Heyaaa! I've made a lot of threads with stories but I kept receiving stuff like "Sorry, but this isn't TFM related...". Tho I saw A LOT of stories that weren't TFM related and they were allowed still.
Anyways, I'll stop complaining... ^_^

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Welcome to my NEW story that IS TFM related: Lost In Survivor...

~CHARACTERS:



Name: Lizy
Rank: Half pro-half noob
Gender: girl
Age: 11
Bio: A few time ago was a noob, now is half pro-half noob. She was actually born in Vanilla maps and used to them. After her best friend quit the game, Lizy became pretty upset and moved to Survivor maps, where she has a lot of trouble.
Personality: Very funny and nice, polite only sometimes, is a party animal, very social, friendly to most of the mice and adorable. Is always able to get what she wants, no matter how, she will just use her cute doggy eyes.


NOTE: If you want to be a character, fill this form please:
[photo of mouse]
Rank:(it means if ur pro, noob or half pro half noob)
Gender:
Name:
Bio:
Personality:
Other details:

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~ Chapter 1: "Happiness.. and sadness..."
It was a nice day on TFM and Lizy logged in, to find out her BFF left her a small letter. Lizy picked it up curiously and opened it softly, it said:
Dear Lizy,
I'm sorry I have to tell you this way, but I'm quitting TFM... My computer is very broken and has a lot of viruses and I'm afraid it won't work anymore... My dad said we can't afford a new one, and I'm also very busy with exams and tests. I'm sorry Lizy... I have to quit the game, but trust me, I had great times with you and other mice and I hope I can come back as soon as I can!

Love, Cherry

Lizy looked at the letter sadly and a small tear ran down her eyes. She sighed...
"I should move to Bootcamp, to avenge Cherry and learn to be a true pro for her! That's what I'll do!" she thinked.

TO BE CONTINUED......

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Please mods and sentinels, don't lock even this thread! I made it TFM related as good as I could...! Please...

wiat im confused is this about mice playing a mice game

OH COME OOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!!!!! AGAIN?! :CCCC they r gonna lock this again i know it :| *slaps self 5 times* im bad at stories they just lock everything i fucking doooo :'( :'( :C D:

dude i was just asking a question about the setting because i was really confused '-'

yeah but everybody asks questions at first then BOOM the thread gets locked. thats like always happening to me :C

E: lets stop making off topic stuff,
Oh, and to answer ur question, yes, it's about mice playing TFM coz i have no other ideas, any idea I make gets fucking locked by mods :U

E: plz start requesting characters thank you

*She thought*

Xstarryhalox a dit :

*She thought*

Can you plz sop making off topic? :o I need character requests im bored XDD
E: I WANT REQUESTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I made up a new character, hoping I'll encourage you guys to request characters too:



Name: Chicky
Rank: Pro
Gender: girl
Bio: She was also born in Vanilla but she travelled around every zone in the map, becoming a true pro. She now stays mostly in Bootcamp and Survivor, and rarely returns to Vanilla, her natal place.
Personality: "If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you". This phrase <<< describes her perfectly. She can be friendly and polite, but if you mess with her she will get the crap out of you. She ends up being Lizy's new best frien. She can be bratty sometimes, she hates rules and likes liberty and freedom, and has gotten banned a bunch of times.

Chapter 2: Trying and failing...

After Lizy said goodbye to her buddies, she travelled to Bootcamp, just to find herself, and many other mice, NAKED.
-Aaaahhh! she screamed. What is this?! Prison?!
Everybody stared at her.
-It's Bootcamp, noob! a few rude mice replied.
Chicky, a cute and smart girl looked at them.
-Hey weirdos leave her alone! she yelled as she turned her face red.
The bullies ran quickly.
-Don't listen to them, I think you're pro, she said politely.
-Thanks... I think you're here of a long time, I see you're very pro.
-Hmm yeah, I have been here for a couple months... So, newbie, huh?
-Yep... I actually want to learn being a pro, and I throught Bootcamp is the right way for me to learn.
-Well, Bootcamp is for true pros, that's true, but if you want to learn the basics, I suggest Survivor.
-Survivor?! What is that?
-A place where you learn survival skills and other glitches like wj and sp walk.
-That would be awesome!
-Want me to show you where survivor is?
-Yeah, please.
Lizy followed Chicky and they both sprinted to Survivor...

TO BE CONTINUED.....

gj so far!
ill put in a request

Name: alexter
Rank:half pro
Gender: male
bio: lives in vanilla but visits survivor very often rarely seen in bootcamp
Personality:likes to troll and trick ppl. nice to most ppl and is not a very mean person. wants to be included in everything. hates ppl who disagree against him and will start up big fights. likes being independent and doing his own thing.

Rank:(it means if ur pro, noob or half pro half noob) : pro
Gender:Female
Name: Kara
Bio:Came from deathmatch , so she is used to how much cannons can hurt. Got used to survivor when a strange stranger wanted to teach her , now she likes to do tricks to amaze the other mice . Can get into conflicts really easy .
Personality: Really lazy , sarcastic , funny , imature , sometimes sassy .
Other details: Never follows rules , and a bit daredevil . Loves her aviator hat and gets really angry if it gets wet or somebody touches it .

Finally, someone who actully thinks about survivor, so i am still doubting if any of you guys even play it.

I really hope you really express the .. 'mood' you see in survivor rooms. As my expirence
that there are some diffrent groups in it. as en example :The girly girls who use hotkey and stuff, and the tough people
who complain bout the hotkeyers.
Anyway! Love it so far, cant wait to read more!!

Boefie a dit :

Finally, someone who actully thinks about survivor, so i am still doubting if any of you guys even play it.

I really hope you really express the .. 'mood' you see in survivor rooms. As my expirence
that there are some diffrent groups in it. as en example :The girly girls who use hotkey and stuff, and the tough people
who complain bout the hotkeyers.
Anyway! Love it so far, cant wait to read more!!

... well.. I have to say that I don't really play survivor that often.. I never got into it that much.. I just play deathmatch ( we have types of people there too ) soooooo.. I don't think I should be in the story xD

Ilingirl a dit :

... well.. I have to say that I don't really play survivor that often.. I never got into it that much.. I just play deathmatch ( we have types of people there too ) soooooo.. I don't think I should be in the story xD

I play deathmatch too, but ive always been an survivor player. Sadly transformice ruins it with updates.
I would love to play some deathmatch would you and talk about survivor and stuff.

Come online?

Ilingirl a dit :

... well.. I have to say that I don't really play survivor that often.. I never got into it that much.. I just play deathmatch ( we have types of people there too ) soooooo.. I don't think I should be in the story xD

God yes, come online! You rarely ever come online. e.e

Boefie a dit :

I play deathmatch too, but ive always been an survivor player. Sadly transformice ruins it with updates.
I would love to play some deathmatch would you and talk about survivor and stuff.

Come online?

Oh the spam ... the spam.. I would like that very much .. but I struggle with homework .. but I try to talk on the forums right now .. too much romanian homework..

E : why should I come online? xD It doesn't matter if I'm there or not

Donutminion a dit :

gj so far!
ill put in a request

Name: alexter
Rank:half pro
Gender: male
bio: lives in vanilla but visits survivor very often rarely seen in bootcamp
Personality:likes to troll and trick ppl. nice to most ppl and is not a very mean person. wants to be included in everything. hates ppl who disagree against him and will start up big fights. likes being independent and doing his own thing.

Im gonna accept this request but please put a picture too, thanks.

Ilingirl a dit :

Rank:(it means if ur pro, noob or half pro half noob) : pro
Gender:Female
Name: Kara
Bio:Came from deathmatch , so she is used to how much cannons can hurt. Got used to survivor when a strange stranger wanted to teach her , now she likes to do tricks to amaze the other mice . Can get into conflicts really easy .
Personality: Really lazy , sarcastic , funny , imature , sometimes sassy .
Other details: Never follows rules , and a bit daredevil . Loves her aviator hat and gets really angry if it gets wet or somebody touches it .

request accepted

NOTE: Smalltoes please stop the off topic please, thanks

Chapter 3: The proest of the pros!

Just after Lizy and Chicky got into survivor, they noticed a strange yet cute mouse with a yellowish aviator hat. Chicky pointed to that mouse and said:
-See that over there? That's Kara, the proest mouse in here. She's going to teach you!
Chicky grabbed Lizy and took her to Kara. Kara looked at them both.
-Umm can I help you? she asked.
-Actually yes. This is Lizy my friend, she is learning to be pro. I throught you could teach her.
-I'm not the babysitter of a noob...
-Ugh, you're not gonna babysit her! I need you to teach her the basics, please?!
-Errrr... fine... Follow me.
She took them to a private survivor room.
-Now, you show me your survival skills, she ordered as she threw a cannon at Lizy.
-AAAAAAAAAAA!!! Lizy screamed as she got hit by the cannon and thrown away. Hellllppp I can't climb! she screamed scaredly as she tried to climb the high wall.
-Be strong! Kara said then she threw more cannons and anvils at her.
Lizy fell down and stared with a creeped out face before she died.
-Got you! Chicky said as she used her shaman wings and caught her friend.
-Phew... thanks...
-Alright I see your survival skills are down :U We shall see if you're better in the shaman way.
The next round started, and now Lizy was a shaman.
-Now try and kill us!
Lizy threw a few cannons at them, but Kara and Chicky dodged them easily.
-More power!
Lizy did her best but Kara dodged it quicky and Chicky jumped on it and threw it back.
-Fine, beginner, looks like you've got a looooot to learn... Kara sighed.
-I'm ready for more!
-Later, I'm tired now, Kara yawned with a lazy voice.
-But you just star-
-No comment!
- :U
Kara took off her aviator hat and looked at it, very pround. Lizy grabbed it and looked.
-Whaattttt are you dooooing?! Kara screamed angrily. GIVE IT BACK!!!!!!!!!!
Lizy returned it to Kara.
-Ok, ok...

TO BE CONTINUED.........

Sorry guys this chapter wasn't much I promise the next one if gonna be awesome

Lolituta a dit :

Chapter 3: The proest of the pros!

Just after Lizy and Chicky got into survivor, they noticed a strange yet cute mouse with a yellowish aviator hat. Chicky pointed to that mouse and said:
-See that over there? That's Kara, the proest mouse in here. She's going to teach you!
Chicky grabbed Lizy and took her to Kara. Kara looked at them both.
-Umm can I help you? she asked.
-Actually yes. This is Lizy my friend, she is learning to be pro. I throught you could teach her.
-I'm not the babysitter of a noob...
-Ugh, you're not gonna babysit her! I need you to teach her the basics, please?!
-Errrr... fine... Follow me.
She took them to a private survivor room.
-Now, you show me your survival skills, she ordered as she threw a cannon at Lizy.
-AAAAAAAAAAA!!! Lizy screamed as she got hit by the cannon and thrown away. Hellllppp I can't climb! she screamed scaredly as she tried to climb the high wall.
-Be strong! Kara said then she threw more cannons and anvils at her.
Lizy fell down and stared with a creeped out face before she died.
-Got you! Chicky said as she used her shaman wings and caught her friend.
-Phew... thanks...
-Alright I see your survival skills are down :U We shall see if you're better in the shaman way.
The next round started, and now Lizy was a shaman.
-Now try and kill us!
Lizy threw a few cannons at them, but Kara and Chicky dodged them easily.
-More power!
Lizy did her best but Kara dodged it quicky and Chicky jumped on it and threw it back.
-Fine, beginner, looks like you've got a looooot to learn... Kara sighed.
-I'm ready for more!
-Later, I'm tired now, Kara yawned with a lazy voice.
-But you just star-
-No comment!
- :U
Kara took off her aviator hat and looked at it, very pround. Lizy grabbed it and looked.
-Whaattttt are you dooooing?! Kara screamed angrily. GIVE IT BACK!!!!!!!!!!
Lizy returned it to Kara.
-Ok, ok...

TO BE CONTINUED.........

Sorry guys this chapter wasn't much I promise the next one if gonna be awesome

... This is perfect.. The best way Kara would be .. I want so much more

sorry i dont know how to get the picture in the picture :L

but love that chapter!