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This is my first fanfiction ever and I hope it turns out good. If it does, I will make a book two.


This fanfiction is called Escape From Shaman Prison. Enjoy the prologue and see what happnens to cause all of this..


Spooky Prologue:

On a very cold dark night, a shaman was there. His heart was as dark as the shadows. He killed everything he saw. He was caught killing a young mouse one night and taken to prison. Anger was all in him. He hadn't gotten the chance to kill any guards or policemice. One night his rage was spilled. He killed everyone in the prison exept the evil prisoners. The innocent prisoners were killed. He took over the prison and sent out the others in search for mice with powers to be killed and get their powers sucked up into the shaman. The shaman called the place Shaman Prison.

A few mice are about to have the journey of a lifetime..
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Things about characters , sign ups , more info~

11/11 Characters!

NO MORE SLOTS REMAINING

This book only goes to chapter 20 The next one [if this one is liked] will be 25.

Please don't be angry and hate on me if your character gets killed. Someone has to.

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Name:

[Optional] Age:

Personality:

Good or Bad:

Power:

Bio:

Gender:

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Characters:

[My character]

Name: Che' Lu Jhi [She- LOO- Jee]

Age: 21

Personality: Very happy and she loves drawing.

Good or Bad: Good

Power: The power to transform furs. She has four different fur types: Regular, Moon, Sun, and Love. If she isn't holding any of her magical tools she is regular but if she picks up her magic pen, she has moon fur. If she picks up her marker, she has sun fur. If she picks up her crayon, she has love fur. She has recently found a ''Safari'' pencil and now she has Safari Fur. *Her Safari Fur is the new orange one that is going to go away.

Her furs weakness/strong side:

Regular Fur: [Weak to: Evil] [Strong to: Good]

Love Fur: [Weak to: Hate] [Strong to: Love]

Moon Fur: [Weak to: Sun] [Strong to: Dark]

Sun Fur: [Weak to: Moon] [Strong to: Light]

Safari Fur: [Weak to: Water] [Strong to: Heat]

Bio: Che' Lu grew up in a wealthy family and lived in a city. She ran away to start a new life alone.

Gender: She-mouse , Female

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[Anniebuscus' character]
Name: Meifee (Mei for short)

Personality: Is very helpful, friendly and HATES meanies, especially when she's in her valkyrie/exiled warrior form.

Good or Bad: Good

Power: Can transform into a valkyrie or an exiled warrior.

Bio: Meifee grew up as a slave and an outcast of her family at the same time. She was born as a servant of the Divine Shaman Goddess, from who she got the powers to transform into a valkyrie shaman. One day the Divine Shaman Goddess lost in a fight and her powers corrupted and so were the special bonds with Mei. Somehow, a part from the corrupted power stayed and she could turn into an opposite - an exiled shaman warrior.

Gender: Female

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[Appleloom's character]
Name: Appie Wooz

Age: 18

Personality: Very brave and nice, she one of the people that shows off her power. Shes good at diguising.
Friendly and hates the evil team.

Good or Bad?: Good

Power: Can controll the Arc of Time

Bio: At the age 9, her dad murdered his tribe and his wife inculded. Appie kept the secret until she was 13. When she turned 13 she reported her dad to the policemice. She felt free from all the lies, but very guilty. She found out about how the mice are looking for the mice wth powers and killing them. Her "power practice friends" have been all captured and killed. She practices her power in a old shack. She hopes that she can see her dad again by diguising herself. When that time comes she'll be ready

Gender: Female

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[Eaglerox's character]
Name: Eagle

Personality: Extremely unsympathetic to most complaining about petty things, an excellent assassin. Tomboy.

Good or Bad: Bad at first

Power: Body can turn to flame at will.

Bio: Ate a strange fruit when she was eight. After that, ? could turn into fire, but would sink like a hammer when in water.

Gender: non-binary [which means no specific gender]

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[Bouncytree's character]
Name: Angie

Personality: If you say something idiotic, she'll be likely to point that out in the rudest possible way. She's not afraid to speak out her opinion, but can also be majorly stubborn at most times.

Good or Bad: Bad

Power: Almost like an angel, she could have wings at will.

Bio: When Angie was little, her mother and father died. Ever since, she believed that their angels guarded her, protected her. When one day, she really did see an angel, it was her mother. She said that she would turn her daughter into an angel too. Angie objected, so she tried fighting back. Angie didn't end up dying, instead she became some sort of angel on land, being able to have wings on her back at will.

Gender: Female

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[Adoviaspeed's character]
Name: Klaus Midnight

Personality: Very cold hearted and very dangerous. Really doesn't care about anyone but himself.

Good or Bad: Bad

Power: Can rob people of there sight

Bio: He is half leapord and half mice. When he was 16 he mudured his family. He didn't know that once he killed a member of the family, he would gain power. The policemice tracked him down and put him in prison.
He teamed up with the Shaman to kill mice that have power. The only reason why he is killing mice because he never wanted his power. When it turns midnight he can't controll his power and becomes someone else. He gets rid of his anger with killing other mice ith powers.

Gender: Male

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[Xbetrayal's character]
Name: Jack Bett

Age: 29

Personality: Very nice and treats mice well. Hates the Shaman and his mice

Good or Bad: Good

Power: Healing mice (But can only heal three times)

Bio: Jack's wife was accused of killing of mice and was sent to prison. 3 weeks later he found out that his wife was dead. Jack can heal the dead but it takes a lot of power. Jack secretly heals the mice in the hospital and trains them for attacks. He plans revenge on the Shaman, who killed his wife.

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[Rossuri's character]
Name: Rouge

Age: 22

Good or Bad?: Bad

Personality: Can be quite agressive and bad, laughs at the most ridiculous things

Bio: She was born in a very small, poor town as a young mouse, as she just wished to get out there in life as she grew up. when she was about 8-10, she gathered cheese for the poor mice to gather to feast. at around the age 15-18 she gathered strange potions and antidotes, but she didn't know why. she was very curious and wanted to drink them, but as her mother told her NOT to, or else she would abandon her to set out new life, on her own. as she grew up to 18-21 she became more curious that maybe she would try a drop. nothing happened, so she kept drinking dots of the potions magic. for some reason she saw or felt no difference, so she drank the whole potion. still, nothing happened and that was about the only potion she'd risk using. until her mother caught her, and abandoned her. about a year later changes happened and she became to grow magic powers.

Power: She is a wizard so she has magical powers

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[Ilingirl's character]
Name: Rosaline

[Optional] Age: 22

Personality: Cocky and sassy . Kills without a sense of regret .

Good or Bad: Bad

Power: Her rose transforms into a weapon at any time.

Bio: She was a lovely lady until the incident . Her true love started hating her , punishing her without reason . One day she asked him is he loves her anymore . Because of the rude response , her feeling vanished and she murdered him without even looking back after . She got caught and sent to prison but then ecaped using the only think that she had from him , a black rose . Still seeks true love and her madness will continue until her true lover.

Gender: Female

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[Curlfeather's character]
Name: Swift

Personality: Shes Kind, Romantic, But actully a bad mouse killer
Power:
Love
Kill
Survivor

bio: ands always got a romantic, Terrible plan, normally she tricks boys and kills them in the end.

Gender: Girl

Good or bad?: Bad

Age: 19

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[Bethdacat's character]
Name: 'Speedy'

[Optional] Age: Unknown

Personality: Nice, strong, helpful, etc. all that good stuff x'D

Good or Bad: Good

Power: The will to change speed (what his nickname is for X'D)

Bio: He was born in a small cottage with a mother, a father, and 2 sisters. When he was only 8 months old, he gained his power, and the family in that cottage kept it a secret, but one night, a stranger came in and kidnapped Speedy from his bed. Because of his power, the stranger sent him to the public rooms just to get banned from the rooms. Mice threw bad names at him and called him a speed hacker. Once, one of the mice threatened Speedy that the mouse would kill him. His friends decided to protest about his power and why he should be unbanned from those rooms. They did, and eventually got banned from those rooms. None of the mice know why he got his power.

Gender: Male

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''ESCAPE FROM SHAMAN PRISON
BOOK #1 - The Shaman's Prison''



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Chapter One- The Beggining
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Che' Lu was in a dark cave practicing her powers when a spotted figure flashed by her.
A faint, high pitched laugh echoed through the cave. Che' Lu's whiskers quivered.
She pulled out her msgic crayon and summoned her Love Fur.
She turned around to spot the spotted figure. He was right infront of her. He had big killer eyes and spots like a leopard. His eyes looked like they could blind someone.
She looked into the eyes on accident and fainted. ''No escape..'' A voice said in the corner of the cave. ''Save yourself, Che' Lu!'' A familiar voice shouted. It was her mother. ''Go, Che' Lu!'' A male voice said. This time it was her father. ''Not without you!'' Che' Lu replied. ''GO!'' They said together. ''Yes Che' Lu,'' A creepy male voice said. ''go on so you can die later!''
Che' Lu got up on her paws and rubbed her eyes. Everything was clear again. There were no mice in the cave that could have made the voices. Then she turned to grab her sword. A screech came from above her. She looked up in alarm. It was a blood stained shaman dive-bombing her.
Che' Lu opened her eyes. Her heart was pounding, and she felt horrible. Then she thought about the shaman. Was that shaman THE Shaman? The Shaman that killed mice with power? She finally decided that it indeed was The Shaman. The shaman who killed mice with power.

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Chapter Two- The Meeting
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Che' Lu's ears twitched. She walked outside of her mousehole in search of Meifee. As Che' Lu walked down the trail, she felt uneasy about everything around her. She felt as if the spotted mouse would pop out at any moment.
She decided not to worry and called Meifee's name. Meifee poked her head out of a mouse hole. She whispered something and did paw motions telling Che' Lu to come here. ''Come on, Che' Lu!'' Meifee squeaked. ''I'm coming, Meifee!'' Che' Lu replied. ''Just call me Mei.'' Meifee said. ''Okay.'' Che' Lu said.
Che' Lu padded into the mouse hole. ''I have seen a mouse on fire and an angel mouse in my dreams.'' Mei said.
''I have seen a big killer spotted mouse.'' Che' Lu said. '''Do you think that they are some of The Shaman's Mice?''
Mei asked. ''I don't know.'' Che' Lu admitted. ''I would think.'' A long moment passed before any of the she-mice
spoke. ''I think we should go and explore.'' Mei said. ''What? Are you crazy? We can get our tails cut off!'' Mei thought for a moment. ''We can try and find other mice with powers.'' She said at last. ''Okay then..'' Che' Lu
said. ''Let's try this.''

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Chapter Three- Bad Mice
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As the two mice walked down the trail, they both felt uneasy and scared.
Che' Lu felt like something was going to explode and reveal Shaman, while Mei felt like monsters were hiding everywhere watching them. Then, all of a sudden, a mouse-shaped figure was floating in the sky. She had big, pretty wings spread out on her and a golden halo. She dived in for both of them. ''RUN!'' Mei squeaked. They were both about to dive into a bush when claws sunk into their backs. Che' Lu turned and faced a pretty mouse with wings and a halo.

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Chapter Four- Taken Away
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Che' Lu screeched. She slashed the angel mouse with her claws and broke free. Mei was transforming into something. She finally got finished tranforming and she turned out to be a white mouse with feathers on her. She had a sword with her too. Mei took the sword and swung it at the angel mouse. Che' Lu grabbed a marker. She felt her fur turning a different colour. Now that she had grabbed a marker, her fur would change colour. She looked at her paws. They were swirling around turning orange with sun patterns. Mei had chased off the angel mouse but a mouse on fire had attacked. Che' Lu raced into battle. ''Che' Lu you changed again!'' Mei shouted.
Then the fire mouse pounced onto Che' Lu. Che' Lu opened her mouth and a beam came out of it. The fire mouse yowled but grabbed onto both of them. Che' Lu clung on the fire mouse's back and shooted beams. Mei slashed her sword at the mouse's face and demanded his name. ''I'm Eagle and about to kill you!'' His body grew bigger and caught Che' Lu's fur on fire. Then smoke seemed to take over. Then everything went black.
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When Che' Lu and Mei finally got to open their eyes again, they were in a very dark place. Che' Lu looked down at herself. She was normal again and so was Mei. ''How the he-'' Che' Lu began but then a large boom sound came from outside. Che' Lu felt around for her case and tried grabbing something. ''Mei can you get one out for me?''
She asked. ''Sure.'' Mei replied. Che' Lu handed Mei the case and Mei dug through it and pulled something out. She threw it at Che' Lu and Che' Lu started transforming. She sat down once she was done and tried looking at her paws. It was hard to see and tiny shadows were coming out from her fur. She transformed into her Moon Fur.
She grabbed her pen on the floor and put it back in her case. When she looked back up at Mei, she was an Exiled
Warrior. ''Oooh..'' Che' Lu said. ''Very nice.'' Che' Lu hesitated. ''Uh we should find our way out of here..'' She got on her paws and started looking around. Mei got up to. ''Maybe you should go to your Sun Fur as a source of light.'' That was an amazing idea! ''Yeah! Very good idea!'' She grabbed her marker and touched it to her fur. She put away the pen and started to light up the dark room. Her sun marks started to glow and give off a lot of light.
''IT'S SO SHINY!'' Mei randomly shouted. ''Where did that come from?'' Che' Lu asked. ''I really don't know..'' She replied. ''Well we really need to find our way out of here.'' Che' Lu said. Just then, a spotted figure stepped into the room. ''Eh.. Che' Lu..'' Meifee said. ''We have company. ''Huh?'' Mei pointed to the spotted mouse.

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Chapter Five- The Hospital
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Mei was panicking. This mouse was gigantic. ''What are we to do?'' She asked. ''Dieee!" The spotted mouse replied. Che' Lu screamed and backed up. The light went away and small, white glowing hearts were the only thing to be seen. ''What kind of fur is that?'' Mei asked. ''I don't know.'' Che' Lu admitted. ''I have never had this one before.'' The room turned cold. ''Keel them.'' A voice outside the hall whispered. Mei's heart pounded.
Was this the end? But then the spotted figure rubbed two things together and created fire.
His fur lit up. He was half leopard half mouse. ''Ooh,'' Che' Lu said ''He's a creepy one.'' The spotted figure growled. ''Who are you?'' Mei asked. ''Klaus.'' He said in the most angry voice ever. ''Come with me.'' He said.
''Where?'' Che' Lu asked. ''COME!'' He yelled. The two mice walked down the hall with Klaus.
He led them to a room with a big stone attached to a thing that looked like it would suck something up.
And attached to that was a SHAMAN! He had jet black blood-stained fur and blood-stained black feathers.
Mei and Che' Lu screamed and ran out of the room. A siren started and a voice said ''ESCAPED PRISONER! ESCAPED PRISIONER! LOCK ALL ESCAPE ROUTES!'' Mei and Che' Lu ran for their lives. ''What do we do?'' Che' Lu asked. ''Run!'' Mei replied. The sprinted through the hallways until they came to a dead end. Che' Lu grabbed her case and got out her marker. She touched her fur to it and got her Sun Fur. She opened her mouth and shot a beam at the wall. The wall exploded and gave them a way to get out. ''Come on!'' Che' Lu screamed. She grabbed her case and her marker and jumped out. When they hit the grass they ran as fast as they could.
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After running for awhile, they made it to a hospital. ''Let's go inside.'' Meifee said. ''Okay,'' Che' Lu said ''but we are just going to stay in the waiting room for a bit to cool down.'' When they got inside, there was a mouse with fur like Che' Lu's when she didn't have any special fur. He saw them and smiled. ''Hello. My name is Jack. Can I help you with anything?'' Che' Lu and Meifee had nothing to say. But then a small mouse came from inside a room. ''Dr. Bett when will we swart twaining?'' Che' Lu glanced at Jack. ''Umm..'' Jack started then he just whispered something in the young mouse's ear and called for someone. A nurse came rushing down the hall and took the young mouse. ''Sorry about him.. I uh.'' He looked like he was hiding something. Che' Lu accidently dropped her marker and turned normal.

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Chapter Six- Getting Together
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Jack's eyes widened. He had never seen a mouse's fur change color at will. ''Did I just see what I think I saw?'' He asked. ''Yes.'' Che' Lu said. She sighed. ''I have a power..'' She admitted ''You have a power?'' Jack asked surprised. ''You mean an actual power?'' Jack couldn't believe it. ''Yes. So does she.'' Che' Lu pointed to Meifee. ''Uh.. Hi I'm Meifee..'' She hesitated. ''Oh and I'm Che' Lu.'' Che' Lu turned hot. ''We came here because this g-guy c-called S-shaman um..'' Che' Lu trailed off. ''The Shaman? The one who has his own prison?'' Che' Lu was surprised this guy knew who he was. ''Do you have a power?'' She blurted out. Jack's eyes widened again. ''H-how did you know?'' It got silent. ''Just a guess.'' Che' Lu smiled but then it faded. ''Well I'm plotting revenge on this Shaman.'' Jack said. ''And I can't do it alone. Will you please help me?'' Che' Lu and Meifee hesitated. ''We just met you..'' Meifee said. ''How can we trust you?'' Jack scratched his head. ''We can get to know eachother more by spending time with eachother.'' Mei and Che' Lu thought for a moment. ''Sure.'' Che' Lu said. ''But what's up with this 'Training' thing?'' Jack looked like he was trying to figure out how to explain. ''My power is healing the dead and I have been trying to plot revenge on Shaman for a long time so I'm training the mice so we can fight.'' Jack puffed up to look strong. ''What? Fight Shaman and his mice? We wouldn't stand a chance!'' Mei said. ''We can atleast try.'' Jack said. ''Please shut up for a second!'' Che' Lu snapped. She grabbed her crayon and touched it with her fur. Small, orange hairs shed from her normal fur a grey fur with white hearts grew. The small hearts glowed and gave off a peaceful glow. ''I want to summon the power for this fur.'' She said. ''Huh?'' Jack asked. ''It's hard to explain.'' Che' Lu said. ''Right now we are gonna make plans to defeat Shaman.'' Che' Lu couldn't believe she said that. It seemed impossible to kill Shaman. ''It's impossible though!'' Mei scolded. ''Not if we just TRIED.'' The small hearts coming out of her fur started breaking. Che' Lu stomped off and sat down. ''Che' Lu come on!'' Jack said. ''We need to make plans!'' Mei turned her back on Che' Lu and sat down at the other side of the room.
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Mei got up and went over to Che' Lu. ''I'm sorry,'' She said ''I was acting like nothing was possible.'' Mei felt kind of bad. ''It's okay,'' Che' Lu said ''I was acting selfish too.'' Jack came over. ''Is everything okay?'' He asked. ''Yes, Jack.'' Mei said. ''Now we can make those plans!''

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Chapter Seven- Making Plans
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''Okay good!'' Jack said happily. ''And I would like you to meet someone.'' Che' Lu and Mei got exited. ''Who?'' Che' Lu asked. ''Appie Wooz.'' Jack said. ''Appie, you can come in now!'' A cream mouse with brown paws and muzzle came out of a room shaking. ''H-hi.'' She said. ''I'm Appie.'' She forced a small smile. ''You see Appie is special.'' Jack said. ''What can she do?'' Mei asked. ''Control the Arc Of Time.'' Jack said. ''Wow. I can only change into a Valkyrie or and Exiled Warrior.'' Meifee said. ''You can?!'' Jack asked. ''You never told me that!'' Jack looked impressed. ''Well now I have.'' She said. ''But anyways, Appie wants revenge on Shaman too. We have known eachother and have been training injured mice for the past three months.'' Jack said. ''I found her in a cold shack practicing her powers. Appie, tell them what happened to your friends.'' Jack said. ''Well, they were all captured and killed by Shaman's mice and ever since then I wanted revenge..'' Che' Lu got her case and pulled out all of her special tools. Her pen, her marker, and her crayon. She touched her marker to get her Sun Fur. ''Pretty.'' Appie said. ''Thank you.'' Che' Lu replied. ''I have four different furs.'' She touched the pen to get her Moon Fur. Then she took her paw off of all of them and closed her eyes and changed normal. ''No time for showing off, Che' Lu!'' Mei said. Che' Lu grunted. ''Okay,'' Jack said. ''Let's get this planning party on!''
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Che' Lu, Meifee, Appie, and Jack already started planning things to get rid of Shaman. ''Do you really think he would fall for that?'' Appie asked looking down on the plan Jack was writing down. ''Yes.'' Jack said. ''But what would happen if he didn't like pizza?'' Appie asked. ''Then we would be screwed.'' Che' Lu said. ''Guys come over here!'' Meifee said. ''What is it?'' Jack asked. ''A crystal I think.'' Meifee said. Appie, Che' Lu, and Jack went over there. ''I know what this is.'' Appie said. ''What?'' Meifee asked. ''Shaman's Power Eater.'' The room got silent and cold.

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Chapter Eight- The Real Journey Begins
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''What do we do with it?'' Meifee asked. ''Hide it.'' Appie replied. ''Why?'' Meifee asked. ''So Shaman's Mice can't find it.'' Appie said. ''Why can't we use it to suck up the enemie's power?'' Che' Lu asked. ''I have never thought of it like that...'' Appie said. ''I guess we can try.'' Just then, the sound of a window breaking echoed through the hospital. ''I'll be right back.'' Jack said rushing into a room. ''Where is he going?'' Asked Meifee. ''Probably to get the mice we have been training.'' Appie said. ''They seem ready to fight.'' Jack came in followed by a BIG group of mice with armor on and magical wands. ''Okay,'' Jack said. ''we are ready to fight Shaman's mice!'' Che' Lu came over. ''Jack are you crazy? Only some of these mice have powers it seems!'' Jack turned to her. ''I know, I know. But they still fight really good! Before Che' Lu could protest, a big gang of six bad mice broke through the door.
Screaming broke out. ''They are here!'' Jack said. ''No kidding!'' Che' Lu yelled. Che' Lu scampered across the room to get her case when she tripped on something. Her fur starting tingling and turning orange. Che' Lu looked at what she tripped on and saw an orange pencil. On it something said ''SAFARI PENCIL # 2'' with a small bush symbol. Che' Lu looked at herself. She had turned orange with black lines and blue. She got up and held the pencil in her mouth. She charged at a black mouse holding a rose and opened her mouth out of habit of trying to shoot beams or shadows and dropped her pencil. She grabbed it and held it in her paws and tried everything possible to shoot something. Finally, she did a paw motion and then an ear-breaking shriek that blasted a few mice out the window. Dark creatures snuck out from the shadows and sucked in loose things laying everywhere. Then they came to Che' Lu and dropped them infront of her. A stack of cash was in the pile along with a purse. ''She's a theif!'' A young women mouse shouted. ''She stole my cash!'' A man scolded. ''I-I didn't mean to..'' Che' Lu said. ''You look like you would be a theif!'' Another mouse shouted. ''Just look at the pattern on her fur!'' Jack came up to them and said calmly, ''She has powers, too!'' The room got silent. ''And so do I.'' Appie said. ''Me too.'' Meifee admitted. ''They are all witches!!!'' A young mouse cried. ''Some of YOU have powers, now don't you?'' Jack said. A few mice nodded slowly. ''See,'' Said Jack. ''nothing not normal!'' He tried to grin. Che' Lu and Appie looked to see if the bad mice were gone. One of them sure wasn't. Appie and Che' Lu walked up to it. It was covered in ash. ''This one I think..'' Che' Lu started. ''Is dead..'' Appie backed up in alarm. ''Well then I don't want to get near it!'' Che' Lu stared at him. He was the mouse who could catch fire. Just then the mouse faded away and a big, dark figure came from outside. It was shaman.

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Chapter Nine- Travel
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''Run everyone!'' Jack shouted. All of the mice scattered to hide. Shaman laughed and faded.
''We should go.'' Che' Lu said. ''Yeah..'' Meifee agreed. ''Pack your bags everyone,'' Jack said. ''this is going to be a long journey!'' Che' Lu looked at him. ''What do you mean?'' She asked. ''Well, if we are going to defeat Shaman together we have got to go far and wide to ya' know.. Find things to help us?'' Che' Lu looked at Jack like he said something very stupid. ''Why can't we stay here?'' She asked. ''I don't know,'' Jack admitted. ''maybe I just want a little adventure?'' Appie looked at him. ''That's a great idea!'' She said. ''Yeah.'' Meifee agreed. ''Oh alright then.'' Che' Lu said. ''YAY!'' Jack, Appie, and Meifee shouted. ''Let's go to our mousehole and get our stuff, Lu!'' Che' Lu nodded and they ran out the hospital to get their important things.
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When Mei and Che' Lu got back to the house and got their suitcases and bags, Appie followed them. ''What is it, Appie?'' Che' Lu asked. ''I was actually hoping I could pack with you guys.'' She replied. ''Of course!'' Che' Lu shouted. ''Yeah,'' Mei agreed. ''we can talk about girly things.'' As Appie put her bags she brought all into a BIGGER bag, she remembered Jack said after Che' Lu and Mei left to not bring to many things. She could still hear her ears ringing from the voice: ''DO NOT BEING A LOT OF STUFF! I KNOW HOW YOU GIRLS GET!'' He had a little laughter in his voice, but not much.

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Chapter Ten- On the road
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After all the mice were packed and ready to go, jack took lead and they headed off into the mountains. There were goats, or giant hairy creatures climbing and crawling around on peaks. ''Where exactly are we going, Jack?'' Appie asked. ''I dunno.'' Jack said proudly. ''Let's just keep going until we find the REAL Shaman's Prison!'' Che' Lu looked confused. ''The Real one?'' She asked. ''Yeah,'' Jack said. ''the real one is said to be on a dark thunder cloud close to Hell.'' Che' Lu twitched. ''You can't be serious.'' Jack stopped. ''I am.''

Anniebuscus a dit :

This sounds awesome! I'm in!
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Name: Meifee (Mei for short)

Personality: Is very helpful, friendly and HATES meanies, especially when she's in her valkyrie/exiled warrior form.

Good or Bad: Good

Power: Can transform into a valkyrie or an exiled warrior.

Bio: Meifee grew up as a slave and an outcast of her family at the same time. She was born as a servant of the Divine Shaman Goddess, from who she got the powers to transform into a valkyrie shaman. One day the Divine Shaman Goddess lost in a fight and her powers corrupted and so were the special bonds with Mei. Somehow, a part from the corrupted power stayed and she could turn into an opposite - an exiled shaman warrior.

Gender: Female

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Garnetnum a dit :

Your in!

We now have 2/10 mice we need. That time it was including my mouse.

Anniebuscus a dit :

Bleh, it's says Meifee in my post, but in the OP it's Sieling.
Pls change the OP

Garnetnum a dit :

Fixed

Anniebuscus a dit :

Still Sieling (lel)

Garnetnum a dit :

Fixed for real this time

Appleloom a dit :

Name: Appie Wooz

Age: 18

Personality: Very brave and nice, she one of the people that shows off her power. Shes good at diguising.
Friendly and hates the evil team.

Good or Bad?: Good

Power: Can controll the Arc of Time

Bio: At the age 9, her dad mudered his tribe and his wife inculded. Appie kept the secret until she was 13. When she turned 13 she reported her dad to the policemice. She felt free from all the lies, but very guilty. She found out about how the mice are looking for the mice wth powers and killing them. Her "power practice friends" have been all captured and killed. She practices her power in a old shack. She hopes that she can see her dad again by diguising herself. When that time comes she'll be ready

Gender: Female

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Eaglerox a dit :

Name: Eagle

Personality: Extremely unsympathetic to most complaining about petty things, an excellent assassin. Tomboy.

Good or Bad: Bad at first

Power: Body can turn to flame at will.

Bio: Ate a strange fruit when she was eight. After that, she could turn into fire, but would sink like a hammer when in water.

Gender: Female

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Bouncytree a dit :

Name: Angie

Personality: If you say something idiotic, she'll be likely to point that out in the rudest possible way. She's not afraid to speak out her opinion, but can also be majorly stubborn at most times.

Good or Bad: Bad

Power: Almost like an angel, she could have wings at will.

Bio: When Angie was little, her mother and father died. Ever since, she believed that their angels guarded her, protected her. When one day, she really did see an angel, it was her mother. She said that she would turn her daughter into an angel too. Angie objected, so she tried fighting back. Angie didn't end up dying, instead she became some sort of angel on land, being able to have wings on her back at will.

Gender: Female

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Eaglerox a dit :

Actually can you make Eagle non-binary (like doesnt have a specific gender, can be interpreted either way) or mostly "he" because there are always way too many females

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Name: Klaus Midnight

Personality: Very cold hearted and very dangerous. Really doesn't care about anyone but himself.

Good or Bad: Bad

Power: Can rob people of there sight

Bio: He is half leapord and half mice. When he was 16 he mudured his family. He didn't know that once he killed a member of the family, he would gain power. The policemice tracked him down and put him in prison.
He teamed up with the Shaman to kill mice that have power. The only reason why he is killing mice because he never wanted his power. When it turns midnight he can't controll his power and becomes someone else. He gets rid of his anger with killing other mice ith powers.

Gender: Male

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