♥Fanfiction♥ The Last Mouse |
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Hi and welcome to my first fanfiction *-* The story is about: The last mouse who survived,The shamans we're killing,Mice dying, But who will survive? The mouse was the legend of TFM. Characters-FR flag[Red White Blue]. Chapters-BR flag.[Green] Chapter 1's ilustrations, CREDITS:Animallady Characters: Name: Luna Age: 7 Describe your mouse: Shy, but a very kind little girl. She loves traveling, and eats shushi Shaman role or surviving role: Surviving role Name: Kira Age: 13 Describe your mouse: Fabulous, Talented, Skilled at everything, Smart Shaman role or surviving role: SHAMANNNNNNN Your pic or tell how you look: ummmm elin u know how I look :o [pink hair, pink tail bow, leopard fur, fangs, pink eyeshadpw, necktie] Name: Mix Age: 19 Describe your mouse: Fast, Cool, Bored (always), Pro Shaman role or surviving role: Shaman Your Pic or tell how you look: Orange Hair, White Pirate's Eye Thing, Orange & White Scarf, Orange & White Donut, Orange & White Headphones Name: Emily Age: 9 (B-day is Dec. 21, just in case lol) Describe your mouse: She hates the world, stubborn but if shes encouraged enough then she will finish it all the way Shaman role or surviving role:Surviving role Your pic or tell how you look: Yellow everything, cutie/girly stuff. Yeh, Name: Uchiki Age: 14 Describe your mouse: Supershy, nice, kind-hearted, clumsy at some activities Shaman role or surviving role: Surviving Referance: White Panda Hat, Purple Miku Hair wirh Green Ponytails, Girly Eyes (without mascara), Carrot on Mouth, and White and Purple scarf. Story a dit : Chapter 2 a dit : Characters a dit : |
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Name: Luna Age: 7 Describe your mouse: Shy, but a very kind little girl. She loves traveling, and eats shushi Shaman role or surviving role: Surviving role |
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Okay qtie, i entered u:) |
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Name: Kira Age: 13 Describe your mouse: Fabulous, Talented, Skilled at everything, Smart Shaman role or surviving role: SHAMANNNNNNN Your pic or tell how you look: ummmm elin u know how I look :o [pink hair, pink tail bow, leopard fur, fangs, pink eyeshadpw, necktie] |
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Thanks qtie^ |
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Name: Mix Age: 19 Describe your mouse: Fast, Cool, Bored (always), Pro Shaman role or surviving role: Shaman Your Pic or tell how you look: Orange Hair, White Pirate's Eye Thing, Orange & White Scarf, Orange & White Donut, Orange & White Headphones |
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Name: Emily Age: 9 (B-day is Dec. 21, just in case lol) Describe your mouse: She hates the world, stubborn but if shes encouraged enough then she will do it all the way Shaman role or surviving role:Surviving role Your pic or tell how you look: Yellow everything, cutie/girly stuff. Yeh, |
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Thanks for entering Mix and Shi (Emily) :) P.S YAY! 1 slot left :D |
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Woohoo! Good luck :) Welcome x3 |
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Shibist a dit : thanks again c: |
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Im going to make fanart when the last person enters :3 |
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Kirbyscout a dit : This is not a good personality of your character, no one, not even virtual characters are skilled at everything, there is always at least ONE fault included, no matter how perfect they may seem. However, this is just my opinion, when I say it's not suitable, however it is your choice and the writers choice if you should change it. As a suggestion, your character could be very smart, but there is always one problem they find difficult to solve. |
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LEL I WAS JOKING. Why take it so seriously? I'm not self-centered and narcissistic... :o ...and in a story you can make someone be good at everything..... If they're a robot. So I'm pretty much going to be an advanced robot mouse with emotions. XD |
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Kirbyscout a dit : NOw dont start a fight kirby |
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Kirbyscout a dit : Shes not, you shouldent 'joke' in forms. You can do joking underneath the form, or the author will get confused. Is it the same as 'fabulous' then maybe change your form. |
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Kirbyscout a dit : you seemed dead serious to me. saying that is a poor excuse :B |
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Sirusthemice a dit : Was about to say that, probally an excuse cause you was impressed of jaffa. Who isant. |
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Mah gawd what have I done? *Hides under bed* |
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Kirbyscout a dit : If she is a robot (or half mouse half robot, commonly known as a cyborg) you need to state that in the character form when appropriate, robots may be considered superior, but they are programmed to do that, no ordinary mouse could do those feats on their own. Sirusthemice a dit : This too. |
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Hey guys,Don't fight,She may seem skilled at everything but who knows,She may lose her skills. |