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Today I'll start a new fanfiction called - Daddy I'm scared. This is a creepy fanfiction.
Meet up the characters! Click on flag 2
Be a character! Click the flag 3
Wondering about anything? Ask me! Click the flag 4
More information ! Click on flag 5
First chapter :o ! Click on flag 6

Character slots : 4/4

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Name : Piry-O
Age : 15
About : Wishes to be a pirate. Her mom used to be one , but she died on a ship. She loves to add extra letters to words. Piry-O has a parrot called Pely-E. This adventurous girl is always looking for pirates.

http://i.imgur.com/vAqwNZq.png
Name : Shard
Age : 27
Gender : Male
About : Shard has a dark and twisted mind. He enjoys remaining in the shadows and normally stays inside, away from the world. When his mind is set on an enemy, however, he almsot always catches who he's looking for. His fighting skills are rarely matched.


http://i.imgur.com/SIic9Ra.png
Name: Morphanie
Age: 12
Gender : Female
About: Morphanie is a really unique mouse. Her original name was Melanie but she changed it to Morphanie because he can morph into a shadow. She is capable of strangling one in meer seconds and getting away with it easily. She is also known as a ninja like child. She turns into a shadow and strangles people when they least expect it.


http://i.imgur.com/N2zNu6n.png
Name : Swirl
Age : 15
Gender : Female
About : Swirl tends to be rather silent, and when ever she "feels" something approaching, she gets aggressive. She has a blindfold on for some reason, and nobody knows why. Only she knows. She can still see. She's not protective over anything. She's rather creepy, and smiles rarely because no one wants to see it. Swirl likes the shadows and dark, and is known to be nocturnal. She hates the daylight.

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Q :What kind of fanfic is this?
A : A creepy fanfic.
Q : Who inspired you to do this?
A : One creepy movie with Samara Morgan
Q : Who will the mice search for?
A : That's a secret.
Chapter 1 :
HELP ME
Piry-O went outsite. She got some deep breath. Leaves was ''walking'' on the grass... And then she found a weird paper.. It wasn't a normal paper...
''Aye , what's there-y? Better check-ey!'' she ran fast to it.
It was a.. MAP?! It was really.. old. She picked it up. Piry-O knew all the places in her world. Uhh , but the red cross (which are on maps) was on her house. She checked the other side of the map . There was something wroten .
''Blah blah , such long name-ey.. OMG WHAT-O?! THE ARMY OF SOULS-Y - KILLS PIRY-O ?! WHAT-Y?!'' Piry-O threw the paper on the ground. She ran away home , all crying. Piraty girl knew who's the army of souls. It is the most popular army in the land of Friw. The army of souls is in the part of Goocreep. That evil army killed her parents. Drowned the mom in the ship , and with the dad.. THEY MADE HIM A MERMAID! He drowned too. She needed help on how to survive those evils.. Piry-O is too young to die! Well , she went to the land's Friw part called Poil. There was her friends , who could help. She knocked one friend's door. It wont open.
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This sounds amazing. Gotta love creepy.

Creepy needs evil. Permission to provide evil? ;3


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Name : Shard
Age : 27
About : Shard has a dark and twisted mind. He enjoys remaining in the shadows and normally stays inside, away from the world. When his mind is set on an enemy, however, he almsot always catches who he's looking for. His fighting skills are rarely matched.

Because Shard hates the world just that much.

You don't have to use this character. But have fun.

I'm looking forward to this fanfic.
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Ok I'm adding dis. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
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Gabreyolo a dit :
Ok I'm adding dis. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

*Totally not screeching YEESSSSSSS in the background*

vv Okay .n.
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Staph it. DONT HOLD SECRETS FROM ME
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Name: Cream

Age: 17

About: Keeps her pet chicken on her head and knows kung fu. She is also quite a loving figure that will go through anything to save her friends, even if that thing could kill her. She can be quite protective at times, also her chicken can fly long distances to get help, food, ect. (It's a very special chicken).
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Name: Morphanie
Age: 12
About: Morphanie is a really unique mouse. Her original name was Melanie but she changed it to Morphanie because he can morph into a shadow. She is capable of strangling one in meer seconds and getting away with it easily. She is also known as a ninja like child. She turns into a shadow and strangles people when they least expect it.

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Chapter 2 :
The Deep Soul

Cream's door wasn't opening. Piry-O started screaming .
''OPEN-O THE DOOR-Y , I HAVE TO SAY SOMETHING-E!'' she started punching the door.
''Wait please , I am feeding my chicken!'' Cream said ''Can you please eat this? Uhh! Please , only because I love you!'' She started actually arguing with the chicken.
When Cream opened the door , Piry-O understood that she feed her.
''How can I help?'' Cream asked.
''THE ARMY-O OF SOULS-Y WANTS TO TAKE MY SOUL-E! You gotta help-ey me-o!'' Piry-O started kissing Cream's legs.
''Of course I'll help! Let's get the others!''
Two friends sightly went to Shard's house. Since Shard has a dark mind. He wants to be alone.. That's why the road to his house was black.. Cream went first , to protect Piry-O from any souls with her KUNG FU skills. Both of them didn't speaked in the road.
''Here's the house-o! Knock the door-y!'' piraty Piry-O ran behind Cream's back.
Cream knocked the door . Shard didn't wanted to open it. They knew he was home..
''OPEN THE DOOR-EY RIGHT NOW OR I'LL PUNCH-O YOUR HORNS-U SO HARD , THAT YOU-EY WILL SCREAM TROUGH THE LAND-E OF FRIW!'' Piry-O started getting kinda mad.
''Don't be so mad at him! He just doesn't want to let people by him.. Maybe he is in his world.. You have to WAIT!'' Cream calmed Piry-O.
Well , that's magic or not , but Shard opened the door.
''What do you want.'' he sightly said.
''The Army of souls-ey wants to take my soul! Like-o for my mom..and...dad-o..'' Piry's-O eyes started filling with tears.
''Why you didn't told me before? And how do you even know?'' Shard putted his sword on the ground .
''I don't really think she wants to tell.. Let's not rush her with those things.'' Cream hugged Shard.
Shard hugged her too. Piry-O turned around and she saw...

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Gabreyolo a dit :

Overhyped Shard a dit :
Badass yet not badass. Sounds about right.

I like the story, I'm hoping to read more c:
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Wingedmousie a dit :
Name: Morphanie
Age: 12
About: Morphanie is a really unique mouse. Her original name was Melanie but she changed it to Morphanie because he can morph into a shadow. She is capable of strangling one in meer seconds and getting away with it easily. She is also known as a ninja like child. She turns into a shadow and strangles people when they least expect it.

slight typo haha
otherwise, i love the drawings & the story so far
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Gabreyolo a dit :

This is a good story so far, can't wait till the next chapter!

Cream a dit :

Has anyone seen my chicken?

I think it flew over there!
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Thanks guys :D And sorry for really weird sentences .. If I would be English , this would be perfect.
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Name : Swirl
Age : 15
Gender : Female
About : Swirl tends to be rather silent, and when ever she "feels" something approaching, she gets aggressive. She has a blindfold on for some reason, and nobody knows why. Only she knows. She can still see. She's not protective over anything. She's rather creepy, and smiles rarely because no one wants to see it. Swirl likes the shadows and dark, and is known to be nocturnal. She hates the daylight.
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Omg characters is floading like cakes in my mouth

Chapter 3 :

The Lost Heart

Morphanie and Swirl.
''AYE!!!'' Piry-O shouts.
''What are you all doing here by Shard's house?'' Morphanie asked
Cream stoped hugging Shard and explained to her.
''We're going to the of Goocreep..''
''Seriously? That's the most creepiest part of Friw.'' Swirl silently said.
''AND! We will kill the Army Of Souls.'' Cream ended her sentence.
''Because..''Shard begined
''They wants-y to..''Piry-O started too
''Kill Piry-O?'' Morphanie guessed
''How did you even knew?'' Shard asked
''We found the map to Piry-O's house...'' Swirl looked down.
''But ! I threw in the-y trashbin-o!'' Piry-O got shocked.
''Didn't you knew? The Army of Souls wants EVERYONE to know that they're gonna kill you.'' Morphanie jumped in the air when she said the words Kill YOU.
They all stands here silently.
''Well .. let's go then.'' Shard reminded everyone.
He grabbed some food . The adventurous group decided to call their group - The Lost Heart . ''The lost'' only because some of the members was in their dark minds all the time and didn't wanted to let anyone in. ''Heart'' because some of members was happy and always smiling.
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Gabreyolo a dit :
Omg characters is floading like cakes in my mouth

Chapter 3 :

The Lost Heart

Morphanie and Swirl.
''AYE!!!'' Piry-O shouts.
''What are you all doing here by Shard's house?'' Morphanie asked
Cream stoped hugging Shard and explained to her.
''We're going to the of Goocreep..''
''Seriously? That's the most creepiest part of Friw.'' Swirl silently said.
''AND! We will kill the Army Of Souls.'' Cream ended her sentence.
''Because..''Shard begined
''They wants-y to..''Piry-O started too
''Kill Piry-O?'' Morphanie guessed
''How did you even knew?'' Shard asked
''We found the map to Piry-O's house...'' Swirl looked down.
''But ! I threw in the-y trashbin-o!'' Piry-O got shocked.
''Didn't you knew? The Army of Souls wants EVERYONE to know that they're gonna kill you.'' Morphanie jumped in the air when she said the words Kill YOU.
They all stands here silently.
''Well .. let's go then.'' Shard reminded everyone.
He grabbed some food . The adventurous group decided to call their group - The Lost Heart . ''The lost'' only because some of the members was in their dark minds all the time and didn't wanted to let anyone in. ''Heart'' because some of members was happy and always smiling.

Nice chapter ;3

(Thst last part reminds me of another certain fanfic...)
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Shardpixel a dit :


Nice chapter ;3

(Thst last part reminds me of another certain fanfic...)

""The lost" only because some of the members was in their dark minds all the time and didn't wanted to let anyone in."

Kind of reminds of "Lost".

Anywho, nice fanfic ^^
I JUST LOVE CREEPY FANFICS *-*
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Shardpixel a dit :


Nice chapter ;3

(Thst last part reminds me of another certain fanfic...)

I DIDN'T COPIEDDD THIS IS A CREEPY FANFIC!!! I WASN'T EVEN THINKING OF YOUR FANFIC IN THAT TIME

Anniebuscus a dit :
Anywho, nice fanfic ^^
I JUST LOVE CREEPY FANFICS *-*



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Chapter 4

Weird Hotel

Everyone was walking silently. The sky was like a sad kid who lost his ice cream. Night. Darkness. Hope. The wind was playing with leaves .. A little tear of a small cloud smacked on Piry-O's head.
''Oh c'mon! Let's sing !' Cream tried to make everything better.
''I would better eat dog food instead of singing.'' Swirl answered.
''Me too.'' agreed Shard. ''Wait .. what?'' he stopped.
Piry-O looked at him . She waved to him to come. Shard started making a weird sound with his sword. Swirl was moving her tail really fast , it made a sound. Cream started to sing a melody. Piry-O added her part - she was claping. Morphanie started to sing .. some kind of song , that no one understood , but it was cool. They was doing like this the whole time since they came near to Friw's part of Icewind. They found a hotel . Here they got a dark room for Swirl,because she hates the daylight. The Lost Heart , leaving Swirl alone , went to their rooms. Piry-O's room was pink , which she hated. She didn't liked girly stuff.. But , for the lucky thing she found.. It was a blanket with PIRATES *-* !!! She moved the rug really fast , sitted on the ground , got the blanket on her head and started screaming - YAY YAY YAY!!!
Shard's room was.. pretty too fancy. There was king's bed..and chairs . ALL LIKE IN A CASTLE! Uhh , yucks.
But here he found a comic book of his favourite characters , which someone left. He was reading , and reading and never stopped.
Well , Cream's room .. was the most best! There was like all the kung fu swords , and books of all the kung fu tips.. Even her chicken was happy - she could rest on a sword! But.. her imagination just flied out of her and her chicken's head. She oppened the door and she found the most stupidiest room.. Everything is dark. Beds , tables , chairs. But .. She found a kung fu sword!
Morphanie's room was not so cool - there was no such place for shadows .. Everything was shiny..Like from gold.. But finally! She found a little chair , who had a shadow! She morphed into a shadow there , and lived happy.
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Gabreyolo a dit :
Chapter 4

Weird Hotel

Everyone was walking silently. The sky was like a sad kid who lost his ice cream. Night. Darkness. Hope. The wind was playing with leaves .. A little tear of a small cloud smacked on Piry-O's head.
''Oh c'mon! Let's sing !' Cream tried to make everything better.
''I would better eat dog food instead of singing.'' Swirl answered.
''Me too.'' agreed Shard. ''Wait .. what?'' he stopped.
Piry-O looked at him . She waved to him to come. Shard started making a weird sound with his sword. Swirl was moving her tail really fast , it made a sound. Cream started to sing a melody. Piry-O added her part - she was claping. Morphanie started to sing .. some kind of song , that no one understood , but it was cool. They was doing like this the whole time since they came near to Friw's part of Icewind. They found a hotel . Here they got a dark room for Swirl,because she hates the daylight. The Lost Heart , leaving Swirl alone , went to their rooms. Piry-O's room was pink , which she hated. She didn't liked girly stuff.. But , for the lucky thing she found.. It was a blanket with PIRATES *-* !!! She moved the rug really fast , sitted on the ground , got the blanket on her head and started screaming - YAY YAY YAY!!!
Shard's room was.. pretty too fancy. There was king's bed..and chairs . ALL LIKE IN A CASTLE! Uhh , yucks.
But here he found a comic book of his favourite characters , which someone left. He was reading , and reading and never stopped.
Well , Cream's room .. was the most best! There was like all the kung fu swords , and books of all the kung fu tips.. Even her chicken was happy - she could rest on a sword! But.. her imagination just flied out of her and her chicken's head. She oppened the door and she found the most stupidiest room.. Everything is dark. Beds , tables , chairs. But .. She found a kung fu sword!
Morphanie's room was not so cool - there was no such place for shadows .. Everything was shiny..Like from gold.. But finally! She found a little chair , who had a shadow! She morphed into a shadow there , and lived happy.

My favourite chapter yet! Great job!
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Cool -w-

I can imagine Shard going into that room and being like, "wut."

Because he grew up poor. >w<
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