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[Fanfic] Rationale
Xinaug
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One day, I thought about this word, rationale. I don't know what it means but I thought it sounded cool... so...

Here we go!

Anyway I checked up the meaning and-

ra·tion·ale [rash-uh-nal]
noun
1.
the fundamental reason or reasons serving to account for something.
2.
a statement of reasons.
3.
a reasoned exposition of principles.

o/

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Plotline

We, the world of Transformice, are getting worse and worse. Mice are harming each other, bullying until the point of no return. Those that keep holding on either broke down mentally... or they have a lot of scars and injuries.

Just last week, one of my close friends almost got murdered just because she got a first. People now hate every update that come -- in fact, everything.

Why are we here, if we- the mice- are hating the world itself now? Why?

Does Tig even care? Maybe only the shaman godness and the Three cares... we've got to find them now, but who knows where they is?

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Items:

Arrow
Spirit - Link
Totem - Xinaug
Balloon - Lucy
Rune - Meifee
Boxes
Planks
Anvil
Ball
Trampoline
Portals - Cream
Conjuration
Ice Cubes

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Characters:


http://i.imgur.com/YbxuffG.png
Xinaug

Likes: Hardmode, true friends, teamwork
Dislikes: Bossy mice, idiots, etc

Xinaug is an experienced shaman, having hard mode on for over two years. She has seen the world change from 2011 and she misses the great old times. She moves on however, dealing with trolls that sprite her.


http://i.imgur.com/L8kkeZm.png
Cream [Smalltoes]

Likes: Chickens.
Dislikes: Being left out.

Cream hates people that pick on others, she loves her chicken and her chicken can fly great distances. Let's just say her chicken is magical. She is usually happy, but can get angry easily. She will do anything to save her friends even if it kills her.


http://i.imgur.com/m2l9wLP.png
Meifee [Anniebuscus]

Likes: True friends, teamwork
Dislikes: Being an outcast

Description: Even though she had registered 1 year ago, she's pretty average, not a noob and not a pro. Her first tribe was pretty annoying, so she quit it. Has short temper, but is always helpful and friendly. Meifee is very brave and will help her friends, no matter the cost.


http://i.imgur.com/pjjAjss.png
Link [Ilingirl]

Likes : Her powers , color , being the most clever in the group .
Dislikes : Retards <3 , bragging and trolls.

She once tought that this small world would be boring and always the "Heaven'' for mice, but she was sooo wrong. One day... she heard screams coming from the outside...The mice would scream as cannons and anvils rained on them... She hid as well as she could.Then... she saw a shadow,then she fell asleep.The next day she woke up with a blue aviator hat near her. In the hat was the thing that would protect her, a little gold bow , golden as her hair. She started to understand the power of it.. she would use the power of the spirit to protect herself and the ones near her and later she started using the power of the spirit to fly.


http://i.imgur.com/PBPHQCj.png
Lucy [Mandymuis]

Likes: Cannons, cats balloons food and action.
Dislikes: What you said, with the people that scream at you if you got a first or something.

Lucy is a friendly person, that likes to sham and spawn things and use shaman skills. She like to help people and play with friends. As shaman she is a windmaster. She is actually really brave. She plays the game like 2/3 years.

(I might add more characters of my own in!)

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Hope I don't abandon this fanfic this time
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http://i.imgur.com/L8kkeZm.png
Cream.

Likes: Chickens.
Dislikes: Being left out.

Cream hates people that pick on others, she loves her chicken and her chicken can fly great distances. Let's just say her chicken is magical. She is usually happy, but can get angry easily. She will do anything to save her friends even if it kills her.
Age: 17
Gender: Female
(I thought I should put her age and gender too.)

I choose the portals.
Anniebuscus
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Refpic:
http://i.imgur.com/m2l9wLP.png
Name: Meifee (Mei for short)
Likes: True friends, teamwork
Dislikes: Being an outcast
Description: Even though she had registered 1 year ago, she's pretty average, not a noob and not a pro. Her first tribe was pretty annoying, so she quit it. Has short temper, but is always helpful and friendly. Meifee is very brave and will help her friends, no matter the cost.
Age: 22
Gender: Female

I choose to control runes.
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I'll take the spirit.

Ref :
http://i62.tinypic.com/1zyc50h.png

Name: Link

Likes : Her powers , color , being the most clever in the group .
Dislikes : Retards <3 , bragging and trolls.


She once tought that this small world would be boring and always the ,,Heaven'' for mice, but she was sooo wrong. One day... she heard screams coming from the outside...The mice would scream as cannons and anvils rained on them... She hid as well as she could.Then... she saw a shadow,then she fell asleep.The next day she woke up with a blue aviator hat near her. In the hat was the thing that would protect her, a little gold bow , golden as her hair. She started to understand the power of it.. she would use the power of the spirit to protect herself and the ones near her and later she started using the power of the spirit to fly.
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Name: Lucy
Age: 17
Refpic:
http://i.imgur.com/PBPHQCj.png
Likes: Cannons, cats balloons food and action.
Dislikes: What you said, with the people that scream at you if you got a first or something.
[Description] Lucy is a friendly person, that likes to sham and spawn things and use shaman skills. She like to help people and play with friends. As shaman she is a windmaster. She is actually really brave. She plays the game like 2/3 years.

I choose the balloons.
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Adding the characters in B)

Also here

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Chapter 1

Okay.

Recently I realised I can feel the power of totems. Like, I can detect what the shaman's totem looks like way before he uses it. Not to mention I can actually alter it a little.

I found out by accident. I was in a honestly bad mood while looking for cheese. This shaman was mean as he kept trying to kill us (more like targeting me). So finally, he started using his totem. Now, this totem was a wild horde of twenty cannonballs. There was no way for me to escape.

So when it spawned, I braced for the impact. Nothing happened. I looked up.

Apparently the cannonballs went the wrong way and it killed the shaman and his friends instead. Now they're threatening to ban me for hack and I just ran out of there.

Eh, how weird... I'm just going to ask around if anyone also has felt that...

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super short chapter lol
Xinaug
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Chapter 2

Came into survivor just in time to see the most weird thing ever.

So this shaman was being frustrated at the mice and so he tried spawning runes to confuse them, leading to their deaths. Um...

The runes kind of TURNED BACK and killed the shaman???

Anyway, the shaman was so mad that he left.

I continued to play survivor, but I noticed every time a shaman spawns totems or runes, they would glitch out and this would kill the shaman along with the mice. Except me and another mouse.

After some time, the entire room left due to the glitches and I was able to get a clear look at the other mouse. Okay, she looked weird, I guess.

"Waaaaaaaait. Who are you?" I asked quietly.

"Oh. I'm Meifee. What is going on with the builds?" The other said, looking at the gitchy runes remaining.

"I don't know. I was in a room and totems glitched out. I don't know what the heck just happened, and I don't think it is the French physics."

"I woke up to survivor, and I noticed that all the runes except those I spawned would glitch out. I don't know what is happening..." Mei said, looking at her paws. "Well, when you came, that was when the totems crapped out too."

"Do you think- think that we could have some kind of powers?" I mumbled. This seemed to be the only logical reason.

"If that is so, there might be others who can control objects too."

Brillant. This is going to be a great day.
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Nice story for now
Anniebuscus
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This is getting interesting!
Looooove it~! ^_^
Xinaug
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Chapter 3

Both of us roamed around for a bit until we've finally reached room 1.

Things are chaotic in there.

Balloons were basically flying at the speed of Tig's biscottes (joking!), crashing into mice and causing shamans to fall into the void. Meanwhile, every one was basically trying to stop the balloons, while people were beginning to complain that runes and totems were glitching out too.

Just then, a spirit appeared and it caused all balloons to pop, causing lucky mice riding on them to fall. Well... that was when every mouse basically went out of control. I quickly reinforced my so-called power and the totems calmed down quickly, reducing the rate of mice getting killed.

I saw this mouse looking very confused as a lot of balloons suddenly spawned around her, threatening to cover her, but then some mouse spawned a spirit to stop the balloons.

WAIT, NORMAL MICE?

Thinking fast, we dragged the two mice to another place before the other mice began to report them for hack.

"Dafuq is going on?" One of them asked.

"Just tell me your names god damnit." I hissed as the balloons and spirits stopped spawning.

"I'm Lucy, and I have ABSOLUTELY no idea what is going on, except the fact that when I was getting mad at those jokers - balloons basically spawned and killed them." The mouse that was spawning balloons said.

"Oh, I'm Link. I can spawn spirits!" The other said cheerfully as she spawned a line of spirit fireworks in the sky.

Meifee was about to facepaw when I brought up the topic again. "We might have some powers. By the way, I'm Xinaug and this is Meifee. For some reason, I can make totems glitch out and she can make runes glitch."

Link pondered for a while. "Hmmm, might be a sign from the gods!"

Now, gods were not popular in Transformice. Anyone who actually believed that there were gods would get shunned by those who thought differently. Personally, I'm indifferent about it.

"Yeah, we were looking for mice who could control objects, and this was when we found you." I said. "By the way, try to keep your powers in, we're going to different places to find the others - if there are others."

After eating some cheese, we started roaming around.
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Xinaug a dit :
Meifee was about to facepaw when I brought up the topic again. "We might have some powers. By the way, I'm Xinaug and this is Meifee. For some reason, I can make totems glitch out and she can make runes glitch."

What's more weirder than Meifee facepawing when Xin goes on-topic. xD
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Nice story! I can't wait for more.
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=] I feel retarded... oh.. Hmmmmm, might be a sign from the gods! obiously describes me xD.. anyway.. fab story :c please post more
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Chapter 4

We've reached vanilla1.

Actually, we had started searching from vanilla10, but we had no luck until then.

vanilla1 looked normal. Very normal.

Until we saw portals flashing on Map 0.

"What...? Portals aren't supposed to exist in Map 0, do they?" Lucy asked, looking at the blue and orange sparkles. We could even see how confused the shaman was as the mice accused him of hacking. Well, not that it mattered anyway...

Just then, a huge chicken fell onto Mei. Link was so surprised that she almost did not see a portal spawning near where we were. I managed to pull her aside just as a figure stepped out of the portal.

"So here's my chicken!" The mouse that had stepped out of the portal said, as she snatched back the chicken and placed it on her head.

"Hey, who are you?" I asked quickly."I'm Xinaug, and this is Link, and this is Mei, and this is... uh... Lucy. Yeah. Lucy."

"I'm Cream. Just realised I could spawn portals." The mouse said.

"Yeah, we were looking for mice like us, and that was when we found you." I explained the entire situation to Cream. By then, the group of mice had left for more cheese.

"This is strange..." Cream muttered. "We've better find the others, then."

We turned into the darkness.

That was when Mei gasped as she saw a shadowy figure in the trees. Looking at us.

"Shitshits-" Lucy panicked so much that a ton of balloons spawned in our faces almost immediately, knocking the wind out of us. Thinking fast, Link unleashed her power and spirited everyone towards a hill.

However, the figure followed, and that was when we saw it. He had dark eyes... murderous glare...

"I need you all" He hissed, and started spawning his totem.

We stood still, knowing full well of my power, and braced for it...

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I need more characters damn it
Anniebuscus
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S*it, this fanfic is abandoned T_T
*bumps*
I hope there will be new characters and Xin will write the 5th chapter after a little overload of characters xD
Okay, maybe there won't be an overload, but at least 1 new character should do the trick.
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Anniebuscus a dit :
S*it, this fanfic is abandoned T_T
*bumps*
I hope there will be new characters and Xin will write the 5th chapter after a little overload of characters xD
Okay, maybe there won't be an overload, but at least 1 new character should do the trick.

DSFASBHBGRHBGRSKGRHSKGHSRKGBDSBGDHRB

Yeah I want characters i'm hungry for them nom nom nom

but then I lost interest in this fanfic rofl

but eh
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Xinaug a dit :

vanilla1 looked normal. Very normal.We could even see how confused the shaman was as the mice accused him of hacking.

Cream's the shaman, right? You might want to change 'him' to 'her'.

c;
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Smalltoes a dit :
Xinaug a dit :

vanilla1 looked normal. Very normal.We could even see how confused the shaman was as the mice accused him of hacking.

Cream's the shaman, right? You might want to change 'him' to 'her'.

c;

no lol xD
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Xinaug a dit :
Smalltoes a dit :
Xinaug a dit :

vanilla1 looked normal. Very normal.We could even see how confused the shaman was as the mice accused him of hacking.

Cream's the shaman, right? You might want to change 'him' to 'her'.

c;

no lol xD

Oh. e.e

My mistake. You go back not your daily business.

-Whispers- embarrassing.
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Smalltoes a dit :
Xinaug a dit :
Smalltoes a dit :
Xinaug a dit :

vanilla1 looked normal. Very normal.We could even see how confused the shaman was as the mice accused him of hacking.

Cream's the shaman, right? You might want to change 'him' to 'her'.

c;

no lol xD

Oh. e.e

My mistake. You go back not your daily business.

-Whispers- embarrassing.

HAHAHA IT'S OKAY. XD
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