[quote=About:] In transformice, there was a odd chemical spill that came from nowhere, it started spreading first as a liquid into the water of vanilla and normal maps.. Then, it infected the cheese. It didn't kill or harm the mice, but it changed their lives. The chemical was sorta invisable, as if it was disguised. It soon came to be that the chemical had a different effect on every mouse that it came in-contact with. It gave them powers, not any powers that would last till the time. The powers were to improve their lives and help them onto a mission that will be unknown.. (Opps, too much information there.) In this story, you will meet the characters that will find out where this chemical came from, and how it belongs to their fate and destiny. [/quote]

Hello! Welcome to my 1st Fanfiction! ( Prepare for awesomeness )
This is a mystery fanfiction btw, I love writing mysteries! ^U^
(Comedy and Adventure is also Included)

Here are the characters me and my friends made:



Name: Luna (Aka Starzie for nickname)
Age: 14
Sex: Female
Power from Chemical: To see what others don't see.
Background: She lives in a apartment complex outside of town. She likes to create things with certain objects and make funny jokes with her friends. Her secret admired hobby is to stargaze and look at the planets in her telescope. Being a little more mature than her friends at school, her parents allow her to go on her own and adventure. That's how she finds many intresting things. This is when she found Jazabelle, which had found her magnet. Since her parents died that day, Jazabelle became her new best friend, and her new sister!
Personality: Adventurous, Friendly and Cheerful, Very brave and honest with the older. She hates whoever is her enemy, can be a bit easily annoyed when it comes to being bossed around since she got her freedom to go on her own. Hates being a follower, but she likes being a side leader.



Name: Jazebelle
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Power from chemical: Invisibility
Background: Jazabelle lived in a silent side of town near the shadows, her family was poor and did whatever they could to take care of her. They gave her the best they could afford for clothing. They couldn't afford school for her, so she was home schooled in their tiny house. One day, she found a object while exploring the city! It was a magnet that could detect money. However, when she ran home with all the excitement she had to show that they weren't poor anymore with the fantastic treasure.. There, she saw with her own eyes.. Her mom and dad were dead. After everything they did for their beloved daughter, she now had to live on her own with the knowledge she had.

Personaility: Shy, Friendly, Depressed and Determined. She can be playful and unaware of dangers. However, since now she has bee infected by the mysterious chemical, she can see her surroundings more easier than being
distracted by others. Very Adventurous, without it, she wouldn't have ever met Luna! (aka Starzie)

Luna: Yup! She's my big sis! ^U^
Jazabelle: Hehe.. Umm... Hi...?




Name: Seiko
Age: 16
Sex: Female
Power from Chemical: Physics (Can move things by using her mind)
Background: Lived into new things and a new world. Spoiled as a young girl. But very friendly among others and liked to share. She was rich with the new big booms and bought almost everything that came out like a fresh pie from a oven. She wasn't always selfish with her money that she got from her hard work, she often donated to help the poor mice and gave cheese away for those who couldn't mae a good living. However, once she had all the stuff she wanted, she became very lazy and played video games and watched movies. Popular for knowledge and humor, she always thought the movies and video games as if it was real life. Which made her become very idiotic in school.. Also making sorta bad grades since she wouldn't study.

Personality: Very nerdy girl and extremely involved with technology. Likes hacking into awesome and secret information to crack the code before the others. Very good at solving difficult problems and loves eating pizza!
Can easily tell by a person's mood and expression to describe their feeling and what is on their mind. Very annoying since she is a very socialable person but also a internet geek. ( Can totally be a fangirl for those awesome mice out there! ) Can be frightend easily, but also angered. Lives in a game-infested house, knows every movie, video game, and etc.

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Name: Skylar
Age: 16
Sex: Female
Power from Chemical: FLIGHT!~ (has wings)
Background: It was nothing but sadness after the death off her family and friends. Her life was empty, roaming the streets just as empty. She stood fearless, and did what she could, to protect her empty homeland. One day, as she defencelessly ran from blood-sucking phantoms, she tripped on a rock, but something appeared to be on it. As Skylar turned her head to look at the rock, she saw a bow, probably left behind from one of the villagers. Reluctantly, she picked it up, knowing she was taught not to steal. "Unless they are dead!" she remarked at her own words. She found it fit great in her hands, as she prepared to fight or die. Skylar didn't have much expoerence, but somehow, she made it. Now, everyone as gone, but she didn't want to leave. She would rest in a nearby forest, learning to hunt and care for herself. by 14, she was great at it. Almost becoming plump, the food was plentiful. Though she had a passion for nature, she did what she must. now, at 16, she is one of the wild.
Extras?: loves cannons, trolling, and someday, dreams of flying.
personality: A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.
can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
Likes arts, animals, music, and literataure.
Dislikes loud noises, fighting, bossy people.




name:Ricari(aka NightStar)
Age:14
boy

power:Sleeping powder,dizzyness,and tear gas.So like all the powder and stuff

personality:Sly,not that kind,thinks is best,also he has used his powas to try to ttake over tfm.He is also trying to get others to join him.He doesnt like mice,he only cares for himself,and he only likes to see missery.But he still deosnt care if its his.He also has a goal to inslave the mice.Also insane and just yells somethimes when he doesnt get things.He mostly yell then :L
background:He was rased well,he was a good child until he got lost in a vanilla.He hasnt seen his parents since.HE would do whatever to get sheese.All that time,the mice drove him insane.He hated eveyone.When he got powers,the power of the power(THAT MAKE S NO SENCE XD it sounds worng)went to his head and he thought he could get revenge,of what he THOUGHT happened.He thought that they took his parents.And he doesnt care about what happens to anyone but himself. Also, when he got his powers,he never seemed to need sleep.He would stay up,getting cheese.Yet he kneew all the cheese was infected,and he was getting stronger.He would knock some1 out with the powder just for their cheese.



Name:Vuvik
Age:14
Sex:Female
Power: Teleport to a place she has been before or a short distance.
Background:She lived alone,but mainly gathered cheese for the whole day and night,she rarely slept,though she never seems to get tired.
Personality:Serious,active,easily angered,when angered can be really angry towards anyone and yells,she does care about others,but loses control when angered,she also hates lazy mice.

Ricari might be the cause for Vuvik to sleep for a while.




Name:Josellie
Age:18
Sex:Female
Power from chemical:Super speed
Background:In korea,She usually eats cheese instead of sushi,pretty weird huh?
Personality:Sensitive,Brave,Adventurer,Sometimes a scaredycat,she can run in all the countries of the world only for 5 seconds!She have a lot of friends



Name: Evesse
Age: 15
Sex: Female
Power from chemical: Forever divine mode (always turned on even as of when a normal mouse) This is why shes called "the winged shamouse" because she has wings everywhere she goes from divine mode
Backround: Her favorite challenge is trying to gather 100 which is a challege for her of laziness.
Personality: A little strict and angry.



Age:20
name:Amaro
Sex:boy
Power: (Optional, but you cannot copy someone else's power!)Freeze when he wants to he can stop
Background:Old friends with Richari.HE was his Bff when they were younger.BUt as they got older,the farter they got. HE moved all the way at the other side of tfm. But then when he got his powers,he went to join Richari. He knew what he would do.
Personality:Disobedeant, jerk sometimes, lazy, likes to freeze things for no reson (like the time he froze the shaman so he could take the cannons,) and has a crush on Josellie.♡ Awww.




Name: Shard
Age: 27
Sex: Male
Power: Ability to transform into swift shadows
Background: He was only 4 years old when his parents disappeared mysteriously. Following the incident, he stayed indoors most of his life until he turned 20. At that age, he finally came to the outside world and seldom played anything but survivor, enjoying watching the other mice being sent off the ledges. After a few years, he became a professional at knocking mice over and standing in triumph as a shaman.
Personality: Sometimes stubborn, sometimes elegant, mostly annoying, always devilish.




Name: Foxie J
Age: 23
Sex: Female
Power: Levitation and manipulation of objects around her
Background: She came from the depths of her tribe house as she had no idea who her real parents were, always got into fights and learnt how to become tough from the people she met. She's been a strong fighter ever since she was 10 years old and hasn't failed to defend herself. However, she does get hurt a lot in battle, so she is often found with scratches and scars.
Personality: Bitchy, tough, sometimes offensive, sometimes helpful to whichever side she's on, determined.
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I will add your characters, I need new characters anyway to start the first chapter. If I don't think I can write a fanfiction with all of your character req, there will be a limit.
~Sorry :(


However...
#GoodLuck!

Name: Skylar
Age: 16
Sex: Female
Power from Chemical: FLIGHT!~ (has wings)
Background: It was nothing but sadness after the death off her family and friends. Her life was empty, roaming the streets just as empty. She stood fearless, and did what she could, to protect her empty homeland. One day, as she defencelessly ran from blood-sucking phantoms, she tripped on a rock, but something appeared to be on it. As Skylar turned her head to look at the rock, she saw a bow, probably left behind from one of the villagers. Reluctantly, she picked it up, knowing she was taught not to steal. "Unless they are dead!" she remarked at her own words. She found it fit great in her hands, as she prepared to fight or die. Skylar didn't have much expoerence, but somehow, she made it. Now, everyone as gone, but she didn't want to leave. She would rest in a nearby forest, learning to hunt and care for herself. by 14, she was great at it. Almost becoming plump, the food was plentiful. Though she had a passion for nature, she did what she must. now, at 16, she is one of the wild.
Extras?: loves cannons, trolling, and someday, dreams of flying.
personality: A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.
can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
Likes arts, animals, music, and literataure.
Dislikes loud noises, fighting, bossy people.
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woot im excited

Whoa o.o
Thanks Birdluv!
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Im going to add it to the list, maybe tommorow I can write the first chapter!

name:Ricari(aka NightStar)
Age:14
boy

powa:Sleeping powder,dizzyness,and tear gas.So like all the powder and stuff

personality:Sly,not that kind,thinks is best,also he has used his powas to try to ttake over tfm.He is also trying to get others to join him.He doesnt like mice,he only cares for himself,and he only likes to see missery.But he still deosnt care if its his.He also has a goal to inslave the mice.Also insane and just yells somethimes when he doesnt get things.He mostly yell then :L
background:He was rased well,he was a good child until he got lost in a vanilla.He hasnt seen his parents since.HE would do whatever to get sheese.All that time,the mice drove him insane.He hated eveyone.When he got powers,the power of the power(THAT MAKE S NO SENCE XD it sounds worng)went to his head and he thought he could get revenge,of what he THOUGHT happened.He thought that they took his parents.And he doesnt care about what happens to anyone but himself>Also when he got his powers,he never seemed to need sleep.He would stay up,getting cheese.Yet he kneew all the cheese was infected,and he was getting stronger.He would knock some1 out with the powder just for their cheese.

Luna: Holy crap thats horrifying...
Jazebelle: Why would you do such a thing ;-;
Seiko: WELL I COULD USE SOME SLEEP.
Luna and Jazebelle: *COLD STARE*
Seiko: Whaaaatt? I'm just giving the evil some compliments! ^U^
Both screaming: DO YOU REALLY WANNA BE A SLAVE?!

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Name:Vuvik
Age:14
Sex:Female
Power: Teleport to a place she has been before or a short distance.
Background:She lived alone,but mainly gathered cheese for the whole day and night,she rarely slept,though she never seems to get tired.
Personality:Serious,active,easily angered,when angered can be really angry towards anyone and yells,she does care about others,but loses control when angered,she also hates lazy mice.

Ricari might be the cause for Vuvik to sleep for a while.

i wanna join :)


Name:Josellie
Age:18
Sex:Female
Power from chemical:Super speed
Background:In korea,She usually eats cheese instead of sushi,pretty weird huh?
Personality:Sensitive,Brave,Adventurer,Sometimes a scaredycat,she can run in all the countries of the world only for 5 seconds!She have a lot of friends

Name: Evesse
Age: 15
Sex: Female
Power from chemical: Forever divine mode (always turned on even as of when a normal mouse) This is why shes called "the winged shamouse" because she has wings everywhere she goes from divine mode
Backround: Her favorite challenge is trying to gather 100 which is a challege for her of laziness.
Personality: A little strict and angry.

Queenlordess a dit :

i wanna join :)

Background:In korea,She usually eats cheese instead of sushi,pretty weird huh?

um no its not weird...just saying that sushi is from japan, not korea..........

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Thank you all for entering your characters! You will be the first characters to be introduced in the awesome and suspensive adventurous mystery of: 'The Disguised Chemicals!'

For now, I shall stop allowing character requests. I am preparing to enter the first 2-3 chapters of the book.
:3 Thank you for the following.

Mandymuis a dit :

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Um, I can use those for my next book of The Disguised Chemicals.
I already have a friend who is doing the banner. However, thank you for the helping hand!
:3

P.s, I might change my mind, so don't be sad. :)

Your doing them now? :O YAY

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i wanna join :)

Name:Josellie
Age:18
Sex:Female
Power from chemical:Super speed
Background:In korea,She usually eats cheese instead of sushi,pretty weird huh?
Personality:Sensitive,Brave,Adventurer,Sometimes a scaredycat,she can run in all the countries of the world only for 5 seconds!She have a lot of friends

korean OR japanese people usually don't even eat sushi as a usual meal though

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I like to scroll down and up how it turns small to big
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[Chapter 1] More Powers in Survivor Than Ever

Laughter was all around, I jumped over the cannons in survivor with slick speed.
Seiko and my sister, Jazebelle were cheering my name: "GO LUNA! GO LUNA! GO LUNA!"
I smiled as I admired my closest fans. Even though I was the youngest, I was strong and swift.
However, there was another mouse by my side. I couldn't really tell who she was. She was as white as snow and faster than the speed of light! She always swiftly avioded the cannons, kicked them with her own feet. Like a brave adventurer fighting off monsters and mad enemies. As I watched her, I didn't realize a cannon flew at me.
It was about 5 inches from my small face. Everything became into slow motion, I heard the screaming: 'NOOOOOOOO!' Then I heard the Crying, However, with my very eyes, I saw the white mouse do the most amazing did a mouse would've ever done in survivor history. She ran as the speed of light, silent with sound but fast with fiery. She pushed me aside, leaving me to the ground. She got hit by the cannon, even though she didn't get kicked off, she catched the cannon as she got hit and swung it away. The angry shaman roared, I didn't even realize what she looked like until now. Sprouted wings, Reddish-Brown hair, golden earring and a clover hanging from her mouth. I could tell she was on divine mode. She had 3 feathers, and she didn't use any b planks or c planks. only cannons, balloons, etc. She didn't look like she was enjoying survivor either. She screamed with anger. "WHY ARE YOU HACKING?! YOU KNOW THAT'S AGAINST THE RULES AROUND HERE!" I never heard such a angry voice in my entire life, for the first time in survivor, I was shivering like a penguin without feathers. The white mouse responded with a brave and strong voice. "I am not a hacker, this power I have came from the chemical spill, if you didn't know." She silently breathed and spoke again: "Besides, why would YOU have divine mode on all the time?" She sorta giggled at her last respond. Seiko screamed with her girlish voice "OH MY GOSH, DID YOU SEE THAT GUYS?! THAT WAS LIKE SOOOOO SUSPENSE! OMG WHOEVER YOU ARE YOU ARE SOOOOO MY HERO! <3" The white mouth smiled, she replied. "No need for pride, you can just consider me a friend. My name is Josellie, I'm not always brave like this... I am sorta a scaredy cat to be honest." I could see the shaman slowly cooling down, I bet she was still angry that a mouse just smart-mouthed her. "Well, you don't seem like a scaredy cat one bit!" I said, gleaming with cheer. The shaman slowly started to speak, "My name is Evesse, I am the winged shaman. Since survivor is pretty useless for my skills, can we all go to vanilla insted?" She kinda smiled, it seemed like the first time she ever smiled since she got angry. Jazebelle whispered to me in her soft, shy tone as she always does: "Luna, what is the chemical spill they are talking about?" Before I could respond to my sister, Seiko came in as the second round started screaming like a immature 8 year old. "OMG WE WOULD LOVE TO GO! YOU GUYS ARE SO AWESOME WITH ACTION!" I sighed, " I guess we could, oh, and Josellie, tell me a little bit more about this chemical spill.."

Coming soon!..

[Chapter 2] Vanilla Isn't Always Sweet
Ok, I just realized I needed 3 more characters for this next chapter.
(Maybe, don't get too rough on the author here, she's a noobie)

P.s, I hope you liked the first chapter!
It was long o_o

Appleloom a dit :

I like to scroll down and up how it turns small to big
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ikr xD

please make Richari in the next!Well he porbably will,since he moutly is in vanilla

i love this

I know!It's great so far!

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[Chapter 2] Vanilla Isn't Always Sweet


Jazabelle, Seiko, Josellie, Evesse and I were heading torward vanilla6. The most popular vanilla in all of transformice! "Oh strawberries!, maybe we'll see some other mice that have powers there too!" I shouted before we entered, and there was! We saw a tan mouse that had wings, she just wasn't on divine mode like Evesse was. It was like she was born with them! Then we saw a mouse that had a siamese coat and a sleeping cap. I saw him knock out a few mice with this so called 'sleeping powder'. Then, we saw a mouse that had alot of customized iteams, she seemed as if she didn't sleep in DAYS! However, it could be even longer than that..Maybe even MONTHS! We waited as the round was over, then we jumped in to play vanilla. "Wow, I haven't played vanilla in forever!" Seiko said, elbowing Evesse by her wing. "Maybe, a DIVINE PRO can teach me a few tricks for my good ol' memory."
Evesse narrowed her eyes as if a flame was going to start inside of them. "As for a 'DIVINE PRO' could say for a few tips, try learning on your own.." Suddenly, as the round started, we all went dashing torward the cheese.
Of course, Josellie went off dashing torward the cheese like sonic the hedgehog. "HOLY CHEESE!" I heard the siamese-coated mouse say without thinking, he looked around as if he was humiliated in public. "Well, she looks like she has too much of a quick tail for you, dustman!" The fluffy mouse smirked as she did her last remark. Seiko shouted out before he could reply with a angry tone. "Yay! I got 1st! Thanks Josellie!" They both turned around as they saw Josellie, helping the other mice. By holding their paws, jumping over obstacles, and wall-climbing. Evesse
walked torward the arguing mice, with a grin on her face. "Yup, that's lil' miss swifty over there.. and the blue-haired one is the cannon master." The shaman didn't even know what to say. She was sitting there like a frog on a log. "Welp, more saves for me!" She suddenly saw the group of them talking to each other. "Hey, aren't ya gonna get the cheese or nawh?" They all said together "Yeah, soon" The shaman blurted out with a cocky laughter. "Soon? Sorry noobs, that isn't good enough!" Then, with a trollish smile, she cannoned them off. Everyone that got cheese held their laughter. "Did you see that?!" I started laughing a little bit when I asked the question. "Yeah! That was soo funny! She has a funny laugh :P" I realized someone was whispering to me, "Oh my gosh, she's whispering to me!" I went in the whisper chat. "Hey, whassup? My name is Skylar. I heard you were a pro at cannons eh? Care for a challenge sometime?" I laughed as I whispered back. "Sure, but I'm warning you! I just might do the moonwalk and make ya cannon yer butt! XD" Skylar replied with her high laugh. "Sure kiddo. You seem like a fun little mouse! Oh, and sorry for cannoning your pal, I just don't like arguing.. It's like babies slapping each other.." I started laughing at the joke, even when the 3 were glaring at me like bulls "You seem like a cannon pro yourself, this will be a intresting challenge.." I shut off my whisper, seeing Skylar smile with a wink. "Oh, it is so on sister" &amp;amp;gt;:3 Then, all of the sudden, the map started again. However, it seemed like it was a gas trap! Everyone was coughing, sputtering, and..sleeping? The last thing I remeber seeing was 2 things:

1. The eyes of a siamese-surprising baddie.
2. Josellie, quickly escaping with a sidekick, or more?

But who is that sidekick? The shaman? the fluffy puff? or both?
Will she come back??
Also, what will the baddie have plans for?

All coming up in the next chapter:

[Chapter 3] The Baddies, The Plans, and rescue!

You can now start entering your new characters!
Remember, only the mission will start after we defeat the evil!
But, will he have more than himself? Or does he have a team of the rebels?