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Flyingpiggi
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so this is my first fanficc ever and i hope you enjoy it!
new characters are almost always open!so have fun!


http://i.imgur.com/sduX9rW.png
Introduction:Dimetra woke up in a hurry.She ran,dodging every obstacle in her way."Im late!"Dimetra hurried out the door into the demon mouse world.She sprang about down the black and red world.Finally,Dimetra entered a big,pitch black,building.There were other demons with her.At the front,there was a red demon mouse with sleek fur standing out from all the black mice.

dimetra:
http://i.imgur.com/GsNzCYO.png
age in human years:12(demon years:1200)
Personality:confident,courageous,curious
Bio:SHe was a stand-out from all the other demons.She studied mice and tried to be one.Dimetra didnt like to see despair of mice like all the others.She liked to see happiness,not sadness.All the kids thought she was weird.Dimetra was alone in her own little world.

http://i.imgur.com/B4eYSy9.png
name:Karti
race:demon
Age:19(1900)
personality:bad,untrustworthy
bio:like otehr demons.Has a good taste in rap XD.He grew up knowing about skateboarding and that stuff.Also Dimetra's brother
if u want any characters please post and i need a banner if you can make one!Sometimes i might get into character's view
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so no offense but did you consider running this through a spell checker first
Flyingpiggi
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0_0 i dont know what that is
Haruhitastic
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use this
Flyingpiggi
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but still ^-^ give meh charavters

the red mouse

http://i.imgur.com/GlF2S6n.png
mystery until i continue
name:mrs.Trakc
race:Demon queen-ish(there is no really demon queen.There is just a demon who watches over.)
Bio:She was born royal and she has been watchhing over the demon comunity and has worked on the portals to the otehr realm.

oh and btw,now that i intruduced hackers,ill tell ya thats waht make demons in danger.
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http://i.imgur.com/ihLGsCT.png
name:Karti
race:demon
Age:19(1900)
personality:bad,untrustworthy
bio:like otehr demons.Has a good taste in rap XD.He grew up knowing about skateboarding and that stuff
Ejaffa
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http://i.imgur.com/ZG8b2VW.png
Name: Foxie J
Race: Good / Non demon
Age: 23
Personality: Adventurous, slightly dumb, confident.
Bio: Full of adventure, but never really followed common sense. Always charges into battles, usually without thinking. Often gets hurt in battle, but is a strong warrior nonetheless.
Flyingpiggi
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i will start the 1st chaper,but i stil;l need more
Chapter 1:Transformice
(THE poulorge was the 1st part of chapaer 1)
"settle down."The red demon said."Our world is at state.We have found a way to split dimentions with another."Just then,a demon raced into the room."AM I LATE!?!"He asked,heavily breathing."Of couse you are,Kart!"Dimetra whisperd.He nudged his sister so he could fit on account of how many mice."Watch it!"Someone said "Sorry about my brother."She helped the mouse up."name's Dimetra."The mouse look like he didnt want to talk to her.He tuned around.The red mouse turned to a portal."we will be going into the portal.Here lies a wold called Transformice.It is a world full of regular mice,vampire mice,and much more uniqe ones,"She said."Who will volenteer."Then,everyone started to yed hiell"ME!ME!"Well,almost everyone.Dimetra was the only one with her paw in the air.The mouse stepped down."You three."She went to Dimetra,Karti,and the other mouse.THHey stepped up to the stage."What are your names?"The mouse asked."Dimetra.""Karti.Call me Kart."The only one who didnt talk was the other mouse.HE was older then the 2."I-I'm Shard."He said."you 3 will be the 1st demons to go in.By the way,im Miss Trakc."The Demon said."M-Miss Trakc,How many mice will be there?"Shard asked."I'm not sure.But there are many."She looked at the portal."Here it goes."Kart gulped. And I didn't get kissed :C.Kart added in his head.They all stepped in togeter.Once the woke up,a big mouse was behind them.It had a feather and blue markings.It turned around."I havn't seen you here before.Im Foxie J.Lets meet up at room 801."She said.Foxie waved her paw and Dimetra was hanging from a baloon."HELP!HELP!"She cried.The sttring broke and she fell on a bush."Be careful!"Kart said.Shard was alredy looking at cheese."What is this?"He asked."Its cheese,dummy!"Foxie nudged him. Nudged again."HE thought.Foxie ran with cheese and disspared into a hole.The 3 where the only others with shaman made cheese on the map.They ran into the hole.Hearts filled their view.
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http://i61.tinypic.com/2ykmipl.jpg
Name : Link
Race : Good/Not a demon
Age: 18

Personality : Pretty bright and cute but with dark secrets... Very smart and powerfull .Sometimes pretty clumsy.

Bio: Left to die on the streets , she was protected by a tiny bow she had . Hides a dark secret known by very little. When in bad mood she grows wings that protect her and her eyes glow yellow. Even though she has powers , she is still a human.
Shardpixel
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Flyingpiggi a dit :
i will start the 1st chaper,but i stil;l need more

Here take this:


http://i.imgur.com/YVn3yXm.png
Name: Shard
Race: Demon (Gotta make it interesting.)
Age: 27 (2700)
Personality: Witty, twisted, and certainly very anti-social.
Bio: Shard grew up poor, and his parents died when he was young. He grew up as an anti-social mouse that always stayed away from the others. His horrible view of life eventually made himself go insane, and he committed suicide shortly after. He didn't completely die, however; his spirit stayed behind as a wild and mad demon.

I hope it's okay that I edited the ref a bit to make him more like a demon, if you want me to change it to a normal ref you can tell me.
Flyingpiggi
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chapter 2:Hackers and Horror
"W-where are we?"DImetra asked."Anothre map."Foxie said.Her
feather disapperd.she was jus a white mouse with clothing."WA!"Kart cried.He had them."Aren't you new here?I can tell."A voice said."Name's Link.Just think of he object and your shaman objacts will apper."Link said.Kart shot her with a cannon."WHAT THE!KART!"A mouse came to them."You should'nt play like this.I heard if you get killed starting from the next map,you will be erases forever."
She raced into the hole and turned into hearts.Foxie invited them to her tribe."Who was that?"Dimetra asked.Link shruged."H-How does she know my name!?!"He asked."USER!DUH."Link rolled her eyes."I dont think i can do this."Shard said.He ran out of the tribe house and into survivor.It was closed,but he got in.There where a gorup of mice in alredy."Why are you here?"He'd seen a familiar face.It was the mouse they spoke with."Its closed.C-L-O-S-E-D."Another said."And i don't care.I can't live in a world of terrior like this.I can't do tthis."He look down into the bubbly lava."Shard!"The otehrs arrived."Don't worry about me.I'll still be there."He stepped into the lava and imediatly flew up.Dimetra stook onto Link and sobbed."Where does he go?"Kart asked."How am I suoopse to know?"Foxie said."Just not in transformice."The other mice where still there.They look like they didnt care about him."Too bad.I didnt get to know him."The other mice left the room."W-Who are they?"Dimetra looked up to Foxie."Hackers,I think.They might just be the reson this is happening.Foxie felt a slight paw on her back.



http://i.imgur.com/V3KA4OD.png
name:Mimi
race:HAcker,also a unwanted mouse
bio:She really dispised living things.She was born a hacker and was despreate to ruin Transformice.She killed her parents and caused havoc.Her tribe is glitched,so no human mouse can get in.But she doesnt know any mouse race not regular besides Hackers.She leaves out clues just to get them confused.She doent care what apeens,and she likes to just mess things up.She was there for all the glitches and laggs.No one could see her.No one knows her.No one wants to.
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http://i.imgur.com/NVxR6p5.png
name:nauni
Race:Carnivorus mouse,MAybe mimi's slave c:
Bio:She was a wild mouse in the 801 maps until Mimi found her.But she doent know thats shes her slave.She thought they ehere friends.BUt mimi used her to cause cahos.Soon she reilizes it and she joins the others to fight mimi and the gang of hackers
Flyingpiggi
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good goood
in this case illl make my own hackers,but feel free to do a hacker!

http://i.imgur.com/s3Zvz63.png
name:Jacub (Jay-sub)
race:VAmpire hacker(bad)
bio:As most hackers,he was born one.HE was on infected until Mimi came and caused him to stay a vampire.Since it wqs the only thing he could dp and wqas forced to do,he joiunded her.He also has a deep crush on link.
age:???
chapter 3:Still there(the color parts are Shard,he is still with us.)
Link and the otehrs where ready for battle."COME AT US!"Kart shouted."Woa woa,what?"Mimi was confused."What do you exspect us to do?Lets do this another time."Mimi and the otehrs left.Exsept for one.He was looking at Link."JACUB!"He ran to them."Guys!Im Here!Im alive!"Link turnd around."THATS IT!"Kart starting to run the direction they went.Thats pointless,Kart.You'll get yourself no where.Kart stoped."Shard?"He looked everywhere."Shard died remeber?"Foxie said."I sware,I heard him!"HE said.Kart isnt lying,its ture!Im there!Shard tried to toutch Foxie,but his hand sliped right through."Come on let's go."Foxie said,who hadnt heard him.At the tribe house,they where tired and where getting ready for bed.Shard,on the other hand,was deperessed because he couldn't help.For one last time,he tried to talk to Dimetra.DIMETRA!IM ALIVE!I CAN SEE YOU!IM JUST A GHOST!COME ON!LISTEN!Tell Foxie that noo one is lying.NO ONE He made it clear.Dimetra heard him and was confinent."I hear you,Shard."Dimetra looked at Foxie.Unfourtinatly,she was fast alsleep.">.> Whats wrong with her?"Kart asked and he coverd into his blanket."I don't know."Dimetra was wide awake.SHe was sitting on her bed,gazing into the wooden roof."I wonder how the otehrs are doing."She thought.Probably a hot mess.I wonder whats up that we were chsen to leave.

He was right

Meanwhile,the demons where unsuccsessful.
imma so do theme songs

Dimetra-TIMBER
Ghost Shard-i will surviveLITERALY THIS IS HIS THEME SOO MUCH!I MEAN LIKE MIMI WALK OUT ZAT DUR
Kart-so what!
Mimi+others-That power
Foxie-Hot n cold
link-Berare of the boys
to my poinion
nauni-FINAL COUNTDOWN(MY FAV SING :D)
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