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[Fanfiction] Unknown Glitch - Part 2
Xstarryhalox
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If you haven't read the first one, please do! Topic-747878

Thank you. Now, we begin the next part.


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Chapter 6: The Talk
"Error, why don't you let the mice free?" Asked Starry. She wanted to know more about what his plan was. Error replied, "That's not your business." He narrowed his eyes at the 5 mice. Power narrowed his eyes too, Error looking at Powerful, and Powerful looking at Error. "Tell us what your little 'PLAN' is." Asked Zoomie, suspicions on Error. "Fine, you stupid furballs. My plan is to have Transformice ALL to myself, and nobody ever BOTHERING me, and nobody to boss me around. No mouse shall escape the castle, THEY'RE ALL GOING TO DIE! AHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH!" Error said. Rainbow wanted to wring him by the neck, really hard. "THEN WE'LL BREAK THE PRISON OURSELVES!" She shot back. "Fine, go and TRY. You're all to puny to break the prison." Error said, turning his back. Argon knew they had to have mice escape...

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Chapter 7: "Breaking" Bad
All mice stomped to the shadowed prison, angry. They knew they couldn't break the prison, but somebody had to. "Let's just TRY and break it." Argon said, a little hope in his heart. "Are you out of your MIND?" Zoomie said. "That thing is as hard as a companion crate!" She exclaimed. "Wait a minute..." Starry said, while she examined the shadowed castle. "This thing isn't pure steel.... It's sealed with darkness and evil!" She squeaked. The castle had an ominous gray glow around it, making Power get the chills. "Oh great, is that WORSE?" He asked. Starry wasn't so sure about it, but she replied, "Maybe, but I don't know for sure. We don't know if touching it will kill us or not, so be careful." Argon had an idea in mind. "Let's throw a rock at it, and see what it does to the rock." He exclaimed. Argon could be right, thought Starry. "May I do the honors?" Rainbow asked, with puppy dog eyes. "Eh whatever, do what you want." Said Argon. Rainbow picked up a rock, and gave it a strong throw at the castle. The darkened jail dissolved the rock, in less than five seconds. They all knew they couldnt do it.


Chapter 8: Blade
"What do we do now?" Zoomie asked frantically. "Yeah, do we go back?" Power questioned. Argon thought for a moment. "We HAVE to fight Error, it's the only way!" Argon exclaimed. He was right, and all the mice agreed. They all followed Error's disgusting smell, but on the way they ran into a mysterious Shaman. "Hello, young travelers.." He said mysteriously. "From now on to this point, you all are trying to track down Error928. You need the courage of a mouse warrior, the heart of a lion, warm and soft, the skills of a leopard, and the eye of the tiger." The Shaman went on. "My name is Blade, a fellow Shaman from the Temple of Skill. You will have a strange encounter, and the five of you will expierience a strange thing." The five mice exchanged looks, then looked back at Blade. He was gone! "What do you think he meant?" Asked Zoomie. "I'm not sure, but something wise I bet." Replied Starry. The sky was darkening, but turned a maroon purple. This had never happen before.


Chapter 9: Wolves!
The mice stared into the dark maroon sky. A strong wind blew the mice around. "Yikes, what's happening?!?!" Rainbow said, her claws digging into the ground to hold her place. Strange wolves started to run down from a hill, going straight toward the mice! Starry was frozen in fear. So were the others. Argon was trembling in fear, and nobody could move because of the strong wind. They were all doomed. A quick wolf sprang onto Starry first, digging it's fangs into Starry's neck. "NO!" Screamed Argon, as he pushed the wolf off Starry's back. All mice were being attacked, but the clawmarks and bitemarks on Starry turned a dark purple. Argon's wounds turned grassy green, Rainbow's wounds turned a neon yellow. Powerful's wounds turned a pale cyan blue. Zoomie's wounds turned a dark blue. The wolves fled soon after, and the five mice felt very strange. The wolves must have had powers and spread them, because Zoomie shot water out of her paw. They all had elemental powers!


Chapter 10: Battle Of The Ages
"Whoah, we have powers?" Said Power, eyes widened. "I guess our powers are based on color, like blue is water and ice." Replied Zoomie. She must have been right. "C'mon, let's show Error what we can do!" Shouted Rainbow. The five mice zoomed over to Error's darkened home. "WE'RE READY TO FIGHT YOU!" Shouted Starry. Error emerged from the door of his house. "Alright. Let's see you get DELETED!" He said, grinning. Starry got angered, and her eyes turned a glowing red. She shifted into a wolf, with piercing red eyes. She tore at Error's neck with her claws deeply. Argon raised his paws, and thorns burst from the ground. the thorns tied around Error's paws, so he couldn't glitch. Starry was painfully clawing Error, when he glitched free of the vines. Rainbow shot a powerful bright beam at Error, making him fall. Zoomie froze error's arms and legs to the ground, so he couldn't move. Starry lept onto Error's body, ripped off his horns, and let Power finish him. He shot lightning from his paws, killing Error. He faded away mysteriously.


Chapter 11: Getting "Saves"
Starry's anger wore off, and she shifted back into a mouse. Starry had dark powers, Zoomie ice and water powers, Argon had Earth powers, Power had weather powers, and Rainbow had Bright powers. Soon the dark castle dissolved, as it did to the rock. All of the mice were swarming out of the castle, and some of them were thanking the five mice. And so the day went on, every mouse doing their things, like celebrating the Shaman Festival, or hanging in their Tribe House, or getting Cheese, or mice just being mice.

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Welcome to Flag2, credits :o

Starry - Xstarryhalox
Zoomie - Zoomieamvaj
Power - Powerfulclaw
Argon - Argonjk
Rainbow - Rainbowgolde

Look up those names :) add them to your friends. Whisper them. Congratulate them for being in the fanfic.
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Any new ideas for another Fanfiction? POST YOUR IDEAS BELOW! :)

My ideas:

Error928 Returns,

Dimension Jumpers

Time Travelers,

Mice go to Roman Times


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[Post MORE Ideas Below!] :D
Welcome to Flag4. If you want to be in the next fanfiction, you must have the following:

Nickname: (It's shorter and easier instead of saying your full username)
Gender: (Say yer gender, of course)
Age: (You can make it up, have it real life, or in TFM years)
Side: (Good or Evil)
Ref: (If you can't post a ref, just describe it in words, i'll accept that.)

Follow dem! XD

Slots open for fanfic: (DISCLUDING MAIN CHARACTERS)
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(Main characters: Starry, Argon, Zoomie, Powerful, and Rainbow)
Xstarryhalox
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The new sequal to "Unknown Glitch" has been released :D

Yaaaaaay! Read as you please.
Xstarryhalox
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[EDIT]


I am taking mice for my new fanfic!!!


CLICK FLAG 4 FOR MORE ABOUT IT :D
Jaedee
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i think i might join this! :D
Queenlordess
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ME! ME!

Nickname: Lucidia
Gender: FEMALE OF COURSE WTF
Age: 18
Side: Evil
Ref: http://i.imgur.com/dzb2C3T.png

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Nickname:Doris
Gender;Female
Age:16
Side:Good
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Atearatareta
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Nickname: (It's shorter and easier instead of saying your full username) Moon
Gender: (Say yer gender, of course) Female
Age: (You can make it up, have it real life, or in TFM years) 16
Side: (Good or Evil) Good
Ref: (If you can't post a ref, just describe it in words, i'll accept that.) http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2015/037/9/7/moon_by_snowstormishdabest-d8gxfo2.png (E// for the sequel, ofcourse)

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Corduroy
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I don't think this fanfiction is in use anymore since the last time the creator posted was last year.
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