[fanfic] the last cheese |
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Hey this is my first actual fanfic so plz dont jugde harshly. I did short stories but now i want to try something bigger. :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ PLZ SUGGEST CHARACTERS I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE AT LEAST 4-5 BEFORE BEGINING! EXAMPLE: name: age: bio: personality: picture/looks description: I will proboly take almost every character that you suggest. HERE ARE THE CHARACTERS: name:Komola age:17 bio: She was just a normal mouse...she went hunting for rare fraises, worked for cheese, and played ball with her friends. But when the black out happend she saw her parents get killed and she then learned she had to fight for her life. peronality: Friendly and nice and is very defensive, likes to stay out of being the center of atention, very active, full of energy, and is a very courious mouse. looks descripition:A tan mouse with rainbow hair, barrel necklace, and rusty silver hear chain on end of tail. (sorry for no picture) __________________________________________________________________________________________ Here is what the book is going to be about :3 The book is about the end of Transformice. It starts out like a black out at first. But then all of a sudden there is no more cheese and no more holes. And while every mice fights for their lives to survive on the only food they have the chocolate melts and lava forms. As the mices' terror rises the evil that the mice thought was finally at its peak gets worse! This is going to be a story about a mouse named Komola and her journey to seek out the answers of what happend to the world they called Transformice. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I hope to start as soon as possible so plz get characters! I can't wait to start and i hope you like it! :D |
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C: it would be nice if you properly capitalized and used commas. |
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Conwolf a dit : I agree, sorry :c |
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sorry but will you guys plz put in a character suggestion! |
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Conwolf a dit : ok im done fixing it. :O your right there was a lot of captilization and commas needed. |
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hmm,mabye ill join C: name:Veronica age:29 bio:She was born at the middle of transformice,she also wants to save transformice and keep its maintenance forever and ever personality:Is not afraid of anything,easily angered,brave,also,she promised to sacrifice her life if it comes to saving transformice picture/looks description: ![]() |