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[Fanfiction] War of Mice
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http://i.imgur.com/nW4gJ5R.jpg?1
Keys:
En = Charaters
Br=Chapters
Fr=People I Like To Thank

Information: (For Now)

Excepting Mice
No Rude Comments
Characters will come and go
Theres killing but not alot of details of the killing so..

Charaters: (Chapter 1)


http://i.imgur.com/fLQVgi3.png
Name: Dove (Duh-v) Novice (No-vice)
Bio: Nice and Sweet, Shes peaceful don't want any harm. Her family is most what she cares about.
Looks: Grayish black hair, Wears Umbrella to keep her from the sun light, wears mascara
Power: Control of Mice,Shape Shifting

Chapter 2:


http://i.imgur.com/z0MN80C.png
Name: Katherine (Kath-er-ri-na) Gilbert (Gill-bert)
Bio: Sweet but Sneeky, Can be a very trusted ally, She cares about winning and people.
Looks: Blonde Short Hair, A Red Bow, And Red Rose with an headband
Power: Fire,Ice


http://i.imgur.com/TDTQEJJ.png
Name: Clause (Cl-aw-s) Gilbert (Gill-bert)
Bio: Bad and Annoying, Can be a very trusted ally, He cares about power and control.
Looks: Blonde Short Hair, A Eye Patch,And Red Bandana around his mouth
Power: Nature and Water

Chapter 3:


http://imgur.com/G6wj4xO.png
Name: Jenny (Jen - ny) Willams (Will - e - ums]
Bio: Smart and Brave, Can be a very trusted ally, She cares about trust and loyalty
Looks: Brown hair with Ponty Tail, Glasses, Rose in mouth, Green Scarf
Power: Manipulation of Time, Telekinsis

Chapter 4:

Name: BeBe Kinz
Bio: Sweet, Nice very trusted ally.
Looks: Dirty Blond Hair, With A Flower on top
Power: Stopping Time, Control of Mice

Little Snip To Tell You Why This Story Is Made:

In the past, mice have been weak. Humans stepping on them, keeping them, even mudering them. Mice complained to the Mice Gods about this. They eventually gave act to this problem. The Mice Gods created a little land for there mice, for power of protection, they gave them power too. But when Mice had there on land entertainment grew. They were tired of there sports, Vanilla, Bootcamp, and Racing. They wanted something new. They created a event called "The War Of Mice", were mice had to fight for freedom. There were 4 maps. 1 map was had 1 year or less to kill all the mice. Only one can survivie. 4 teams 5 people on each, there was trust and betrayal in these groups. 20 mice, 1 mice leaves ALIVE.


Chapter 1.

Dove walked around the street, waving to neighbors. Today was the day that they picked mice for the groups.
Dove wasn't worrying about it, she had been never picked. She pattled her bike to the ceremony, everyone had to come, even the homeless. If they hadn't they would be killed, violently and painfully. That alone happened rarely though. The speaker the rang the bell for everyone's attention. It wasn't any ordinary bell it went world wide of the whole land. Dove covered her ears, it was a horrible sound to her. They were all lined up in 4 tables, 10 mice in each. This wasn't just going on in her land they had other land to. In all there was thousands of mice never knowing they are going to get picked. The speaker called "Group 1!" if you got touch you were in. There was no running, you were surronded too. 5 unlucky mice came up on stage. Dove wasn't clearly listening until they got to Group 3. A solider tapped Dove, she didn't know if this was really happening. She looked up to the solider, she noticed this was really happening. She walked down the carpet, nearly crying. She took a deep breath. After the ceremoney was over they gave shot to Dove, it was a sleeping shot. She went to sleep saying in her bed "Am I seriously going to die?".

Chapter 2.

Dove woke up in the training center, she knew what her power was and she was going to use it. A mouse nice Katherina was watching her. Katherina tapped Clause "The sleepy head woke up see what she's got, hope shes not like those weaklings." Dove heard what Katherina said but annoying her she started to train. Dove focused strong and hard to use her Shape Sheifting power. The best thing she could do was turn into a box. She focused, hard long the out come was a huge box. Clause laguhed hard, he even fell on the floor "Hah! A big box! That's going to do you nothing for the event!" Dove grew angry, bewteen what Katherina said and what Clause said, she was not going to be called a coward. Her power did something itself, right when Dove knows it her Controling takes action by itself! Leaves and twigs start wrapping up on Clause. Right then Clause knew something was messing with his power. He tried to fight it, it was use. He was beginning to be tighten by the twigs and leaves. Dove saw what was happening she her power eventually stop. She felt good and bad at the same time. Katherina looked at her like she was the new trouble around here. Dove didn't want that type of era. Dove decided to help, as she walked to Clause icycles started to block her way. "Haven't you done enough damage?" said Katherina. Dove knew Katherina was not kidding, if I get mad I might cut someones head off.

Chapter 3: Jenny

Jenny was a smart mouse, everyone knew her. Atleast everyone but Dove. Jenny ran up to Dove and tapped her shoulder. "Hey Dove, Katherina and her brother are rich and spoiled, come with me." said Jenny. Dove stood there and said "Okay?" Jenny went into the Group 3 lounge, taking Dove with her. "Well my name is Jenny..I already know you already." said Jenny. Dove asked "Why are you so popular around here?" Jenny replied, "If mastered my powers already, not to brag or anything. People are just amazed about it." Dove stood there suprised, she never knew a mouse at teen age could of mastered her power.

Chapter 4,

Dove woke up on the floor, that spell was tiring. Jenny pulled her up, "I'm glad your on my team!" she said with a smile. Dove thought she was a on-going girl, the type of girl that never gave up. Dove just wanted to get out of there ALIVE. They had to start an alliance, just for now. "An alliance, so we kill all the mice then fight eachother? No way!" said Jenny. Dove sighed "I know it's cold hearted of me, but we need eachother." Katherina over heard "So an alliance huh? I'm in.." Dove was suprised "No! Last time I check you were Group on were Group 4." Jenny sighed "Maybe it's a good idea? Katherina smiled "Good idea, yes I'm in a alliance with the strongest mice!" Jenny smiled "Yes! The strongest team!" Dove sighed "The strongest team it is." Dove still hated Katherina, but people say she's a trusted ally, lets have fun while it last.


TO BE CONTINUED

1. Xbetrayal! = For the wonderful fanart of Dove
2. Erikadeedee = For that awesome banner!

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Nice Story GIVE MEH MORE! '.'
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Appleloom a dit :
Nice Story GIVE MEH MORE! '.'

Ty I'll probably start writing Chapter 2 at 8:00 or sooner '.'

And probably make a video so you can visulize it C:
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Adoviaspeed a dit :


Ty I'll probably start writing Chapter 2 at 8:00

And probably make a video so you can visulize it C:

Im all ears in that, the story seems pretty intresting already! ^U^
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Im all ears in that, the story seems pretty intresting already! ^U^

I have Chapter 2 ready posting it at 8:00
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Oh no late by 3 minutes! D:

Chapter 2.

Dove woke up in the training center, she knew what her power was and she was going to use it. A mouse nice Katherina was watching her. Katherina tapped Clause "The sleepy head woke up see what she's got, hope shes not like those weaklings." Dove heard what Katherina said but annoying her she started to train. Dove focused strong and hard to use her Shape Sheifting power. The best thing she could do was turn into a box. She focused, hard long the out come was a huge box. Clause laguhed hard, he even fell on the floor "Hah! A big box! That's going to do you nothing for the event!" Dove grew angry, bewteen what Katherina said and what Clause said, she was not going to be called a coward. Her power did something itself, right when Dove knows it her Controling takes action by itself! Leaves and twigs start wrapping up on Clause. Right then Clause knew something was messing with his power. He tried to fight it, it was use. He was beginning to be tighten by the twigs and leaves. Dove saw what was happening she her power eventually stop. She felt good and bad at the same time. Katherina looked at her like she was the new trouble around here. Dove didn't want that type of era. Dove decided to help, as she walked to Clause icycles started to block her way. "Haven't you done enough damage?" said Katherina. Dove knew Katherina was not kidding, if I get mad I might cut someones head off.
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Ty Xbetrayal

Never knew I could get fanart of War Of Mice this quickly!


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I'm putting everything in order XD
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I'm making Chapter 3! :D
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I made a banner for you! :)
This drawing is not mine.

http://i.imgur.com/nW4gJ5R.jpg?1
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Erikadeedee a dit :
I made a banner for you! :)
This drawing is not mine.

-dies- Ty C: I'm putting it up
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:C I'm too lazy to write Chapter 3, I began but erased and started playing tfm.
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Adoviaspeed a dit :


-dies- Ty C: I'm putting it up

No problem!
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I was supposed to post Chapter 3 yesterday.
I'm going to make it now.
But can't promise me that >.<
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Nice fanfiction, I hope you do more chapters! :P
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Makes me remind of the hungergames, awsome!
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Mellonzz a dit :
Nice fanfiction, I hope you do more chapters! :P

Ty!

Boefie a dit :
Makes me remind of the hungergames, awsome!

C:
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I'm going to post the characters of Chapter 3, thats it then I'm going to start writing at 3:30
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I'm sorreh :C You have to click to see the Chapter 3 character
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I suggest to look at the looks catagory if your to lazy to click on it XD
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(Omg sorry for double posting!)

Chapter 3: Jenny

Jenny was a smart mouse, everyone knew her. Atleast everyone but Dove. Jenny ran up to Dove and tapped her shoulder. "Hey Dove, Katherina and her brother are rich and spoiled, come with me." said Jenny. Dove stood there and said "Okay?" Jenny went into the Group 3 lounge, taking Dove with her. "Well my name is Jenny..I already know you already." said Jenny. Dove asked "Why are you so popular around here?" Jenny replied, "If mastered my powers already, not to brag or anything. People are just amazed about it." Dove stood there suprised, she never knew a mouse at teen age could of mastered her power.
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Since you don't want to triple post, I'm bringing back this.

E: When are you going to do the vids?
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Appleloom a dit :
Since you don't want to triple post, I'm bringing back this.

E: When are you going to do the vids?

Idk, have to find people C:
Mice Request for the story is on.

Chapter 4,

Dove woke up on the floor, that spell was tiring. Jenny pulled her up, "I'm glad your on my team!" she said with a smile. Dove thought she was a on-going girl, the type of girl that never gave up. Dove just wanted to get out of there ALIVE. They had to start an alliance, just for now. "An alliance, so we kill all the mice then fight eachother? No way!" said Jenny. Dove sighed "I know it's cold hearted of me, but we need eachother." Katherina over heard "So an alliance huh? I'm in.." Dove was suprised "No! Last time I check you were Group on were Group 4." Jenny sighed "Maybe it's a good idea? Katherina smiled "Good idea, yes I'm in a alliance with the strongest mice!" Jenny smiled "Yes! The strongest team!" Dove sighed "The strongest team it is." Dove still hated Katherina, but people say she's a trusted ally, lets have fun while it last.
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