It sounds already so far good.
Good luck!

Xariio a dit :

It sounds already so far good.
Good luck!

Thanks ^^

Fudge yes.

This sounds amazing.

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Name: Dakota *Nobody but Dakota knows her last name*
REF:

Personality: (If i'm not allowed to have an "element" then don't add it in the story! c';) Dakota is the only person in the world with three elements. She has air, water and blood-bending. She has anger issues and almost never uses her blood-bending. She's quiet and rebellion. She does what she wants and never lets other people "lead" her. She finds her own way to places, finds her ways to get what she wants and will hurt just about anybody but her trusty friend, Jose (Ho-say). Jose is more like a pet though. He's a very, very small mouse and does anything Dakota commands him to. But Dakota never commands him to kill anyone but their enemies.

Nekoava a dit :

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Name: Dakota *Nobody but Dakota knows her last name*
REF:
Personality: (If i'm not allowed to have an "element" then don't add it in the story! c';) Dakota is the only person in the world with three elements. She has air, water and blood-bending. She has anger issues and almost never uses her blood-bending. She's quiet and rebellion. She does what she wants and never lets other people "lead" her. She finds her own way to places, finds her ways to get what she wants and will hurt just about anybody but her trusty friend, Jose (Ho-say). Jose is more like a pet though. He's a very, very small mouse and does anything Dakota commands him to. But Dakota never commands him to kill anyone but their enemies.

Wow, great idea about the elements! I'll be adding that to the chapter. ^^ And I added your character.

Note that "Mouse" is a character that you'll see in the next chapter.

I'll be adding the main character, the young boy in the story, later. His name is Rick.

Chapter 1 :
Mouse : Ugh, I'm so hungry. Hey, Rick, Is it fine if I eat another Fluffernutter-in-a-Jar?
Rick : You already had three jars! You're growing fat, man. That thing you call food has 500 calories. Dakota, you have anything to say?
Dakota : ...
Rick : I guess not. But stop eating those jars of Fluffernutter!
Mouse : Fine. But the plan..
Rick : What plan?
Mouse : Remember about that Demon Keeper?
Rick : Oh yeah. Our plan to escape. I'll tell it to Dakota and Jose. (Tells him and her the plan)
(Dakota mumbles something about escaping herself when Rick is gone)
Mouse : But the guards are at our door. There's a hundred guards out there blocking all the doors in the village.
Rick : We can use the back door.
Mouse : It's blocked too.
Rick : Then the window?
Mouse : There's no windows that aren't visible to the guards outside.
Rick : There's always a catch.. Hey, I got a better idea! Remember that slope on our neighbor's house?
Mouse : Yeah? Why?
Rick : We can use that slope to escape. (Yells outloud) OKAY EVERYBODY! THE NEW PLAN; WE GET IN OUR ATTIC AND PUT SOME BOXES TO HOLD OUR LADDER IN THE ATTIC UP! THEN WE'LL OPEN THE DOOR ON THE ROOF AND GET OUT. THEN WE'LL TRY JUMPING TO OUR NEIGHBOR'S ROOF AND SLIDE DOWN HIS SLOPE TO THE FENCE THAT BLOCKS US FROM THE GUARD'S VIEW.
Mouse : You just made me DEAF for a minute. I'm right next to you, idiot.
Rick : Sorry. Okay, everybody gather in the attic and follow my plan.
(Mouse narrows eyes at Rick)
Mouse : Isn't the part where we jump off our roof to our neighbor's roof sound dangerous?
Rick : Shut up and let's go.
(Dakota thinks to herself)
Dakota : I won't follow HIS plan.. I'll find my own way and won't care getting risked to get caught by the guards and brung to the Demon Keeper. I'm the strongest out of all of those fools. (Laughs quietly while following the group)

Chapter 2 is coming next. :)

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Niceee...

Swirlfire a dit :

Note that "Mouse" is a character that you'll see in the next chapter.

I'll be adding the main character, the young boy in the story, later. His name is Rick.

Chapter 1 :
Mouse : Ugh, I'm so hungry. Hey, Rick, Is it fine if I eat another Fluffernutter-in-a-Jar?
Rick : You already had three jars! You're growing fat, man. That thing you call food has 500 calories. Dakota, you have anything to say?
Dakota : ...
Rick : I guess not. But stop eating those jars of Fluffernutter!
Mouse : Fine. But the plan..
Rick : What plan?
Mouse : Remember about that Demon Keeper?
Rick : Oh yeah. Our plan to escape. I'll tell it to Dakota and Jose. (Tells him and her the plan)
(Dakota mumbles something about escaping herself when Rick is gone)
Mouse : But the guards are at our door. There's a hundred guards out there blocking all the doors in the village.
Rick : We can use the back door.
Mouse : It's blocked too.
Rick : Then the window?
Mouse : There's no windows that aren't visible to the guards outside.
Rick : There's always a catch.. Hey, I got a better idea! Remember that slope on our neighbor's house?
Mouse : Yeah? Why?
Rick : We can use that slope to escape. (Yells outloud) OKAY EVERYBODY! THE NEW PLAN; WE GET IN OUR ATTIC AND PUT SOME BOXES TO HOLD OUR LADDER IN THE ATTIC UP! THEN WE'LL OPEN THE DOOR ON THE ROOF AND GET OUT. THEN WE'LL TRY JUMPING TO OUR NEIGHBOR'S ROOF AND SLIDE DOWN HIS SLOPE TO THE FENCE THAT BLOCKS US FROM THE GUARD'S VIEW.
Mouse : You just made me DEAF for a minute. I'm right next to you, idiot.
Rick : Sorry. Okay, everybody gather in the attic and follow my plan.
(Mouse narrows eyes at Rick)
Mouse : Isn't the part where we jump off our roof to our neighbor's roof sound dangerous?
Rick : Shut up and let's go.
(Dakota thinks to herself)
Dakota : I won't follow HIS plan.. I'll find my own way and won't care getting risked to get caught by the guards and brung to the Demon Keeper. I'm the strongest out of all of those fools. (Laughs quietly while following the group)

Chapter 2 is coming next. :)

Lol i'm so quiet LIKA BAWS.