i want to read more

yes

Continued from the Prologue


Chapter 1:
The Capture

Richard heaved, trying to escape the grasp. The grip was too tight, and it had.. claws? No mouse had claws. These were too razor sharp, anyway. He grabbed onto a loose wood plank, and gripped it as tight as he could. The attacker let go, leaving some deep scratches on his leg.
"That's going to leave a mark.." He breathed.
He limped upstairs, now fully alert. His eye adjusted to the darkness, and he saw a black blindfold. It was pretty leathery when he picked it up, but could be for some use. There was nothing else except a chair and ripped window curtains. The figure was pretty quick. Two hands showed up on his shoulders, and he gulped. He sweat, and waited for a response.
"Hello, stranger." The figure said. The voice was feminine and shy-like, but pretty creepy and eager to attack. Her ebony eyes had cat-like pupils, each dark red.
"U-Uh.. H-h-hello." He stammered. He was sweating like crazy.
"You're not supposed to be here. No one here ever escaped my attacks. Except you, Richard.." She said with a smile.
"How do you know my name?!" He shouted not too loud.
"I know everything. But you must keep this a secret.."
"What?"
"I'm Swirlfire."
He knew who that was.
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The chapters will get longer as I write more so brace yourselves

I want to join this story so here have a mouse.
If you want me to write a form that's fine.


I wont cry if you don't include me. ^^"

Ok ignore that form part, I'm just going to write it myself

Name: Chei
Age (human years): 14
Personallity: Mature, but not afraid to do anything, sometimes shy
Biography: Her real parents abandoned her when she was 2, but a senior citizen found her unconsious when she was 6. She left the house to roam on the streets when she was 11. She still does so today.

that looks like a dam creepypasta

Name: Toph
Age: 12
Personality: Bossy sometimes, likes fighting and playing, is very concentrated on fighting and knows secrets about martial arts. Most of the times doesn't use weapons, likes using her bare hands for fighting. Is very social and friendly to other nice people, and verrrry rude to mean people. Always wants to be the leader of everything, and to help people isn't really her thing, thouh she's a pretty kind-hearted girl. is not scared of anything or anybody and HATES rules. she never falls in love and she NEVER WILL.

Biography: Her father died in a war when she was 4 years old. All her family now is her caring mother and her uncle Sam. After her father died, their home was destroyed in an earthquake. Uncle Sam took her and her mother into his big farm, where Toph learned doing hard chores and taking good care of the animals. She also learned to take care of herself. She loves exploring around an abandoned house near the farm, not knowing there is somebosy LIVING there...
When she was 8, her mother gave brith to her new brother, Brandon
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NOW IMA DO ABOUT HER BROTHER BRANDON:



Name: Brandon
Age: 4
Personality: Unlike his sister, he's never bossy or brave; he's always scared to try new stuff, and always stays around adults, too scared to get too far from the farm. He always wanted to help people, but he never gets the chance, because he's either too young and too scared if he will do something wrong.

Biography: After he was born, he used to always stay near mom or uncle Sam. He loves playing and annoying his older sister Toph, getting her mad and kidding around. Toph sometimes beats the heck out of him, and Brandon cries. But a few minutes later, he feels fine again and started annoying Toph again.
As brother and sister, they love each other a lot, but have different ways of showing it. Toph loves it when her brother stays around her, even he can be annoying and silly, he always makes Toph laugh. brandon feels safe around his sister, maybe even more than he feels around his parents.

Chapter 2:
A New Presence

New character in this one

"Y-you're rare. You've appeared over the news sometimes. You can control anything relating to the brain.. You're psychic." Richard said.
"Pretty much."
She let go.
"Now get out, or I won't let you live a day or two." Her ears perked. She put on the leathery blindfold. There was a knife under the ripped window curtains.
"So that's yours.." Richard silently said.
"Yeah. I know when victims approach this house, and I sometimes leave. Wandering the streets. I don't think anyone has reported me to the police yet."
She jumped out the window, onto the dried grass. She ran into the city.
It was really misty.
Richard walked on the sidewalk, following her secretly. He came upon a mouse with leopard fur, panda hat, lollipop, bunny earrings, purple hair, easter tail item and a scarf.
"Why, hello" He said.
The girl scratched the back of her head. She had a perplexed look on her face.
"I'm Chei."
"Hello Chei, nice to meet you."
"Nice to meet you too.."
"Say, follow that girl with the knife over there with me?"
Her distance was very far, and the fog was starting to make her disappear.
"Y-you mean.. that cruel thing you call a girl?"
"Yeah. I survived her attack in the abandoned house."
"You're LEGENDARY!" She squealed with delight.
"What's so bad about her? She only grabbed my foot without warning and appeared behind me in a jiffy."
"That's all she did? She mostly suffocates people. Or stabs them in the chest." Chei said with a fright in her voice.
Richard gulped. That was some luck he had.
"Come on, let's follow her."
"Don't make me come near her. I can't believe anything breathing could be this cruel." She shuddered, reffering to all the damage she has done to innocent mice.
"Okay."
They both ran to her, while the sky was turning dark.
The wind was brisk.
They met her in the middle of a street, thousands of bodies laying around. None were bleeding, but just laying there.
"What. Have. You. Done?!" Richard shouted.
Swirl turned. Richard saw the most surprising thing in her eyes.
Her eyes were the same as before, but one had a white pupil with a black surrounding.
She slashed her blade at him.

About Chei's name, I couldn't think of one name so I chose a random name XD

I'm fine with any name