[Fanfic] Finding Hope |
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![]() Finding Hope, a fanfic about an abandonded and lonely mouse. Kicked out of her tribe, no friends, no one to look up to. But that doesn't stop the little mouse. She hopes to create a tribe of her own and make some friends. ![]() Name: Melody Role: Main character Gender: Female Age: 13 Personality: Kind, but however left alone. Character spots are opened! ![]() Name: Beat Role: Supporting character Gender: Male Age: 15 Personality: Stubborn, but the first to understand how Melody feels. ![]() Name: Sieling (Character owned by Anniebuscus) Role: Supporting character Age: 14 Gender: Female Personality: Very kind, adventurous, friendly and hates meanies. She knows how Melody feels, because she had experience of getting ignored and hated. ![]() Name: Emma (character owned by Boefie) Role: Not supporting Gender: Female Age: 16 Personality: Survivor player, plays vanilla sometimes, hates girly girls, is actully kind of nice, but something in her hates the good. She went on the bad road by her boyfriend, the bad kid. 'The bad boy always gets the bad girl' She said to herself. As kid also was ignored like melody, wich probally made her hate people so much. ![]() Name : Sand (Character owned by Illingirl) Role : Not supporting but sometimes tries to help Age : 17 Gender : Female Personality : Ignorant and mature , always tries to be a shadow and never wants to get in the center of attention . Pretty anti-social but really smart . Some say she once had one of the greatest tribes , but her past led her to desband the group and delete the tribe. ![]() Name: Cavador (Owned by Bouncytree) Role: Not supporting Gender: Male Age: 17 Personality: Bossy, Sticks up only for his friends and treats everyone else badly [Unfair], Social butterfly. In his old tribe, it was tiny and all of his best friends were there. He led the tribe, and nobody objected. When he treated someone so badly in vanilla one day, that person joined the tribe without him knowing. The person told all of his friends to quit the tribe, because Cavador was mean and too bossy. They all left, leaving Cavador leading an empty tribe. Character spots are closed for now! _Prolugue~ Melody sighed as she looked around. Kicked out of her tribe, for no reason. No one really liked her anymore. She waited patiently for the Shaman to build as she stood there thinking, "I have to find hope. I just can't throw a fit about this. I have to make a tribe. I have to make some friends while I'm here, although nothing lasts forever." At last, the Shaman finished her build. Melody raced to the cheese and went back to the hole. "And that starts now." She thought aloud, with a small unnoticable grin on her face. This is my first fanfic, so please be kind.. Also, this is just for the summer, it's only something to keep me busy. |
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Looks awesome so far! |
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Sounds good! |
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New character: ![]() Name: Beat Role: Supporting character Gender: Male Age: 15 Personality: Stubborn, but the first to understand how Melody feels. ![]() "What starts now?" Melody heard a voice. She looked around, startled. She quit when she noticed a mouse with wolf-like fur. "Who are you?" Melody asked, cautiously. "I'm Beat." He replied. "What's your name?" "Melody." She replied quietly. "What are you doing here?" Beat asked. "A mouse like you should be in a tribe house!" "I don't have a tribe!" Melody snapped. "I got kicked out of mine for no reason!" Beat looked down. Immediately Melody felt a strike of sorrow fill her heart. "I got kicked out of mine, too." Beat sighed. "No reason given, I kept up with the stat requirements, heck, I even stayed active. The leader said it himself, as long as we keep up with the requirements and follow the rules, we'll be fine. But look at me now! Alone and tribeless!" Melody's eyes narrowed. She never thought she would meet a mouse kicked and abandoned, like her. "Hey, beat?" She finally spoke. "What?" Beat managed to say. "Wanna be friends? I never thought I would meet someone like me." Beat looked up at Melody. "What? Why me?" "Well, think about it, we were both kicked out of our tribes, no reason given, no one to look up to..." Beat thought for a short moment. "Alright." He smiled. "But, I'm still wondering what you meant by 'and it starts now.'" "Well, I've been thinking of making a tribe, and filling it with mice, just like us. Not sure what I'll name it, but it'll have something to do with this experience." A 'ding' sound caught Beat's ears. "New round! Sorry, but I gotta go now. See you around, okay? Oh, and good luck with your dream!" "Except it's not a dream." Melody muttered. "I'm gonna make this happen." |
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Can I join? ![]() Name: Sieling Role: Supporting character Age: 14 Gender: Female Personality: Very kind, adventurous, friendly and hates meanies. She knows how Melody feels, because she had experience of getting ignored and hated. |
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Name: Emma Role: Not supporting Gender: Female Age: 16 Personality: Survivor player, plays vanilla sometimes, hates girly girls, is actully kind of nice, but something in her hates the good. She went on the bad road by her boyfriend, the bad kid. 'The bad boy always gets the bad girl' She said to herself. As kid also was ignored like melody, wich probally made her hate people so much. ![]() I like being the role nobody wants to be |
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Name : Sand Role : Not supporting but sometimes tries to help Age : 17 Gender : Female Personality : Ignorant and mature , always tries to be a shadow and never wants to get in the center of attention . Pretty anti-social but really smart . Some say she once had one of the greatest tribes , but her past led her to desband the group and delete the tribe. ![]() Here , have another semi-bad character <3 |
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Name: Cavador Role: Not supporting Gender: Male Age: 17 Personality: Bossy, Sticks up only for his friends and treats everyone else badly [Unfair], Social butterfly. In his old tribe, it was tiny and all of his best friends were there. He led the tribe, and nobody objected. When he treated someone so badly in vanilla one day, that person joined the tribe without him knowing. The person told all of his friends to quit the tribe, because Cavador was mean and too bossy. They all left, leaving Cavador leading an empty tribe. Ref: [img]http://i.imgur.com/qusFeeZ.png [/img] |
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Bouncytree a dit : I want so bad to ship Sand and Cavador already... .. I'm retarded , I know xD |
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![]() Melody tried to wait for the Shaman to finish buildng, but they weren't using any nails. Out of boredom, she started to wander around. And she saw her new friend, Beat, with a mouse that has vampire teeth. "Hello, Beat. Who's your friend?" Melody squeaked. "Oh, this girl? Her name's Sieling." Beat replied. "Beat told me about you two." Sieling sighed. "Ignored, and hated. Beat and Melody, you two are like me." Beat nodded, expressionless. "Yep. She's like us." Melody gazed around, the Shaman was still failing. Anvils and boxes all over the map. "Noob Shaman!" Melody heard a voice. "Stop wasting time!" Beat sighed and spoke, "Cavador... Always being rude.." Sieling started climbing on the boxes and anvils. "Hey, Sieling, stop!" Melody shouted. "It's not safe!" "Well, when something's unsafe, sometimes you might have a big adventure!"Then she was out of sight. "That was strange.." Beat muttered. "What is up with her? Does she just go where she thinks would be a new adventure?" "I don't know, man." Melody responded. "H-hey, you heard that?!" Beat shouted, shocked. "Yeah. You thought aloud." Melody answered. "Whatever, the round's going to end soon." Beat said. "Let's go in the hole 'til then." "What about Sieling?" Melody asked as her eyes narrowed. "She'll be fine. She acts like she can handle this. Plus, she's pretty adventurous, don't you think?" Beat spoke to Melody. "Hmm.. Yeah.. She'll be okay; let's go in the hole, just to be safe." Melody said in a smooth tone. |
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Name: Luna Role: I'm not really sure. You can decide. Gender: Female Personality: Protective, shy, anxious, slightly fierce, She was once a shaman master of the skill tree, but soon was overthrown by others. Her powers faded, and she can't be shaman anymore. She can only pretend, so on shaman turn she stands there uselessly with fake markings, as mice throw abuse right at her, causing her to be exiled and not wanting to be seen anymore in fear of the harrassment she recieved. Used to be in a small but select tribe, but it was disbanded and Luna left because, as mentioned before, she was exiled. Ref: ![]() |
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Nice! Caint wait untill someone enters Emma'' s boyfriend. Lool nowone wants to be Emma's boyfriend cause shes a bitch |
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Ilingirl a dit : I do too, dun feel retarded XD |
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Bouncytree a dit : F*ck yeah |
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Can't wait for Chapter 3! I hope Kaylee will come and write it ^^ |