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My first fanfiction for transformice!
Hope you would like it!
NOTE TO MODS: Please delete my past fiction i wrote randomly, thank you.
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Intro a dit :

It is said in the highest tower bears an oozing liquid from above, when it is touched, mice can grow wings. One peaceful day, a greedy mouse decided to take all the liquid for himself, bottle by bottle, he accidentally fell into the pit of liquid. Desperate to come out he died, it was not long his corpse started reacting to it, it came out of the liquid and the corpse grew gigantic wings and the body became half alive, his fur is pale and is not easily recognizable. He started toring all of transformice into half, especially the sky. The emperor, of all pegamice demanded the guards to lock the beast away in the tower, and so it was done. But every year, a crack will start to break, the bigger the crack, the more the mice would be in danger

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Characters


Name: *Emperor Kamikaze
Gender: Male
Nature: Docile
Age: 36
Wing color: Gold
Description: He rules the pegamice but he's very noble and loyal, he keeps all of his subjects safe from the attacking of the beast. He is very responsible and never gets distracted.
Extra:


Name: *Emperess Ji
Gender: Female
Nature: Modest
Age 32
Wing color: Light blue
Description: She is the wife of Emperess kamikaze, she loves animals and things free. But she does not like villagers near her daughter, despite the fact that thay are mean to her.
Extra: Her flower changes depending on emotion


Name: *Grand duchess Naomi
Gender: Female
Nature: Impish
Age: 18
Wing color: Light blue
Description: She always wanted to be in the village life, she gets bored when her father isn't around and gets into mischeif, she has a secret best friend who is a villager.
Extra: Her wings are a bit bigger than her parents'


Name: *Amber P. Macintosh
Gender: Female
Nature: Mild
Age: 18
Wing color: Light pink
Description: She tries her best to keep her family alive, she always end up failing. She is a handicapped pegamouse who can't fly, she is best friends with naomi and she has a pansear she found as an egg.
Extra: Her hair is longer
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Rules:
1. NO RIDICULOUS NAMES
2. This was before technology so no headphones, laser swords, etc.
3. All mice are supposed to have wings, no subsitutes.
4. NO ANYTHING LIKE the beast's long lost brother OR SOMETHING.
5. If the pack bar is full im afraid you have to join another pack or not join.

Name:
Gender:
Nature:
Age:
Wing color:
Description:
Extra:
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Part1 a dit :

"Come on i know you can do it!" Cheered Naomi while her head is covered by a brown hood "Uhh i don't know if i could..." Amber disagreed, while her wings shivered like a cold breeze came "Oh well, i supposed you can't right now..." She replied back, just as Amber come down with her, Naomi pushed her off the cliff. Amber screamed and flapped her wings as hard as she can, trying to reach the edge. She eventually fell, but Naomi flew and catched her. "Ha, i knew, you can't do it" teased Naomi, as soon as she exclaimed back, the bell from her royal tower rang, Naomi told Amber it was time for her to go back to her family before it was too late. But the same bell rang again, Amber thought it was urgent so she agreed to follow her. In the tower, all the pegamice seem to be worried, just then the emperor came with an announcement "Ahem! As you may all know, there is something happening in the tower where we lock the beast." He responded, the crowd started to worry, thinking they would be in trouble. "Now now don't you all start any riots, you see, we are low on guards, mysteriously one by one, they disappear from the horizon, so my wife and i had an idea.", he unscrolled a big list. "We needed warriors to protect our kingdom, as all of you can see there are only 3 packs for you all to join because of the major loss." He scrolled it back "If you wish to join one of the packs then enter your name in the bulletin. All pegamice will be immediatley be sent to their pack houses in a week or so." The emperor left.

Part2 a dit :

All the pegamice wanted to join pack ace, the pack leader looked kind and respectful, never deceiving. Pega, joined first, he was lucky he was co-leader of the pack. A lot of mice joined pack ace, Asphodelus, Shard and Ashen. Link, on the other hand, wasn't very lucky so she decided to join pack bullseye instead. "Ugh, no fair, i wanted to join pack ace too! It's name is awesome!" Link complained as she sharpened her sword. The other mice ignored him, since she was just as weird as they thought. Only a few mice joined pack loyalty, the emperor was not glad about that situation. "I'm going to go to the pack house and make robots." said Pega, "Robots? why robots? i hate robots." Shard fussed, crossing his arms "Since i can't fly, i will build robots that can levitate, and ride on them." he replied, he went to the pack house and started building. "Umm i'm going to help pega with his uhh robots." Ashen responded, she flew there, "Alright fine, as long as there no kitten robots..." he angrily agreed, he also went with them. "Hmph, come on pack bullseye, let's go back to the pack house." Minjitzu demanded her pack mates. Link put her foot out and Minjitzu stumbled across it, she stood up, she wanted to punch her in the face so bad, but she calmed down her temper and went to their pack house. Amber and Naomi looked at the list of the packs "I'm going to join pack bullseye." Amber thought, her pansear also went determined. "NO! you can't go out there! you might kill yourself!" Naomi disagreed, "Naomi, this is a serious situation, if i don't help them out there, we can ALL get killed." she replied back, Naomi began to think about this. "Okay fine, but PLEASE don't hurt yourself." she agreed.

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Pack Loyalty:
1.Anniebiscus (Meifee)
2.
3.
4.
5.(RESERVED FOR CHARACTER)
Pack Bullseye:
1.Queenlordess (Minjitzu)
2.Snowywindsky (Snowy)
3.Ilingirl (Link)
4.
5.(RESERVED FOR CHARACTER)
Pack Ace (CLOSED):
1.Pegasmice (Pega)
2.Sirusthemice (Asphodelus)
3.Shardpixel (Shard)
4.Mjmtheepic (Ashen)
5.(RESERVED FOR CHARACTER)
Loyalty - Those mice who wish to help the villagers or his/her other pack mate.

Bullseye - Those mice who wish to stand guard and fight.

Ace - Those mice who wish to defend and dodge attacks.

:D That's cute :D ....a story about me :))


Name: Pegasmice {Pega}
Gender: Male
Nature: ingenious
Age: 24
Wing color: {pale red}


Description: he isn't like others Pegas-mice;
Unlike other, he can't fly so he builds robots to move...
Extra: Some robots: [img] http://cdn.superbwallpapers.com/wallpapers/3d/flying-robot-24259-400x250.jpg [/img]

[img] http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_BXuIyFI0qOw/TQV-PgLfF5I/AAAAAAAAA0w/rXk_S7T58_g/s1600/old+man+bot.jpg [/img]

Pegasmice a dit :

:D That's cute :D ....a story about me :))

Name: Pegasmice {Pega}
Gender: Male
Nature: ingenious
Age: 24
Wing color: {pale red}

Description: he isn't like others Pegas-mice;
Unlike other, he can't fly so he builds robots to move...
Extra: Some robots:

Please select a pack :)

Pack Loyalty:
1.
2.
3.
4.
Pack Bullseye:
1.
2.
3.
4.
Pack Ace:
1.
2.
3.
4.

Loyalty - Those mice who wish to help the villagers or his/her other pack mate.

Bullseye - Those mice who wish to stand guard and fight.

Ace - Those mice who wish to defend and dodge attacks.

Dijz a dit :

Please select a pack :)

Pack Loyalty:
1.
2.
3.
4.
Pack Bullseye:
1.
2.
3.
4.
Pack Ace:
1.
2.
3.
4.

Loyalty - Those mice who wish to help the villagers or his/her other pack mate.

Bullseye - Those mice who wish to stand guard and fight.

Ace - Those mice who wish to defend and dodge attacks.

Ace :3

pack bullseye


Name: Minjitzu
Gender: girl
Nature:wrecked
Age:23
Wing color:White
Description:She flies very fast and fights all the time.She never had cried a single teardrop in her life.She always fights for peace and purity but also,her weakness is getting nervous about extreme fights.
Extra:Her emotions are powerful so,dont try to get her angry or else.....

Name: Meifee
Gender: Female
Nature: Mild
Age: 22
Wing color: Red
Description: Meifee usually runs in a fight very easily and is easily angered. When she's angry, she usually uses her notorious crystal sword with the power of light.
Extra: Her crystal sword of light
Pack: Pack Loyalty

Name: Asphodelus ( or just Asph )
Gender: Female
Nature: Enigmatic
Age: 26
Wing color: black ( in contrast to everything hahaha )
Description: A mysterious individual, Asphodelus holds great power. Quick on flight and has weak emotions. Very little is known about her but her name and age.
Extra: The pupil in her eyes is white instead of black.
Pack: Pack Ace

Added :)

Name: Snowy
Gender: Female
Nature: Love
Age: 19 (Not Real age)
Wing color: Icy Blue Or Rose Pike The Light Rose Pink.
Description: As A Little Mouse Snowy Was Plain. But At Age 19 She Made A New Power No Mouse Dared To Try It But Her, The Undead Sham.
Extra: She May Look Inocent But Is Not She Is One Fighter Who Cares For Others.
Pack: Bullseye

Ooo this sounds good!

May I...? ovo

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Name: Shard
Gender: Male
Nature: Devious
Age: 27
Wing color: Black
Description: Stubborn at times, Shard has a harsh temper. He's a bit anti-social, but determined to save the world at all costs. He's a very good swordsman.
Extra: Shard has a talent rarely matched of blending into shadows quite easily.
Pack: Ace

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Sorry if the name is ridiculous o3o

(Sorry it wouldnt save as transparent on my laptop)
Name: Ashen
Gender: Female
Nature: Modest
Age: 26
Wing color: Blue
Description: Ashen is always nice to people if you were nice to her She has always wanted to be a hero and help the world. She loves flying and is a really fast flyer.
Extra: She has a little blue glowing bubble around her
Pack: Ace

Dijz a dit :

Added :)

thnx :)

Name: Link
Gender: Female
Nature: Weird
Age: 16
Wing color: Green
Description: Known as the legend of the forest , she can camoflauge because of her clothes and green wings . Very powerful and smart but really weird . Nobody know why she lives in the forest , but legends say that when the beast came to life , she was one of the mice to seal him off.
Extra:Not that polite . Has a sword made out of steel with weird inscriptions on it. Is the youngest out of the fighters but still one of the best
Pack : Bullseye

5 words, Picture and full pack sorry!

Added!

Dijz a dit :

5 words, Picture and full pack sorry!

Added!

well... can I change my pack then to bullseye? :3

Okay! but your mouse?

Dijz a dit :

Okay! but your mouse?

I was like... what do you mean. then I edit a little bit the post.. and then I realise that I didn't put the ref... Retarded me is retarded..

Okay there's the ref XD
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Let me give a moment to write the next part :)
EDIT:

Part2 a dit :

All the pegamice wanted to join pack ace, the pack leader looked kind and respectful, never deceiving. Pega, joined first, he was lucky he was co-leader of the pack. A lot of mice joined pack ace, Asphodelus, Shard and Ashen. Link, on the other hand, wasn't very lucky so she decided to join pack bullseye instead. "Ugh, no fair, i wanted to join pack ace too! It's name is awesome!" Link complained as she sharpened her sword. The other mice ignored him, since she was just as weird as they thought. Only a few mice joined pack loyalty, the emperor was not glad about that situation. "I'm going to go to the pack house and make robots." said Pega, "Robots? why robots? i hate robots." Shard fussed, crossing his arms "Since i can't fly, i will build robots that can levitate, and ride on them." he replied, he went to the pack house and started building. "Umm i'm going to help pega with his uhh robots." Ashen responded, she flew there, "Alright fine, as long as there no kitten robots..." he angrily agreed, he also went with them. "Hmph, come on pack bullseye, let's go back to the pack house." Minjitzu demanded her pack mates. Link put her foot out and Minjitzu stumbled across it, she stood up, she wanted to punch her in the face so bad, but she calmed down her temper and went to their pack house. Amber and Naomi looked at the list of the packs "I'm going to join pack bullseye." Amber thought, her pansear also went determined. "NO! you can't go out there! you might kill yourself!" Naomi disagreed, "Naomi, this is a serious situation, if i don't help them out there, we can ALL get killed." she replied back, Naomi began to think about this. "Okay fine, but PLEASE don't hurt yourself." she agreed.

Remember ^_^ if minjitzu goes angry she will activate her anger septer and jail her enemies in her anger speare.
Remember ^_^ if she gets super mad she will get out of control and jail anybody with her anger speare without her even knowing!

Queenlordess a dit :

Remember ^_^ if minjitzu goes angry she will activate her anger septer and jail her enemies in her anger speare.
Remember ^_^ if she gets super mad she will get out of control and jail anybody with her anger speare without her even knowing!

Oh okay! :)

She's just a little on temper.