[Fanfic] What lies beyond |
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Hi, this is a fanfiction on which I created on half of my beliefs of what happnes when you log off of Transformice! ![]() **characters are needed, so if you would like to sign up, please don't hesitate! Join Bird she venures through the three kindoms.. Heres what you'll need to be a character! Plus, I don't perfer dieing; but I can't promise all good parts! name (can be made up): sex (female/male) tell me a bit about yourself: mouse picture: bio: Okay, I'm not a spoiler but-- this is the main plot.. All for now! Lets begin! Hi, im Bird.. this is what happns when you log off~ ~**DAY ONE**~ I slowly let my feet sink through the ground.. For I was new to Transformice; but before I could finish; I was sent to a fall.. If you were there; you'd think id was death, yet to my happiness, a trampoline greeted me.. I looked around.. there was alot to see! There was a dome.. See through, and peaceful; many mice romaning on its pure sand beaches. I also saw; far away in the distance, another small area. A normal amount of mice were there; spawning objects. Greeting them, a kind female pink shaman.. I decided I needed to look around before running to other places! I loked around; and to my depair, I saw many, naked, greiving mice.. I also saw hige machines in the distance.. Greeted by a blue shaman.. the shaman happily ate cheese.. While these mice seemed to be straped to a machine, running in endless circles.. Then I heard a squeak in agony, turning around to look, it was hard to see, but the blue shaman was WHIPPING this poor mouse! I gasped and covered my mouth--- When it was nightime, we had to sleep on maps outside.. It rained tonight, causing my fur and the mat to get wet.. What is this place? NOTE: this is when you START transformice, you soon will figure out about the other areas.. For now, theres nothing you need to know! |
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how2signup2becharacter? ;3 |
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Worshishire a dit : name (can be made up): sex (female/male) tell me a bit about yourself: mouse picture: bio: I forgot to post that on le fourms >-<' |
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Birdluv a dit : thank youu~ name (can be made up): Natalia sex (female/male): Female tell me a bit about yourself: freaking amazing, loves to venture, is very wild, doesn't care for really anything. mouse picture: ![]() bio: well um natalia, shes kind of complicated. she's living with her friends, her fur should be like reddish. she loves going about, has a lot of friends that she hangs out with, and does everything her way. |
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Worshishire a dit : I'll put you in the next chapter~ |
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~**DAY TWO- the agony begins**~ Dew dotted the plants and mice.. And.. -the mats..- I gulped as the myserious shaman from yesterdat came by; looking serious.. the sham came over to my spot and grabbed me by the ear- it hurt! The sham threw me like garbage onto the machine's floor.. I was panting, trying to catch up with my breath.. just then, medal bars gribbed around my chest; Blood trickled out of the sides, I also was having trouble breathing.. Just then I saw it, all the mice.. Pain, agony.. I let out a loud sigh.. This was tourtre.. Why can't I just go to the other kindoms? But, what if they were worse? I heard a scream, but not in pain.. Yet triumph.. I saw about 7 mice, all net to the sham, but one.. her eyes shone right in the shams eyes; fearless.. I wish I could be like that! I saw as the mouse and others aproached me.. Was she going to harm me? I wondered silently.. But all she did was unlock the chains from my body.. she looked at my bruises with a sad expression od symphany.. hey, she said.. Lets get out of here.. the glow of the sun was just rising.. "Ready?" she asked.. I thoguht about this.. "where are we going?" I asked.. "the kingdom of shamming and peace, the oppisite fo this trubbish kingdom.." she replied. "So?" I had to do the right thing.. "Yes, also. I didnt catch you're name.. "Natalia." she said "Yours?" Bird.. as we walked off.. |
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when a different character speaks you have to break lines otherwise it makes no sense like it took me four minutes to figure out who the hell was speaking and who was natalia "Ready?" she asked.. I thoguht about this.. "where are we going?" I asked.. "the kingdom of shamming and peace, the oppisite fo this trubbish kingdom.." she replied. like this otherwise it's sounding nice o/ |
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~**DAY THREE**~ The moon rose above the tree tops greeted us as we reached the kingdom. Natildia by my side.. Nothing could go wrong.. She told me more about the kingdom, how you sham, and graduate when youo reach 1,000 saves. Then, Natalia told me once you graduate, you are welcomed into a place, not far from heaven. Beautiful sand beaches and homes, to live by yourself until the grave. Natalia: We are nearing the kingdom, Ready? she asked again. The first time we met, I could tell we were going to be great friends, and to my therory, I was correct. Just then we entered the kingdom, I could see the shams, all blue, practicng spawing objects. The most beautiful women I've even seen was along their side, a clipboard in her paws.. Natalia pointed her out and said she was the princess on this kingdom, strong and fair. Then, the cabins flashed before my eyes, 10 of them too, labled with numbers, 1-10. It seemed as it was set up to be more fancier the higher you get. Streamers hung by the door of room 10.. Below, in big bold letters it said: "1000".. My goal, I said silently. I began to walk to cabin "1000," but Natalia stopped me. She said you need to work in order to reach that goal, and then pointed to my cabbin. Room one. My muzzle curled up in a discusted growl. "Why here?" I snapped, not meaning to, of course. She looked a bit mad, but she replied calmly, everyone needs to start somewhere! Plus, you'll get to 1,000 soon enough, she added. The moon shone, Realizing I was tired, slowly walked to my bed. Not too bad, for 0 saves, I said tryinig to be greatful. Natalia agreed, sitting on the bed, but I was glad the beds were bunkbed. I called the top, while she just smiled. I curled up feeling more then confortable. After a year, I get a good sleep with a roof. I thought as I slipped into sleep.. I was getting... tired.. Bird then fell asleep, a smile on her face. ~** STAY TUNED FOR MORE**~ |
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Birdluv a dit : Like the story so far! :3 |
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Birdluv a dit : i just started last week |
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Shawtysoda a dit : No worries, this is a fanfiction, meaning completly fiction (untrue), and made up by the authors perspective of mind, mine this way. And shard, that means alot coming from you; because you inspired me to make this! I mean the thread, I made up this story in my mind, and I'd think about it alot.. Like my very own story being told through to me from my head. So, I basically am putting it into words, even though it was pictures, in a story. That is exactly why chapters are coming out every second e-e.. I still doodle in my notebook with the two shams fighting.. You know, in double sham fights. (how I made the kingdoms) SO, basically the two don't get along, each having a kingdom of their own. One causing evil and horror, the other one a peaceful atmosphere.. Then we will get to the dome laterr eue |
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Also, I'm doing a art contest for my thread: ![]() or those who can't read what you will win: A mouse account with 1,000 cheese OR saves, only one! (still in the works) You're picture will be on front of the banner! |
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Birdluv a dit : I can't even find your thread XD |
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Birdluv a dit : D'awww <3 |
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Birdluv a dit : Omg, that mouse looks awesome! Also I would love to join. Ejaffa a dit : ^ |
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I have alot of threads, but the contest is for this one, so maybe draw the two shams? I'm unsure, but put you're best and be creative!~ I have alot of homework, But the new chapter will come! Kart, I'm glad you like the artwork, and if you're interested in being in the story, please use the info on the front page to sign up! c; |
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Birdluv a dit : how are you going to the give us Cheese and Saves??? Also you can't make a contest without permission from a sent. |
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Birdluv a dit : Oh, then alright. c: (could I just make it up?) |
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Kartwork a dit : Sure! |
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woopwoop name (can be made up): Pepika sex (female/male): Oh, uhm, I guess Male since I don't really consider myself any gender. tell me a bit about yourself: Eh, I am like, crazy, messed up, just... weird... Protective, loyal, generous, uhm, hm... I just love to be weird. mouse picture: ![]() bio: Pepika is a, weird boy who acts very awkward. Hes not what you would call 'normal' or anything near normal. When he makes friends he tends to stay by them unless they tell him face to face they don't want him tagging along. |