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Ty Haruhitastic for proofreading everything<3

Guide:

Flag 1: Guide and prologue
Flag 2: Characters
Flag 3: Fanarts
Flag 4: Drabbles and backstories
Flag 5: Chapters (All put in a pastebin, will be updated every chapter or so.)

Third and fourth flag are "Just incase" flags, if there happens to be any fanart or drabbles or backstories.


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Prologue -
Transformice had a lot of issues. Trollers were getting out of control, hackers were on the market selling cheats, and maps were glitching and falling to pieces, the paths to the cheese, this worlds only food source, were breaking into bits and pieces.

How could everyone survive these disasters when they were all panicking? The leaders gathered together and began to discuss solutions. They were getting frantic, each idea they tried failed and somehow made things worse. Then suddenly Tigrounette had an idea. One that was simple and should have been thought of in the beginning.

He created a group of incredible mice with unique abilities added to their shaman powers and spread them throughout the land of Transformice to clear away the chaos and bring peace back to the world as they knew it. He called these teams Moderators, and sentinels. They kept things safe, and harm free while the mice lived blissfully on.

Ignoring the late disappearences.

Characters

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Beautyiscools characters. (3)

Name: Derrin Fier
Age: 24
Personality: He has knowledge of many things from his countless travels, he is one of the few mice who has traveled beyond Transformice and has learned the ways and languages of other creatures and peoples. He can be very gruff and sarcastic, his attitude clearly stating he doesn't give a sh*t about your emotional problems and wants you to leave him alone or shut up. He does have those rare occasions of kindnes though, which every rough and supposedly tough guys have, who knows maybe he's a real sweetheart on the inside.
Unique power: Far sight (he can see thousands of miles away, and every once in awhile his eyes suddenly see in the dark but not very often) Shadow shifting (He can slip into shadows and dark patches and become nearly invisible, he is also able to move shadows around but he's still learning to control this power. He's only mastered the almost invisibility.)
Extra: He has a large black and gray sword strapped across his back and a strange steed called a horse. Whose name is Shadows Gleam.
Rank: He is considered an important member of the special society group but will not accept any titles because he finds them "bothersome"
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Name: Warren Petricoft (friggin adventure time i couldnt get the name outta my head)
Age: People assume he is around 18-19 years, but who knows, maybe he's older. (hes around the ages mentioned)
Personality: Warren has a very hard time deciding things and often tries to do many things at once. He's hyper all the time and seems like he'll never run out of energy, because of this he almost never walks and just runs and runs or jogs everywhere he goes. He can get very impatient with people because they move so slowly it drives him up the wall. He's also very clueless and let's just say if a girl likes him, he wouldn't know until she planted the kiss on his lips.
Unique power: Flash leap? He can jump really high and really quick, he is also very fast
Extra: He loves cats
Rank: Sent
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Name: Barlin
Age: 20
Personality: Laid back, careless, always has a goofy grin on his face. Enjoys wearing and doing silly laughable things, and yet he's always curious to a fault. Would be very fun to hang out around most of the time if it didn't seem like he would either sit back and let everyone else do the work, or mess with everything while trying to figure out what happens next.
Unique power: Doesn't exactly have one. For now. Or forever?
Extra: He started selling hacks and cheats because he wanted to see what would happen. Has a British accent. Yes he does. Don't judge me e-e
Rank: None. He's a hacker
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Conwolf's characters. (1)

Name: Con
Age: 16
Personality: Con is pretty koodere. Meaning she acts cold and "cool" at first but as you get to know her, she opens up and beomes friendly. She can be a bit stubborn at times but does come out to protect others in need. She loves nature and SECRETLY loves drawing and being with people and friends. She absolutely hates bugs and heights. SHe sort of likes things done her way but will bend over if necessary
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): reading enemy's minds and invisibility.
Extra: loves her cat hat and scarf
Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents): Mod
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Flutterbest's characters. (1)

Name: Reline Hazer
Age: 20
Personality: Unlike most people, Reline starts out extremely friendly and open, but gets more secretive after knowing someone for a while. Whether it's because she's afraid of getting to close to someone and letting something important slip, or if she feels bothersome when too talkative with her friends, she gets quiet. She's quick thinking and acts well in a stressful situation.
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): Telekinesis (can levitate things and send messages to people's minds, but can't hear others thoughts), Duplication (can duplicate herself into many life-size illusionary versions of herself, or split herself into up to five smaller physical forms of herself).
Extra: has a parrot who mimicks her thoughts for her when she needs to hear them said out loud without embarrassing herself in front of real people
Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents): Sent
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Sohotomi's characters. (1)

Name:Ace
Age:18
Personality:He's very High-minded and honest. He's generous and loyal, he will never turn his back on you. Seriously. He's usually pretty quiet but when he does speak it makes him seem very admirable. He's logical and very lovable. This observant perfectionist knows how to charm the ladies. Did I mention how protective he is over loved ones? He's selfless and very self-critical. one thing is you can't fool this guy. He's not gulliable. One thing is you NEVER know when he's going to start acting VERY childish.
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): Healing, he is very good with weapons and he uses a weapon that is a sword in normal form, it also turns into a bow and arrow and grapple hook.
Extra: LOVES CUDDLING(but he's embarassed by his love of hugs and cuddles)
Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents):SENT
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Sirusthemice's characters. (1)

Name: Chell Eyher
Age: 18

Personality: Chell is usually a bit shy, and is incredibly good at hiding. Most of the time Chell is in a good mood, but might become very gloomy at times. Gives up on things easily if they cause too much of a fuss not only to her but her friends too. Has the power to skip tagging along on stupid things groups of mice might do. Part time selfish, part time selfless. Has a hypocritical trait that she tries not to show too much. Is fond of any type of machinery and electronic devices. Poison has been injected in her blood which turns her bites and cuts poisonous. The poison isn't deadly.

Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): Enhanced senses and strenght, clairvoyance ( still learning, she's p bad at it )

Extra: Rarely taakes off her gas mask because her fur / skin has slight rashes because of the poison injected in her body and just hates it. She'll also never let go of her fluffy hat.

Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents): sent
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Leahcoollol's characters. (2)

Name: Naria Reynolds
Age: 15
Personality: Naria is rather mysterious, but very sweet once you get to know her. She is obbessed with lemurs, and has a pet ring-tailed lemur named King Julian (lol), and its nickname is Julian, and it almost always perches on Naria's shoulder. Anyway, Naria LOVES chocolate. She will litterally work for her parents to get money-then buys chocolate. She loves nature, and spends most of her time outsite, playing with Julian.
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): Has the ability to talk to animals
Extra: hai
Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents): Mod
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Name: Sarah Neon
Age: 20
Personality: Sarah is bossy, controlling and rude. All she thinks about is herself, and hates it when others try to control her. She loses her temper easily. She also hates outdoors, and is goth.
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): She can run speeds higher than a cheetah
Extra: she died her hair black because her old color, blonde, was "too dumb"
Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents): Mod
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Haruhitastic's characters. (1)

Name: Miela
Age: 16
Personality: She's very shy and quiet, and when she talks she has a bit of a stutter.
Unique power: Whenever a strange burning sensation erupts in her chest it means someone she cares about is in danger, she can sense when her friends and loved ones are in danger and can follow that sense to where ever they may be.
Extra: None
Rank Mod/sentinel: Sent
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Boefie's characters. (1)

Name: Luka
Age: 22
Personality: Seems to never trust people, he does, but never shows. Is cold to strangers, and normal to friends. Isant impressed fast, so makes a good mod. Also is a real bad ass, like tough shit. Never gives up, unless its really hopeless. A good leader, but nowone dares to look into hes eyes
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): Gives you headache and makes you cold if you look into hes eyes.
Extra: Is verry handsome
Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents): Mod
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Sadlelight's characters. (1)

Name: Kal
Age: 21
Personality: Kal is stubborn but smart, and will help anyone who needs help. He is kind if you get on his good side.
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): was bit by a snake when young, so Kal now has two lrge redspots on his left wrist, which when he touches his two fingers from his right hand on to it and whisper "kom nu kommit stark ..." which is russian for "Come now come strong". a shadow of himself comes out, who can only be killed by words (Hurtful, Teasing-like words)
Extra: Was kicked out by family, because his family is mean and cruel when he is pretty nice. (he has a mom, a dad, two sisters, and a brother)
Rank Mod/sentinel: Mod
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FANARTS

#yey for con on clouds Drawn by Conwolf

Miela Drawn by Beautyiscool
Chell Drawn by Beautyiscool
DRABBLES AND BACKSTORIES

BACKSTORY AREA
Warrens backstory Written by Beautyiscool
Hidden, chapters so far

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Conwolf
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EEP! I read it in the tribe and I'm still in love with it eueee
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Thanks for the post

heres the latest part I wrote, putting it in next flag

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Chapter one part three

Warren helped Con off the cloud, and then to the door. She was still shaking and looked fairly green in the face. Warren stood still, allowing Con take advantage of his support by letting her lean practically all her weight on him while she calmed herself down.

"Was the flight that bad?" said a worried voice. Warren looked up to see a young mouse with a fluffy hat and large gas mask walking over to them. He raised one paw in greeting and smiled at her.

"Hi Chell!" She smiled uncertainly at him before turning to look at Con.

"Are you alright?" Chell asked, and Con grimaced before letting go of Warren and standing up by herself.

"Just peachy. Come on let's go inside, I want to get this done and over with." She said and Warren darted ahead of her humming happily to himself while he sped through the building. Eventually he stopped at a heavily guarded iron door with a lot of locks, and waited. Warren bounced around impatiently while waiting for Con and Chell, annoying the appointed guards to the point of face-palming.

When the ladies reached the door Warren skidded to a stop and clapped his hands together happily. "Con you can go in now! Go go go! The evil person is waiting for a mind reading!" He smiled at her, tilting his head to the right and clapping his hands once more. Con rolled her eyes at him, and turned to Chell and the guards.

"I'm ready, let's do this." Warren tried his best to stay still, while the guards unlocked the door to let Con in. Two of them made as if to go in with her, (for extra protection) but she stopped them.

"Even if I can't read your minds doesn't mean your presence won't interfere. Please, stay out here. You're welcome to break in if there's an issue, but you probably don't have to worry about that either." The guards stepped back reluctantly, uncertain looks on their faces. Nevertheless, they opened the door and Con stepped in, closing it behind her. Warren, Chell, and the others stood by a computer and watched Con sit down in the unoccupied chair, before folding her hands and looking at the the mouse on the other side.

He was a skinny, brown mouse with matted fur and a cruel sneer on his face, with long yellow nails and teeth. Worse yet, were his sharp, beady little eyes. When he spoke, his voice had a rasping element to it.

"I see they sent another pretty agent to question me." Con stared back, and smiled.

"Unfortunately, yes. But this time there won't be any talking, just silence." The criminal looked intrigued but just smiled and said,

"Alright, but I don't think you'll do any better." Warren watched as Con shrugged and then stared at the mouse's face, her eyes paling considerably and her face going slack. A few quiet minutes passed, and nothing happened. Warren was looking all around the room, his attention darting all over the place.

Suddenly a scream came from the room holding the prisoner and Warren looked at the screen. Con was on the floor screaming and holding her head, and the prisoner was walking over to her. The guards were opening the door, but they were so slow. The criminal was only another two steps away from her.

The door was open, just enough, and in a flash Warren darted into the room. He seemed to fly over to where Con was, and he leaned forward, put his hands on the ground and used his built up force to swing his legs upward and kick the filthy mouse in the head.

Warren didn't stop to watch him collapse, but was already running out the door with Con in his arms.

wow thats a lot of words
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#yey for con on clouds
XD this was fun to drawww
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HYEAH YEAHYEAYHH YEAH IT'S POSTED
LOVE IT
LOVE U
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Thanks so much guys! You're all so awesommeeeee

Here's the next part

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Chapter two part one

Con was walking in an empty place, dark and bleak. Where was she? Everything felt fuzzy, and strange. What happened? She couldn't remember. Con stopped walking for a moment and tried to remember, but a sharp pain erupted in her skull when she did, causing her to take a sudden breath. She stood there for a few minutes, letting the pain fade away before she did anything else.

The pain had gone and so she walked on, deciding that for the moment it wasn't a good idea to try and figure out why her memory was no longer there. After a while, Con noticed that pictures had started to color the darkness. Blurry as they were, she was grateful to see that it wouldn't be as horrible as it was before. Suddenly she had the strangest feeling, as though she had something she needed to think about, felt like it was on the tip of her tongue. Whatever it was, it kept flickering in the back of her mind, reminding her that she had something to remember.

Suddenly some of the pictures came into focus, and she saw her tribe house, a mouse with a strange cat mask, memories that did not belong to herself. It was all coming back to her now, and the black surrounding her had faded, and became sort of fuzzy. Voices sounded in the background, and Con tried to catch what they were saying.

"I think she might have lost her memory agent Eyher, I looked and saw only emptiness. But there's a good chance she'll recover them soon, mind readers are very strong and amnesia never lasts long for them." A woman's voice said in a reassuring tone.

Mind reader? Right yes she was a mind reader, which reminded her... wasn't she supposed to search some prisoners mind? Oh wait.

"That's good, I was really worried. I thought the prisoner was going to kill her before we got to her in time, luckily agent Petricoft was nearby, he was able to pull her out of there quickly." Said a soft, quiet voice. This girl sounded relieved.

Petricoft? Oh she must mean Warren! Con tried to open her eyes, and managed to blink them open.

"Oh!" She saw a familiar mask looking at her "She's awake she's awake! Con how are you? Want some juice? I can get some orange juice, the stuff they have here is really good!" Warren clapped his hands and she smiled faintly at him, thankful to see a kind face replacing the last of the darkness.

"Sure," she croaked, realizing how sore her throat felt. "Wait, could I have tea instead? My throat is killing me." Warren bounced up and down nodding his head. Then, suddenly to her surprise, he bent down and hugged her.

"Anything for a buddy!"

Hope you enjoy!
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Moreeeeeeeeeeeee naaoooooooooo!!!
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I love it
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*continues fangirling*
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I'm excited for the pairings to start rolling in
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I keep forgetting to comment on this. Love this fanfic though

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I'm excited for the pairings to start rolling in

ditto
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Name: Luka
Age: 22
Personality: Seems to never trust people, he does, but never shows. Is cold to strangers, and normal to friends. Isant impressed fast, so makes a good mod. Also is a real bad ass, like tough shit. Never gives up, unless its really hopeless. A good leader, but nowone dares to look into hes eyes
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): Gives you headache and makes you cold if you look into hes eyes.
Extra: Is verry handsome
Rank Mod/sentinel (please guys some of you have sents): Mod
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Thank you for the character boe :D I needed more dudes, and another mod.
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Chapter two part two

Chell sighed, sitting quietly at a small table waiting for the agent she whispered to get there. She tapped her fingers lightly on the wooden surface, thinking back to earlier that day. To make sure she hadn't forgotten anything, she replayed the scene over in her mind.

She'd stood there looking curiously at Warren after he stood up from giving Con a hug. He'd run out after to get her tea. Chell sighed. She often worried about Warren, because she wasn't sure if he understood the situations of things sometimes, even though he had proven her wrong multiple times. He'd shown himself capable of a lot but Chell still had a hard time of believing that. She thought of him as well, a child.

Shaking her head, she turned to Con. "Would it be okay if we talked about what you managed to see while searching the prisoner?" Con looked at her and laughed, her voice choked and dry sounding.

"You're so quiet sometimes Chell, I could barely hear that you know. You said you wanted to ask about what I saw right? I heard correctly?" Chell blushed, embarrassed, she nodded her head and Con smiled.

"Alright, after my tea. What is taking Warren so long? I mean. This is long for Warren." Before Chell could reply he darted through the door and had handed Con her drink.

"I didn't know what tea you wanted, so I got you chai because chai tea is delicious! Oooh is that a cat painting?!" Chell stared at him, chuckling quietly to herself. He could be very amusing sometimes. She brought herself back to the current situation, and sat herself down beside Con's bed.

"Could you tell us what happened now if you're done with your tea? I don't want to rush you." Con laughed at her, her voice already sounded better than before. Tea can really do wonders on a sore throat. Con began, and Chell sat listening carefully to every word, repeating them in her mind to make sure she remembered.

"I was in a dark room, and I heard two voices talking. They seemed to be bargaining, you know like for an item at the store. But, one said 'Come on I have stuff to do, I need those cheats as soon as possible.' the other laughed 'No I'm afraid I'll need a better offer.' and then the well, thing happened. There wasn't anything else."

A hand gently shook Chell's shoulder and she jolted back to the present. She looked up at the dark furred face of her friend Miela. "Oh hey, took you long enough."

Miela laughed "Yes but at least I wasn't day-dreaming." Chell smiled at her.

"I wasn't day-dreaming, I was making sure I remembered everything. I have something to tell you."

SORRYY FOR KEEPING U GUYS WAITINGGG

This isn't very well written, but still boop it's here~ yayy.
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I need moarrrrrrrrrr

-clears throat-
I LIKE THIS FANFIC.
also when will my caras appear? xD
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Leahcoollol a dit :
I need moarrrrrrrrrr

-clears throat-
I LIKE THIS FANFIC.
also when will my caras appear? xD

Thanks and sorry about the small amount of character appearances but I'm taking my time with this fanfic and tbh I have no idea who I'm going to introduce next. Please be patiennntt wif mee
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Name: Kal
Age: 21
Personality: Kal is stubborn but smart, and will help anyone who needs help. He is kind if you get on his good side.
Unique power (try not to make it overlypowerful pls, you can have up to three): was bit by a snake when young, so Kal now has two lrge redspots on his left wrist, which when he touches his two fingers from his right hand on to it and whisper "kom nu kommit stark ..." which is russian for "Come now come strong". a shadow of himself comes out, who can only be killed by words (Hurtful, Teasing-like words)
Extra: Was kicked out by family, because his family is mean and cruel when he is pretty nice. (he has a mom, a dad, two sisters, and a brother)
Rank Mod/sentinel: Mod
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this fanfic is great, i read the first sentance and i was sucked in :D

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Aww thank you ;u; i'm glad you like it, and thank you for the character.

Speaking of characters, character slots are now closed! I may open them again in the future but for now any new characters added will be created by myself unless I specifically asked a friend to make one. Thanks for reading~
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I love the way you make the characters flow so nicely in the story *-*
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*again is fangirling*
;u; page turner. (though no pages)
then
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