[Fanfiction] The Resistance |
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![]() Fanfiction Message Board: Appleloom is finished with Chapter 1! Flyinpiggi has made a Character Request! Flyinpiggi is now in the Fanficton, The Resistance. Adoviaspeed has made a Character Request! Adoviaspeed is now in the Fanfiction, The Resistance. Xbetrayal has made a Character Request! Appleloom is finished with Chapter 2! Xbetrayal is now in the Fanfiction, The Resistance. Bombkitty has made a Character Request! Bombkitty is now in the Fanfiction, the Resistance. AnnieBuscus has made A Character Request! Anniebuscus is now in the Fanfiction, Resistance. Queenlordess has made A Character Request! Queenlordess is now in the Fanfiction, The Resistance. Slots open for characters: 7/10 Key: EN: BIO FR: Character BR:Chapter ES: Character ![]() Name: Blossom Mousie Bio: A girlygirl, learned everythung from her Mom and Dad, Out going girl and "Lady Like". Doesn't trust anyone but her family and friends. Ever since the cat's took over she hated the diet. Regret's everything her little sister says Age (Human Years): 13 years old ![]() Name: Rosie Mousie Bio: A stubborn little girl, Doesn't know right from wrong Blossom's sister, Outgoing, Annoying Age: 7 years old ![]() Name:Mimi Age:12 Bio:She is veryplayful and energenic. Her family got inslaved by the cats and she is the only Kayta mouse left. Mimi is friends with the cats but she has deeper secrets. She is very smart but acts dumb most of the time.She calls Rosue 'ro ro'or 'kiddo'and has a bond with her.Also she really likes tofu.Her family died and she left to rome the maps of Transformice.She doesnt tell but the cats are floowing her wherever they go. ![]() Name: Patricia Foxe Bio: Is an old memeber of the Resistance, pretty handy with the sword. Tells storys and brags about how she messed with Cat Guards. She carrys a pet name Resise, a cat. She stole the cat from training, the Cat Guards are going to give her a death threat. Until then she is friends with old memebers of the Resistance. And is still going to tease New-comers. Age: 25 ![]() Name: Jaye Flow Bio: Works at The Resistance. Writes papers of how the Resistance group sabotoges the Cats. Next year later a mouse tells about the newspapper. Now Jaye is on a death threat she hides secretly giving out newpapers. See is seeking revenge on whoever that mouse who told. Good friends with Patricia. Age: 23 ![]() Name:Doroadi(call her Doro)Gart Age:22 Bio:As a spy of the resistance,she has been with Mimi and reporting about her.Her and Mimi are friends,but Doro can't let cats take over.She sometimes helps Jaye with the newspapers and is Patrica's cousin.She prefers to act like a leader,even if shes the leader's helper.She has all the abilities of Patrica,whom she calls Pat.If Doro haddnt join,nothing would be in order and Pat couldnt be able to orginize everything.As her cuz,she acts like shes older and tries to make the best of everyone.She also is very stong and once in a while brings Mimi over when the cats are gone.Aperently the cats trust her with Mimi About: In Transformice, cats have slowly been taken over. In Engage they have took over, Blossom's home town. Blossom has to be called upon on to save Transformice and she can't do it alone. Blossom has slowly joined a tribe called The Resistance, it's no joke. If the Cat Guards find you, your be turned into shreds the next day. To keep the secret of The Resistance, Blossom has to make lies to family and friends. This tribe is a big threat Chapter 1: What Was Rosie Thinking! Rosie smiled "Wanna race?" Blossom sighed " You know I beat you every time!" Rosie frowned "I've gotten faster, I promise!" Blossom smiled "Ok, even if I'm going to beat you! Blossom quickly ran to the other side of the map, bothering to pick up the milk and fish that the cat's gave them. Once again she had won the race. When she gleefully turned around she saw a Cat Guard. "What's you name?" Blossom gulped hardly "...Blossom..." The Cat Guard pointed at Rosie. "My little sister" said Blossom. The Cat Guard walked up to Rosie and stroked her hair. Rosie smaked his hand out of the way "Don't my hair kitty! You don't even deserve to be called a cat!" The Cat Guard smiled "You like the milk and fish we left you? It's quite tasty for cats." "You took away our cheese and gave us spoiled milk and raw fish!" said Rosie. The Cat Guard laughed, "Fiesty little one, go on rodents!" Blossom ran away, holding Rosie. Blossom thought if Rosie ever ment contact with a Cat Guard again she would be sliced open Chapter 2: Mimi's Story Mimi was roming in Transformice, passing the milk and fish. As she looked back the Cat Guards would be following her, making sure she wouldn't run away. Mimi thought of her parents, that once lived a enjoyable life, but had died. Mimi didn't know much about the Cat Guards, but they could do anything to mice. Mimi turned back to guards "When are you going to stop following me?" The Cat Guards replied "I'm sorry, but you can't leave. We would be disobeying the Chiefs orders." Mimi frowned "You've done bad things to the mice, why won't you say sorry like me" The Cat Guards smiled "Your our ally, the only mouse that wouldn't go into The Resistance" Mimi smiled "I guess so! But what if Patricia --" The Cats were serious now "Where did you see that name!" Mimi realized that she was talking to much, "No where it's just the fliers in Vanilla...." Mimi knew who Patricia was. She was the most braviest memeber in The Resistance. Patricia steals mice from there death threats and trains them in The Resistance. Mimi sighed she knew that it wouldn't happen. The Cat Guards and her had a bond though. Mimi had both paths that would be leading to the wrong thing. Chapter 3: Jaye typed on the computer. Patricia stopped her "When are you going to stop risking your life?" "Right when you stop being a trouble maker." replied Jaye. Patricia hugged Jaye "Some day we're going to get captured." Jaye smiled "We have time" Patricia's cat circled around her. "I bet that's the only new thing you treat nice." Patricia fed the cat cheese "She reminds me of a mice and myself." Jaye laughed "It likes the cheese, might as well call it a mouse" Patricia walked up to the computer "Any missions?" Jaye opened up window on her computer "Well there's a girl named Mimi" Doroadi walked in "That I'm taking!" Patricia gasped "Erm... no, Doro I'm taking this one." "Well the Cat Guard like me instead you, so I'll just swoop her up!" Jaye sighed "Doro has a point." Doro smiled "Delcared. I'm taking this one Pat!" Doro walked out of the room. Pat smiled "She thinks this is sooo easy" Chapter 4: Doro's misson Doro walked into the maps, silently. There she saw Mimi and the soliders. Doro pulled out a 3 tiny sheep, she snuck behind them and put it in the soliders pockets. All of a sudden, Mimi heard a loud noise. Out of the dust, she saw Doro. "Why would you do this?" said Mimi. "For you, we got to catch up with my cloud." replied Doro. Mimi cried "Well I'm not going!" Doro laughed "So they can suspect it was you and get a death threat? They kill you at any age!" Mimi turned her back on Doro "I'll just tell the guards that you did it." Doro gasped "Thats your excuse? Sweet little Doro did the blood splattering? Mimi looked back at her "Fine.. I'll go to The Resistance" Doro smiled "That's what I was looking forward to." Doro and Mimi stepped onto the cloud and went to The Resistance. Chapter 5: New Comer!: Doro came back to The Resistance "Done with the misson!" Patricia sighed "Yeah..Yeah..Yeah we got a new comer." Doro gasped "Who?" Patricia pointed at Blossom "Her, shes only a teen. Good for a spy." Blossom picked up cheese and ate it. She missed the taste of cheese, and the smell of it. "I have one mission for you!" said Jaye Blossom gasped "What is it?" Jaye smiled "It's not that simple, but pass out these papers" Blossom looked at the paper with the Resistance secret code, Teha Eh Fahreh Mahice. In mice language, It was The Free Mice. Blossom put on the sunglasses and coat. She stuffed the Cat's newspapers so the Cat Guards might pick up the wrong newpaper. "Good Luck!" said Doro Blossom headed out the door, she ran quickly to the first street, Engage. Blossom took deep breaths, She was wondering if she would get caught. The Resistance was all about taking risk. "What's that in yoour bag?" said The Cat Guards Blossom smiled "Just passing out the newspapers" Blossom gave the Cat Guard one of the newspapers, but it wasn't the Resistance ones. "Gone on,I'll scan this newspaper." said the Cat Guard Every hole she came to she tilt her head down so the neighborhood didn't know that she was Blossom. Blossom returned to the Resistance hole. "That was easy!" Patricia smiled "That's the easy part, I want you to go on a mission with me, taking off a Cat's Claw." "What!" said Blossom Character Request are on!: Name: Bio: Age: MOUSE PICTURE NEEDED |
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![]() name:Mimi age:12 bio:She is veryplayful and energenic.Her family got inslaved by the cats and she is the only Kayta mouse left.Mimi is friends with the cats but she has deeper secrets.She is very smart but acts dumb most of the time.SHe calls Rosue 'ro ro'or 'kiddo'and has a bond with her.Also she really likes tofu.Her family died and she left to rome the maps of Transformice.She doesnt tell but the cats are floowing her wherever they go. |
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Flyingpiggi a dit : Wonderful! Accepted! I'll introduce you in Chapter 2 because I have Chapter 1 all written out already |
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![]() (Tried to make her look tough! XD) Name: Patricia Foxe Bio: Is an old memeber of the Resistance, pretty handy with the sword. Tells storys and brags about how she messed with Cat Guards. She carrys a pet name Resise, a cat. She stole the cat from training, the Cat Guards are going to give her a death threat. Until then she is friends with old memebers of the Resistance. And is still going to tease New-comers. Age: 25 |
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Adoviaspeed a dit : Well you did a good job on doing it! Accepted. Chapter 1 a dit : Chapter 2 a dit : Here you go! |
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I see my bestfriend reading this, interesting story too me is in! ![]() Name: Jaye Flow Bio: Works at The Resistance. Writes papers of how the Resistance group sabotoges the Cats. Next year later a mouse tells about the newspapper. Now Jaye is on a death threat she hides secretly giving out newpapers. See is seeking revenge on whoever that mouse who told. Good friends with Patricia. Age: 23 |
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Xbetrayal a dit : I'm happy that you guys are friends and you made a Character Request! <3 Accepted Chapter 3: The Resistance: Coming soon! |
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As being one of flyingpiggi's accounts,I will make 1 ![]() Name:Doroadi(call her Doro)Gart age:22 bio:As a spy of the resistance,she has been with Mimi and reporting about her.Her and Mimi are friends,but Doro can't let cats take over.She sometimes helps Jaye with the newspapers and is Patrica's cousin.She prefers to act like a leader,even if shes the leader's helper.She has all the abilities of Patrica,whom she calls Pat.If Doro haddnt join,nothing would be in order and Pat couldnt be able to orginize everything.As her cuz,she acts like shes older and tries to make the best of everyone.She also is very stong and once in a while brings Mimi over when the cats are gone.Aperently the cats trust her with Mimi |
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Bombkitty a dit : Accepted I haven't been on for 2 days,so I decided to get my lazy butt up and write Chapter 3 :/ I need to update the message board :/ [quote=Chapter 3:] Jaye typed on the computer. Patricia stopped her "When are you going to stop risking your life?" "Right when you stop being a trouble maker." replied Jaye. Patricia hugged Jaye "Some day we're going to get captured." Jaye smiled "We have time" Patricia's cat circled around her. "I bet that's the only new thing you treat nice." Patricia fed the cat cheese "She reminds me of a mice and myself." Jaye laughed "It likes the cheese, might as well call it a mouse" Patricia walked up to the computer "Any missions?" Jaye opened up window on her computer "Well there's a girl named Mimi" Doroadi walked in "That I'm taking!" Patricia gasped "Erm... no, Doro I'm taking this one." "Well the Cat Guard like me instead you, so I'll just swoop her up!" Jaye sighed "Doro has a point." Doro smiled "Delcared. I'm taking this one Pat!" Doro walked out of the room. Pat smiled "She thinks this is sooo easy" [/quote] |
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Love the new chapter C: |
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Adoviaspeed a dit : Oh meh god thank yah I'm writing Chapter 4 |
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Appleloom a dit : Hmm... can I make another character? |
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Xbetrayal a dit : Sure! Chapter 4: Doro's misson Doro walked into the maps, silently. There she saw Mimi and the soliders. Doro pulled out a 3 tiny sheep, she snuck behind them and put it in the soliders pockets. All of a sudden, Mimi heard a loud noise. Out of the dust, she saw Doro. "Why would you do this?" said Mimi. "For you, we got to catch up with my cloud." replied Doro. Mimi cried "Well I'm not going!" Doro laughed "So they can suspect it was you and get a death threat? They kill you at any age!" Mimi turned her back on Doro "I'll just tell the guards that you did it." Doro gasped "Thats your excuse? Sweet little Doro did the blood splattering? Mimi looked back at her "Fine.. I'll go to The Resistance" Doro smiled "That's what I was looking forward to." Doro and Mimi stepped onto the cloud and went to The Resistance. ____________________ Chapter 5: New Comer!: Doro came back to The Resistance "Done with the misson!" Patricia sighed "Yeah..Yeah..Yeah we got a new comer." Doro gasped "Who?" Patricia pointed at Blossom "Her, shes only a teen. Good for a spy." Blossom picked up cheese and ate it. She missed the taste of cheese, and the smell of it. "I have one mission for you!" said Jaye Blossom gasped "What is it?" Jaye smiled "It's not that simple, but pass out these papers" Blossom looked at the paper with the Resistance secret code, Teha Eh Fahreh Mahice. In mice language, It was The Free Mice. Blossom put on the sunglasses and coat. She stuffed the Cat's newspapers so the Cat Guards might pick up the wrong newpaper. "Good Luck!" said Doro Blossom headed out the door, she ran quickly to the first street, Engage. Blossom took deep breaths, She was wondering if she would get caught. The Resistance was all about taking risk. "What's that in yoour bag?" said The Cat Guards Blossom smiled "Just passing out the newspapers" Blossom gave the Cat Guard one of the newspapers, but it wasn't the Resistance ones. "Gone on,I'll scan this newspaper." said the Cat Guard Every hole she came to she tilt her head down so the neighborhood didn't know that she was Blossom. Blossom returned to the Resistance hole. "That was easy!" Patricia smiled "That's the easy part, I want you to go on a mission with me, taking off a Cat's Claw." "What!" said Blossom |
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hi friend i dont know if you consider it critique or not but new characters must speak every line "Why would you do this?" said Mimi. "For you, we got to catch up with my cloud." replied Doro. Mimi cried. "Well I'm not going!" Doro laughed. "So they can suspect it was you and get a death threat? They kill you at any age!" like this not in a big jumble interesting story :] looking forward to more |
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Haruhitastic a dit : Thank you I'll change it C: |
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Name: Meifee (Mei for short) Bio: Meifee was an outcast in her family for 17 years. Her older brother was the only family member who didn't make Mei an outcast. She couldn't take the teasing and escaped her house with her brother. She joined The Resistance and is now a spy along with her mates of the Resistance. Age: 22 ![]() |
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Accepted! :D *I'm using my friend's account" |
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Adoviaspeed a dit : What she said. _______________ I got mixed up Chapter 5 is supposed to be Chapter 4 XD |
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![]() Name:dianne Bio: She was Also a newspaper writer.She writes about all kinds of stories.She likes black and white a lot.But,when she heard about the cats,she made a newspaper about the nasty things that cats do,all of the mice read the newspaper then,the cats got angry.She got fired from the resistance and started fighting the cats,she also got a training for using the sword. Age:28 |
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Queenlordess a dit : Accepted ___________ I've been really lazy, I'll probably write more chapters to make it up. Chapter 6: Long Time No See "I'm sorry but I'm not ready this" said Blossom "Stop being such a big baby, we'll need a disguise" said Patricia. Blosom was terrifed, she wasn't ready for a death threat so early. She didn't want to hide in secret for life. Patricia colored her hair blonde and got rid of the hat and knife. "Don't you need the knife" asked Blossom "You don't need a weapon to fight a cat." Patricia patted Blossom "When you get to those Cat Guards I want you to act like a stupid girl, even at 13." Chapter 7: |