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A Mystery of Faded Times. (sorry I don't have a banner yet.)

Hello, giving making a fanfiction a shot.

This took a little bit to create (mainly because I had to figure out what the hay the story should be about, I thought of the title before I thought of the story)

And I do have character slots open but I'm not sure what they'll be for yet. So I might not make every character appear often or even at all, it all depends on if I like the character or not.

I've been wanting to make a fanfic for tfm for a long time, so I hope this works out well! Sorry if I take awhile to finish a chapter, I type slowly(most of the time).

Please be patient with me XD and I hope you like this. Enjoy~? Oh and sorry if I sound confusing or anything.

(oh and please no critiques.)

Oh and guide:
First flag: Info stuffs.
Second flag: Prologue
Third flag: Characters, character slots, character form.

Third comment first page: Chapter storage (that is where all of the chapters go.)

Fifth comment first page: Fanarts.

Prologue

There once was another part of transformice that was dearly missed at first. Then it became stories, legends, myths told to the young before bedtime. Today there are many mice, furs of all kinds, hats, hair, tail chains, and much more. But there once was another kind, ancient and beautiful. They possessed mysterious powers unlike that of the shamans known today.

But one day they disappeared, nowhere to be found. The other mice searched high and low for any sign of them, but all evidence of their existence was gone. Mice began to wonder if they were ever there in the first place. Doubts spread, time passed, and the ancient people were turned into myth. Many still wonder if they were just shadows of magic, created to fill in the empty space. If not then where did they go and what happened to them?

Sadly none can answer this question, so the missing mice will remain a mystery of faded times.
Characters.


http://i.imgur.com/eUgLquY.png
Name: Rin
Age: 24
Personality: Peaceful, tends to ramble on and on if people don't stop her, is always pointing out tiny details in everything that don't have any significance, always trying to stop fights, favorite thing to say is "Everybody has their faults, you just need to learn to accept them.", doesn't like being told about her faults.
Extra/other: Loves apples. A lot. Nearly obsessed. Nearly. Is a spiritual guide, strongest with teleportation.


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Name: Zensin
Age: 16
Personality: Is serious and careful, but also very curious so the careful and curious parts of his personality often clash making it hard for him to make decisions. He's very interested in mythology, legends, old fairy tales, similar sorts, and often studies them late into the night, writing what little clues to whatever mysteries he's researching in his magic scroll that always has enough paper for him to right on.
Extra/Other: Most shall remain a mystery until later in the story, but for now. Is brother to -name not yet decided-. One of the two main main characters.


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Name: Shimmer
Age: 15
Personality: Loud, shouts a lot, stubborn, get's ticked off easily, isn't very hasty about anything unless it's food or fighting. Even with all of that she strangely loves to read, mainly about myths and legends, fairy tales, everything like that. One of her favorite things to listen to and read about was the legend of the strange magical race that supposedly once walked the land of transformice.
Extra/other: Most shall remain a mystery until later in the story, but for now. Is sister to Zensin. One of the two main main characters.


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Name: Zaku
Age: 17
Personality: Mysterious, isn't fond of talking.
Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter: Zaku is a Shaman.
Extra:
Zaku is a young Shaman. She is 17 years old. She is afraid to talk because she doesn't want to reveal her hidden power. Because of her unknown power, she is a good fighter. Her family is dead, like most of the other Shamans. The left eye of Zaku is cursed. The night when her parents were killed, someone cursed her, so she has evil powers with her left eye. Her scarf is her only memorie from her parents...

Name:Uralra
Age:9
Personality:Very brave and protective of her loved ones, can be very childish (but can you blame her? She is nine after all) can be as kind as cool rain on a summer day.
Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter:Random
Extra:When she was a little girl, she was found by living statues of mice. They took her in and raised her, and in time she soon learned that she was able to control any statue and make it do what she willed. But out of love for her foster family she never uses her power unless her family was endanger. And even then she only uses "dead" statues.



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Name: Soren
Age: 17
Personality: Soren is usually pretty full of himself, he tends forget others have feelings too. He doesn't like to get too close to people as friends, last time he did he lost them and went through much pain. If he does get close to someone he is very sweet.
Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter: Awesome fighter
Extra: Soren is a sadist, this started when the person he was close to died, afterwards watching other people get hurt made him very happy. This makes him a great fighter because each time he hurts someone, he wants to do it again because he receives joy from it. A little strange but come on we all know that everybody loves a sadist.


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Name: Abyssa
Age: 16
Personality: Abyssa is a bright and open-minded mouse with slightly terrible humor. She's got a loud voice by nature but she Abyssa doesn't mind that. She'd put up with anything people throw at her, no matter how bad it is. Would often shout/mumble random things depending on the situation and often feels anger when others are sad.

Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter: hella awesome fighter yeeeeeah

Extra: Listens to upbeat music in free time and has a slight trouble getting through spaces because of her horns. The sun pendant is scorchingly hot on the outer layers but in the middle it's cold as ice.
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Character slots:
I still don't know how many I need but er well.

Shamans: 1/4

Random: 1/3

Normal: 0/1

Awesome fighter of some sort: 2/3
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Character form:

Also guys with the personality, please make it at least a sentence long.

Name:
Age:
Personality:
Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter:
Extra:

Ps: For the random people I might just make them have silly/random powers. Of course I'll ask about it first :P.

Please don't put powers like "Controls water and can read minds". I don't mind normal shaman powers, and I don't mind if they're particularly skilled with a sham power or two. But anything else just please no. I'll deal with powers. If you want your character to have some powers like that whisper me in game about it and we'll talk something out.

blewp~

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Yesssh Dis was made! I love the prolague!
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Storing all my chapters here. (Six in each flag!)
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Chapter one: A Discovery
Zensin was reading his latest fantasy book about some ancient lost spell when he heard a shout. Looking up, trying not to twitch his eye he scanned the surrounding area for the source. Of course what he saw was Shimmer running around with a wooden sword shouting insults at imaginary enemies.

"Would you shut up? I'm trying to read here." He said and Shimmer turned around to glare at him.

"Ok I like reading too but you need to learn to run around and have some fun every once in awhile you lazy butt." Shimmer crossed her arms and Zensin took a deep breath.

Standing up, he walked toward the right. Shimmer ran after him shouting "AND WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU'RE GOIN'?" Sighing Zensin looked over his shoulder at her.

"I'm going to have some fun."
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Zensin walked for about half an hour in the old forest that grew by his home, completely ignoring Shimmer who tried to follow him sneakily. But she was making so much noise that he had to grit his teeth and turn around tp face her.

"What the heck are you doing?" He asked and Shimmer shrugged.

"Sharing in the funnnn." She walked over some tree roots to get to him and put her arm around his shoulder. "Come on bro, you can't go off like that without expecting me to follow you. I'm predictable remember?" Zensin shrugged her arm off and continued walking. He had to admit, Shimmer was pretty predictable. -Why are sisters so annoying, is it just that they're naturally annoying or..- Zensin's thoughts were stopped by Shimmer's gasp.

"Hey hey Zen, this place feels weird. Like really weird, feeling sick here ok." Zensin reached out to catch her as she stumbled. He noticed that his breath had become ragged. What the cannon was happening!? Shimmer was now trying desperately to stay standing, but she had lean against him to keep upright.

After a few minutes the feeling passed although they both still felt weak and nausiated. Shimmer spun around, fists out and ready for a fight (she had a hard time because she kept stumbling over rocks and sticks).

"Okay who's punkass idea was this?! WHO THOUGHT IT WAS FUNNY TO PULL THIS PRANK HUH?! HUH?!" She shouted glaring at everything around them.

Zensin put a hand on her shoulder. "Hey calm down!" Shimmer shook his hand off.

"I can't, I'm pissed." Sighing, Zensin was about to explain to her that shouting at things that couldn't talk is a stupid thing to do when he felt it. A tug.

Something was, calling him, pulling him towards it. He looked at Shimmer in surprise and could tell by the look on her face that she was experiencing the same thing.

They turned, and followed the tug. Zensin lead the way while Shimmer trailed behind, they tripped a few times over some tangled tree roots.

Shimmer leaned against an old oak and scratched her head. "Gah why is this place so.. Tree-ish."

Zensin turned around. "Tree-ish? It's a forest Shimmer, the place is going to have trees." She grumbled following after him thinking -Pff.. Nerd.-

After awhile they came to a tiny clearing, and Zensin walked to the middle. The strange pull faded and Shimmer looked over her brother's shoulder.

"What the heck is that?"

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Chapter two: A choice.

Zensin shrugged, and knelt down. He reached out to grab a strange circular object that stuck out of the earth, but then stopped. -Should I be doing this? What if it's a trap and the vampire bats come out to get me. Then again bat's aren't real, they've been exctinct for over a hundred years. So I could take it out and examine it, but then again it might be something I'm not meant to see and- before he'd finished thinking Shimmer had already pulled the object from the dirt.

He jumped up and reached for it but she dodged. "What the hell are you doing!" Zensin shouted and made a grab for it again. "That thing could be dangerous!"

Shimmer stuck her tounge out at him. "Then why do you want it so badly?" Sighing, Zensin stopped trying to get the thing from her hands because he realized that it would be useless to use force or to try and explain the danger to her, she'd just ignore him. So instead he started trying to figure out what it was.

His sister had stopped running from him and now came up and sat down by him. She seemed, strangely quiet.

"Zen, I think I know what it is. Or who made it at least." Zensin looked down at her surprised.

He sat down and crossed his arms. "Well who then?" Shimmer looked down at the circle in her hands.

"That like, ancient mice race from all those fairy tales." She said.

Zensin laughed. "Are you serioues? I loved those stories too but that doesn't mean they exist." He stopped laughing, and started to realize that if this was part of that fabled mice race then it'd be the beginning of discovering what the heck happened to them!

However, before he could state this or before Shimmer could reply to his earlier comment the circle began to glow blue. Shimmer stared at it wide eyed and her brother darted over and put his paw on it. A sudden beam a light flashed into the sky and images poured through the siblings' minds.

An old path, a broken forest, a withered mountain, a shadowed valley, and a long span of land with almost nothing in it whatsoever. And then, the images stopped.

They dropped the circle and scooted away. "What the fk was that." Shimmer asked standing up.

"I think it was.. A map." Zensin said standing up and dusting himself off.

"A map? Really? A map to what?" She stepped forward and picked the circle up again. Zensin came over and hugged her.

"Thank you for picking it up. Because now we might just have the map to the greatest mystery of transformice history!" Shimmer gave him a 'what the heck are you talking about' look and he sighed.

"I think it gave us the map to the missing mice." He said and she smiled.

"Ooooh. What should we do with it? Try and get there or go home cause we're lazy? I don't mind the go home part or anything." Shimmer laughed and Zensin frowned. -Right, home. The annoying place with all those snot nosed kids and rude dorm "mothers". But it is the only place we can stay, if we go on this adventure who knows what might happen. But then again that place was almost always a living hell so cheese it I'm doing this-

"I'm going to follow the map. The way is practically implanted in my brain now so why not? Plus I don't want to go back to that good for nothing boarding school. Come on, let's go." He turned around and headed north. Shimmer followed behind.

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>tries to make a banner
>fails

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Fanart goes here!


http://i.imgur.com/T9JT1sb.jpg
(amazing banner made by Erikadeedee!
Boop fanarts

Abyssa by Sirusthemice.
Soren "Don't look at me" by Sohotomi
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I think it will be a good story

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OMG I LOVE YOUR FANFICTIONS ENGLISH PEOPLE! ;U; <3

Oh... I want to be in... but I'll be like in all the fanfiction of the english fanart...
ANYWAY! If ya need me, just tell me, Zaku will be in The Mystery of Faded Times.
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Ima req :o
iurb This will be amazzzing
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Smithzaza a dit :
I think it will be a good story
Oh... I want to be in... but I'll be like in all the fanfiction of the english fanart...
ANYWAY! If ya need me, just tell me, Zaku will be in The Mystery of Faded Times.

You can join in if you want :D and thank you!

Cuitdashie a dit :
Ima req :o
iurb This will be amazzzing

Yay and thank you! :D
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Okay I really want to join...But for now I can't do a good presentation.. xD

Name: Zaku
Age: 17
Personality: Mysterious, does not talk a lot.
Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter: Zaku is a Shaman.
Extra:

Zaku is a young Shaman. She is 17 years old. She doesn't talk a lot because she wants to hide that she has mysterious powers. Because her powers were hiden, she is a good fighter. All her family is dead, like the others Shamans. The left eye of Zaku is cursed. The night when her parents were killed, someone cursed her, so she has evil powers with her left eye. Her scarf is her only memorie from her parents...

Ref:
http://i.imgur.com/wdVmABc.png
If something is not okay, tell me ^^ I'm a little bit tired and my ideas are like:
YO I'M AN APPLE AND YOU ARE AN APPARTEMENT.
Yaknow, when you don't sleep...
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Ok she seems pretty interesting! I love working with the mysterious types of characters. But I'd like to discuss the mysterious power thingy real quick cause I want to ask if you like the idea I have for that.

Although the shamans have families, :P not all of them are familyless. Although a good portion of them are.
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Beautyiscool a dit :
Ok she seems pretty interesting! I love working with the mysterious types of characters. But I'd like to discuss the mysterious power thingy real quick cause I want to ask if you like the idea I have for that.

Although the shamans have families, :P not all of them are familyless. Although a good portion of them are.

Yes I know that some are not, but I'm french and I don't know how to say a lot of things xD
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Smithzaza a dit :
Yes I know that some are not, but I'm french and I don't know how to say a lot of things xD

Ah I see xD sorry I forgot.
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Yes u wont like this, nope, but i luv it, cuz like, stachus thjat move are amazing
Name:Uralra
Age:9
Personality:Brave,childish,kind
Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter:Random
Extra:When she was a little girl she was raised by stachus of mice.She soon later got the powers to contorl them, she dosent is overprotectiv.
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Yeah im bad at this
Beau knew i was probly ganna put that XD Im adicted to weeping angels.So if this is to much, tell me, Beau, this story will be BEAUtufful:3&lt;3
Wow that was spelled wrong, sowwy.
Ill post
ref' in a min.
dont ask wat that name is
i jsut splaterd leters
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Well all I ask is a little more on the personality and maybe we could discuss the power thingy.

Remember guys if you want your character to have a power like that please come and chat with me on tfm or cfm about it, I'll work it out with you.

Also I will try to get the first chapter done today :P
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Beautyiscool a dit :
Well all I ask is a little more on the personality and maybe we could discuss the power thingy.

Remember guys if you want your character to have a power like that please come and chat with me on tfm or cfm about it, I'll work it out with you.

Also I will try to get the first chapter done today :P

Oh, yay ^^ ! I'll will wait ;)
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Loved the prologue, can't wait for the first chapter
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Thanks and sorry guys I had a lot of stuff to do so I'm not sure if I'll be able to finish the chapter today. I'm just going to post a teaser instead.

(Warning: I might edit this a bit when I work more on the chapter)

Teaser
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Zensin was reading his latest fantasy book about some ancient lost spell when he heard a shout. Looking up, trying not to twitch his eye he scanned the surrounding area for the source. Of course what he saw was Shimmer running around with a wooden sword shouting insults at imaginary enemies.

"Would you shut up? I'm trying to read here." He said and Shimmer turned around to glare at him.

"Ok I like reading too but you need to learn to run around and have some fun every once in awhile you lazy butt." Shimmer crossed her arms and Zensin sighed.

Standing up, he walked toward the right. Shimmer ran after him shouting "AND WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU'RE GOIN'?" Sighing once again Zensin turned around.

"I'm going to have some fun."
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Not written very well sorry.
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Beautyiscool a dit :
Holy flippers that's amazing! :D Thank you! Would it be alright if I used it for the fanart comment? (if there ever happens to be any fanart)

whoa you like it?
and yeah, sure! it was just something i tried to make but yeah
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Last sentence of the prolougue is my fav
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Amazing *clap clap*
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