The sequel of The Humice ( Topic-623630 ) is finally here!



(credit to Mandymuis)
~~~Synopsis~~~

The Unimux region once was a peaceful place until the evil witch called Selina came. She gave all the bad luck to the citizens of Unimux. But one day she died and her spirit wandered around the region, bringing fear to everyone. The spirit arrives to the Lillian region to haunt it off. A crew of 6 brave mice came to save the region from evil hauntings, because Lillian region isn't safe to anything, no matter what.

~~~Characters~~~

Name: Lillithia
Age (human years): 14
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Personality: Always brave to do things, even if they are hard or even impossible to do. She's very friendly and helpful even in very hopeless situations.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Warrior
Special abilities: Super speed, power to fly and walk through walls

Name: Foxie J (Belongs to Ejaffa)
Age (human years): 17
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Personality: Very adventurous but not very bright when it comes to common sense, often runs into a fight without thinking, great at fighting tactics and always has her next move planned.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Scout
Special abilities: Super speed, flying and phsycokenesis
(will explain what phsycokenesis is in a minute)

Name: Renisha (Reh-Nee-Shah) (Belongs to Kayleekitti)
Age (human years): 16
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Personality: She's usually pretty stubborn and has a lot of common sense, she'd rather stay out of the way of nonsense where ever it's occuring, but she's also a kind mouse in general.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Scout
Special abilities: Makes herself dissappear at any will.
Her hair color also changes depending on her mood.

Name: Shard (Belongs to Shardpixel)
Age (human years): 27
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Personality: Dark and mysterious, Shard is one to stay in the shadows. He doesn't normally go out much and seees the world with a very dark mind. However, he has his moments when speaking inspirationally.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Warrior
Special abilities: Super speed, can blend in the shadows easily. (Very good fighter with dat blade of his ;3)

Name: Hailey (Belongs to Iwuvcheesed)
Age (human years): 18
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Personality: Rather intelligent, thoughtful and sweet, but can get annoyed quickly and hates "stupid people." Rumors say she has a dark side on activated when she is extremely mad.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Magician
Special abilities: Ability to fly, can lift a chunk of earth from the ground, can grow grass so it's thick and can trap peoples arms and legs around it ^^"

Name: Noell (Belongs to Sirusthemice)
Age (human years): 19
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Personality: slightly tomboyish, mostly optimistic yet daring. Almost never gets sad, though can be dangerous if pissed off. Forgives quickly.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: magician
Special abilities: enchanting stuff and if possible placing minor curses

Name: Foxie J
Age (human years): 17
Reference:

Personality: Very adventurous but not very bright when it comes to common sense, often runs into a fight without thinking, great at fighting tactics and always has her next move planned.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Scout
Special abilities: Super speed, flying and phsycokenesis
(will explain what phsycokenesis is in a minute)

Name: Renisha (Reh-Nee-Shah)
Age (human years): 16
Reference:

Personality: She's usually pretty stubborn and has a lot of common sense, she'd rather stay out of the way of nonsense where ever it's occurring, but she's also a kind mouse in general.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Scout ('Cause why not)
Special abilities: Makes herself disappear at any will.
Her hair color also changes depending on her mood.
(Red = Angry
Orange = Happy
Yellow = Cheerful
Green = Has something on her mind
Turquoise = Confused
Black = Aloof
Pink = Default)
^ Just a little something about my mouse, it's optional, eheh...

Had to do this. Just had to.

Name: Shard
Age (human years): 27
Reference:

Personality: Dark and mysterious, Shard is one to stay in the shadows. He doesn't normally go out much and seees the world with a very dark mind. However, he has his moments when speaking inspirationally.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Warrior
Special abilities: Super speed, can blend in the shadows easily. (Very good fighter with dat blade of his ;3)

Yeah, excited for this new fanfic \o3o/ I wonder what I have inspired others to do.

this is interestingg
i like it
Name: Hailey
Age (human years): 18
Reference:


(the bamboo is her wand and the leaves are sparkles *^*)
Personality: Rather intelligent, thoughtful and sweet, but can get annoyed quickly and hates "stupid people." Rumors say she has a dark side on activated when she is extremely mad.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Magician
Special abilities: Ability to fly, can lift a chunk of earth from the ground, can grow grass so it's thick and can trap peoples arms and legs around it ^^"

i like this.

Name: Noell
Age (human years): 19
Reference:

(loose fitting scarf -v-)
Personality: slightly tomboyish, mostly optimistic yet daring. Almost never gets sad, though can be dangerous if pissed off. Forgives quickly.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: magician
Special abilities: enchanting stuff and if possible placing minor curses

Okay, all the slots are closed for now.
P.S I am too lazy to edit my OP with new characters... STUPID TABLET!

Anniebuscus a dit :

Okay, all the slots are closed for now.
P.S I am too lazy to edit my OP with new characters... STUPID TABLET!

UGH. OF COURSE SHARD IS STILL THE ONLY DUDE.

(Wait- are the old characters still in it...? You wrote 6 in the OP...)

Shardpixel a dit :

UGH. OF COURSE SHARD IS STILL THE ONLY DUDE.

(Wait- are the old characters still in it...? You wrote 6 in the OP...)

Yep. Since my tablet is fricking small, I have trouble putting all these characters in the OP. Ok, I'll edit it with my laptop.

Name: Niess
Age (human years):15
Personality: Very obnoxious, not who you would think she would be. Can be kind if she wanted to be, but rather be harrasing strangers, like hitting people until they bruise with her spiky sun tail, but is loving to her friends and family.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Warrior
Special abilities: Being very strong, fighting well, good at sports, yet rumor has it she can go through time if her pupils get small enough.
Likes: She love the strawberry-peach-mango popsicle mix. She also is a fan of rock bands, and her favorite normal food is green apple oatmeal. She despises drawing, and wishes to be a baseball athlete one day.

Wingedmousie a dit :

Name: Niess
Age (human years):15
Personality: Very obnoxious, not who you would think she would be. Can be kind if she wanted to be, but rather be harrasing strangers, like hitting people until they bruise with her spiky sun tail, but is loving to her friends and family.
Scout/Warrior/Magician: Warrior
Special abilities: Being very strong, fighting well, good at sports, yet rumor has it she can go through time if her pupils get small enough.
Likes: She love the strawberry-peach-mango popsicle mix. She also is a fan of rock bands, and her favorite normal food is green apple oatmeal. She despises drawing, and wishes to be a baseball athlete one day.

I'm sorry, slots are closed.

Crap, i typed this 2 hours ago but was playing. Sorry...

Chapter 1: Unexpected Allies

Lillithia was just a humouse that hunted the dark spirits, that might possess the humice. At first the radioactive wave, now a spirit infestation...
All of sudden, another humouse appeared out of nowhere. "It's a spirit..." Lillithia prepared her paws, because she was a warrior that was nicknamed "The Godly Paw".
"Heey, what's with the uneasy and weird welcoming?" It didn't look like a kind of a friendly humouse. But that's who she was. "I'm Foxie J," said the humouse. "but you can call me Foxie. My friend Renisha is new to the Lillian region, can you show everything around?"
"O-okay. I just thought you're a spirit," stammered Lillithia.
"Don't worry, I won't hurt you," said Foxie nicely, "I'm hunting the dark spirits and Selina's spirit too." Then Foxie said something to Renisha. "So this is the famous Shaman School. I've heard my old friend was a teacher in this school."
"That's great," said Renisha, while her hair was slowly turning green, "but how about let's go find more allies? We can't stop the spirits alone, we are just plain scouts ans she's a warrior. We need at least one magician to make our party a bit different."

Anniebuscus a dit :

Chapter 1: Unexpected Allies

Lillithia was just a humouse that hunted the dark spirits, that might possess the humice. At first the radioactive wave, now a spirit infestation...
All of sudden, another humouse appeared out of nowhere. "It's a spirit..." Lillithia prepared her paws, because she was a warrior that was nickamed "The Godly Paw".
"Heey, what's with the uneasy and weird welcoming?" It didn't look like a kind of a friendly humouse. But that's who she was. "I'm Foxie J," said the humouse. "but you can call me Foxie. My friend Renisha is new to the Lillian region, can you show everything around?"
"O-okay. I just thought you're a spirit," stammered Lillithia.
"Don't worry, I won't hurt you," said Foxie nicely, "I'm hunting the dark spirits and Selina's spirit too." Then Foxie said something to Renisha. "So this is the famous Shaman School. I've heard my old friend was a teacher in this school."
"That's great," said Renisha, while her hair was slowly turning green, "but how about let's go find more allies? We can't stop the spirits alone, we are just plain scouts ans she's a warrior. We need at least one magician to make our party a bit different."

Can't wait for more c:

poo im late:C i was gonna post my ref but i was busy.

Nice fanfic so far!
Can't wait 'til Chapter 2~!

Chapter 2: More allies? You got it!

Suddenly, the 3 humice felt like floating. The ground flew up! "W-what's going on? Aah! F-Foxie, hold me!" Renisha stammered with fear, while her hair turned turquoise. Luckily, the ground fell back and no one got hurt. Lillithia and Foxie J noticed 3 more humice. One had a shiny black fur, a sharp knife and horns.. He kind of looked like a demon.He sees the world in a different way. But he was nice enough to help hunt down spirits and restore peace in the Lillian region. "I'm Shard."
The second one apparently had a bamboo wand with leaf sparkles. "I was the one who made the ground fly up. And who are you?"
Foxie J introduced her friends to the new allies. "I'm Foxie J, this is Lillithia and Renisha."
But the third... well, I could tell you that she's a priestess and an enchanter. Why? She can enchant stuff and put minor curses.
"By the way, I'm Hailey, and this is Noell." Hailey introduced herself and the other magician to the humice. "Let's go slay some spirits, shall we?" Shard said.
"Oh and Noell, please enchant my knife."
"How about a bit later?" exclaimed Noell, "You look like a demon, I should put a curse."
"Oh come on, I'm being nice!"
So, all the brave humice went to the adventure.

Anniebuscus a dit :

Chapter 2: More allies? You got it!

Suddenly, the 3 humice felt like floating. The ground flew up! "W-what's going on? Aah! F-Foxie, hold me!" Renisha stammered with fear, while her hair turned turquoise. Luckily, the ground fell back and no one got hurt. Lillithia and Foxie J noticed 3 more humice. One had a shiny black fur, a sharp knife and horns.. He kind of looked like a demon.He sees the world in a different way. But he was nice enough to help hunt down spirits and restore peace in the Lillian region. "I'm Shard."
The second one apparently had a bamboo wand with leaf sparkles. "I was the one who made the ground fly up. And who are you?"
Foxie J introduced her friends to the new allies. "I'm Foxie J, this is Lillithia and Renisha."
But the third... well, I could tell you that she's a priestess and an enchanter. Why? She can enchant stuff and put minor curses.
"By the way, I'm Hailey, and this is Noell." Hailey introduced herself and the other magician to the humice. "Let's go slay some spirits, shall we?" Shard said.
"Oh and Noell, please enchant my knife."
"How about a bit later?" exclaimed Noell, "You look like a demon, I should put a curse."
"Oh come on, I'm being nice!"
So, all the brave humice went to the adventure.

Totally sounding badass -w-

Great chapter c:

I'm excited for moreee x3

Chapter 3: Shaman School Under Attack

Everyone heard screams and calling for help. "It's the Shaman School! We must save it!"
Shard cried out and broke the entrance door. Meanwhile, Foxie J gave orders to the rest.
"Okay, listen up, mates! Lilli, just go inside and fight the spirits. Noell, enchant my gun, please. Hailey, elevate to the top of the school using your powers."
Lillithia gazed in the school with the speed of light.
"Thanks, Noell." said Foxie. "Now to break in through the window."
Foxie shot holes to break the whole window.
"30 down, 20 to go, no wonder they call me the god paw." said Lillithia.
Hailey broke a part of the roof to get in the school. Later all the attic was full of grass traps. "Here goes nothing!" happily said Hailey and climbed down the ladder. "There we go. All the possessed students are dead." said Lillithia.
"But who's going to revive them?" asked Shard.
"Hey, demon humouse. Gimme your knife, I'll enchant it with holy powers." said Noell and took Shard's knife.
Noell enchanted the knife, then Shard stabbed all the dead students and they were successfully revived.
"Hey guys, you need to get out as fast as possible, before the principal sees you!" shouted Renisha from outside.

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then Shard stabbed all the dead students

THIS PHRASE.

I laughed so hard.

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Anyhow, it's an amazing and intense story. Keep it up! c: