~~~Chapter 1: A Sole Survivor~~~

When Dave goes to his class, Mia Shamia (a little mouse) accidently ran on him. "I'm sorry," said Mia, "WHOA! How did you become so big and tall?" Dave answered: "That radiation wave.... But how did you survive???" The little mouse (Mia) answered: "We made a BIG fence that surrounds our home. It guards our home from radioactivity!" "That's amazing! But I got to go!" Dave quickly ran away to his class....

MIA'S BIO

Name: Mia Shamia
Age: 9 (She's a daughter of the principal of the Shaman School)
Reference:

Personality: She may look cute, but when you anger her, she can turn into A DEVILISH CHILD! Don't anger her, you'll regret that!

Nice plot, but chapter length could be longer. Keep up the good work!

Thanks!
God dammit, sorry about the inactivity. A LOT OF THINGS TO DO AND I CAN'T GET TO TEH FORUMS THAT FREQUENTLY :/

~~~Chapter 2: A "Meester"ious Prank PART 1~~~

Before Paula came to her class, a naughty student called Meester wanted to prank the teacher with... a toothpaste bomb. "20 minutes left! Great!" said Meester. "Meester, what are you doing?! Don't do it!" shouted one of the students. (He'll be mentioned soon) "Damn, why? That sucker gives me bad grades, now it's time to take revenge!"

***20 minutes later***

Meester puts the bomb on Paula's chair. She came in the class and said: "Hello, students!" "Hello, teacher!" When Paula sat down on the chair, you can guess what happened. THE BOMB EXPLODED. Meester started to laugh. "Meester, quiet! Did you do this?" He answered: "No! It was Melvin! (the student that will be mentioned soon)"
TO BE CONTINUED.....

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Meester's Bio
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Name: Meester Prunester
Age: 14
Reference:

Personality: 100% evil. THAT IS IT. (No wonder he's the "devil" of his class and his school)

This is how Meester would look like as a humouse (human mouse):

~~~Chapter 2,5: A "Meester"ious Prank PART 2~~~

Paula's back was full of toothpaste. "Then who did it?" she asked. Melvin answered: "I saw that Meester made a toothpaste bomb and put it on your chair, teacher." "Is this true, Meester?" "Okay, I surrender. It was me." Meester ran away from the class... crying. "Why! Why am I so evil! God please help me!" A random student appeared that wasn't from Meester's class. "Don't worry, I'll teach you how to be nice." he said....

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Melvin's Bio
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Name: Melvin Alvin Kuraton
Age: 14
Reference:

Personality: He's "The God of Intelligence" as teachers and his classmates call him (except Meester). He's helpful, smart and VERY VERY friendly. ^^

damn

i actually like the part where meester is sick of being evil

Sirusthemice a dit :

damn

i actually like the part where meester is sick of being evil

:D
I like your scribbles, by the way ^^

~~~Chapter 3: The Mysterious Person PART 1~~~

"Who are you?" asked Meester. "My name's Mishinotaku. You can call me Mish, if you want." The mysterious student answered. "I've heard you pranked Paula Clarien, that nice teacher..."
"Yeah, yeah, I know." said Meester. "But now... I can't control my urge to be evil..." He cried. "Don't cry." said Mish nicely. "I can make you a very nice and a friendly person."
*10 minutes later*
"Who was that guy?" Melvin asked. "It was Mishinotaku, he helped me to become nice!" Meester answered.
TO BE CONTINUED..

~~~Chapter 3,5: The Mysterious Person PART 2~~~

"Mishino...taku? Ohh! He's my older brother!" said Melvin. "He always helps people to be nice! ^^" Then Dave in the neighbor class shouted: "MISH I TOLD YOU NOT TO GET OUT OF THE CLASS WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!!!" Paula got really pissed. "SHADDAP DAVE AND DON'T YOU DARE ASK ME TO KISS YOU!!!" All of the class laughed. "Oh my god Paula! Your secret has been revealed! Dave loooves you!" shouted Meester.

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Mish's Bio
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Name: Mishinotaku Kuraton
Age: 17
Reference:

Personality: He never reveals his secret of how he makes mice friendly... Only the ones that became friendly thanks to Mish, only they know.

~~~Chapter 4: After Lesson Surprise~~~

After all the lessons, Dave went home, when suddenly... he saw Tigrounette and Melibellule near his house. "Happy birthday!" they shouted. "What birthday? I don't have a birthday today..." Dave said.
"It might NOT be your real birthday, but today is the 3rd birthday since you registered in TFM!" Tig said happily.
"Yep, so let's go! We got more guests!" Meli agreed.
Dave was surprised when he saw Sydoline, Loukno and Narayan in his house. "How did you got in my house???"
"Secretly we found your home key." Narayan answered.
"Narayan! I told you not to tell that guy the truth!" Sydo said angrily and kicked Narayan out.
Paula noticed the party in Dave's house and shouted near the window: "HEY GUUUYS~! I WANNA JOIN THIS PARTY!"
"Just ignore her," said Dave. He was dissappointed at Paula, because she said something that was half truth, half lies.
"I can't take those uninvited guests.." Loukno said and almost left, when Meli said...
"Oh come on, she is just in time for the most fun thing in this party!" Meli came out from the house, carried Paula to the living room and said: "I think she should be the special guest in this party!"
"What party?! Oh, Dave registered in TFM 3 years ago! Happy mouse birthday, Dave!"

Here's a humouse stereotype of Meli that I drew:

This fanfic needs some MORE art, for example... a comic for one chapter of something....

EDIT: Cincle now is doing art, gotta wait :P

I got to lock this fanfic, since I don't have any inspiration for now...

Awww.. I like the fanfic!
I read it *-*

Ok, I'll not lock it since I will probably get some inspiration...
I promise there will be a sequel of this *-*

Can there be someone new to the school?
I see there is like a school scene goin' on :P
I'll try to make a new character soon! :D

(Character Edit):

Charmwing a dit :

Can there be someone new to the school?
I see there is like a school scene goin' on :P
I'll try to make a new character soon! :D

(Character Edit):

Yep! But now there aren't just plain school scenes, there are plenty more of from they came from!

~~~Chapter 5: A Mysterious Package PART 1~~~

While Dave, Paula and the admins were having a party, someone knocked at the door. Sydoline groaned and was a bit disappointed. "I hope it's not Narayan. Hey Dave, how about you should go and look who's there?" Sydo said. "I bet it IS Narayan. OK Dave, go and look." Paula said and continued chatting with Melibellule. Dave went downstairs and asked angrily: "Who's there?! I don't need any uninvited guests here!"
No one answered.
He opened the door and noticed a box with a note.
This is what the note said:

"Dave, please open. It's a special gift, because I know you had registered in TFM 3 years ago.
- Giovanni"

He thought: "Who's Giovanni? I don't know any Giovannis that live in the Transformice world..."

To be continued...


By the way, Giovanni will appear in the planned sequel of this fanfic too. There you will find out more about him.

Nice Fanficition! Can I join? :3

Fanfiction name: Vera
Reference:

Personality: Nice and helpfull, but a little shy
Your job in the fanfiction (optional): Dave Berniux's girlfriend I think? xD