No problem." the skater said. "Oh! Uh, i'm Siri." Siri said. "Nice name. I'm Rash." the skater replied. "I, um gotta go. Thanks, again." Siri walked away to Susan and Dakota. "Looks like somebody's gotta crush!" Susan giggled. "Shut up!" Siri said playfully. - The Skating Rink they ended up at: @3678549 - I hope everyone likes Book2 as much as they liked Book1 :c |
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that chapter was beautiful ps. turn on your darn whispers i can't reply to you |
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Sirusthemice a dit : oop my bad |
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Reminds me of my mouse fan fic, except mine is gory and depressing and has winged mice ripping eachother up... |
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Wingedmousie a dit : not to be rude but this doesnt relate to the fanfic besides do we want to know? no. |
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great chap. |
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Sirusthemice a dit : Ikr. Creating a blacklist. Susanlwu a dit : Ty qtie! |
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Chapter Two: Vanilla Again! "Where do we go now?" Susan sighed. "I don't know." Dakota murmured. "Hey, Dakota, where's that place you met Susan?" Siri suddenly asked. "Vanilla?" Susan and Dakota said at the same time. "Yeah. Can we go there?" Siri jumped up excited. "Sure. I know the way. Come on." Susan walked away. Siri and Dakota followed her. Susan finally lead them to a large building that looked like a dorm. As Susan twisted the door a robot apeared. "Hello. Please scan your tail." the robot said as a red scanner apeared in his arms.. Susan lifted her tail and put it on the scanner. The scanner beeped green and the roboted greeted Susan inside. "Oh, they're new." Susan squeaked to the robot. The robot glanced at Dakota and Siri. "Please scan you tail to claim an account in Vanilla," it said. They looked at Susan and she nodded. Dakota went first. She slowly took her tail and put it on the scanner. "Please say your whole name." the robot said. "Dakota Nova." Dakota squeaked. The scanner glowed green and then went back to red. "It is your turn." the robot told Siri. Siri took her tail and put it on the scanner. "Pl-" the robot began. "Ssh. Siri Castellum." Siri interupted the robot. The scanner gloed green and then red just like it did with Dakota's. "You will be accompanied by a young man named Robert Trust." the robot said as he left. "Robert Trust? That's funny. Richard's last name is Trust." Dakota said. - Sorry for short chapter. Btw here's how Robert looks: ![]() Here's how Richard looks: ![]() |
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Nekoava a dit : cliFFHANGER |
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Great story! This is pretty interesting. I can't wait for chapter 3! :D |
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Sirusthemice a dit : hi there rash guess what ur gonna be famouse and when i mean famouse i mean you'll be in my story |
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how 2 get the picture on fourm |
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IT WAS DESERTEDDD Working on chapters right away. |
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#fucktriplepost Chapter 3: "Noobs" PART ONE As Dakota, Susan and Siri ventured into the world of Vanilla, they saw many mice. Gray mice, tan mice, white mice, dark gray mice, white-fluffy mice, black-and-white mice and plenty more. They were all too excited to realize the mice eyeing them with smirks. "Noobs." a mouse that had with pink hair that had a giant curl covering the girl's forehead and a yellow cathat snickered. "Just wait until they're shaman. Uch." another mouse said that looked like the other girl but she had a blue cathat. "Shut up, you guys were noobs too at one point." a boy with black slick hair shot back at them. "True, but they bought fraises and we bought our customization with cheese." the girl with the blue cathat squeaked. "So?" the boy challenged. "I didn't come here to get cyberbullied by some stranger. C'mon Lorla." the girl said in a sigh. "Let me check my vcp." |